“I feel like you’re just here for the zipline.” - Me to whomever cared more about the sex scenes than anything else.
If you’re just looking at the first half of this book, you’d think it was meant to be erotica, and it somehow slipped through the cracks at a non-romance-focused publisher. However, once you finally get past the midpoint, the fantasy comes into play.
However, that means this book was a bit of a letdown for me. While I knew this was a romantasy going in, I was still expecting the “fantasy” part of that phrase. Instead, I was given a whopping seven sex scenes, all within the first half of the book, without much care for the inevitable war we kept getting told about.
In my opinion, these characters were simply too damn horny. All they thought about each other was how horny the other person made them by just standing there breathing. I didn’t see a hint of actual chemistry between them. I just kept getting told about how they didn’t know why they were so attracted to a person they should hate. With a little more work, especially with the revelation in the latter half of the book, it would have been interesting to explore if Kadeesha and Malachi really did have feelings for each other or if there was some meddling higher being pushing them together because of the prophecy about Kadeesha.
Even with all the sex scenes and references to how horny the characters are, the pace of this book is incredibly slow. Every scene felt like it was taking twice as long as it should because the characters had to keep monologuing every chance they got, and they talked in circles. Though this book isn’t terribly long for a standalone fantasy, I feel like it could have been pared down due to how overwritten everything but the actual war seemed to be.
Now, I don’t want to discount the book and say the war didn’t happen. Things with Kadeesha and Malachi going against the High King pick up in the second half of the book when they finally stop having so much sex, but even still, it drags out with the actual war only happening in the last two chapters. When I reached the end, before reading the epilogue, I had a “was that it?” moment because it felt so abrupt. In a way, it was like the author had reached their word count and wasn’t allowed to write anymore, or else they would…idk…get docked points in their creative writing class for not following directions??
There was also an interesting bit of plot in the first half of the book where someone challenges Malachi for his throne. I thought this was a good inclusion and I thought it was purposefully done to show how Malachi as immature and blinded by his need for revenge compared to this rival who is purporting to actually care about the people of the court and demonstrating that in that text. While reading, I thought Malachi was going to realize he needed to change because of this reaction to his rival, or at the very least, I thought this character was going to be a genuine threat to Malachi’s rule. However, the character doesn’t actually matter much, and Malachi doesn’t learn anything from this experience. He only realizes the error of his overly bloodythirsty ways when Kadeesha goes, “Maybe we don’t kill everyone???”
I also want to mention that the author tried to make combating misogyny one of the themes of the book. Personally, I think they failed. Kadeesha comes from a court where, much like our world’s past and even present, women are treated as lesser than men, should be seen and not heard, and only exist as objects to walk around barefoot and pregnant. This is further exemplified by Kadeesha’s prophecy (and a huge point with the High King plotline) being about how she’s going to get pregnant and have a son. Sure, she’s allowed to play at being a general of an all-female group of people who ride what is most easily described as dragons, but it’s all lip service (to Kadeesha as well as the audience) since her being a general doesn’t actually matter. When she goes to Malachi’s kingdom, she learns that they’re feminists there and Malachi thinks it’s normal for women and men to be equal.
Wow. What an icon…
Kadeesha moans and groans about how unfair it is to be a woman in her misogynist kingdom, but the book doesn’t actually reckon with this in a way that shows that Kadeesha rises above it all and is determined to make a change (which you would think would be important since she’s the heir to her kingdom). In the end, Kadeesha only has what she does because Malachi let her have it/because of her connection to him. I understand talking about such themes isn’t necessarily the goal of a romantasy, or the place where it’s going to be given the space needed to unpack it, but it was so heavy-handed in this book that I was expecting something to come of it, even if it was just something silly like “and Kadeesha hired more women in male-dominated roles! Girl power!”
I think if you go into this book with the proper expectations, you’re likely to enjoy it more than I did. For me, this book failed in too many aspects to make it enjoyable and left me exhausted by the end.