2.5 stars - Spoilers
Not as good as the first book, it was mostly disappointing. The latter half of The Unbound was quite good, unfortunately the first half was a struggle to get through as nothing really happened except the main character whining non-stop about her life.
-What's what: Mackenzie is a Keeper, she finds Histories (escaped ghosts of sorts) and returns them to the Archive where they're kept.
In this one Mackenzie starts her new school. And then people go missing, she thinks it has to do with her as she was the last person to see them, naturally she investigates.
Also, Mackenzie deals with having non-stop nightmares about Owen (a History/sort of maniac love interest that betrayed her).
-The first half was slow paced and felt repetitive, a lot of it was just Mackenzie moaning and feeling sorry for herself. She acted like she was so speshul and unique in her suffering, and that no-one could possibly understand her, her 'woe is me' attitude was off putting. I didn't expect her to be chipper and upbeat after everything that happened to her but I expected some moments of lightness to break the monotony of her moaning. Pretty much all her thoughts were depressing, self-pitying, and dull… It made it difficult to connect to her.
-The second half was more interesting and action packed… I was glad to finally stop reading about Mackenzie's cheesy nightmares, her pointless blackouts, and her monologuing about how difficult her life was. She still whinged quite a bit but because there was other stuff going on it was easy to overlook her whining. I loved when Owen made an appearance and caused lots of chaos, the plot finally kicked in and Mackenzie took action and stopped being quite so insufferable.
-I rolled my eyes at finding out that the sweet Wesley from book 1 was actually a manslut and a super flirt. Yea, I didn't buy his connection or supposed love for Mackenzie when he was flirting around and seemed to have lots of past relationships. I was hoping that for once the hero would be a normal guy instead of some charming manslut who had girls falling all over him. Wesley stood out more in the first book, in this one he was just the typical, run of the mill, YA manslut hero.
-I didn't like Mackenzie's attitude towards her mother, there was a general tone of derision whenever it came to her mum.
That would have been fine if her mum was bad but she wasn't, she was loving and wanted the best for her. It pissed me off especially because it was clear that she worshipped her granddad and dad, no matter what they did. Her mum on the other hand she kept judging and looking down on.
-I found it unrealistic that Mackenzie barely slept for over three weeks because she was having nightmares… Even after one week of barely sleeping her body/brain would have shut down easily and let her have dreamless sleep for at least a few hours.
-Wesley kind of annoyed me, he said that Mackenzie had no interest in his life and that she never asked any questions about him, but then as soon as she did start asking him things he brushed her off and never shared anything with her. He was so pathetic the way he refused to share anything about his home life or past.
-Why did Sako dislike Mackenzie so much? I could understand her hating her at the end after she caused her so much trouble but before that Mackenzie had done nothing directly to her. I really didn't get why she had a problem with Mac when she didn't even know her.
-What was up with Safia? She had such an attitude problem. Did she like Wesley or something? I hope not, he already seemed to have every girl fawning over him, Safia fancying him would make him look like even more of a Gary Stu.
-I loved that there was no disappearing parent syndrome. Mackenzie's parents were very present in her life and they actually acted realistically.
-The ending was good with Mackenzie having the 'All' paper from the Archive ledger. No doubt she'll use that in the next book (if there is one).
All in all, I wasn't overly impressed - Mackenzie was hard to like and the plot was mostly boring until Owen showed up. Even though I enjoyed the ending it didn't make up for the rest of the book.