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I had a choice, and I chose wrong. I thought I lost everything. But when the smoke finally cleared, I discovered that I wasn’t alone. Father Sullivan was a force – a living and breathing force, a forbidden desire I couldn’t resist. I didn’t want to resist. But I wasn’t the only one who wanted him, and by all accounts neither of us should have him. I had decisions to make, secrets to uncover. Both would tear my heart, my life, and what was left of my family apart. I wasn’t going to take any chances this time around. If I’d learned one thing during my life, it’s that death is the only certainty. It’s a matter of when, not if. For every action, there is a reaction. For every choice, a consequence. If I hadn’t chosen to live again, I would have never known what life could be like … With the Father *Contemporary Adult Romance (17+)

257 pages, Kindle Edition

First published September 19, 2014

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Jenni Moen

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Jenni Moen lives in Oklahoma with her husband and three crazy, exuberant kids who have the potential to burn the house down at any moment.

When she’s not chauffeuring kids around town, performing her mom duties as a short order cook and maid, or vacuuming for her fastidious husband, she hammers away at her keyboard. Most of the time, she's up to no good, but every now and then a new book is born.

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632 reviews2,978 followers
September 21, 2014
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5 stars!!

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If there was ever a time I’m glad I didn’t DNF a book, it would be right now. I was 3 star cruising through a great part of the book and then the most crazy and wicked twist happened and now I see the entire story in a different light. One look at the cover, teasers, and blurb and my mind settled on a forbidden romance that had something to do with a priest and two sisters. In a way I was right, but in many other ways I was wrong. This book initially started out as a forbidden story, but evolved into something much grander than its original premise. I wasn’t looking for it, didn’t see it coming, and I’m not going to pinpoint exactly where in the plot that revelation came for me, but I will say that all the clues are there in the book, namely the dedication –

For anyone who’s ever second guessed a decision and wondered what if…

This book is all about the what if. About characters knowing their reality but still daring to wonder what would happen if their what if became true. Reading this book was literally like being in a dream, and like all dreams, we have to wake up at some point. That waking point was when my epiphany kicked in to what this book was really about. I think every reader needs to experience that euphoria, mindfuck, WTF moment, whatever you want to call it. So as much of a spoiler whore I am, I’m not about to ruin that experience for you.

I purposely didn’t mention the characters because it’s really not for me to say whose story this is really about, and I am SO very thankful the author didn’t name specifics in the blurb either. As readers, we are all going to have a different take on our reads and it will never be truer with this book, a story where multiple theories are plausible. Multiple what ifs.

Initially I intended to rate this book 4-4.5 stars because I spent most of the time wondering why I felt a puzzle piece was missing up until the big twist. However, I finished this super late last night and did nothing productive the next day. It was like I was disconnected from real life, constantly mulling over this story in my head. Very rarely do books (good or bad) make that kind of impact on me so to have my thoughts be consumed by this story long after the last page is flipped means a great deal to me. Even though I had minor issues here and there, the overall significance of this story made me bump up my rating.

Because of how ambitious and intricate this storyline is, I can only review the book in this vague way, sorry! It’s pure torture because my fingers are itching to spoil everything but my brain is saying to let everyone experience it on their own. Literally every word has a double meaning, and I think it’s the most wonderful feeling to be armed with the knowledge of what the book premise is truly about and then go back and find out where the author dropped hints in the story. I already know this is a book that will evoke different opinions from readers but I can guarantee that whether or not you end up enjoying the book, you’ll be thinking about it for days to come.

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2,614 reviews5,404 followers
September 22, 2014

3.75 Stars ?

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This is a hard story to review and it must be stressed that this isn't a smut story at all. Father Paul isn't anything like my Soren but is wonderful in his own right. The plot will grab you with crushing heartbreak while it has a bit of mystery to it as well. The characters were in fact all very likable and relatable.

The story definitely kept me guessing which made the majority of the story a good read. As for the ending... I'm reserving the right to change my rating once I look over the story again. I don't think I liked the ending as of now and sadly that means the story overall.

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345 reviews631 followers
August 14, 2016

**4.5 " HOLY FATHER" STARS **

A few years ago . . . okay many years ago, I watched the most Fascinating . . . Taboo . . . Devastatingly Beautiful miniseries of its time, The Thorn Birds and thanks to Father Ralph de Bricassart, I've been in pursuit of another enchanting priest.

