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Fragmented
Andy Giles is drowning. His passion for teaching has withered into routine, and his marriage to Grace is collapsing under her suspected affair. So when a mysterious stranger invites him to Ralph’s—a members club offering an escape from reality—Andy leaps at the chance to reinvent himself.
Behind a mask, he becomes Hannya, surrendering to reckless nights of hedonism. But when Ralph's innocent theatrics take a dark turn, Andy must choose: how much of himself is he willing to destroy, and what horrors will he commit… all in the name of freedom?
Behind a mask, he becomes Hannya, surrendering to reckless nights of hedonism. But when Ralph's innocent theatrics take a dark turn, Andy must choose: how much of himself is he willing to destroy, and what horrors will he commit… all in the name of freedom?
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273 pages, Kindle Edition
Published April 1, 2025
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Alex Mura
2 books94 followersAlex Mura is the pen name of Alexander Valerievich Yakovlev. Alex was born in Izhevsk, Russia in 1996. At age seven, he moved to England with his mother. His passion for writing began whilst attending secondary school in Portsmouth, where one of his short stories went on to be published by Hodgson Press as part of a school anthology. At sixteen, Alex became Wattpad's youngest Ambassador, where he volunteered for four years. After finishing college, he went onto pursue a career in sales in the finance and IT sectors. Having left his last corporate job in 2023, his debut novel, Silence In The Basement, is coming to bookstores near you this summer - A novel highlighting loneliness, free will and companionship.
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April 27, 2025
3.75 stars, rounded up.
If you had a choice between a stable marriage/career and to live a fast-paced, thrill seeking life interminably on the edge, which life would you choose? This is ultimately the question that faces Andy Giles in this thrilling and erotic new novel, Fragmented, by Alex Mura.
Andy is a history teacher, but what he really wanted was to be a HISTORIAN, doing work out in the field, but instead, he settled. Settled for being comfortable, being predictable. He has a wife, Grace, who has a cold and almost clinical approach to their marriage - she works too much, texts too much, and doesn’t pay actual attention to Andy nearly enough. So when Andy stumbles into the life of a strange man he meets at a bar, he may just get the excitement he thinks he needs in his life.
Andy finds himself invited into a very exclusive club, where anything goes. As his life devolves over the course of several months, he needs to answer the question, which Andy does he want to be?
I don’t want to say too much more about the plot, as there are some twists that make this book interesting. I will say that it is very fast-paced and thrilling, and I really didn’t want to put it down, prompting me to finish it in one night. It is a shorter read, and did go by very quickly as I mentioned above. Since this was a digital ARC, there were a decent amount of editing mistakes - typos, duplicate words, etc. - but I won’t hold that against the author. I’m hopeful they were corrected before it went to print.
There were major vibes channeled here - Stanley Kubrick’s 1999 film, Eyes Wide Shut, came to mind here for me almost immediately. Yes, think erotic sex club. There are many similarities between this book and the movie I just mentioned. Psychological thriller. Check and check. But the author did push further with this scenario, and Andy makes a difficult decision towards the end of the book. The ending is also a bit open-ended, which I usually do not enjoy, but I think it worked for this story. I think the author really shined primarily with the pacing in this book, and that proved to be the strongest attribute in my eyes.
There were flaws, of course. The writing was very basic, nothing illuminating or mind-blowing. There was also a lot of repetition in different scenarios, and a particular scene at the end with Grace is particularly worth mentioning, as the scene really should have been handled better. It was almost like he didn’t know how to write the scene and just kind of ended it. It was a bit irritating. Andy was also more than a little bit of a whiny bitch at points, especially as he continued to lose himself more and more. The overuse of the words hedonism and fractured/fragmented were grating until I got to the end. I couldn’t stop seeing them once I recognized the repetitiveness that felt forced.
Overall it was still a good read, and I did enjoy it. I would definitely recommend it for anyone who likes a touch of erotica mixed with a good psychological thriller - both those boxes are definitely checked off here! Thanks to Net Galley and the publisher/author for the digital ARC.
“It reminds me of Nikola Tesla,’ I say, stretching an arm across the back of the sofa. ‘Brilliant, one of the greatest minds in history. But deeply alone. Obsessed with his work. Lived in his own head. People thought he was eccentric, but really, he was just…isolated.”
“And yet, everyone remembers him.”
“Exactly. He created something bigger than himself. Even if loneliness tried to define him, it didn’t succeed.”
If you had a choice between a stable marriage/career and to live a fast-paced, thrill seeking life interminably on the edge, which life would you choose? This is ultimately the question that faces Andy Giles in this thrilling and erotic new novel, Fragmented, by Alex Mura.
Andy is a history teacher, but what he really wanted was to be a HISTORIAN, doing work out in the field, but instead, he settled. Settled for being comfortable, being predictable. He has a wife, Grace, who has a cold and almost clinical approach to their marriage - she works too much, texts too much, and doesn’t pay actual attention to Andy nearly enough. So when Andy stumbles into the life of a strange man he meets at a bar, he may just get the excitement he thinks he needs in his life.
Andy finds himself invited into a very exclusive club, where anything goes. As his life devolves over the course of several months, he needs to answer the question, which Andy does he want to be?
I don’t want to say too much more about the plot, as there are some twists that make this book interesting. I will say that it is very fast-paced and thrilling, and I really didn’t want to put it down, prompting me to finish it in one night. It is a shorter read, and did go by very quickly as I mentioned above. Since this was a digital ARC, there were a decent amount of editing mistakes - typos, duplicate words, etc. - but I won’t hold that against the author. I’m hopeful they were corrected before it went to print.
There were major vibes channeled here - Stanley Kubrick’s 1999 film, Eyes Wide Shut, came to mind here for me almost immediately. Yes, think erotic sex club. There are many similarities between this book and the movie I just mentioned. Psychological thriller. Check and check. But the author did push further with this scenario, and Andy makes a difficult decision towards the end of the book. The ending is also a bit open-ended, which I usually do not enjoy, but I think it worked for this story. I think the author really shined primarily with the pacing in this book, and that proved to be the strongest attribute in my eyes.
There were flaws, of course. The writing was very basic, nothing illuminating or mind-blowing. There was also a lot of repetition in different scenarios, and a particular scene at the end with Grace is particularly worth mentioning, as the scene really should have been handled better. It was almost like he didn’t know how to write the scene and just kind of ended it. It was a bit irritating. Andy was also more than a little bit of a whiny bitch at points, especially as he continued to lose himself more and more. The overuse of the words hedonism and fractured/fragmented were grating until I got to the end. I couldn’t stop seeing them once I recognized the repetitiveness that felt forced.
Overall it was still a good read, and I did enjoy it. I would definitely recommend it for anyone who likes a touch of erotica mixed with a good psychological thriller - both those boxes are definitely checked off here! Thanks to Net Galley and the publisher/author for the digital ARC.
“It reminds me of Nikola Tesla,’ I say, stretching an arm across the back of the sofa. ‘Brilliant, one of the greatest minds in history. But deeply alone. Obsessed with his work. Lived in his own head. People thought he was eccentric, but really, he was just…isolated.”
“And yet, everyone remembers him.”
“Exactly. He created something bigger than himself. Even if loneliness tried to define him, it didn’t succeed.”
