3.25/5 stars
3/5 narration
The book:
I want to start off by saying that I had (probably unreasonably) high expectations for Gilded in Vengeance. I adored Lyssa Mia Smith's debut novel, Revelle, so I was ready to feel that magic again in this sophomore novel. It didn't quite elicit that same feeling, so I tried not to allow my expectations to affect my rating of this book too much.
Boiled down to the simplest plot, this is a revenge story. I love a good revenge story. The most important part of a revenge story is, of course, the success of the revenge. What is one reading revenge stories for if not for comeuppance? Unfortunately, this book lacked satisfaction not only mostly throughout in that regard, but most especially at the end.
The main villain of the story was...well, certainly a villain. I think villain's can be tough because you want to make them villainous and make sure your reader is rooting against them, which was certainly the case here. But, I also found the villain to be without a doubt one of the most obnoxious characters I've ever read about. The villain was insane, a bully, obnoxious, and a little too OP for my taste. It caused too much frustration and disappointment, and I think there needs to be a balance. You never want the hero to win every battle, but nor do you want the villain to either. There needs to be a push and pull of who wins so that it feels more realistic and keeps readers engaged. There was too much failure and disappointment for our heroes, and by the end I was just simply over it. I think I finally allowed myself to admit that I just wasn't loving the book when we got to the end and it was entirely unsatisfied. So much so that I had to pause the book multiple times while listening to the last 5% because I was just simply annoyed and ready for the book to be done.
All of that being said, I really enjoyed our main cast of characters. A little revenge squad is something I didn't realize I needed in my life. Each character was well-rounded and had their own personality and motivations. I really loved the friendship that our FMC was forging with the group and how she was healing from her past betrayal as the novel progressed. I also really enjoy the secret-magic-New-York-Late-1800's-high-society setting. Just like in Revelle, Lyssa Mia Smith did a great job of capturing that essence.
I didn't particularly care about the romance aspect, as I didn't feel any real pull between our two MC's. I oftentimes will get very frustrated if I am not rooting for our romantic MC pairing in a Romantasy, but in this case I was enjoying the overall plot, cast, and setting enough that I wasn't overly fussed about the romance.
Overall, I do really enjoy Lyssa Mia Smith's writing. I think she has fun ideas and settings that we just don't see commonly, especially in Fantasy/Fantasy Romance. I will absolutely pick up future books by her, and hopefully one of them will sweep me away like Revelle did. I think if you love a cast of found family, a revenge story, a late 1800's New York setting, a cool magic system, or a truly unbearable villain, then any of those are a great reason to pick this book up.
The Narration:
I listened to an Audio ARC of Gilded in Vengeance so I want to make sure to speak on the narrator, separate from the novel and its contents itself. I generally like this narrator, though the only work of theirs's I believe I have listened to before is A Sorcery of Thorns by Margaret Rogerson and its novella sequel. I think she did a great job in almost every regard, except for two things, one of which is hard to look past: the speaking voice for the FMC. The FMC needed to have a rasp but my goodness it was painful to hear throughout the book. It definitely took me out of the book because I was so annoyed with how it sounded. I know why it had to sound that way, but it was nearly unbearable. The other thing that rubbed me the wrong way, and this isn't the only narrator to do this, but sometimes, tonally, the words need to be more soft-spoken, but I found that I would have to temporarily turn my volume up to be able to hear what was actually being said, then quickly turn it back town when the narration went back to normal volume. I find that very frustrating. I should be able to hear the narrator clearly at all times at the same volume (when sitting in a quiet room).