So did I find him ?.. Somewhat. Father Paul Sullivan was charming, somewhat confusing and highly intriguing(I kept thinking, what's his deal ?) but his "taboo" appeal was absent .
Firstly, I'd like to state this book is NOTHING like The Thorn Birds, just in case you're wondering. With the Father is unlike anything I've ever read. I had a love/ what the heck is wrong with me relationship with this story. I literally stayed up all night reading because I had to know what in the almighty lord was going on.

This book toyed with my emotions and made me question my perception of others. It surely didn't help that I stopped myself from jumping ahead to read the ending. Dear God did it take ever ounce of willpower in me not to cheat...... Well, my sneaky ass kind of - sort of messaged a dear friend regarding my feelings in hopes that she'd spoil something major. She didn't , but My Buttercup did give me a glimmer of hope.

I wish I could explain how, who and why I felt the way I did, but I'd ruin your reading experience.

I will admit the glimmer pretty much evaporated, so I came REALLY close to quitting because . . . Gawd I'm stubborn. If you decide to read this story and feel yourself teetering towards doing the same, I ask that you PLEASE

and ask yourself , what if ?




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757 reviews3,656 followers
October 24, 2014
4 STARS out of 5
Genre: Romance

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This book did things to me and I took it personal. You know what. I see what you did there Jenni Moen annnnnd I just don’t know how I feel about it. I don’t even know how to review this book…or how to rate it.

How can a twist be so epically wrong? I’ll tell you how….
It alllll depends on the reader; how receptive they are to…changes. *smirks* So you see to some the major plot twist is epically wrong and to others it’s epically right. If anyone is stuck in between, I feel your pain because that is where I am. *sighs heavily*


With the Father is about decisions big ones-small ones, either way those choices will shape and/or change your life FOREVER.

I had a choice, and I chose wrong.

GAH, I don’t even know what to say. How do I NOT spoil this??? Seriously this book was flowing for me the author managed to pull me in. She provided a certain intimacy between her main characters that radiated off the pages and then….

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I had an extremely hard time moving on from one particular twist. Crazy thing is… I guessed every twist and turn EXCEPT this one. I’m actually angry about it. I won’t lie. I went through so much Grace, her character really called out to me.
In With the Father Grace experiences a heartbreaking tragedy. While trying to piece her life back together she starts to realize that not everything is as it seems with her life prior to the tragedy. Sounds like something you may have read before right? Well let me tell you that this is not the case.

I was a priest, not a saint.

Father Paul is lusted after by all of the women at the church. He is a true gentleman and upholds his vows. *raises eyebrows* As far as we know… Grace is his game changer; it is very apparent that he has feelings for her once we get his pov. Grace and Father Paul, become very close during this sensitive time in her life. As he helps to guide her through the multiple stages of grief a budding romance forms. It’s slow building, very sweet and intimate. These two just connect almost…and I really do mean almost like two missing pieces to a puzzle.

‘I fooled myself into believing that my interest in her wasn’t inappropriate and that I was content just to observe her, knowing it would never be anything more. After all, she was a married woman and my life had never been my own.’

Grace seems to be oblivious to Father Paul’s attraction towards her. Her sister however sees it clear as day. After alerting Grace to Father Paul’s crush her eyes is open to something that was never really hidden. He loves her.

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My Thoughts
What I expected this book to be was a forbidden romance but it turned into something else entirely. With the Father is NOT an easy read. Father Paul is somewhat of a mystery. Grace has no real background info on him and he is not as forthcoming on his own. He even manages to evade direct questions that are asked about his past. I found that interesting. I really wish that the author provided more than what was eventually given about his past. I wanted more. Aside from that the only other issue I had was that twister that hit me. The writing was good; it flowed easily, with slow story building. Plus, readers are eased in to the romance which I enjoyed.

My Rating and Why
All I kept saying to myself is don’t you dare rate this out of anger. That would be unfair. The way I went about rating this was to literally break everything down. So I rate the first 90% 4 STARS, the last 10% 3 STARS, I also rate the characters and writing each 4 STARS. I know what you are thinking, that my reasoning is weird. I know this. I don’t care. *shrugs* The last 10% did not have a change in writing style there was a twist in the plot line that I personally did not like. Can’t rate a book solely on disliking the twist now can I?

My Ratings
Characters- Lovable, Endearing and Sweet
Writing Style- Good
Plot/Storyline- A woman experiences a tragedy, she becomes close to a priest and they fall for each other
Steam Factor- Lo/Very very light on a scale of 1-10 I say 2 the book did not need it and it did just fine without it
Entertainment Level- Lo-Med-Hi I say High, the book held my rapt attention. I not once became bored. I would get upset if I had to stop reading.
Overall- I loved then liked it. Am I confusing you? Sorry this book did things to me.