March 4, 2025
I first came across Fragmented after seeing the author post about it online. The blurb immediately caught my attention, and the cover art by Böcklin sealed the deal. Between the title, the author’s name, and the eerie cover, I had a feeling this book would carry a certain Russian soul—and imagine my delight when I opened it to find a quote from Dostoevsky.
Andy Giles is drowning. His passion for teaching has faded into routine, and his marriage is crumbling under the weight of his wife’s suspected affair. So when a mysterious stranger invites him to Ralph’s—a private club that offers an escape from reality—Andy jumps at the chance to reinvent himself. Behind a mask, he becomes Hannya, throwing himself into reckless nights of hedonism. But what starts as a thrilling escape quickly turns sinister, forcing Andy to confront just how much of himself he’s willing to lose in pursuit of freedom.
I don’t know what it says about me, but I love a book where the protagonist slowly descends into madness. If you’re the same and enjoy that paired with a secret society backdrop, then this is the book for you. Andy’s transformation from a dull, disillusioned teacher into something far darker is both compelling and unsettling, pulling the reader into his unraveling psyche.
After reading a few other reviews, I have to disagree with the confusion surrounding Red’s character. There are key moments that make certain aspects of Red’s identity blaringly obvious in hindsight, and when the reveal happens, it all clicks into place. Another standout for me was the use of masks—both literally and metaphorically. The Hannya mask, in particular, was a perfect choice for Andy, tying into his character arc and the themes of the book beautifully. It made me wonder if all the masks held deeper meanings.
Overall, I really enjoyed Fragmented. It was an instant hit for me, but I do think it will appeal more to readers who enjoy literary depth over those looking for a straightforward thriller. Thank you to NetGalley and Hanabi Press for the early eARC—I’ll definitely be looking into Alex Mura’s other work.
Andy Giles is drowning. His passion for teaching has faded into routine, and his marriage is crumbling under the weight of his wife’s suspected affair. So when a mysterious stranger invites him to Ralph’s—a private club that offers an escape from reality—Andy jumps at the chance to reinvent himself. Behind a mask, he becomes Hannya, throwing himself into reckless nights of hedonism. But what starts as a thrilling escape quickly turns sinister, forcing Andy to confront just how much of himself he’s willing to lose in pursuit of freedom.
I don’t know what it says about me, but I love a book where the protagonist slowly descends into madness. If you’re the same and enjoy that paired with a secret society backdrop, then this is the book for you. Andy’s transformation from a dull, disillusioned teacher into something far darker is both compelling and unsettling, pulling the reader into his unraveling psyche.
After reading a few other reviews, I have to disagree with the confusion surrounding Red’s character. There are key moments that make certain aspects of Red’s identity blaringly obvious in hindsight, and when the reveal happens, it all clicks into place. Another standout for me was the use of masks—both literally and metaphorically. The Hannya mask, in particular, was a perfect choice for Andy, tying into his character arc and the themes of the book beautifully. It made me wonder if all the masks held deeper meanings.
Overall, I really enjoyed Fragmented. It was an instant hit for me, but I do think it will appeal more to readers who enjoy literary depth over those looking for a straightforward thriller. Thank you to NetGalley and Hanabi Press for the early eARC—I’ll definitely be looking into Alex Mura’s other work.
August 1, 2025
'Freedom or incarceration? - that is the question.'
'Fragmented' proved to be an alcohol, drug and sex fest that read like a modern day Shakespearean tragedy. Enjoyed the life with Grace aspect of the failing marriage more than the club debauchery scenes, but the writing was both creative and imaginative throughout, being of a consistently high standard for both parts of the adventure.
Yep, a very enjoyable piece of Human Noire in its finest form that I would highly recommend for readers of dark fiction looking for something just that little bit different.
Rating: 4.0 bleak, but brightly glowing stars of truly euphoric ruination.
'Fragmented' proved to be an alcohol, drug and sex fest that read like a modern day Shakespearean tragedy. Enjoyed the life with Grace aspect of the failing marriage more than the club debauchery scenes, but the writing was both creative and imaginative throughout, being of a consistently high standard for both parts of the adventure.
Yep, a very enjoyable piece of Human Noire in its finest form that I would highly recommend for readers of dark fiction looking for something just that little bit different.
Rating: 4.0 bleak, but brightly glowing stars of truly euphoric ruination.
March 25, 2025
2.5☆ rounded to 3
Thank you to Alex and Netgalley for the ARC!
What an interesting read id say a 3 is a fair rating for this one
I enjoy spoiler free reviews myself, and my reviews will always be exactly that
Imagine, your life is nothing but a mediocre salary, uninterested uni students, and a wife who's slowly pulling away from you and out performing you in everyway. When one night, wallowing in your own sorrow at a small barely there bar ; your invited to a place that promises you everything you've ever wanted. Freedom. What would you do to just taste that? More importantly, what would you do to keep it?
What I liked
The cover- I know silly, but I do love it. Its very fitting for the book itself
The plot- although slightly confusing at times, I liked the general theme and plot of this novel. It left me thinking what would someone do in this situation. What one would do if they could do whatever sick twisted things they wanted to with one major consequence? It left me with many questions about human nature and what we'd truly turn into under Andy's same circumstances
The ambiance- You could really feel some parts of this novel. You really understand the way the mind bends when you do things you know you shouldn't be doing. Its a good example of what happens to the mind when your desensitized to those kinds of things
What I didnt-
The writing- Always left me wanting more, you never really know where any of this is happening, or what it even looks like. Which I feel would've made a great difference in immersing yourself into Andy's depraved world. The prose itself wasn't for me. although not necessarily Bad, it wasn't spectacular either.
The characters- Very one dimensional and lacking any depth. Makes it hard to feel for any of them or even care at all really. Andy just seems like a loser to me. Which could've been the point, but as the MC I was hoping for at least something to cling too. He just seems like a slightly jealous very self loathing man. Not my style! The other characters seemed to fall into that category as well. No background and no good banter to get a glimpse into who they really are or what they're personalities are like at all.
Red- Just lackluster? once you realize who she is, although it seems it was meant to be a "NO WAY" moment, it was not.
Not a bad read, certainly could've been better!
Thank you to Alex and Netgalley for the ARC!
What an interesting read id say a 3 is a fair rating for this one
I enjoy spoiler free reviews myself, and my reviews will always be exactly that
Imagine, your life is nothing but a mediocre salary, uninterested uni students, and a wife who's slowly pulling away from you and out performing you in everyway. When one night, wallowing in your own sorrow at a small barely there bar ; your invited to a place that promises you everything you've ever wanted. Freedom. What would you do to just taste that? More importantly, what would you do to keep it?
What I liked
The cover- I know silly, but I do love it. Its very fitting for the book itself
The plot- although slightly confusing at times, I liked the general theme and plot of this novel. It left me thinking what would someone do in this situation. What one would do if they could do whatever sick twisted things they wanted to with one major consequence? It left me with many questions about human nature and what we'd truly turn into under Andy's same circumstances
The ambiance- You could really feel some parts of this novel. You really understand the way the mind bends when you do things you know you shouldn't be doing. Its a good example of what happens to the mind when your desensitized to those kinds of things
What I didnt-
The writing- Always left me wanting more, you never really know where any of this is happening, or what it even looks like. Which I feel would've made a great difference in immersing yourself into Andy's depraved world. The prose itself wasn't for me. although not necessarily Bad, it wasn't spectacular either.
