This book is a mixed bag in an entertaining way. The pacing is uneven, but the story delivers sharp moments, clever observations, and several lines that genuinely land. Every character is deeply flawed, which makes them feel convincingly human, even if it keeps you at arm’s length as more of an observer than an emotional investor. The final six chapters shift into high gear, and so will your blood pressure.
On the lukewarm side, Eloide’s decision to quit a thriving marketing career on impulse to become a writer needed more exploration. The narrative never mentions self-publishing as an option, which felt like an odd omission given her ultimate goal of authorship.
A noticeable red flag appears when a character who lost her boyfriend in a car accident decides to get behind the wheel and speed for fun. The absence of self-awareness in moments like this made me raise an eyebrow more than once.
As for the drawbacks, the story could have benefited from tighter editing. Some sections drag, there are a few plot holes that never receive closure, and several reveals are predictable long before the characters catch up. It can take some patience to stick with the slower moments.
I still recommend this book for readers who enjoy flawed characters, emotional chaos, and a payoff that rewards persistence.