Now go forth and read. Then come tell us about it on Goodreads!

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1,045 reviews1,535 followers
October 24, 2014

Huh? Was this a mindfuck or just a poorly executed plot twist?


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What the heck was that ending? At this point, I don't understand the happenings of 75% of the story. So I joined a private FB group for this book discussion with hopes that SOMEONE can shed light on the way the author threw this curveball ending at us. Otherwise I can't rate a book I just don't "get."

***Review update after consulting with the authors FB group and a good nights sleep***


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I still don't get it. And I can't readily explain it without giving it all away. For those of you who've read it and are able to accept the ending without too much deliberation, bravo. I guess I'm just a bit too literal and don't understand why an author would go down that road with her readers for most of a book then pull the rug out from under them.

I'm going to rate the book two stars which saddens me. If I quit at about 90%, it would've been an easy four star read. I loved the character Father Paul. He's perfect! Grace needed him and he was there for her in that time of need. It wasn't the crazy taboo priest story we all know about but a great love story not full of smut.

So if you're a fan of a unpredictable romance between two characters with everything going against them, read this. Just stop at 90% or all bets may be off for you liking it. You'll love it or you won't...

Don't click spoiler if you haven't read the book....

I'm all for a mind fuck but usually I figure it out in the end. This has just left me confused. Hmm. Blonde moment? Maybe. Probably more because I'm literal and this made zero sense.

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229 reviews257 followers
November 5, 2014

“5 Graceful stars”

For anyone who’s ever second guessed a decision and wondered what if…


First thing you should know about this story is that it’s not a dark/taboo read. Yes! It is a love story and involves the priest- there’s drama, angst, bit of love triangle, betrayal and heartbreak but this is unlike any love story you have ever heard!

I did enjoy this story till 90% mark but the twist that followed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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It literally stole my breath, left me angry and confused but mostly sad. LOVED. LOVED. LOVED IT!!!

LOVED sheer brilliance of this author! Not just for bringing in the gut wrenching twist and unexpected ending but for toying with my emotions. She makes you fall in love, gives you hope, believe in something but the minute the truth was revealed you can’t help but feel betrayed.

Now since I’m over that shock! I get the choices made by certain character leading to the twist. I’m upset about it but also proud at the same time, ironically I loved the ending. Story was compelling, there were major parts where I/we swooned over Father Paul (or FP like Kirsten would call him).

“Yeah, so how hot is the room in hell for a woman who attempts to seduce a priest?”

Loved the banters and mystery involving “FINDING HOPE”. I enjoyed playing detective with my girlfriends Karéz and Kirsten! You guys were right from the beginning so much for being optimist of the group:p

My advice for the readers who are yet to read this book: Don’t miss on this opportunity to be astonished. It will definitely leave you wondering “what if’s” of life! Just go in blind.

Thank you Karéz and Kirsten for this wonderful Buddy read! trust me, I never had so much fun reading a book :D

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FYI: Blurb makes sense only if you finish reading this book.


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267 reviews95 followers
October 11, 2014
5 Stars!

I'll make this brief for you. To me these kind of books (Which are rare!)
Do not need a review for!. Go ahead you can call me Crazy-Lazy-Didn't understand the book! Whichever you like!. But tell you this: Ever had a realization that the way we look at our decisions Only in one perspective?!?? Ask yourself! Why don't we have the What if's??

With the father. Will open your eyes to all the decisions we had/will make in our lives...

I loved everything about this book!...

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I would really recommend this book to you. But go in blindly.
and read it in your own pace.and even if you felt a bit lost at the end! go ahead and give it a re-read! Trust me! It will clear the "Issues"!!...





Shout out-> to my lovelies Sandy&Kirsten for the BR... xoxo
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865 reviews283 followers
October 17, 2014
Coming into this book, or even adding it a few weeks ago, I had this desire that it would be a taboo priest gone dirty, down and dir-Tay. Needless to say, this was nothing like that, not even close. After reading several reviews I understood the land mine I was walking into. I didn't spoil it for myself but I was scared and I needed to prepare myself. I knew a little going in, but nothing to prepare me for the shocker starting at 80%. And let me tell you, it wasn't just a shocker, think plural...SHOCKERS. I figured out one of them but not the biggest ones, so if you've not read this, don't spoil it for yourself, it's great to be stunned.

I can't say much because literally saying anything will spoil this book but I will say I was left a little ambivalent. Was the writing good? Definitely. Was I happy with the ending. I think so, yes.
The problem isn't the ending being bad, it was actually good considering everything that transpired. And realistically it couldn't end any other way. Anyone in that position would have done the same... I know, vague right? I have to be.

