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Jail Break
“That’s right, pretty boy, keep screaming my name. I want your neighbors to know exactly who’s inside you.”
My dad's best friend, Aiden is crashing on our couch since he was released from prison, and ever since he arrived he's been watching me with hungry eyes. He's twice my age, twice my size, and covered in piercings and tattoos. It looks like he could take me down if he wanted to.
It's game day tomorrow and I have a ritual - get laid the night before. But when the cheerleader I invited over cancels, I'm stuck. I've never once missed out since I started on the college team.
Then I find Aiden in a compromising position, and he invites me to join him. I never back down from a challenge, especially when it comes to big guys who think they are better than me.
My dad's best friend, Aiden is crashing on our couch since he was released from prison, and ever since he arrived he's been watching me with hungry eyes. He's twice my age, twice my size, and covered in piercings and tattoos. It looks like he could take me down if he wanted to.
It's game day tomorrow and I have a ritual - get laid the night before. But when the cheerleader I invited over cancels, I'm stuck. I've never once missed out since I started on the college team.
Then I find Aiden in a compromising position, and he invites me to join him. I never back down from a challenge, especially when it comes to big guys who think they are better than me.
87 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 28, 2025
46 people are currently reading
110 people want to read
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Abigail Hunter
20 books151 followersBorn and raised in Scotland, Abigail has always been surrounded by green hills, forests, and fairy stories. First a gardener, then a carpenter, and now an author, she writes steamy stories about passionate and heartfelt characters who always get their happily ever afters.
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April 20, 2025
DNF 81%
I'd literally rather be stabbed .
I'd literally rather be stabbed .
March 16, 2025
- football player + ex-con
- dad’s best friend
- age gap
- queer awakening
Complete and utter filth. All smut, barely any plot. It was great 🤣
- dad’s best friend
- age gap
- queer awakening
Complete and utter filth. All smut, barely any plot. It was great 🤣
May 5, 2025
Connor + Aiden
Novella
"Fuck, you're a sweet thing, aren't you, pretty boy?"
Hmm yeah. No thanks. That one line ^^ was basically the only good part for me.
This was honestly a train wreck but I couldn't look away. Did not enjoy the writing and definitely had me cringing multiple times. One minute he's grossed out and annoyed by his dads dirty ass friend and the next he's riding his dick despite being "straight".
I understand that it's an erotic novella but more attempt could have been made to make it more believable instead of reading like a really bad porno.
⚠️ potential spoilers below in detailed tropes & kink list
Football player & ex con
Age gap
Dads best friend
First time being with a man for anything more than a kiss
Tongue piercing
🍆 piercing
Uncut
Size difference
Fisting
Degradation
Objectification
Felching
Cum cleaning
Novella
"Fuck, you're a sweet thing, aren't you, pretty boy?"
Hmm yeah. No thanks. That one line ^^ was basically the only good part for me.
This was honestly a train wreck but I couldn't look away. Did not enjoy the writing and definitely had me cringing multiple times. One minute he's grossed out and annoyed by his dads dirty ass friend and the next he's riding his dick despite being "straight".
I understand that it's an erotic novella but more attempt could have been made to make it more believable instead of reading like a really bad porno.
⚠️ potential spoilers below in detailed tropes & kink list
Football player & ex con
Age gap
Dads best friend
First time being with a man for anything more than a kiss
Tongue piercing
🍆 piercing
Uncut
Size difference
Fisting
Degradation
Objectification
Felching
Cum cleaning
March 31, 2025
“Even though Aiden was a criminal, his cock was fucking amazing.”
No plot , just pure smut for eleven chapters.
“Oh, fuck. I’m never going to get tired of this ass. Tell me again, Connor. Who does this ass belong to?”
Another cry burst from me as I felt him empty himself into me and a weak load shot from my cock as my vision went white. “You, Aiden,” I cried out. “I only want you.”
Multiple happy endings with these two 🤣
No plot , just pure smut for eleven chapters.
“Oh, fuck. I’m never going to get tired of this ass. Tell me again, Connor. Who does this ass belong to?”
Another cry burst from me as I felt him empty himself into me and a weak load shot from my cock as my vision went white. “You, Aiden,” I cried out. “I only want you.”
