What a disappointment this was, considering how much I liked book one of this series. In fact, this was so mediocre I now question my judgment of the first book.
Jonathan is the wealthy half-brother of book one’s heroine, Maggie. When Ada Rose, the daughter of his estranged mother’s husband, shows up at his office building asking to see him, he leaves her waiting for an hour before having the receptionist tell her he’s not in. Then the receptionist informs Ada he’ll never be in. Undeterred, she climbs five flights of stairs to inform him that their parents have died in a boating accident in Thailand.
Jonathan is an abusive arsehole in the beginning for a very thin reason. Ada is a hard-luck case. The story strains to be serious and significant, and is instead slow and stumbling and frequently feels very, very phony. The 41-year-old MMC and the 37-year-old FMC, while living adult lives, say and do things that might make sense if they were twenty years younger but feel very immature at their ages.
A few examples:
Jonathan and Ada share a passionate kiss, but Ada backs away, saying they should remain only friends because a relationship would complicate their informal housing arrangements and because they’re grieving and clinging to each other. This, even after Jonathan offers to give her a written lease. And I’m supposed to believe two people their ages can’t separate passion from grief?
So…Romance Reasons..
Jonathan lavishes beautiful, thoughtful birthday gifts on Ada, returns from a business trip and meets an exhausted Ada at the door of her car, carries her in his arms to her apartment, massages her painful leg, runs her a bath, cooks her dinner, then tells Ada he’s having trouble adhering to their “just friends” agreement.
Her eyelashes fluttered in surprise. “Oh?”
I mean, c’mon. Surprise? Are you really that stupid, Ada, or only written that way?
Ada finally moves past “just friending” with Jonathan, throwing caution—and grief—to the wind (because housing concerns and grief were Romance Reasons to start with) and they become intimate. Ada asks:
“Can we keep things to ourselves for a couple weeks?”
Jonathan frowned. “Why?”
“I just feel like telling people about a new relationship can bring unnecessary attention when we’re still trying to find our footing. Everyone has an opinion, and sometimes those opinions can get into our heads. I think if we just keep it between us until we’ve learned how to navigate being together, it will be better.”
How old are they again? Why would independent, self-supporting, almost-middle-aged adults need to keep their relationship secret? Who are these people with opinions, and why should their opinion matter? “Navigate being together?” Huh? Why would GPS be necessary for two people to be together? If issues need discussing and deciding upon, couldn’t they just, I dunno, discuss and decide?
Don’t even get me started on how Jonathan disappeared on Ada without a word because he needed alone time to deal with his feelings about his mother’s death. The author forced him to do that, because a man in love with a woman would call her and say, “I need some alone time to deal with my feelings about my mother’s death.” IF a grown man would even need to do something that dramatic, which most wouldn’t.
So this is another one of those novels where people act their lives instead of live their lives, a made-for-tv romance. I skimmed, I was bored, I was disappointed.