This was a story about what's ifs. But it's also more than that. It shows that even split decisions can alter your fate, your destiny. Is there one path for everyone, or are there alternate realities that exist but aren't tangible unless we make a DIFFERENT decision? Reading about that and understanding it makes me believe that this book ended the way it should have. I liked the characters, I felt they were real and relatable. There was very little steam, but lots of emotion and difficult situations. It was good, but the reason for my rating and my problem, is simple:

I DON'T LIKE TO BE TOYED WITH.

I know, I know...anyone having read this might say I really wasn't, but I'm an emotional reader. Things affect me, and although I liked how things turned out, I felt a little jilted. Which is weird since I didn't mind the ending. I'm still sifting through my thoughts but that's how it stands as of now. But in all honesty, this was a well written and well thought out book that makes you think, feel and think again.
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810 reviews652 followers
September 23, 2015
4.5 STARS

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How the hell did I go from being SO bored with it, to almost DNFing it, to giving it 4.5 stars?

I don't bloody know!


I'm gonna have to bullet point this shit.

*** It didn't feel like it was much of a romance novel. It felt much more like a drama, with a bit of romance on the side because Father Paul acted like a side character for the first half of the book.

*** In fact, I didn't think very much of Father Paul. He never showed me how apparently awesome he was.

*** And that's why the first half was kind of boring. There's no sexual tension (no sex between the LC's at all). No banter. Lots of grief. A lot of story set-up for the better half.

*** I have to say, the second half was awesome. It was soooo worth the dullness of the first half.

*** It started to make me question everything; look back at all the facts. I kept on trying to wrap my head around what was happening and wondering how on earth it was all going to turn out.

*** Out of all the silly theories my best book bud and I came up with, we never predicted the end. I was really happy with the ending (some might not be).

*** Though I didn't think it was much of a romance, the fabulously clever storyline was the biggest and best thing about this book.

And that's why it turned from a DNF to a 4.5 star for me.
It was one of those books that when you get to the end, everything falls into place and you have to re-read it again.


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270 reviews213 followers
September 20, 2015
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Wow.
What a story.
It was filled with so many different and powerful emotions, that I am still left kind of speechless.


♥There is absolutely nothing you need to know before starting to read this. I recommend going into it blind and try to piece the story together yourself.

♥Honestly, I did not know what to expect from the book. Of course I imagine all kinds of crazy scenarios involving two sisters and a priest, but nothing I thought came close to the real story. From the very beginning story took a very unpredictable direction, and from there on unexpected obstacles followed throughout the story. I loved it.

♥I tried to put the clues together and figure out the secrets, but in the end the twist left me at a loss for words. I think I reread those pages three times, just to be sure I got it right! Even with the clues, I think it is pretty impossible or at least very hard to figure out the full story. I applaud the author for her brilliant writing.

♥I don't think I liked Grace much, she was rather clueless about so many things, that it angered me a bit. However, I really liked her character development from the clueless wife who lived in a happiness bubble to somebody who know what she wants and is ready to finally be selfish.

♥I absolutely adored Kate and Father Paul. Kate, I guess because I could relate to her more than Grace and Father Paul, he is just too lovable. He is not as fantastic as Søren, but he is another priest I am very fond of. Sweet, good looking, wise, intelligent, funny... like I said it is hard not love him.

♥Overall, I really enjoyed the book and it was solid 4 star read for me until the ultimate twist, where my mind was blown and I got the ending I was hoping for, but did not know would be possible. I loved the emotions I had then and for that huge twist and ending I have to give the book 5 stars!

♥The ending was perfect for me and epilogue left me completely satisfied. I highly recommend this book!

♥Lastly, I will quote Kirsten because she perfectly describes the book in one sentence "It was the best and worst mind fuckery ever."

Thank you, Sandy for listening to me ramble about the book and my theories. I enjoyed discussing it with you ♥
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1,086 reviews
April 30, 2015
What is the acronym for With the Father? WTF. And it couldn't be any more apropos.

I found the first 85% of this novel fairly enjoyable. However, I firmly believe that the last 15% of this book should have NEVER seen the light of day. I HATE love triangles. But do you know what's worse than a love triangle? A LOVE QUADRANGLE. FFS, LOVE QUADRANGLES are pretty much Love Triangles ON CRACK!