Multiple happy endings with these two 🤣
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 2, 2025
It is what it says it is.
March 29, 2025
Whew she spicy!!
Ok but seriously this is all pure spicy, smutty goodness and I loved every word of it. It’s the best version of ‘I shouldn’t, but I need to prove myself/holy sh*t I really enjoy this’ I’ve ever read.
Connor gets railed by his dad’s best friend, who just happens to be a convict. That’s the story, oh and Connors a football player. But that’s all you need to know.
Ok but seriously this is all pure spicy, smutty goodness and I loved every word of it. It’s the best version of ‘I shouldn’t, but I need to prove myself/holy sh*t I really enjoy this’ I’ve ever read.
Connor gets railed by his dad’s best friend, who just happens to be a convict. That’s the story, oh and Connors a football player. But that’s all you need to know.
April 6, 2025
Rating: 3
Steam: 5
PoV: single, 1st person
Genre: erotica novella, MM
Tropes / tags: age gap, forced proximity, dad's best friend
A short and very hot erotica!
Steam: 5
PoV: single, 1st person
Genre: erotica novella, MM
Tropes / tags: age gap, forced proximity, dad's best friend
A short and very hot erotica!
August 23, 2025
Ahem… no nope…you never saw that.
March 28, 2025
This book is HOT! I'm talking completely filthy, full of smut, very little plot, and all the chili peppers hot. I devoured this in one sitting because I couldn't put it down. Hell, maybe this book devourved me. This started out strong and didn't stop until the very last word. There's not many times in left speechless in my reviews, but right now I am. All I can say is that if you love spicy MM romances, add this to the top of your tbr because 🥵.
March 30, 2025
ARC REVIEW
Rating:⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Spice:🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
Oh wow I’m flabbergasted like do you know how many times I was fan girling and blushing and having a moment to pause on the book smiling over here in everything my jaw was on the floor like my mind was blown I finish this book so fast like I had so many moments of over here I did a cartwheel in my place cause I was happy and I recommend it to other book friends.
Rating:⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Spice:🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
Oh wow I’m flabbergasted like do you know how many times I was fan girling and blushing and having a moment to pause on the book smiling over here in everything my jaw was on the floor like my mind was blown I finish this book so fast like I had so many moments of over here I did a cartwheel in my place cause I was happy and I recommend it to other book friends.
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March 22, 2025Thank you, Abigail, for my copy of Jail Break, a MM Erotica Novella. This book is 11 chapters of pure filth with very little plot. Jail Break was all from Connor's POV and I felt it would of been interesting to have been able to read Aiden's POV.
Things to Expect
🖤 MM Erotica
🖤 College Football Star
🖤 Ex Con
🖤 Dads Best Friend
🖤 Age Gap
🖤 Single POV
Things to Expect
🖤 MM Erotica
🖤 College Football Star
🖤 Ex Con
🖤 Dads Best Friend
🖤 Age Gap
🖤 Single POV
March 28, 2025
straight up smut!
I mean this is straight up smut. Plain and simple. It’s short and spicy. And oh so good!
It did end super abruptly even for a smutty novella I thought it would have more of an ending.
Definetly a quick fun read!!
I mean this is straight up smut. Plain and simple. It’s short and spicy. And oh so good!
It did end super abruptly even for a smutty novella I thought it would have more of an ending.
Definetly a quick fun read!!
March 28, 2025
what do you get when you take a college football player, and an ex-con, and add a (presumably) brand new bottle of olive oil, and one overworked couch? you get a diabolically sexy bit of erotica. make no mistakes here—it IS erotica. if you’re not clear on what that means: it’s porn without plot. so don’t pick this up and get mad because there was no character development, or exposition, or any of that. that’s not why we’re here. if you go into this knowing that you’re reading erotica, and that it’s also fairly dark (so read the tw’s), and you’re cool with that—you’re gonna have a good time here. (side note: that poor couch is going to need to file a workman’s comp claim to receive compensation for the psychological and physical damage caused to it during the course of this book. seriously, the couch is the hero of this story, just in case you were wondering)
March 22, 2025
This is my first MM erotica and omg. There is so much hotness, spice, and forbidden situations within this Novella. I absolutely devoured it. Once I started, i couldn't put it down because, holy freaking hotness! Hands down, amazing. I need more Abigail! 😩
March 28, 2025
Aiden and Connor are hot as hell and had me at the dye of my seat (amongst other things 😉)
March 27, 2025
This is a short MM erotica, I absolutely devoured this book so quickly, this was such a phenomenal read and I could not put this down for even a second.
