It’s with tears in my eyes that I leave this review, because I ADORED these authors’ first duology so much, it became one of my core readings that I always recommend both in private and at work.
This book though… it just didn’t make the cut. And at first I thought because of it being romance-focused, but the more I read, the more I tried to like it, the less I did. And I ended up disappointed at everybody, both the authors and myself.
Let us start with the awful spoiler that is the blurb. I am not of the industry, but my experience tells me that the blurb should summarize a part of the novel in order to get the reader’s interest. But this… “Until they discover the unthinkable truth. The Chosen Two aren’t fated allies, but eternal rivals, and the only way to save their home is for one of them to slay the other.”
This basically spoils the last third of the story. And there I was, waiting for something else to happen… except it doesn’t. The authors spoiled the book for me before I could even read it, and didn’t even bother to leave a small surprise. I am so pissed.
The story begins right in the middle of the action, and there is little time to get acquainted with the world, the characters and the magical system. I remember distinctly the authors’ first book, All of Us Villains, being exactly the opposite: very slow beginning, lots of telling, lots of details. The first time I read it I thought I hated the beginning, but now I’m taking everything back. I want the gradual, slow welcome, I want to have time to look around and see the world for myself, and not just delivered at my plate. I might be getting old, but I really don’t understand the need to write “snappy” and quick-paced stories just because we are in the time of social media when everything has to be quick to keep someone entertained. I’d rather see books that diverge from this trend, instead.
The result is a world with much potential (magical beings living alongside “normal” humans, modern technology woven together with magic, etc.), but that remains superficial. I came to know later that there is a sequel on the way, but still no excuse not to dig a bit deeper in to worldbuilding.
The two main protagonists unfortunately also come out as superficial and poorly developed, because of this “snappiness” of the plot. Domenic should have an infamous reputation, but it feels as though only in his head, because it doesn’t reflect on how people treat him. The only moment I connected with him was when he refused to be a hero, but that struggle also resolved itself very quickly, and there was nothing left to feel for. Ellery still is the paper doll that everybody cuts her out to be, tries to be deeper but comes out just as the Mary Sue/chosen one/tragic girl of any other YA fantasy/dystopian.
I hate insta-romances, and this is no exception. The chemistry between Dom and Ellery is forced from the beginning, very rom-com like (which is ironic, giving the circumstances of their first meet cute), very puppy-love, which of course crumbles as soon as someone says something negative or dubious. I know they are supposed to be teenagers or barely legal adults, but I am so tired of the “we break up because you gave me a weird look”- kind of thing, and the lack of communication. I should stop reading such books.
And I feel very dumb, but I just don’t get the whole “forbidden love” thing. Why forbidden? Who said that? Why should the public frown upon it? The whole public campaign reminded me very much of the Hunger Games, and maybe that’s what makes me biased, because if we follow Collins’ logic, shouldn’t the two Chosen Ones being together make them more likable, just like it did with Katniss and Peeta? And why do they have to be likeable in the first place? It’s not like the public has a choice in the matter. It’s either them or they are doomed. The stakes are very low, the government is not that weak to need legitimization and the favor of the people, and we really don’t see the effects of these campaigns on people, so why bother?
I would have enjoyed much better if it became sort of a self-inflicted or self-fulfilling prophecy, like Dom and Ellery becoming “enemies” because of their stupid decisions. THEN their struggles would have made sense. But in the end it’s all already written, so all the struggle and angst was worthless.
Last but not least, I felt that the story was very unbalanced when it comes to violence and high stakes. The combat scenes all throughout the book last a couple of pages and they are easily managed, and then there is the LITERAL APOCALYPSE in the last 5 pages. It serves the crescendo of the plot, but I would have preferred more suspense from the beginning.
I shall give credit where credit is due. This duo has a FORMIDABLE writing, so elegant, so seamless, so tragic and devastating. You could never tell that two people have written one book. And, they knew how to get to my simpy heart with a couple of well-placed blows in the romance scenes. These are the only reasons why I read until the end, but unfortunately, I won’t be picking up book 2.