I'll repeat what I said in my opening line: WTF— which pretty much became my mantra for the entire final 15% of this book. I absolutely abhorred the ending. IMO, it was horribly written, it wasn't convincing, & the "epic plot twist" really didn't make much sense. In other words, the plot is riddled with gaping holes that logical readers can point to & argue.... Furthermore, to add insult to injury, the author pretty much rammed the ludicrous ending down the readers' throats. The author was UNRELENTING, & as a result, the final 15% was, for me, akin to TORTURE. I felt as if I were being "water-boarded" as the author RELENTLESSLY poured the infuriating ending & HEA in our faces & DOWN EVERY FACIAL ORIFICE. I could have gagged, drowned or puked because she was laying it on so thick. IT WAS COMPLETE & UTTER INUNDATION. :(

With the Father is a novel replete with WTF moments, as well as ironies. There's "grace," but there really isn't. There's "hope," but there really isn't. It's set is a town called "Merriville," but as far as I'm concerned, there's NOTHING "merry" about it. This place (and this book) are dire. Nearly every female in the town is depicted as catty, daft, shallow, ethically-challenged or vicious. Add those things to an asinine ending that is sure to infuriate nearly half of the readers, & all that comes to mind is "WTF?"

*1/5 stars*

*** BTW, I'd like to thank my awesome GR friend— Yasmine— for recommending this novel to me. She is SO generous with her time & energy. She's constantly on the lookout for new novels, & she makes a concerted effort to forward info on books that she thinks her friends will like. <3 Among my Goodreads friends, the ratings for With the Father ranged from 1-star to 5-stars. As with all literature, interpretation is key. Interpretation is sure to vary amongst the many demographics or even within the same circle of friends. I have some friends who love this novel. Sadly, however, it just wasn't for me.
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986 reviews683 followers
September 26, 2014
★★★★ 4.5 Stars ★★★★



I thought I was reading one book and then at around 80% I realised I was reading something completely different. This book is hard to review without giving anything away, it's a book about Fate and the What Ifs of life.

I loved the writing style and the way the author interweaved all the little details together. It was kind of like a mystery, I was trying to work out what was happening all the way through the book. Knowing what I know now, I am now re-reading the parts of the book in a whole new light. It's like 2 books for the price of one.

For what it's worth, I was very happy with the ending - I am a big believer in fate and I totally think that the outcome we were left with was the way it was always meant to be.

The only reason I didn't give a full 5 was because I needed more Epilogue. I needed more from Paul at that point.

Bravo Jenni Moen, I loved it :D
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Author 51 books11.9k followers
September 2, 2014
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I just finished With the Father by Jenni Moen and I feel like I need a few days to process the story. AMAZING. BREATHTAKING. BEAUTIFUL. It was without a doubt one of my favorite reads of this year. I loved every word and felt every single emotion. Obviously 5++++ stars.

I read it straight through in six hours and I cried three times, laughed, and smiled the whole way through.
When this book comes out, I will be shouting from the rooftops because it deserves so much praise.

Get ready.
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109 reviews
September 26, 2014
I'm giving this 4 stars because I absolutely loved the story up until 90% and then I became downright pissed off with how it all ended. I thought that the writing was excellent and I was completely captivated until the very end. Then the end came and I felt like the rug was ripped out from under me and I was left devastated. Why Jenni Moen?!! Why did you do this to me? I'm mourning the loss of what I loved so much about this book.
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409 reviews78 followers
January 1, 2015


"For anyone who's ever second guessed a decision and wondered what if..."


Let me get this straight. Is the rating of this book just 3.91?!? Seriously?? I still can't believe it.


I don't even know what to say about this story. I don't want to tell you anything about the plot, because this is one of those books you don't need to know anything about it before reading it.

You have to go in blind. Don't try to understand what's happening, just enjoy the story.

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It mindfucked me really hard, but it was worth it. Definitely the best read to end 2014! ;)

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Thanks to my friend Karéz for recommending me this book, you're the best <3
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686 reviews244 followers
September 24, 2014


I really liked 85% of the book. It had a few funny moments. I loved Paul and I loved him with Grace. The writing was great.




Then THE TWIST happened. Did I like it??



Ruined the book for me. I was pissed. Wasn't amused. Wasn't feeling it. Made me super angry. I get the whole "meaning" behind the moral of the story but yeah not for me.

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382 reviews173 followers
December 6, 2015
5 Stages of Grace stars

I finished this in the wee hours of the morning, slept on it, and can honestly say I am still hungover and raw with emotions.

