The Re-Write Book Review
This book disappointed me which is why I'm giving it 2 stars. And look I'm a pretty generous person I usually rate most books as 3 stars if they did their job well enough but this one was such a let down in so many ways that I had to rate it lower. The premise sounded so amazing. An aspiring author has to ghost write the memoir of her ex who dumped her to be on a Love Island inspired dating reality show-- sign me up! But the execution was horrid and boring. My main issue was the characters none of them were who I expected them to be, especially Wale, and I found it insufferable to be instead Temi's head. But the biggest crime of this book is just that it was boring. It was so boring in fact that I started to wonder if all contemporary romances are like that and made me fear for writing my own. Overall, I found this book not worth my time and I wouldn't recommend it but if you like cutesy second chance romances with Black British-Nigerian leads then this is for you!
I’m gonna break down each part of the book and give it in its own rating but this is SPOILER FREE
✍🏾PROSE: 2/5✍🏾
The writing of this book sucked. Like all the descriptions were cliches and there was no ingenuity in the use of language. It just felt like the most basic words you write when you just want to tell a story without thinking of how to be creative or even funny! Like even for a contemporary romance the prose could’ve been so much better and it’s ironic because the main character is a writer!!! Rn my go to example of the opposite is Talia Hibbert for sure.
✍🏾PLOT: 2/5✍🏾
The first half of the book dragged for me but then the ending felt idk...I'm not sure if I would say rushed but it definitely was more interesting even if the romance to me felt like a switch had flipped between night and day but I'll get to that later. The most interesting subplot for me was the drama between Temi, her writing, her potential book deals, and her agent. Tbh it did make me fearful of getting to the point of getting an agent and submitting a manuscript only for it to get rejected by publishers like new fear unlocked truly but I'm manifesting better for myself lol. Anyways those were the best hijinks but this book truly dragged. Like there was no real pull for me to finish this book other than the fact that I wanted to finish this book but I wasn't heavily invested in this story in the way that it made it a pageturner. Also the way that this novel ended, like the ending Temi got was so undeserved and pissed me off majorly. It was the only third act breakup I've read in a romance that I truly didn't understand how they'd resolve it and they resolved it terribly.
✍🏾WORLD-BUILDING: 2.5/5✍🏾
I know it’s odd to have a worldbuilding section for a contemporary romance book but the book creates its own version of Love Island that's called The Villa. Due to my Love Island USA obsession that occured last summer, I really wish the dating show was explored further. We never get a chance to truly see Wale talk about his experience going on the show, his interaction with other cast members or if he even made any friends while on the show. Idk this could've been explored so much further and although I get that this is ultimately a love story between Wale and Temi, the dating show aspect is a big part of why I wanted to read the book!
✍🏾CHARACTERS: 1/5✍🏾
This was the worst part of the book for me. I hated the two leads and my favorite characters were the minor ones, like Aunt Shirley and Uncle Les, the British-Jamaican couple who helped with the memoir. Let me breakdown each one
✍🏾TEMI: Being inside this chick's head was so annoying. From the beginning I didn't like her. She was too insecure and whiny and just generally seemed pathetic. Also she seemed so childish and immature. She felt like someone who has never experienced any real hardship in life and so she views and navigates life in this naive way. Some her reactions to Wale's trauma and stuff felt so childish to me idk how to articulate it. As many other reviewers have mentioned before she had an extensive lying problem which did make for an interesting plot but also just made her a bad person who didn't deserve the happy ending she got. She betrayed Wale in a major way and suffers no consequences and doesn't even do a properly apology or show how she's changed. I hate characters that are overly insecure and are "oh woe is me, my life sucks and everything bad always happens to me and I'm never at fault for anything" like how annoying is that to read. Like your character can be insecure, we all are, but I don't want that to their only personality trait. I want them to have a backbone and be able to stand ten toes down for something. And Temi was none of that.
✍🏾WALE: His personality disappointed me the most. Based on the premise, I thought that he would be a bit of playboy, charming, devilish, someone who likes to flirt, like the typical bad boy of Love Island. Also I thought that he would be someone that's maybe a bit vapid and vain and interesting gaining fame and wealth which are also the kind of people who go on Love Island. And I thought that despite all of that he maybe had a sensitive vulnerable side to him underneath. But that, my friends, was not the case smh. Wale is just a sad lover boy, who yeah maybe played around with women on the show, but that's because he has the biggest heart. He's just so so sensitive and everything hurts his feelings but he must be tough cause he's a man,etc. Basically I don't feel like the book goes into his flaws enough and honestly just spends the whole time reinforcing the idea that he's the gentle, kind man who never hurt anyone and idk based on his previous actions that lead to the premise of the book, it all feels so unearned. Like I wanted Wale to be more charismatic and lively and fun than he was. Also we never get a real insight into why Wale wanted to go on The Villa in the first place and I wish his reason was more self serving because that's realistic and an interesting angle. I hate how all of his reasons for doing anything is either because he's so in love with Temi, or he's afraid of getting hurt, or he wants to help people and I don't feel like any of these motivations add any character depth.
✍🏾ROMANCE: 1/5✍🏾
Although Wale betrayed Temi first, Temi was the true villian of this love story. I'm not gonna go into details but she did him so dirty and he just forgives her for something that I feel is irrepariable personally. And as I said before Temi doesn't have to do much to earn his forgiveness and also there is no real explanation for why Wale decided to forgive other than he's in love with her. Also I don't know why he's in love with Temi -- she has very few good qualities and she lies a lot. Secondly, these two didn't have the best relationship the first go around. They only dated for like six months, less than a year, which to me doesn't seem like a super serious relationship. Wale was extremely emotionally unavailable, was never upfront about his past, didn't want her to meet his parents, never said he was in love with her, etc and still Temi says that she was in love with him the entire time despite their relationship being more shallow than a baby's bath water. Also to make matters worse, after their breakup and his time on the show, he cites another ex as being more impactful to his life and confesses that he was deeply in love this ex and never mentions Temi which I find odd because second chance romances are supposed to be all about the one who got away!!! None of this worked for me at all. I feel like the beginning of the novel, especially when Wale and Temi reconnect for the first time, lacked a fundamental tension that all second chance romances need. Since Temi and Wale had no depth or true intimacy in their initial relationship there was major lack of yearning or what could've been between themor a sense of "you were the person I was closest to in my life and now you're gone and I'm devasted" all of which is what makes a second chance romance great, unique, and special. Another reviewer said that they should've just started off as strangers instead of exs because of how little they knew about each other and I agree. Of course this would be a completely different book but it's either that or play up the intimacy between the two in their initial relationship. Finally, the romance felt rushed to me. Or more like it went from night to day after the first half of the book. At first Temi was like "I don't forgive him. We're never talking about this ever again" to "Omg I'm definitely in love with him and he is too!" and I don't feel like we ever got an honest conversation about the grief Temi felt when Wale abandoned her to go on the show. They never address that. I also feel like there needed to be more of an emotional gradient of going from Contempt -> Curiosity --> Honesty --> Vulnerability --> Understanding --> Acceptance --> Love. Rather just Contempt --> Curiosity --> Love. Which what I feel like how it went down for me. Anyways I'm probably gonna use this framework to map out the emotional beats in my own book lol.
✍🏾FINAL THOUGHTS✍🏾
Sorry for this long ass review. I had a lot to say. Let me know if you've ever read the book and your thoughts on it. I will be checking out the debut novel of this author which is Yinka, Where is Your Husband? But for now I do not recommend this book and it's definitely sitting at 2 stars for me.
What did y’all think?