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Club Alpha #5
The Debt 5
--By New York Times and USA Today bestselling author Kelly Favor—
The dark and Sexy new series The Debt continues with book five...
One innocent mistake…
A night out at an exclusive party at a millionaire’s mansion, and now twenty-two-year-old Raven Hartley is in big trouble.
Because of him…
Gorgeous pop idol Jake Novak is smoking hot and blazingly confident. For him to take an interest in someone like Raven is beyond unthinkable.
And now she has a problem…
Before the party, Raven Hartley was a waitress, struggling to make ends meet, still running away from the darkness of her past and the betrayal that haunts her.
After the party, she’s presented with a choice…
Become Jake Novak’s personal escort or have her life destroyed.
The Debt 5 is the fifth book in the sexy and smoldering new Club Alpha series, by the bestselling author of For His Pleasure, Fight For Her and Naked. For fans of H.M. Ward and J.S. Cooper.
The dark and Sexy new series The Debt continues with book five...
One innocent mistake…
A night out at an exclusive party at a millionaire’s mansion, and now twenty-two-year-old Raven Hartley is in big trouble.
Because of him…
Gorgeous pop idol Jake Novak is smoking hot and blazingly confident. For him to take an interest in someone like Raven is beyond unthinkable.
And now she has a problem…
Before the party, Raven Hartley was a waitress, struggling to make ends meet, still running away from the darkness of her past and the betrayal that haunts her.
After the party, she’s presented with a choice…
Become Jake Novak’s personal escort or have her life destroyed.
The Debt 5 is the fifth book in the sexy and smoldering new Club Alpha series, by the bestselling author of For His Pleasure, Fight For Her and Naked. For fans of H.M. Ward and J.S. Cooper.
83 pages, Kindle Edition
First published July 30, 2014
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About the author
Kelly Favor
147 books1,371 followersKelly Favor is a New York Times and USA Today bestselling author. Connect with her on Twitter @KellyFavorBooks and on Facebook at https://www.facebook.com/kelly.favor.31.
The "For His Pleasure" series has been #1 at Barnes and Noble and the top 100 of Amazon.com.
Currently, Kelly is hard at work juggling multiple books and thanking the universe for the patience of her wonderful readers.
The "For His Pleasure" series has been #1 at Barnes and Noble and the top 100 of Amazon.com.
Currently, Kelly is hard at work juggling multiple books and thanking the universe for the patience of her wonderful readers.
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May 23, 2016
Here we go again. Jake and Raven break up...but not for long. After putting her up in a ritzy apartment so that he could be rid of her without the guilt, Jake spends his time sulking and regretting his decision. Not to worry though, Club Alpha is now scheming to get the two together again. Apparently, they change their minds about what they want as often as Jake and Raven do.
At this point, I'm just starting to get exhausted with Jake and Raven's antics. I want to shake them and scream in their face "Grow up!". On and off. On and off. It's tedious.
Normally, I love some angst and conflict. However, these two are driving me crazy. The conflicts are highly predictable and underwhelming.
The writing is okay, but be prepared for some editing oversights. The story seems choppy at times. Most importantly, the story leaves me feeling disappointed. I keep waiting for something great to happen, but what we get is mediocre at best.
I'm going to read the next serial in the series, but if it doesn't pick up I'm taking a break from this one. Even I can't handle this much on-again, off-again. Somebody needs to put these two out of misery!
At this point, I'm just starting to get exhausted with Jake and Raven's antics. I want to shake them and scream in their face "Grow up!". On and off. On and off. It's tedious.
Normally, I love some angst and conflict. However, these two are driving me crazy. The conflicts are highly predictable and underwhelming.
The writing is okay, but be prepared for some editing oversights. The story seems choppy at times. Most importantly, the story leaves me feeling disappointed. I keep waiting for something great to happen, but what we get is mediocre at best.
I'm going to read the next serial in the series, but if it doesn't pick up I'm taking a break from this one. Even I can't handle this much on-again, off-again. Somebody needs to put these two out of misery!
September 7, 2014
Spies? Secret service agents?
Seriously?!
and there's more... what's next? An alien abduction?
I'm not so thrilled about the next sequel, but since I've read them all so far, I'll give it a chance :D
Seriously?!
and there's more... what's next? An alien abduction?