If at all possible read this with someone. Believe me, it helped so much! So first off, I'd like to thank Sandy and Karéz for an amazing buddy read. It was the perfect book and I am so glad to share the experience with you. Also thanks to the ladies who helped us with the process of this crazy ride. It was much needed and appreciated.

So, after my botched encounter with Black Lies (figured out the twist early), I told myself I wasn't going to attempt to figure things out in this one and have the book ruined. Yeah, right! You cannot help yourself in trying to put the pieces of the puzzle together. Believe me, even if you try to play detective, you will NOT see things coming. Unless you are super genius that is. And if that is the case, I tip my hat to you.

This was a breathtaking story of two sisters and a priest. Usually I would go into a description of the book and what the characters were like, but after knowing everything and reading it's entirety, I just can't go there. At least not now.

I loved and devoured every page. This was so hard to put down, and was so deep into the story. At 89%, I was as happy as a clam! I wanted to shout from the rooftops how much I loved how things happened and how much I loved Father Paul. In the back of my mind I KNEW something bad was going to happen. And as usual, I jinxed myself. Literally the next paragraph threw me in a tailspin of intense emotions.

I was at a loss. It was the best and worst mind fuckery ever. I loved and hated it simultaneously.
I literally went through the 5 stages of grief, and now I feel they were the 5 stages of Grace.

1) Denial



2) Anger



3) Bargaining



4) Depression



5) Acceptance




Highly recommend! It was such a great story! The author is very talented, and did a fantastic job of telling this. I see how things played out and I am okay with the outcome. But still... As I am writing this, I am still getting choked up! Definitely intense! This story will live with me for a long time. When I am feeling less raw about things, I am going to have to go back in and reread this one for sure.
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1,655 reviews1,167 followers
October 7, 2014
Well...I am pretty much speechless!!! I truly don't know what to say in this review..The ending to this book totally blind sighted me to the point that I walked around today a bit of a zombie trying to figure out what the heck did I just read! LOL Like all of the other reviews out there, I will not be giving away the details of the story. This is a book that you need to go in blind..otherwise I could see it taking away from the entertainment factor...as well as the shock factor too! I will be honest and say that for most of the book I was looking all over the place, and to everyone trying to figure out what is what..but things weren't very predictable; which is refreshing. There are so many books out there right now that are predictable that they almost become boring..Well, this one did keep me on my toes! One thing I feel it necessary to say though, is that this is not an erotica book. I went in with the assumption that it was, and me being me was a tad disappointed with that..I would more label this as a suspence/mystery/love story. That is just my take on it!

So there you have it..I know it is vague..I feel bad for that; however I wouldn't want to say anything accidentally! This was the first time that I read this author's work..and I would absolutely be open to reading future work by her, as I felt that her writing was very well done. All in all, this was an enjoyable read, definitely an unexpected one! It has been awhile since a book has kept me guessing up until the end..
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505 reviews72 followers
October 18, 2014
4 Made Me Think Stars

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This was an intriguing story. After a fairly slow start it became apparent that this story was full of mystery, secrets and lies but most of all choices....

I really didn't have any idea what this story was about before I dived in, was it a taboo, erotica tale of forbidden love?
Well I think thats why this story took me by surprise. It has a twist which I didn't see coming. It didn't shock me but it did make me think about the story alot after I had finished it.


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My thoughts will finish on two words.....

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Profile Image for Michelle.
2,082 reviews895 followers
October 20, 2014
Read the blurb. One-click the book. It seems pretty silly to now inform you not to read any reviews, especially as I write my review, but this is one of those stories that if it is spoiled, it won’t be enjoyed.

So I am going to keep this short. I loved this story. I might be a little angry at this story. But I did love it. It is one that when you’re finished with it, you immediately flip back through it to re-read parts. To try to grasp a hold onto something.

This is one of those books that almost demands an immediate re-read of it once you are finished. It also carried a small profound kind of message that was not the focus of the story as much as it was just in the way you felt when you were finished.

I went into this blind, I expected a hot-sexy taboo story of a priest who falls in love and then acts on it. I got that, but it wasn’t the hot-sexy read I expected. It was like the butterflies of a new crush, not the panting that comes with an experienced lover. It was like the author delivered the softest, kindest mindfuck one could give you. I am still in a bit of shock. Not angry, not overly happy. Just stuck.
Profile Image for Stephanie • Ideally Inspired.
435 reviews1,078 followers
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September 24, 2014
This review was originally posted on my blog No BS Book Reviews

DNF

Being a fan of Tiffany Reisz's Original Sinners series, I thought that this book (based on the title) would be right up my alley. I went into this book completely blind; I was intrigued by the title/cover, AND by the GUSHING reviews. I was so confident I'd like it, I got my pal Kayla to buddy read it with me. So we jumped  in feet first, completely ready to drink the Kool-Aid, and I hadn't even read the synopsis yet. 