March 19, 2025
Holyyyy god. I don't know why I chose to read this at work 😭😭. I need to go on a walk and maybe touch some grass and trees.
This was hot from the beginning. The author makes it clear this book has zero plot so u know exactly what ur getting into. What I wasn't expecting was how hottttt it was gonna be. Like I couldn't look away. The chemistry, the back and forth between was 🤌🤌.
They had a good time and so did i🤭😭. Definitely recommend if ur looking for a quick filty read.
This was hot from the beginning. The author makes it clear this book has zero plot so u know exactly what ur getting into. What I wasn't expecting was how hottttt it was gonna be. Like I couldn't look away. The chemistry, the back and forth between was 🤌🤌.
They had a good time and so did i🤭😭. Definitely recommend if ur looking for a quick filty read.
March 26, 2025
I never read a MM book that was so intense
I went in this book blindly my choice did not know what to expect, but it turns out I liked it For those looking to read this book its page 1 to last page mm
S3# No plot no story but if your looking for a great
Mm story this book is for you The young mc is a highschool football hero and the older mc just got out of prison they hook up and its all s3# after that.
But hey I enjoyed it learned alot of new stuff as a straight woman I never knew but it was a good read I read it in a couple of hours, so enjoy this hot and delicious book
Spice 🌶🌶🌶🌶🌶 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Rate ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I went in this book blindly my choice did not know what to expect, but it turns out I liked it For those looking to read this book its page 1 to last page mm
S3# No plot no story but if your looking for a great
Mm story this book is for you The young mc is a highschool football hero and the older mc just got out of prison they hook up and its all s3# after that.
But hey I enjoyed it learned alot of new stuff as a straight woman I never knew but it was a good read I read it in a couple of hours, so enjoy this hot and delicious book
Spice 🌶🌶🌶🌶🌶 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Rate ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 22, 2025
Absolutely loved this book, it is just straight smut not much plot line to this one, but oh boy was it hot and steamy 🤤🤤🔥🔥
March 22, 2025
A quick, dirty read centered around a college aged athlete and his dad's ex-con best friend. It was a fun and sensual novella that had me turning the page to see what was going to happen next.
March 18, 2025
Bi-Awakening
Dads best friend
Ex-convict
Spice 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
Football player
Age gap
What more do you need. This book captures you from the start. It is defenately fast burn. Ohh and it had me soo worked up. Defenately a good read for late at night
Dads best friend
Ex-convict
Spice 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
Football player
Age gap
What more do you need. This book captures you from the start. It is defenately fast burn. Ohh and it had me soo worked up. Defenately a good read for late at night
March 29, 2025
Talk about hotter than Pepper X, hottest chili in the world, this M/M erotica will have you needing a glass of cold water and have you rushing for a cold shower to cool down again.
Age gap, father's best friend, Ex-Convict x Football Star, with everything these two could possibly get up to with each other in one, ahem, is it hot in here?, "Pretty Boy" package - "yeah, scream my name...."
Oh, my.
Abigail Hunter never disappoints.
Age gap, father's best friend, Ex-Convict x Football Star, with everything these two could possibly get up to with each other in one, ahem, is it hot in here?, "Pretty Boy" package - "yeah, scream my name...."
Oh, my.
Abigail Hunter never disappoints.
March 16, 2025
It is short but so hot. The MC has very little experience and Aiden, the dad's best friend and ex-convict, absolutely wrecks him. Goes from first time gay sex to full on fisting and I haven't really read any books that go into such detail with the fisting scene. This could easily be turned into a full-length novel of smutty goodness.
