Oh, there are so many things wrong
Either Mr Mason has lived it or he gives a good fake from his research. This book isn't really pc, but the language etc. reminds me of the time when we wanted men to match our mountains, and we would toast the host of brother men who fly. That got nullified by Tailhook in Las Vegas '91. It wasn't really believable that Danica would just 'tsk' when inappropriate remarks were made. In today's society, you'd think WWW III had just started. We have a couple of best buds who really enjoy their women, and are reasonably respectful of their abilities and sensibilities like the good old days, and maintain a certain loyalty and respect despite temptation. There's no hanky panky despite the fact that one female succumbs to the void and floats around in the all together singing a nursery rhyme. Everyone has their job, and performs their job in a super competent manner. There are no glass ceilings even for the abrasive and combative crew member. So, as seems to be usual with this series, we have two distinctly different stories. (I'm reading this series of six from back to front. This book is really better than the latter ones.) We have a few misspelled words, like Mellenia vs Mellinia (within a page of each other). You wonder why the author can't keep track of the names he, himself, picked out. The science is amusing. We get detailed descriptions (like Ralph 124c41+) Then we forget what we described (like why are there intake ducts?) There's some ideas bearing on interpersonal relationships and whether bureaucracy is any good. We're told that Porre is really a good guy (you'd hardly know it). You'll wonder about the water you drink, and where you get it. There's a giant almost invisible grasshopper that has a curious way of catching its food. Kinda reminds me of Skylark III by E.E. Smith. Actually, the whole series reminds me of an updated Skylark story without Dr DuQuesne. They even go to other planets and immediately jump out for a swim with only a minor check of the lab (lab says everything's okay, let's go swimming). It's really a fun read, but you have to really suspend reality since the author can't keep his facts straight, either the made up ones or the obvious ones. Bottom line I liked it.