I'm not so thrilled about the next sequel, but since I've read them all so far, I'll give it a chance :D
February 17, 2016
I'd like to say that this series is very sexy and sexual so far without any actual sex. Raven is a 21yo virgin and I appreciate the fact that the author has kept her this way thus far. As typical with other virginal heroines, I expected this status to change within the first two books. But it hasn't been rushed, allowing me to enjoy the slow build of chemistry between these characters. So thanks for that!
In this chapter, it seems Club Alpha still won't quit tormenting poor Raven. Though she and Jake went their separate ways in the last one, the syndicate wants her to lure him back through subterfuge. They want her to get confidential military data from Jake or bear the consequences. These two can't catch a break. Hopefully she comes clean to him in the next book and trusts him to help her.
In this chapter, it seems Club Alpha still won't quit tormenting poor Raven. Though she and Jake went their separate ways in the last one, the syndicate wants her to lure him back through subterfuge. They want her to get confidential military data from Jake or bear the consequences. These two can't catch a break. Hopefully she comes clean to him in the next book and trusts him to help her.
August 1, 2014
Falling in love or lust
Falling in love or lust
the Dept 5 is an excellent story. you have Alpha's, you have blackmail, espionage, hot SEX and love or is it lust? you have a hot rock star whose falling fast for a girl and a plain ordinary girl who says she loves this sexy alpha, but can't seem to ever give him what he needs... THE TRUTH!!! so is it really love or is she risking everything for lust???
Falling in love or lust
the Dept 5 is an excellent story. you have Alpha's, you have blackmail, espionage, hot SEX and love or is it lust? you have a hot rock star whose falling fast for a girl and a plain ordinary girl who says she loves this sexy alpha, but can't seem to ever give him what he needs... THE TRUTH!!! so is it really love or is she risking everything for lust???
July 5, 2017
Raven is really annoying me, why does she keep lying to him? Why won't she tell him what's going on, the more she holds back the more she causes danger to herself and everyone around her. Now because she hasn't trusted him her parents house has been burned down!
October 15, 2020
Omg!
Wow that book was quite intense to say the least. Great read but definitely kept me guessing but also wanting more.
Wow that book was quite intense to say the least. Great read but definitely kept me guessing but also wanting more.
June 11, 2022
This series just keeps getting better and better. The storyline is so good little mystery and suspense and lot of hot and steamy love story.💜💙💜💙💜💙💜💙💜💙💜💙💜💙
August 23, 2014
Raven is still challenging me as to whether I want to like her or not. She just seems like a very mixed up person that will allow Jake to do what he likes to her and treat her which ever way that suits but then there's Jake and he provokes the same feelings in me as well. He treats Raven terrible but then won't let another man disrespect her or say awful things about her and is willing to just throw away another concert for her benefit so that he can be with her.
Now there is the added saga of what The Alpha Club is really all about.....very intriguing!!!
Now there is the added saga of what The Alpha Club is really all about.....very intriguing!!!
July 21, 2016
Off again, on again. Off for good. Just kidding!
Frustration is definitely sitting at the top of my list of adjectives to describe my feelings. I mean, the whole Club Alpha thing, so strange. C'mon! Leave him alone, oh, you broke up? UGH!
Still, why can't I stop reading this train wreck of a story? I can't even hate it that much and I can't figure out why not.
So, we're thrown back into Jake and Raven.
Frustration is definitely sitting at the top of my list of adjectives to describe my feelings. I mean, the whole Club Alpha thing, so strange. C'mon! Leave him alone, oh, you broke up? UGH!
Still, why can't I stop reading this train wreck of a story? I can't even hate it that much and I can't figure out why not.
So, we're thrown back into Jake and Raven.
August 1, 2014
Seriously?
Seriously?
The first few CA's were good but what the hell is happening to this story? Spies? Come on now. I really hope the author gets the story back on track. It's getting boring.
Seriously?
The first few CA's were good but what the hell is happening to this story? Spies? Come on now. I really hope the author gets the story back on track. It's getting boring.
June 24, 2015
I don't like leaving a negative comment but this story is dragging out and on, truly hope she gets it back on track...
August 21, 2014
I keep reading the series cause I already started and I'm intrigued to find out how it ends, but Lord All Mighty can it get more complicated, now spies... really!?!?!?!
October 5, 2014
I give this series 3.5 because imo it should be 2 books not 6. Still trying to figure out Jake. Raven needs to think about other people besides herself but together they are not bad.
October 10, 2014
loved it
February 11, 2015
It's getting good!!
July 13, 2015
Like I've said, I really like the storyline. The writing is good. But personally, I would like to slap the two main characters.
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