Someone remind me to NEVER do that again. 

Want to know how far in I got before I DNF'd? 55%.

That's actually further than I normally go for a DNF. (Typically I do within the first 30%-ish.) I had heard there was an "epic plot twist", so I kept reading... but it got to a point where I had to phone a friend (Kayla) and tap out.

Naturally, I wanted to know what said twist was. I will tell you, that by 55%, the the twist had not yet been revealed. However, I made up my mind that I could go no further, though I did ultimately discover what the "twist" was. (I'll get to all that in a moment.)
Before you read further, I just want you to be aware that there are some potential spoilers within my review, but the major ones I'll be sure to have hidden, and you'll be able to click to read.


There are spoilers ahead. (Don't worry, I have some of them hidden-- click to read them at your own risk!)

Let me break down my issues that I had with this book:
1.) The Point-of-View Snafu:


There were 3(ish) POVs: Grace (who the story is centered around), her sister Kate, and the Priest. All told from a first-person perspective. Now here's the issue that I had: It didn't make sense. It felt disjointed, and at some points, bizarre. The flow of the story suffered because of it too.

I just couldn't understand why the Priest's POV was necessary in the prologue . The prologue opens up with the priest (in his POV), and he's talking about how he's had some inappropriate feelings for Grace, who is married with 2 kids. Considering it was the PROLOGUE, at the time, I thought: "I can't wait to see how this will work out!" But then, we start getting Grace's POV, and her character just feel flat for me. There wasn't much depth, and considering most of the book from that point forward was from her POV (and her sister's), I was left underwhelmed.

I also found Kate's POV to be very lack-luster and most times ANNOYING.

Also, the pacing was waaaaay too fast in the first few chapters.

I spent a lot of time wondering if I was missing something...


2.) Frankly, my dear, I don't give a damn.


I absolutely could not connect with the characters AT ALL. It was to the point where sad things were happening, and I didn't feel a thing. I didn't care. As mentioned before, this could've been a result from either the fast pacing, or from the confusing POV format. The only thing that kept me reading was that I felt like I  needed to solve the underlying "mystery" that presents itself around 30 or 40-something percent.

3.) The (Plot) Hole-y Grail
 
As I mentioned before, I only got 55% in. I was struggling trying to keep up, and at the same time, I was bracing myself for the "genius plot-twist that will blow your mind!". By 55%, there had been a couple revelations, but nothing mind-blowing. However, I did have a few theories before I DNF'd:

So after I decided that I was going to put the book down, I messaged a couple of my friends who had read it 'til the end, as I wanted them to explain the plot twist,  and I was curious to see what all the fuss was about.

So, I braced myself.

Then, my pal Amanda filled me in.

My reaction:

I call shenanigans. 

That COULD'VE worked, if not for one major plot hole:

Now, when I brought up this plot hole with another reader (who read the book and loved it), they informed me that the twist was set up pretty early on in the book:

I call shenanigans squared. 

The proof is in the pudding, my friends. Here's a [plot] hole that I found within a [plot] hole:



If you're going to have a psychological-style twist in your story, it has to make sense. I, as the reader, should be able to go back in the story, and say: "WOW, look at all these clues that I missed that led us up to this point!" Instead, I was left scratching my head, feeling like the author was just making shit up.

 Look, this plot twist COULD HAVE been pretty awesome, but in my opinion, was executed poorly. It had a lot of potential.

What a shame.

Now, how can I get those hours of my life back?
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790 reviews2,553 followers
October 1, 2014
3.75 STARS

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Like many others I believed this will be a dark/taboo read. It could have been really interesting to read a forbidden romance where one of the main characters is a priest. Anyway, I wish I could say I loved this book but unfortunately is not the case.

This book is really hard to review without giving anything away, so I will not say much about it – plot or characters, but one thing is for sure: this was interesting.

For me this book wasn’t a romance, it was more a drama/mystery, something like that. I was surprised that I wasn’t bored like others ( 80% of the book ). I actually liked the story, so I didn’t think to DNF it. Even when I figure out this was not a dark read, I was expected something else.

In some way, was interesting that this wasn’t what I expected. Anyway, the story will definitely keep you guessing and you will question everything. Reading some of my friends reviews before starting this, I tried to figure out what’s happening, but obviously I didn’t.