The characters- Very one dimensional and lacking any depth. Makes it hard to feel for any of them or even care at all really. Andy just seems like a loser to me. Which could've been the point, but as the MC I was hoping for at least something to cling too. He just seems like a slightly jealous very self loathing man. Not my style! The other characters seemed to fall into that category as well. No background and no good banter to get a glimpse into who they really are or what they're personalities are like at all.
Red- Just lackluster? once you realize who she is, although it seems it was meant to be a "NO WAY" moment, it was not.
Not a bad read, certainly could've been better!
April 1, 2025
Certain books you read and you know pretty much how the review will go as you are reading them
This is not one of those
I guess I would say its a psychological relationship based horror thriller, I will let the author answer and agree/disagree with that
What is for sure is it is unique
We meet Andy, a bored hubby teaching at a ‘well to do’ private school who randomly after work goes for a drink and meets a man who infers about a club where ‘anything and everything’ goes, after his second meeting with the man he receives handwritten a invitation to the said club, ‘Ralphs’
Now when it says ‘anything goes’ Andy presumes that it really doesn’t but he soon finds out it does, and here I must warn that drinking, drugs, sex and torture are among the more than scary offerings for patrons
Andy battles with what he sees but in the interwoven story about his relationship with his wife she notices he is changing, it is interesting to see him trying to cling on to his marriage as he gets more embroiled in the club and the people he meets there
His need for the monthly meets at the club become powerful, as he has met someone there and is intoxicated with her, but will the club, what he sees and partakes in be the end of him….?
At times not an easy read re the subjects but it is a powerful one, I read in more or less one sitting and was horrified by the club but needed to know what Andy was going to do as his life spiralled
A very well written ‘be careful what you wish for’ tale of lust and power and things becoming not just uncontrollable but taking over your whole life
Be wary of any invitations to clubs that promise you the world as they can also take it away from you
Challenging in parts but uncompromising in its narrative and story
This is not one of those
I guess I would say its a psychological relationship based horror thriller, I will let the author answer and agree/disagree with that
What is for sure is it is unique
We meet Andy, a bored hubby teaching at a ‘well to do’ private school who randomly after work goes for a drink and meets a man who infers about a club where ‘anything and everything’ goes, after his second meeting with the man he receives handwritten a invitation to the said club, ‘Ralphs’
Now when it says ‘anything goes’ Andy presumes that it really doesn’t but he soon finds out it does, and here I must warn that drinking, drugs, sex and torture are among the more than scary offerings for patrons
Andy battles with what he sees but in the interwoven story about his relationship with his wife she notices he is changing, it is interesting to see him trying to cling on to his marriage as he gets more embroiled in the club and the people he meets there
His need for the monthly meets at the club become powerful, as he has met someone there and is intoxicated with her, but will the club, what he sees and partakes in be the end of him….?
At times not an easy read re the subjects but it is a powerful one, I read in more or less one sitting and was horrified by the club but needed to know what Andy was going to do as his life spiralled
A very well written ‘be careful what you wish for’ tale of lust and power and things becoming not just uncontrollable but taking over your whole life
Be wary of any invitations to clubs that promise you the world as they can also take it away from you
Challenging in parts but uncompromising in its narrative and story
March 4, 2025
“ Fragmented" by Alex Mura is a thrilling, fast-paced ride that kept me on the edge of my seat from start to finish. The story follows a man determined to reinvent himself, only to find himself caught in a web of unexpected challenges and difficult choices. Mura's writing is gripping, and the suspense builds as the protagonist navigates a path he doesn't fully understand. With every twist and turn, I found myself unable to put the book down, eagerly anticipating what would happen next. A must-read for anyone who loves psychological drama with high stakes.
March 20, 2025
Fragmented by Alex Mura
🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
This book is an exciting and face paced psychological thriller!
Andy, a bored teacher, is searching for more out of his life. He gets an invitation to a “special” club and is very excited to check it out! As a new journey and transformation unfolds, life takes some weird and dark turns for Andy.
This story is intense, mysterious and suspenseful!!
I was very entertained from start to finish and didn’t want to stop reading!
The author does a very good job with the writing of this story. It’s my first book from Alex, but I’m excited to read more.
Thank you to NetGalley for an arc of this awesome book!
*It comes out April 1st, so make sure to grab a copy of this amazing thriller!!*
🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
This book is an exciting and face paced psychological thriller!
Andy, a bored teacher, is searching for more out of his life. He gets an invitation to a “special” club and is very excited to check it out! As a new journey and transformation unfolds, life takes some weird and dark turns for Andy.
This story is intense, mysterious and suspenseful!!
I was very entertained from start to finish and didn’t want to stop reading!
The author does a very good job with the writing of this story. It’s my first book from Alex, but I’m excited to read more.
Thank you to NetGalley for an arc of this awesome book!
*It comes out April 1st, so make sure to grab a copy of this amazing thriller!!*
March 23, 2025
"Fragmented" by Alex Mura is a intense and fast-paced, four-star read! Andy, an underappreciated history teacher stuck in a mundane life and a stagnant marriage with a wife more focused on work than on him, finds his world turned upside down after meeting a stranger at a bar. The stranger offers him an invitation to an exclusive, members-only party—one that will change his life forever.
Mura’s writing is gripping, and I flew through this book, eager to find out what would happen next. This is a thriller on the darker side, perfect for readers who enjoy an edgier, more unsettling story. However, if you're looking for a standard thriller, this might not be the best fit. Be sure to check the trigger warnings, as this story contains several. You can probably imagine what happens at an exclusive club where masked members spend the night drinking and doing drugs—but trust me, Mura takes it even further.
This is the second book I’ve enjoyed by Alex Mura, and I look forward to the next terrifying offering!
Thanks to Hanabi Press, Alex Mura, and NetGalley for providing me with the opportunity to read this ARC and share my honest review.
Mura’s writing is gripping, and I flew through this book, eager to find out what would happen next. This is a thriller on the darker side, perfect for readers who enjoy an edgier, more unsettling story. However, if you're looking for a standard thriller, this might not be the best fit. Be sure to check the trigger warnings, as this story contains several. You can probably imagine what happens at an exclusive club where masked members spend the night drinking and doing drugs—but trust me, Mura takes it even further.
This is the second book I’ve enjoyed by Alex Mura, and I look forward to the next terrifying offering!
Thanks to Hanabi Press, Alex Mura, and NetGalley for providing me with the opportunity to read this ARC and share my honest review.
March 5, 2025
Wow! What a gripping tale following Andy, the history teacher into a world unknown. What will he do? What will he see? This thriller takes us through so many areas of romance, secrecy, lies, and skipped heartbeats. Great job to the author for pulling these characters to life and making such a great story for readers to dive into.
March 8, 2025
Wow! Alex has done it again.
I chuckled, I cringed, I read with eyebrows raised and jaw on the floor.
I was INVESTED in this story.
The way I gasped and clutched by heart. Phew!
All the things you want in a great book are right here in THIS very book. It was fast paced, suspenseful, definitely thrilling and an absolutely wild ride.
I chuckled, I cringed, I read with eyebrows raised and jaw on the floor.
I was INVESTED in this story.
