4 Stars for Enjoyment. 3 Stars for Quality
How can this simultaneously be an incredible story and a crappy book? I'll tell you.
First, this is a story about Ryker (MMC) and Cori (FMC). Ryker is a 500-year-old immortal gargoyle wolf shifter. Weird, right? Until they are mated, the shifters turn to stone during the day. His sister and her family were murdered centuries (?) ago, and he's on a quest for revenge!!! Ryker has figured out the perfect way to get his revenge. He is going to kidnap Cori, who is the daughter of his enemy, and use her as bait! Unfortunately, Cori turns out to be his mate. Which will Ryker choose, revenge or his fated mate?
For one thing, I really liked the characters in this story! Well, I really like Cori anyways. Ryker had his good moments, but then he would quickly ruin them by turning into an asshole.
There is no world building here, atleast there is no world building that matters. The author spends all this time explaining Avalon and the history of Arthur and Excalibur, but none of that makes a difference in this book. We never see Avalon. We never encounter anything from Avolon that would be relevant to this story. It's like a weird aspect thrown into the book randomly to make it seem more interesting.
Continuity issues I think the author got confused at points and forgot what she was writing. This left us with pieces and parts that didn't make sense or fit. Ryker is 500 years old. His sister's family was murdered. He repeatedly states that he's been seeking vengeance for the past 500 years. Except when he has a flashback of their deaths, he notices baking sheets, crayons, paper, oven mitts, chocolate chip cookies, etc. Modern stuff. Crayons weren't invented until the 1900s (and weren't called crayons). Chocolate chip cookies weren't invented until the late 1930s. None of this fits the narrative that the author is trying to sell us. Finally, Ryker says it happened 100 years ago. So, was it 500 years ago, 100 years ago, or in modern days?
I liked the ideas behind this story. I enjoyed reading it, too. However, upon closer inspection, you notice the book needs more work. The plot required the book to be more fleshed out and longer, at the very least—the same with relationship development. I need more of the story to feel connected to these people. More relationship building. More everything. The book was too short for what it wanted to accomplish.
🔥 Medium Burn
🌶 Medium spice
🔖 Tropes: kidnapping, fated mates, revenge, gargoyle shifters, King Arthur + Avalon + Excalibur, betrayal
🫦 Kinks: raw sex, scratching, biting
P.S. It was really weird when the author kept referring to the clit as a "wet knot." The mental pictures from that phrase were alarming.