3.5/5
I’m a huge fan of O’Malley’s Checquy files, especially the first book. Like other books in the series, Royal Gambit works as a standalone. As expected, it is imaginative and well-written, but it also gets in its own way.
Alix Mondegreen, a noblewoman with the power to shatter bones by touch, investigates a high-stakes murder mystery involving the royal family. As a member of the Checquy, a secret British agency that handles supernatural threats, she is assigned to protect Princess Louise, the new heir to the throne, after her brother dies under bizarre circumstances.
I liked Alix - she’s ambitious, competent, and able to deal with personal stakes. O’Malley’s world is strange, and paranormal weirdness is sometimes less intimidating than government bureaucracy. It’s a fun mix. People turn into dinosaurs, mysterious cubes appear in brains, and there’s always a new supernatural angle to investigate. When the book moves, it really moves. Sadly, it doesn’t move enough for large parts.
The pacing is slow. The book spends too much time on side details, royal protocols, and long explanations of how the Checquy operates. O’Malley clearly enjoys building his world, but the result is a story that often stalls. The main plot (a royal assassination with supernatural roots) loses tension under the weight of all the digressions. And that’s a shame because this story is good.
The cast is also too big for the story it’s telling (subjective). New characters keep showing up, each with a quirky name or power, but few leave a strong impression. Sometimes, it feels overstuffed, like the book is trying to do too much at once.
Still, when Royal Gambit works, it works. The dry humor lands. The world is fascinating. And Alix’s journey is worth following, especially given an excellent finale.
probablyThis is a solid entry in the Checquy series with strong writing and an intriguing premise, but it’s dragged down by certain self-indulgence. I wish it had better focus and momentum.
Audiobook narration: Moira Quirk is a treasure. I said it in the past and will repeat every time I listen to the story narrated by her.