The way I gasped and clutched by heart. Phew!
All the things you want in a great book are right here in THIS very book. It was fast paced, suspenseful, definitely thrilling and an absolutely wild ride.
May 2, 2025
This dark and psychological thriller explores the costs of obsession, the pull of self-destruction, and the looming threat of one's own identity. The main character, Andy Giles, is a disillusioned, bored, frustrated history teacher in need of an outlet and excitement. He quickly finds his desires sated at Ralph's, a club where masks hide more than just your secrets. The ability to experience life without inhibitions or accountability is intoxicating for Andy, and his mid-life crisis becomes a full-blown explosion.
There's touches of Fight Club with of course Eyes Wide Shut; of finding that you've created a self as more of a performance and discover that it will never make you happy. The club atmosphere itself feels like a fever dream, which definitely mirrors the spiraling of Andy. But considering this is a thriller, Andy doesn't discover his true purpose is painting on the French Riviera, but something much darker. As much as I enjoyed the thrilling pace and unrelenting tension the book delivered, the story itself didn't strike any particular nerve. I appreciated it, and the ending did bring something different that I hadn't expected, but I do feel like the "guy bored with his life and self-destructs" has been done so many times, it doesn't feel fresh. From the very beginning, the main character felt selfish and that didn't change. But if you like these kinds of stories, this one would be right up your alley.
I have previously read Alex Mura's Silence in the Basement as an ARC, and enjoyed seeing how his writing has improved and expanded in Fragmented. I love the cover art, very spooky and fitting. I think the red font with the long letters gives a blood-dripping quality that really sets it off well. I can't wait to read Alex's next fore into the horrific and thrilling - he definitely seems to have a talent for pacing and I think the dialogue was much more realistic in Fragmented.
Reading Level: Adult Psychological Thriller (graphic sex, drug use, cheating, psychological trauma)
You might like Fragmented if you liked:
- Fight Club (Palahniuk)
- Eyes Wide Shut (film)
- American Psycho (Bret Easton Ellis, film & novel)
Main Themes and Tropes:
- Identity/Masks (literal & metaphorical)
- mid-life crisis
- underground club/spicy meet-ups
- hedonism vs. morality
- divorce/cheating
- unlikeable/unreliable/morally gray narrator
- self-destruction/descent into madness
Overall rating: 4/5 stars!
There's touches of Fight Club with of course Eyes Wide Shut; of finding that you've created a self as more of a performance and discover that it will never make you happy. The club atmosphere itself feels like a fever dream, which definitely mirrors the spiraling of Andy. But considering this is a thriller, Andy doesn't discover his true purpose is painting on the French Riviera, but something much darker. As much as I enjoyed the thrilling pace and unrelenting tension the book delivered, the story itself didn't strike any particular nerve. I appreciated it, and the ending did bring something different that I hadn't expected, but I do feel like the "guy bored with his life and self-destructs" has been done so many times, it doesn't feel fresh. From the very beginning, the main character felt selfish and that didn't change. But if you like these kinds of stories, this one would be right up your alley.
I have previously read Alex Mura's Silence in the Basement as an ARC, and enjoyed seeing how his writing has improved and expanded in Fragmented. I love the cover art, very spooky and fitting. I think the red font with the long letters gives a blood-dripping quality that really sets it off well. I can't wait to read Alex's next fore into the horrific and thrilling - he definitely seems to have a talent for pacing and I think the dialogue was much more realistic in Fragmented.
Reading Level: Adult Psychological Thriller (graphic sex, drug use, cheating, psychological trauma)
You might like Fragmented if you liked:
- Fight Club (Palahniuk)
- Eyes Wide Shut (film)
- American Psycho (Bret Easton Ellis, film & novel)
Main Themes and Tropes:
- Identity/Masks (literal & metaphorical)
- mid-life crisis
- underground club/spicy meet-ups
- hedonism vs. morality
- divorce/cheating
- unlikeable/unreliable/morally gray narrator
- self-destruction/descent into madness
Overall rating: 4/5 stars!
March 17, 2025
Book Review: Fragmented by Alex Mura
Introduction: Fragmented by Alex Mura is a dark, psychological mystery thriller that explores the fragility of identity and the lengths a person will go to escape their reality. Set against the backdrop of a high-end members club, the novel takes readers on a twisted journey through the psyche of a man on the brink of losing everything. With his personal and professional life in shambles, Andy Giles is drawn into a mysterious world where boundaries blur and chaos reigns.
Summary: Andy Giles, a man whose passion for teaching has become a mere routine, is drowning in the weight of his collapsing marriage to his wife, Grace. When a mysterious stranger introduces him to Ralph’s—a club that promises an escape from his monotonous life—Andy decides to reinvent himself. Adopting the name Hannya, he surrenders to a life of indulgence and reckless abandon. However, what begins as a thrilling escape soon spirals into something far more sinister, as the innocent theatrics of Ralph's take a dark turn. As Andy is confronted with increasingly dangerous choices, he must ask himself: how much of his soul is he willing to destroy for the sake of freedom, and what horrors is he willing to commit in the process?
Analysis: The strength of Fragmented lies in its portrayal of Andy’s internal struggle. As the protagonist navigates through his emotional turmoil and attempts to redefine himself, the reader is forced to grapple with questions of morality, identity, and self-destruction. The narrative unfolds in a way that keeps the reader on edge, constantly wondering what Andy will do next and how far he is willing to go.
The setting of Ralph’s, with its allure and promise of freedom, creates a perfect stage for the psychological tension to escalate. The atmosphere is charged with mystery, and the author expertly blurs the lines between fantasy and reality. As Andy transforms into Hannya, the reader is reminded of the fragility of self-control and the dangers of unchecked hedonism.
The supporting characters, particularly Grace and the stranger who introduces Andy to Ralph’s, serve as catalysts for his descent into darkness. Their motivations and interactions with Andy further complicate his already fragile state of mind, adding layers of intrigue and suspense.
Writing Style: The writing style is both immersive and unsettling. The author skillfully crafts a narrative that pulls the reader into Andy’s world, making the descent into chaos feel inevitable and all-consuming. The pacing is steady, with enough tension to keep the reader engaged, but there are moments of reflective pause that allow for deeper emotional insight into Andy's character.
Themes: At its core, Fragmented is a meditation on the cost of freedom and the pursuit of personal reinvention. It explores the dangers of escapism and the consequences of abandoning one’s true self in the quest for liberation. The novel also delves into themes of trust, identity, and the lengths people are willing to go to in order to escape their pain and dissatisfaction.
Conclusion: Fragmented is a gripping, thought-provoking thriller that masterfully combines suspense with deep psychological exploration. Andy’s journey is one of self-destruction, and the novel raises important questions about the nature of freedom, identity, and the darkness lurking within us all. For fans of psychological thrillers that keep you questioning what’s real, this is a must-read.
Rating: 5 stars
Introduction: Fragmented by Alex Mura is a dark, psychological mystery thriller that explores the fragility of identity and the lengths a person will go to escape their reality. Set against the backdrop of a high-end members club, the novel takes readers on a twisted journey through the psyche of a man on the brink of losing everything. With his personal and professional life in shambles, Andy Giles is drawn into a mysterious world where boundaries blur and chaos reigns.
