It took just shy of three months for me to drag myself through this book😭
Kane, a gang member, recruits Zaria, a black-market dealer, to steal a necklace at The Great Exhibition, one of the most celebrated events in London. They both have secret agendas, which become harder to hide as they start to fall for each other.
There's nothing about this book that would make it recommendable. Every trope, concept, and plot point it contains has been done extremely well in other YA books. It's just so poorly executed.
I have no choice but to mention Six of Crows to make a comparison. Kane Durante was Kaz Brekker, if you took away Brekker’s emotional trauma, swapped it with some father-figure issues, and doubled the edge-lord act. Kane sure isn’t a saint, but he’s not the evil monster Zaria tirelessly accuses him of being, either. He goes out of his way for the most part to make sure people don’t get hurt. A line in the advance copy (subject to change in the final print): “...his past so slick with blood he wore it like a victory shroud.” I had to take a second and laugh. It’s just so edgy for a character that feels lukewarm, morally gray. It’s a shame, because Kane showed flickers of emotional depth when he interacted with the Kingpin, his boss, and an abusive father figure. If that had been explored more, he had the potential to be more than a shallow, smirking con-man.
Zaria could have been interesting if she had been given any depth. She is “tell-not-show” done spectacularly. She notices the most basic things, registers the most base-level shift in environments, and hardened criminals will start singing her praises. “Wow, you’re so perceptive, clever, and sharp.” From the beginning, the plot begs to differ. After Kane gets her agreement to help steal the jewels, there’s a scene where she wonders what he wants with the necklace. She’s rightfully confused, since he’s promised in exchange for one necklace, he will steal the rest of the jewels at the display and give them to her. Why would he do that, when all the other jewels would outweigh the worth of one necklace? But she dismisses this thought and decides to take Kane at his word, despite knowing only his criminal past. She doesn’t demand answers or even collateral from Kane. It’s so maddening. So many times, I was begging her to think critically about the dangerous situations she’s in, but she never does. There’s no way she’s survived a criminal underworld for even a day when she doesn’t follow through on the most simple survival instincts, or question anyone’s motives thoroughly.
If the main characters aren’t fleshed out, their romance won’t be either. There are lots of moments of forced tension, when they are arguing in each other’s faces or required to be in close proximity, and then they notice each other’s lips, or hair, and wonder why they feel like they are in love. I wish it had been purely a physical attraction between them. They know each other for all of a week in the book, and everything they share is superficial bits to force trust. The idea that they could feel anything beyond a shallow like/lust is unbelievable.
As for the heist, is it really worth mentioning? All of the vital intel they need to break into the place (the patrols, the necklace’s worth, the lock that protects the necklace) is dropped in their laps. It’s lazy to have a random side character that never appears again overhear Kane talking about the lock, and for the character to just happen to have a niche interest in locks and explain in excruciating detail the type of lock, how to open it, etc. It’s even lazier to have almost all crucial intel relayed this way. All that lack of work, it’s no wonder the heist was only a chapter or two long.
I will not be continuing this series; I have no interest. It’s a shame, I wanted to like this one, since I’m always down for a good heist. The only audience that comes to mind are readers who are newbies to YA books; any reader who already occupies YA space would find this disappointing.
Thank you, NetGalley and Little Brown Books, for the advance copy. All thoughts and opinions expressed are my own.