March 15, 2025
This was my first introduction to MM Erotica. I'm not sure what I was expecting but was pleasantly surprised. The writing was a very nicely paced and SPICY!!! My only negative was some placement of details interrupted the pace in places and I would have enjoyed more dialog between characters
April 10, 2025
CHECK TRIGGER/CONTENT WARNINGS ⚠️
HOLY HE\\ WAS THIS BOOK HARD, FAST, WILD & HOTT. GEEZ, this was my 1st MM story (NOVELLA) that was this INTENSE. There is definitely no LOVEMAKING in this one. THIS WAS A FISTFUL 😉 OF HARD KNOCKS 😉 LMAO. I was excited jealous but also scared for my boy Conner cause MAN DID HE GET HIS MIND BLOWN in more ways than 1. The writing to describe the characters & world buildng were topnotch cause I felt like I was invading on their moment LOL. If you love a good MM story that just jumps right into the SPICE & IS MOSTLY ABOUT THE HARD, WILD HOTT SPICE, THEN YOU WILL DEFINITELY WANT TO READ THIS
HOLY HE\\ WAS THIS BOOK HARD, FAST, WILD & HOTT. GEEZ, this was my 1st MM story (NOVELLA) that was this INTENSE. There is definitely no LOVEMAKING in this one. THIS WAS A FISTFUL 😉 OF HARD KNOCKS 😉 LMAO. I was excited jealous but also scared for my boy Conner cause MAN DID HE GET HIS MIND BLOWN in more ways than 1. The writing to describe the characters & world buildng were topnotch cause I felt like I was invading on their moment LOL. If you love a good MM story that just jumps right into the SPICE & IS MOSTLY ABOUT THE HARD, WILD HOTT SPICE, THEN YOU WILL DEFINITELY WANT TO READ THIS
March 14, 2025
Dear sweet lordt baby jeebus…this book was exactly what it says it is 🥵🥵 and I am here for it 😈😈
May 31, 2025
Well, I read it. Sure it was steamy. But at what cost?
July 13, 2025
General: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.💫
Spice: 🫦🫦🫦🫦🫦
✨✨✨ Jail Break by Abigail Hunter (@authorabigailhunter), a MM erotica. ✨✨✨
This story? Whew. 🥵
If you’re in the mood for a fast, filthy ride — this is it.
Zero brakes, minimal plot, maximum heat. 🤤🔥
Not for the faint of heart.
Tropes:
🖤 MM
🖤 Dad’s best friend
🖤 Age gap
🖤 Football player x brute
🖤 Piercings
🖤 One-handed read
🖤 Bi-awakening
🖤 First time
Blurb:
“That’s right, pretty boy, keep screaming my name. I want your neighbors to know exactly who’s inside you.”
My dad’s best friend, Aiden is crashing on our couch since he was released from prison, and ever since he arrived he’s been watching me with hungry eyes. He’s twice my age, twice my size, and covered in piercings and tattoos. It looks like he could take me down if he wanted to.
It’s game day tomorrow and I have a ritual - get laid the night before. But when the cheerleader I invited over cancels, I’m stuck. I’ve never once missed out since I started on the college team.Then I find Aiden in a compromising position, and he invites me to join him. I never back down from a challenge, especially when it comes to big guys who think they are better than me.
⁉️QOTD: Do you like a good challenge? ⁉️
#indieauthor #booklover #bookgirl #books #reader #spicybooks #booksta #bookrecs #bookstagramer #bookboyfriends #steamyromance #spicyromance #lgbtq #forcedproximity #boylove #review #currentlyreading #theshadyivy
Spice: 🫦🫦🫦🫦🫦
✨✨✨ Jail Break by Abigail Hunter (@authorabigailhunter), a MM erotica. ✨✨✨
This story? Whew. 🥵
If you’re in the mood for a fast, filthy ride — this is it.
Zero brakes, minimal plot, maximum heat. 🤤🔥
Not for the faint of heart.
Tropes:
🖤 MM
🖤 Dad’s best friend
🖤 Age gap
🖤 Football player x brute
🖤 Piercings
🖤 One-handed read
🖤 Bi-awakening
🖤 First time
Blurb:
“That’s right, pretty boy, keep screaming my name. I want your neighbors to know exactly who’s inside you.”
My dad’s best friend, Aiden is crashing on our couch since he was released from prison, and ever since he arrived he’s been watching me with hungry eyes. He’s twice my age, twice my size, and covered in piercings and tattoos. It looks like he could take me down if he wanted to.