Summary: Andy Giles, a man whose passion for teaching has become a mere routine, is drowning in the weight of his collapsing marriage to his wife, Grace. When a mysterious stranger introduces him to Ralph’s—a club that promises an escape from his monotonous life—Andy decides to reinvent himself. Adopting the name Hannya, he surrenders to a life of indulgence and reckless abandon. However, what begins as a thrilling escape soon spirals into something far more sinister, as the innocent theatrics of Ralph's take a dark turn. As Andy is confronted with increasingly dangerous choices, he must ask himself: how much of his soul is he willing to destroy for the sake of freedom, and what horrors is he willing to commit in the process?
Analysis: The strength of Fragmented lies in its portrayal of Andy’s internal struggle. As the protagonist navigates through his emotional turmoil and attempts to redefine himself, the reader is forced to grapple with questions of morality, identity, and self-destruction. The narrative unfolds in a way that keeps the reader on edge, constantly wondering what Andy will do next and how far he is willing to go.
The setting of Ralph’s, with its allure and promise of freedom, creates a perfect stage for the psychological tension to escalate. The atmosphere is charged with mystery, and the author expertly blurs the lines between fantasy and reality. As Andy transforms into Hannya, the reader is reminded of the fragility of self-control and the dangers of unchecked hedonism.
The supporting characters, particularly Grace and the stranger who introduces Andy to Ralph’s, serve as catalysts for his descent into darkness. Their motivations and interactions with Andy further complicate his already fragile state of mind, adding layers of intrigue and suspense.
Writing Style: The writing style is both immersive and unsettling. The author skillfully crafts a narrative that pulls the reader into Andy’s world, making the descent into chaos feel inevitable and all-consuming. The pacing is steady, with enough tension to keep the reader engaged, but there are moments of reflective pause that allow for deeper emotional insight into Andy's character.
Themes: At its core, Fragmented is a meditation on the cost of freedom and the pursuit of personal reinvention. It explores the dangers of escapism and the consequences of abandoning one’s true self in the quest for liberation. The novel also delves into themes of trust, identity, and the lengths people are willing to go to in order to escape their pain and dissatisfaction.
Conclusion: Fragmented is a gripping, thought-provoking thriller that masterfully combines suspense with deep psychological exploration. Andy’s journey is one of self-destruction, and the novel raises important questions about the nature of freedom, identity, and the darkness lurking within us all. For fans of psychological thrillers that keep you questioning what’s real, this is a must-read.
Rating: 5 stars
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 8, 2025
Goodreads giveaway win.
3.5⭐️ rounded up.
Wow. This book was intense. About 3/4 of the way through the book, it became a little too intense for me and I considered not finishing. There were just a few scenes of torture that were a lot to handle for me, but I'm a lightweight when it comes to suffering. I'm glad I pushed through and finished.
Thank you, Goodreads and the publisher, I won this Kindle copy of this book.
3.5⭐️ rounded up.
Wow. This book was intense. About 3/4 of the way through the book, it became a little too intense for me and I considered not finishing. There were just a few scenes of torture that were a lot to handle for me, but I'm a lightweight when it comes to suffering. I'm glad I pushed through and finished.
Thank you, Goodreads and the publisher, I won this Kindle copy of this book.
March 19, 2025
This book starts off easy going, but you immediately feel the undercurrent of something ominous. The more you read the more that feeling grows. Mr. Andy Giles is a history teacher but settled into this position rather than pushing for what he wanted to achieve. His wife Grace over works leaving their relationship stale and just coexisting. This is until Andy meets a stranger at the pub and with just one word, the ominous feeling has its target, ‘Ralph’s’ a notorious, secret, exclusive, invitation only club.
There is an edginess that surrounds and encompasses the notorious ‘Ralph’s’. The instructions are to the point, but are also aloof giving off a vibe of wariness. The build up of anticipation is delivered perfectly. You feel all the turbulent emotions alongside the MMC as he first enters ‘Ralph’s’ as if experiencing them alongside him. The impression given from the author in this scene is as if by entering this notorious club, Andy has been reawakened, when as a matter of fact he becomes one with the mask that is upon his face.
The element of wariness always remained until the moment it finally revealed itself in a way that was truly unexpected. I was struck with a sense of horror and angst alongside the MMC. All it took was that pivotal moment for the story to shift on its axis and turn dark and foreboding. With eagerness I kept reading until all the secrets start to unravel, along with the anticipation of what’s to come next.
The spiralling continued to take its shape in new forms whilst the twists and turns jumped up and ensnared me in its grasp. The turn of events that seemed to happen so rapidly, but so slowly at the same time, was nothing I’d ever have predicted.
The ending was a perfect way to end the cataclysmic turn of events, but also leaving an element of shock and in turn wanting, to know what just happened and what comes next. The author seems to have given the reader the power to determine how the last words are interpreted and whether or not the story ends there.
It’s not very often I stray from my usual genres, but I’m glad I did. This authors writing is a true masterpiece that enraptures you and leaves you wanting more.
There is an edginess that surrounds and encompasses the notorious ‘Ralph’s’. The instructions are to the point, but are also aloof giving off a vibe of wariness. The build up of anticipation is delivered perfectly. You feel all the turbulent emotions alongside the MMC as he first enters ‘Ralph’s’ as if experiencing them alongside him. The impression given from the author in this scene is as if by entering this notorious club, Andy has been reawakened, when as a matter of fact he becomes one with the mask that is upon his face.
The element of wariness always remained until the moment it finally revealed itself in a way that was truly unexpected. I was struck with a sense of horror and angst alongside the MMC. All it took was that pivotal moment for the story to shift on its axis and turn dark and foreboding. With eagerness I kept reading until all the secrets start to unravel, along with the anticipation of what’s to come next.
The spiralling continued to take its shape in new forms whilst the twists and turns jumped up and ensnared me in its grasp. The turn of events that seemed to happen so rapidly, but so slowly at the same time, was nothing I’d ever have predicted.
The ending was a perfect way to end the cataclysmic turn of events, but also leaving an element of shock and in turn wanting, to know what just happened and what comes next. The author seems to have given the reader the power to determine how the last words are interpreted and whether or not the story ends there.
It’s not very often I stray from my usual genres, but I’m glad I did. This authors writing is a true masterpiece that enraptures you and leaves you wanting more.
March 17, 2025
I had the privilege of reading this as an ARC. Funny story…I read an ARC by Alex Mura last year and that book stuck with me. Silence In The Basement. I remember the story, I remember the title. But evidently forgot the author. Because when I saw Fragmented in Net Galley as an ARC for me to read my thought was “oh, let me check out Alex Mura. See if he’s any good to me”. 🤣🤣🤣🤣. Yall…
He IS! And he was a year ago too! 🤣. I suck at even remembering what I just finished reading so for me to remember the title and the story of a book I read a year ago…it’s gotta be good! All that is to say…. Alex Mura is an author worthy to be remembered and should be spoken of much more often! Now Fragmented, the new Alex Mura ARC I just finished will be released April 1. I highly recommend going and ordering it! Not gonna lie, I saw the cover and thought “eh…it looks like a historical type book”. That’s because I suck and totally judge books by their covers. I’m SO glad I gave this book a chance because this is one of the top 2 faves for me so far this year! (I’ve probably read about 15-20) The story line is SO different than the typical story line. Had me sooooo wanting to know how this could possibly turn out. If it wasn’t for life, I’d have devoured this in one sitting. I absolutely love the way this author writes. His verbiage. His metaphors. His style. It grabs a hold of me and keeps me interested. I have Aphantasia…full on 5 and I just don’t envision what I’m reading. At all. Yet, somehow this dude is able to draw me into the story and make me feel all the feels. And this book had me feeling so much hatred for the MC. Yet also felt bad for him. Then right back to hatred. The emotions and the gasps were real and for a “5”, that’s a BIG deal! There’s a little spice in this and a little horror. But I was here for it!
