This is another one of my rant reviews, but there were a few things I liked about it.
Let’s start with my rant though.
Most of this book was so painful. Both the main character and the writing are extremely juvenile.
The main character is one of those super annoying FMCs where she’s like, “Oh no, the sexiest, most capable navy seal has been assigned to be my bodyguard and protect me from being human trafficked. Poor me. I hate him. I can protect myself from terrorists.”
Bitch, no you cannot. Literally no one can protect themselves from an entire terrorist organization wanting to traffic and/or kill them. Shut up.
And she continued to preach about how she could “protect herself” and she was “safe” even after she was being stalked, repeatedly had her car and home broken into, been shot at, was harassed and groped in a bar, was almost bombed, among other things.
Let’s be real. Wouldn’t a woman in the navy have even just a shred of common sense?
Wouldn’t she be more aware of her surroundings?
Wouldn’t she have reported things?
Wouldn’t her self defense skills be a little better?
Wouldn’t she be intelligent?
I don’t understand why or how she was in the navy because she was so stupid, immature, and incapable that there’s literally no way a woman like this could be in the navy. She acted like a 13-year-old the entire book.
Also, after reading 4 Lexi Axelson books now, I have learned that she REALLY loves using the word “depraved.” This is the first time I’ve come across an author that aggressively overuses a word, and I hope I never encounter it again.
He was depraved.
He looks at me depraved.
He smirks depraved.
He fucks me depraved.
He’s depraved and possessive.
Depraved.
Depraved.
Depraved.
Depraved.
Depraved.
Depraved.
Kill me now.
For the love of god, find another word.
I’ve also noticed that she’s not very good at writing the evil characters. For example, Bailey, the boyfriend, creature’s step-mom, Stella, etc. are all douchebags, but every conversation with those characters when they “show their true colors” is so over the top and fan-ficy. Like a teenager writing a conflict scene. The conversations between the “bad” characters are so ridiculous and forced that it pulls me out the story every time.
Anyways, for what I liked.
Creature, the MMC intrigued me. He was literally the only thing that kept me reading.
He’s the only reason I give this 2 stars instead of 1 because I liked his character.
The spicy scenes are also really cool. For example, there’s a scene where he fucks her with a knife handle and one where he fucks her with a bullet, so that was fun as hell. The spicy scenes are always brutal and unhinged.
I also liked the stalker element, because stalker MMCs are fun to read about. And I felt like the plot slightly redeems itself and gets more interesting towards the end.
But idk, I’ll probably be stopping this series now. I can’t decide.
I like elements of Lexi’s books, but her writing style is often too cringy for me.
I seriously just can’t handle reading the word depraved anymore. I will never again hear that word without having PTSD and remembering Lexi Axelson.