It’s game day tomorrow and I have a ritual - get laid the night before. But when the cheerleader I invited over cancels, I’m stuck. I’ve never once missed out since I started on the college team.Then I find Aiden in a compromising position, and he invites me to join him. I never back down from a challenge, especially when it comes to big guys who think they are better than me.
⁉️QOTD: Do you like a good challenge? ⁉️
#indieauthor #booklover #bookgirl #books #reader #spicybooks #booksta #bookrecs #bookstagramer #bookboyfriends #steamyromance #spicyromance #lgbtq #forcedproximity #boylove #review #currentlyreading #theshadyivy
March 15, 2025
Wow! That was a wild ride!
This was a super quick read short story/novella which really packed a punch!
Easily read in one sitting, but be prepared as it's pretty intense from start to finish!
There are a multitude of content warnings, so make sure to check those out before reading, but if like me, you're ok with most things, this makes for such a great read.
Connor's dad has an old friend staying with them and one evening while Dad is out, Aiden sets Connor a challenge he finds he can't refuse.
This is set over one evening and is full on erotica throughout.
It's wild, it's down and dirty and I definitely had my eyes opened in places.
There's also a whole lot of olive oil involved!!
I've got to admit, my OCD head got a little stressed for the sofa after a while!
Obviously with something like this, we don't get chance to really get to know much about our characters, but I found them well presented and portrayed and we really got a sense of the dynamic between the pair.
I loved the shocker of an ending and have a feeling that we might be seeing more from Connor and Aiden - I have questions....
Brilliantly written, as ever - this will be my eighth read from Abby and they just keep bringing something different to the party!
Can't wait to see what's next ...
This was a super quick read short story/novella which really packed a punch!
Easily read in one sitting, but be prepared as it's pretty intense from start to finish!
There are a multitude of content warnings, so make sure to check those out before reading, but if like me, you're ok with most things, this makes for such a great read.
Connor's dad has an old friend staying with them and one evening while Dad is out, Aiden sets Connor a challenge he finds he can't refuse.
This is set over one evening and is full on erotica throughout.
It's wild, it's down and dirty and I definitely had my eyes opened in places.
There's also a whole lot of olive oil involved!!
I've got to admit, my OCD head got a little stressed for the sofa after a while!
Obviously with something like this, we don't get chance to really get to know much about our characters, but I found them well presented and portrayed and we really got a sense of the dynamic between the pair.
I loved the shocker of an ending and have a feeling that we might be seeing more from Connor and Aiden - I have questions....
Brilliantly written, as ever - this will be my eighth read from Abby and they just keep bringing something different to the party!
Can't wait to see what's next ...
September 14, 2025
Rounded up from 2.5 stars
I often read multiple books at once; whether it be because one is physical reading and one is audio, or when the subject matter of one is too serious and I want a break for a few minutes. I read, as I think a lot of people do, to relax. But, I also have OCD & ASD, so when I see typos or grammatical errors, it takes away from my relaxation as much as serious subject matter does. Right off the bat I was apprehensive when there were multiple errors just in the author’s note!! She goes on to thank her editor and beta readers, so there should be no reason for this many mistakes!!
So dude was just hanging out playing video games in a T-shirt and nothing? No underwear? Odd. The book is everything the Author’s Note says - all spice, no plot. The spice is spicing. But getting past all the errors is difficult. Betas, ARC teams, editors especially 😳 do better for your authors!!! Authors, obviously I want you to be better as well. But you have teams for a reason.
I often read multiple books at once; whether it be because one is physical reading and one is audio, or when the subject matter of one is too serious and I want a break for a few minutes. I read, as I think a lot of people do, to relax. But, I also have OCD & ASD, so when I see typos or grammatical errors, it takes away from my relaxation as much as serious subject matter does. Right off the bat I was apprehensive when there were multiple errors just in the author’s note!! She goes on to thank her editor and beta readers, so there should be no reason for this many mistakes!!
So dude was just hanging out playing video games in a T-shirt and nothing? No underwear? Odd. The book is everything the Author’s Note says - all spice, no plot. The spice is spicing. But getting past all the errors is difficult. Betas, ARC teams, editors especially 😳 do better for your authors!!! Authors, obviously I want you to be better as well. But you have teams for a reason.
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