Yall give Fragmented a read. You won’t regret it!
He IS! And he was a year ago too! 🤣. I suck at even remembering what I just finished reading so for me to remember the title and the story of a book I read a year ago…it’s gotta be good! All that is to say…. Alex Mura is an author worthy to be remembered and should be spoken of much more often! Now Fragmented, the new Alex Mura ARC I just finished will be released April 1. I highly recommend going and ordering it! Not gonna lie, I saw the cover and thought “eh…it looks like a historical type book”. That’s because I suck and totally judge books by their covers. I’m SO glad I gave this book a chance because this is one of the top 2 faves for me so far this year! (I’ve probably read about 15-20) The story line is SO different than the typical story line. Had me sooooo wanting to know how this could possibly turn out. If it wasn’t for life, I’d have devoured this in one sitting. I absolutely love the way this author writes. His verbiage. His metaphors. His style. It grabs a hold of me and keeps me interested. I have Aphantasia…full on 5 and I just don’t envision what I’m reading. At all. Yet, somehow this dude is able to draw me into the story and make me feel all the feels. And this book had me feeling so much hatred for the MC. Yet also felt bad for him. Then right back to hatred. The emotions and the gasps were real and for a “5”, that’s a BIG deal! There’s a little spice in this and a little horror. But I was here for it!
Yall give Fragmented a read. You won’t regret it!
March 12, 2025
This is a mesmerizing psychological thriller that lingers in the mind long after the final page.
Mura’s writing is hypnotic, drawing readers into a world where the masks we wear—both literal and metaphorical—blur the line between reality and illusion. The novel brilliantly explores how far one might go to escape the monotony of everyday life. Each page pulses with an unsettling energy, making it impossible to look away.
What sets Fragmented apart is its literary depth. This is not just a thriller—it’s a thought-provoking exploration of identity, morality, and the dangers of losing oneself in a constructed reality. Readers who appreciate psychological complexity will be utterly enthralled.
Dark, immersive, and deeply unsettling, Fragmented is a must-read for fans of psychological thrillers.
Mura’s writing is hypnotic, drawing readers into a world where the masks we wear—both literal and metaphorical—blur the line between reality and illusion. The novel brilliantly explores how far one might go to escape the monotony of everyday life. Each page pulses with an unsettling energy, making it impossible to look away.
What sets Fragmented apart is its literary depth. This is not just a thriller—it’s a thought-provoking exploration of identity, morality, and the dangers of losing oneself in a constructed reality. Readers who appreciate psychological complexity will be utterly enthralled.
Dark, immersive, and deeply unsettling, Fragmented is a must-read for fans of psychological thrillers.
March 23, 2025
Fragmented
By Alex Mura
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Eyes Wide Shut meets Fight Club meets Breaking Bad meets Romeo & Juliet meets Requiem For A Dream …. but also nothing like any of those! Ha! Completely unique. What a ride this book was!!!
What do you do when your life becomes so mundane and you feel so invisible and unimportant in your own skin that you don’t think you can take it another day? Well, I can tell you what Andy Giles does… he enters an underground elite secret world where everything and nothing is what it seems.
The constant feeling that there are dangerous layers to this secret society grows and grows with each page. Wanting to know but also terrified to find out sums up my feeling throughout.
Angst, danger, spice 🔥, tragedy… and more. Alex Mura delivers it all in this story.
Big thanks to Alex Mura, NetGalley and Hanabi Press for the opportunity to read this ARC.
Available April 1st!
By Alex Mura
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Eyes Wide Shut meets Fight Club meets Breaking Bad meets Romeo & Juliet meets Requiem For A Dream …. but also nothing like any of those! Ha! Completely unique. What a ride this book was!!!
What do you do when your life becomes so mundane and you feel so invisible and unimportant in your own skin that you don’t think you can take it another day? Well, I can tell you what Andy Giles does… he enters an underground elite secret world where everything and nothing is what it seems.
The constant feeling that there are dangerous layers to this secret society grows and grows with each page. Wanting to know but also terrified to find out sums up my feeling throughout.
Angst, danger, spice 🔥, tragedy… and more. Alex Mura delivers it all in this story.
Big thanks to Alex Mura, NetGalley and Hanabi Press for the opportunity to read this ARC.
Available April 1st!
March 16, 2025
Andy, the MMC, history teacher is bored with his life, feels unappreciated in his work and senses his wife is having an affair. After meeting a strange man at a bar and is invited to “Ralph’s” the world as he knows it changes. This private club is suppose to offer “freedom” an escape from reality where masks are worn at all times, he enters a world of darkness, drugs, sex and torture. Things begin to unravel for him in all areas, at Ralph’s , at work with his students as well at home with his wife. So in the quest for this “freedom” to reinvent himself he slowly loses himself to insanity.
I enjoy dark reads and thrillers as well. I just felt the characters didn’t have that much depth to them. Some parts of the story felt rushed and other parts I was frazzled with where the plot was going. The ending with Red being revealed… with all of the chaos I didn’t remember who that was. It was an okay read for me. 2.5 out of 5
I enjoy dark reads and thrillers as well. I just felt the characters didn’t have that much depth to them. Some parts of the story felt rushed and other parts I was frazzled with where the plot was going. The ending with Red being revealed… with all of the chaos I didn’t remember who that was. It was an okay read for me. 2.5 out of 5
March 8, 2025
What an amazing fast paced read! I was glued to this Arc as soon as I opened it! A history teacher feeling like an afterthought in his relationship and feeling unappreciated within his career (students & the education system) looking for something to excite and free his mind, and he thinks he finds it! He goes to a Members club, (Ralph’s ) where everyone is hiding something, what are they hiding he wonders? Once you spot what they are hiding, you can’t unsee it, so it is explained! Twists and turns I did not see coming! So AMAZING you have to read!!
I would highly recommend this book & cannot wait to read more by this author!
I would highly recommend this book & cannot wait to read more by this author!
March 8, 2025
Feeling stuck in a boring, mundane life? Need an escape to really feel something? What price would you pay to escape your reality?
Andy is just looking for an escape, liven up his life. What he finds turns out to be an emotional descent.... can he recover from this or will his live forever be changed?
Alex does a great job showing the emotions and range of the characters throughout this book. Once things really got going, I couldn't put the book down until the end.
Andy is just looking for an escape, liven up his life. What he finds turns out to be an emotional descent.... can he recover from this or will his live forever be changed?
Alex does a great job showing the emotions and range of the characters throughout this book. Once things really got going, I couldn't put the book down until the end.