The main idea of the book is interesting and I really liked it. I also liked the characters, they were relatable and even likeable. I can’t say anything else about them for obvious reasons. My main problem with this one was the ending. I really had a WTF moment!!! I’m not gonna say anything, so...just read the book!

Overall a nice, interesting read if you want something else!
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327 reviews
March 2, 2018
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So it`s been well over a week since I finished this story and I still don`t know how to properly review it, so let`s just go with this:

In this story, the main female character has suffered through a terrible tragedy and now she`s all alone.

As she tries to navigate and deal with the aftermath of this tragedy, she finds that some days it`s more managable and that`s all due to the support system made up of her father and sister; but it seems that the main pillar of that support system comes from a man who has devoted his life to serving God, Father Sullivan.

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As she deals with the day to day motions of the one being left behind, Father Sullivan seems to turn up wherever she is.

She`s been given a second chance and she`s unsure if she deserves it, but as she spends time with Father Sullivan, he helps to open her eyes and her heart to giving that second chance a worthy try.

This story obviously has that forbidden undertone, seeing as she starts to develop feelings for him and this is where she struggles internally with the thought of moving forward with someone that is the epitome of FORBIDDEN.

He is also fighting feelings for a woman who stirs something within him,
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cause let`s face it here, he has devoted his entire life to serving only one person and I don`t think you can get any more forbidden than that.

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Now I wanted to point out here that as soon as I finished, I had some MAJOR questions, cause there is a  photo omg_zps4d759c0e.gif moment right at the end and I needed clarification.

My lovely dear friend, Supreet was kind enough to discuss this with me and I have to
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This in no way ends in a cliff hanger; it is a stand-alone. Now I think the majority of you who read it or will read it may be left upset, I know I was, BUT, this still does not affect my rating of this story.

Let me just point out that this is not a smutty read

Well, that`s all folks; took me forever to get my thoughts together and write this and now that I`m done, GO READ THIS!!!!
Profile Image for Andrea.
211 reviews43 followers
October 22, 2014


So…..it’s so hard to review this.

A significant amount of time after reading this book has passed and I’m still…

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It was a tough book to read, and it will affect everyone differently.

As for me…I might be a little angry at this story right now but I loved it.

I love it because it took me by surprise and that twist which I didn’t see coming shock the hell out of me.

But…the ending didn’t work out for me because I’m an emotional reader and I’ve invested so much in that love story. So ya…now I have to cope with it.

I will definitely re-read this!
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270 reviews15 followers
September 27, 2014
Five wonderful stars!!! Highly recommended to all my Goodreads. Thanks to Feifei's amazing review I gave this book a try and absolutely loved it. Wish I could write a proper review but real life is a bitch.
After all the hero is a hot priest, what more can a girl ask for?
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308 reviews53 followers
September 25, 2014
4.5 stars

Wow! What a book! Kudos to the author. It's so difficult to find romance books that aren't the same ole, same ole...this book delivers something different and does it in great manner. It captivated me from beginning to end.


I will say that I am so conflicted over the ending.

I did have a misconception about this book prior to reading it, I was expecting a freaky deaky priest a la Soren from Original Sinners....this was not the case lol
Profile Image for Liv Morris.
Author 48 books1,194 followers
September 17, 2014
I was fortunate enough to read With the Father before its release. I can't say enough about this book. Plot, writing, sexual tension, and an ending twist that has me suffering from an incurable book hangover.
Be prepared to have your mind blown in the best of ways. And good luck finding your next book after reading With the Father...
Bravo, Jenni!
Profile Image for Olga therebelreader.
894 reviews768 followers
April 21, 2016
This is one of the most difficult reviews I feel the need to write.

I must say that this book quite disappointed me in several different ways. It’s about those books on which you have to decide whether they are a masterpiece or a catastrophe. Having just finished the book, I’m really trying to figure out the pros and cons, and decide how this story affected my thougths and feelings.

Well, let’s start from the fact that at 50% DNF crossed my mind more than once. For about the 80% of the book, everything seemed predictable and easy going. Writing was average and sometimes dull. There were the necessary twists and turns needed to support the drama around Grace’s family, but I had the feeling that something was missing, something remained aloof. Near the end of the book…BOOM! My sanity was tested, my mind was blown away, burned…pff!!!
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I’m still trying to figure out what bothered me most about it. The sure thing is that I haven’t experienced closure and I feel disappointed, dissatisfied, upset! The author’s attempt to create a suspenseful twisted taboo romance has been a failure.

Would I recommend it? Certainly YES! There are so many blanks to be filled in, so many questions unanswered, so many repressed emotions!


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