March 26, 2025
Do you want a fast paced thriller? This one is for you!! For one, the cover art? Two, the blurb? When a man’s life falls apart and he basically gets offered and exclusive invite to a private club? I mean I didn’t blame him but dang was it a ride with a rude awakening! If you like a book that has you questioning yourself and if you’re okay with things….this is it! Grab it and don’t think twice because I sure didn’t! #psychologicalthriller #privateclub #madness
March 19, 2025
Terrifying and Twisted, utterly compelling.
An intense, well written gem of a tale that I devoured in one sitting, unable to sleep until I reached the devastating conclusion.
Honestly, this is a must read that many could relate to, the daily routines, boredom, repetitive lives and the desire to be better and given an incredible opportunity to change… What would you do and at what cost?
Absorbing, chilling and thoroughly immersing this fantastic read is highly recommended.
5 Stars from me.
An intense, well written gem of a tale that I devoured in one sitting, unable to sleep until I reached the devastating conclusion.
Honestly, this is a must read that many could relate to, the daily routines, boredom, repetitive lives and the desire to be better and given an incredible opportunity to change… What would you do and at what cost?
Absorbing, chilling and thoroughly immersing this fantastic read is highly recommended.
5 Stars from me.
March 6, 2025
Thanks NetGalley for the arc!
I enjoyed this book! The plot hooked me in and I binge read it in 3 days. The author did a great job on building this other world that the main character stumbles into.
I did have a few qualms with this book. The characters felt one dimensional to me. I would’ve loved for the author to give them more of a backstory. I really could not get over the double standards in this book. It was actually really infuriating to read and left quite a bad taste in my mouth. Not sure if that was on purpose but the main character was also insufferable. There were a few scenes that felt really awkward and uncomfortable. I would’ve loved for more tasteful descriptions of the scenes. Ending felt quite rushed and I would’ve loved for the author to maybe expand on the ramifications of the main character. Again, the double standards at the end really annoyed me.
Overall I thought the plot was there. I just wish that the details were more thought out!
I enjoyed this book! The plot hooked me in and I binge read it in 3 days. The author did a great job on building this other world that the main character stumbles into.
I did have a few qualms with this book. The characters felt one dimensional to me. I would’ve loved for the author to give them more of a backstory. I really could not get over the double standards in this book. It was actually really infuriating to read and left quite a bad taste in my mouth. Not sure if that was on purpose but the main character was also insufferable. There were a few scenes that felt really awkward and uncomfortable. I would’ve loved for more tasteful descriptions of the scenes. Ending felt quite rushed and I would’ve loved for the author to maybe expand on the ramifications of the main character. Again, the double standards at the end really annoyed me.
Overall I thought the plot was there. I just wish that the details were more thought out!
March 21, 2025
The book was good ! Reminded me of another story by a French Canadian horror fiction author, but I preferred Fragmented, less gore, more psychological thinking.
I liked it ! Well written.
I liked it ! Well written.
July 27, 2025
Fast paced psychological thriller, couldn't stop reading
April 1, 2025
Fragmented is a party—a dark, disturbing party—but a party all the same. Once you step into Alex Mura’s twisted world, there's no turning back.
Andy Giles leads a mundane life until he's invited to join Ralph’s, an exclusive, hedonistic society. The rules are strict: 100 members, no personal details, costumes required, and masks must never come off. As Andy becomes Hannya, he plunges into a world of drugs, alcohol, sex, and torture, constantly torn between his desires and his moral compass.
Mura takes you from 0 to 60 in the first few pages, and I was hooked. The visceral descriptions of Ralph’s, especially during Andy’s first visit, create an intoxicating atmosphere. The juxtaposition of Andy’s “normal” life and his dark indulgences shows how quickly he’s transformed by the allure of moral freedom. Mura’s pacing makes you feel the weight of every drug and drink consumed.
Fragmented is a gripping dark thriller that explores the internal battle between temptation and morality. It asks: When does the thrill of the forbidden wear off? What masks do we wear to hide our true selves?
For lovers of dark, psychological thrillers, Fragmented is a must-read, especially in the Fall/Winter months. Just be ready to feel disturbed long after you finish.
Thank you to Alex Mura and Hanabi Press for this eARC. #netgalley
Andy Giles leads a mundane life until he's invited to join Ralph’s, an exclusive, hedonistic society. The rules are strict: 100 members, no personal details, costumes required, and masks must never come off. As Andy becomes Hannya, he plunges into a world of drugs, alcohol, sex, and torture, constantly torn between his desires and his moral compass.
Mura takes you from 0 to 60 in the first few pages, and I was hooked. The visceral descriptions of Ralph’s, especially during Andy’s first visit, create an intoxicating atmosphere. The juxtaposition of Andy’s “normal” life and his dark indulgences shows how quickly he’s transformed by the allure of moral freedom. Mura’s pacing makes you feel the weight of every drug and drink consumed.
Fragmented is a gripping dark thriller that explores the internal battle between temptation and morality. It asks: When does the thrill of the forbidden wear off? What masks do we wear to hide our true selves?
For lovers of dark, psychological thrillers, Fragmented is a must-read, especially in the Fall/Winter months. Just be ready to feel disturbed long after you finish.
Thank you to Alex Mura and Hanabi Press for this eARC. #netgalley
April 1, 2025
Fragmented by Alex Mura delivers a darkly compelling exploration of identity, escape, and the insidious nature of self-destruction. Andy Giles, a man suffocating under the weight of a failing marriage and a passionless career, is a character many can relate to, at least in some small way. His descent into the alluring world of Ralph's, and his transformation into Hannya, is both fascinating and unnerving.
Mura paints a vivid picture of the club, Ralph's, and the hedonistic temptations it offers. The atmosphere is thick with mystery and a growing sense of unease. You can feel Andy's initial intoxication with the freedom and anonymity, followed by the creeping dread as the lines between fantasy and reality blur. The author skillfully builds suspense, leaving you wondering just how far Andy will go to escape his old life.
The exploration of Andy's fractured psyche is a major strength of the novel. His internal struggles feel authentic, and Mura does a good job of portraying his moral compromises and the consequences they have. The supporting characters, while perhaps not as deeply developed, serve their purpose in driving the narrative and highlighting different facets of Andy's personality.
While the pacing is generally well-managed, there were moments where I felt the narrative meandered slightly, particularly in the middle section. Perhaps a tighter focus on the core plot points would have elevated the tension even further. The ending, while impactful, also felt a little rushed, leaving me with a few unanswered questions.
Overall, Fragmented is a thought-provoking and unsettling read that lingers in the mind long after you've finished. It's a well-written exploration of the darker aspects of human nature and the dangers of unchecked escapism. While not perfect, it's a compelling story that earns its four stars and comes recommended for those who enjoy psychological thrillers with a touch of the macabre.
Mura paints a vivid picture of the club, Ralph's, and the hedonistic temptations it offers. The atmosphere is thick with mystery and a growing sense of unease. You can feel Andy's initial intoxication with the freedom and anonymity, followed by the creeping dread as the lines between fantasy and reality blur. The author skillfully builds suspense, leaving you wondering just how far Andy will go to escape his old life.
The exploration of Andy's fractured psyche is a major strength of the novel. His internal struggles feel authentic, and Mura does a good job of portraying his moral compromises and the consequences they have. The supporting characters, while perhaps not as deeply developed, serve their purpose in driving the narrative and highlighting different facets of Andy's personality.
While the pacing is generally well-managed, there were moments where I felt the narrative meandered slightly, particularly in the middle section. Perhaps a tighter focus on the core plot points would have elevated the tension even further. The ending, while impactful, also felt a little rushed, leaving me with a few unanswered questions.
Overall, Fragmented is a thought-provoking and unsettling read that lingers in the mind long after you've finished. It's a well-written exploration of the darker aspects of human nature and the dangers of unchecked escapism. While not perfect, it's a compelling story that earns its four stars and comes recommended for those who enjoy psychological thrillers with a touch of the macabre.
April 1, 2025
Well... this book goes from "give yourself over to absolute..." to "it's all fun and games until..."
We meet Andy Giles when he is floundering. He is bored and frustrated with his teaching job, the students appearing to give as little a stuff as he... and he is convinced that his marriage is on the rocks, with wife Grace having an affair. He is out on his own one evening when he meets a stranger who understands him, just gets him, totally. He offers him a solution to his life woes, an exclusive invitation to a members only club which will not only offer him a break from his humdrum existence, but also the chance to make new connections...
But be careful what you wish for, cos you might just get it, and then it will all get out of hand, cos everything has a price... buckle up readers, cos you are in for a wild and wacky ride, graphic and chock full of misogyny and hedonism, drugs and violence, as we watch Andy drowning in a whole different way...
And in the mean time, between visits to the club, we also witness Andy's real life, how he is changing, how his relationship with Grace changes too. This descent is really the main point of the book. It's all a bit car crash. We kinda know where we are going but it is still totally shocking when we eventually get there. It's inevitable but also hard to come to terms with.
The writing is sublime and pacing matches the narrative all the way through. There is no superfluous waffle or padding so it all gets on with itself very well. As it is quite graphic and hard hitting, I was thankful when the author dialled it down a notch and gave me some quieter moments for respite, which also kept the book balanced and stopped it getting to over-heavy.
All in all, a challenging and hard hitting, but well written book that pulls no punches but also does not go too far. I see that the author has a previous book which I have now also added to my TBR.
My thanks go to the Publisher and Netgalley for the chance to read this book.
We meet Andy Giles when he is floundering. He is bored and frustrated with his teaching job, the students appearing to give as little a stuff as he... and he is convinced that his marriage is on the rocks, with wife Grace having an affair. He is out on his own one evening when he meets a stranger who understands him, just gets him, totally. He offers him a solution to his life woes, an exclusive invitation to a members only club which will not only offer him a break from his humdrum existence, but also the chance to make new connections...
But be careful what you wish for, cos you might just get it, and then it will all get out of hand, cos everything has a price... buckle up readers, cos you are in for a wild and wacky ride, graphic and chock full of misogyny and hedonism, drugs and violence, as we watch Andy drowning in a whole different way...
And in the mean time, between visits to the club, we also witness Andy's real life, how he is changing, how his relationship with Grace changes too. This descent is really the main point of the book. It's all a bit car crash. We kinda know where we are going but it is still totally shocking when we eventually get there. It's inevitable but also hard to come to terms with.
The writing is sublime and pacing matches the narrative all the way through. There is no superfluous waffle or padding so it all gets on with itself very well. As it is quite graphic and hard hitting, I was thankful when the author dialled it down a notch and gave me some quieter moments for respite, which also kept the book balanced and stopped it getting to over-heavy.
All in all, a challenging and hard hitting, but well written book that pulls no punches but also does not go too far. I see that the author has a previous book which I have now also added to my TBR.
My thanks go to the Publisher and Netgalley for the chance to read this book.
March 4, 2025
This was a 3.5-4 star book for me bascially the whole way through. The ending left a bit to be desired, and I really didn’t remember who Amy(Red) was. The party she was at was a small, and what I thought, irrelevant part of the story. Thank you Alex Mura, his street team, and NetGalley for the ARC. So here is my review. I will keep most spoilers out. This was also my first book by Alex Mura
Some call its paradise…some call it a culty “social club”, fueled by infedelity, anonymity, free flowing booze and party drugs…..but everybody calls it ‘Ralphs’.
Andy, a burnt out teacher suspects his wife of cheating with her client, Tom, his life spirals. When he meets a strange old man at a bar, his life is changed. He becomes intertwined in exclusive, once a month party, that hides more than you think…
How far would you destroy your life to find true freedom.
‘Freedom’
Ralphs….100 members, no names, no personal questions. Simple rules…follow or else. “This isn’t a club. It’s a contract.”
Allow Alex Mura to take you on a dark and twisted journey through the secretive walls. Scary, violent, smutty. Captivating.
Welcome to Ralphs…where “even the grotesque becomes backround noise”
In my opinion, this was a brillant work of fantasty, thrill, violence/murder, smut….and a book that really makes you wonder…..could there really be a place like that out there?
K.H :)
Some call its paradise…some call it a culty “social club”, fueled by infedelity, anonymity, free flowing booze and party drugs…..but everybody calls it ‘Ralphs’.
Andy, a burnt out teacher suspects his wife of cheating with her client, Tom, his life spirals. When he meets a strange old man at a bar, his life is changed. He becomes intertwined in exclusive, once a month party, that hides more than you think…
How far would you destroy your life to find true freedom.
‘Freedom’
Ralphs….100 members, no names, no personal questions. Simple rules…follow or else. “This isn’t a club. It’s a contract.”
Allow Alex Mura to take you on a dark and twisted journey through the secretive walls. Scary, violent, smutty. Captivating.
Welcome to Ralphs…where “even the grotesque becomes backround noise”
In my opinion, this was a brillant work of fantasty, thrill, violence/murder, smut….and a book that really makes you wonder…..could there really be a place like that out there?
K.H :)
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 24, 2025
For me this was an odd one we have the main character whose a teacher , he used to be very passionate about his carer, but things in his life started to alter, his marriage became stale and mundane, he suspected her of having an affair but never raised the subject either her.
He meets a guy in a bar and learns about this “ club” invitation only club, no one knows each other, the theme of the party each month the clients are dressed and gowned and masked accordingly.
Then the “ excitement “ for him begins, but for me was more like a house of debauchery excessive sex, drugs etc. then I was lost by it all until toward the end when the turning point was unexpected that is what for me was its saving grace.
I must say the flow of the writing the character was well divined, maybe for me it just wasn’t what I was expecting.
Would I still read a further book by him? Yes. My daughter read his other book “ the basement “ more of an horror. It doesn’t mean I didn’t like it, more that I think he could have rounded more on the marriage, etc, most of it was around the “ lub” more story content is what I’d personally had liked to draw me in more
He meets a guy in a bar and learns about this “ club” invitation only club, no one knows each other, the theme of the party each month the clients are dressed and gowned and masked accordingly.
Then the “ excitement “ for him begins, but for me was more like a house of debauchery excessive sex, drugs etc. then I was lost by it all until toward the end when the turning point was unexpected that is what for me was its saving grace.
I must say the flow of the writing the character was well divined, maybe for me it just wasn’t what I was expecting.
Would I still read a further book by him? Yes. My daughter read his other book “ the basement “ more of an horror. It doesn’t mean I didn’t like it, more that I think he could have rounded more on the marriage, etc, most of it was around the “ lub” more story content is what I’d personally had liked to draw me in more
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