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The Gentleman's Impertinent Daughter: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
A Pride and Prejudice Variation Novella
When Fitzwilliam Darcy visits Hyde Park with his sister, he expects nothing more than a quiet walk on a fine day. Instead, he meets a young woman who challenges his ideas and pulls his sister out of her melancholy. He soon realizes Elizabeth Bennet is the only woman in the world with whom he could spend the rest of his life.
Elizabeth, clever and self-assured, refuses to change for the sake of gaining a husband, a prospect she finds impossible regardless. With wit and independence rather than fortune, she is entirely convinced no sensible man would have her, and she cannot respect a fool. Can Darcy prove to be this impossible man? Or is a figure from his past an insurmountable obstacle to a future with The Gentleman’s Impertinent Daughter?
This was previously posted on various forums in a draft as St. Michael's Little Summer.
When Fitzwilliam Darcy visits Hyde Park with his sister, he expects nothing more than a quiet walk on a fine day. Instead, he meets a young woman who challenges his ideas and pulls his sister out of her melancholy. He soon realizes Elizabeth Bennet is the only woman in the world with whom he could spend the rest of his life.
Elizabeth, clever and self-assured, refuses to change for the sake of gaining a husband, a prospect she finds impossible regardless. With wit and independence rather than fortune, she is entirely convinced no sensible man would have her, and she cannot respect a fool. Can Darcy prove to be this impossible man? Or is a figure from his past an insurmountable obstacle to a future with The Gentleman’s Impertinent Daughter?
This was previously posted on various forums in a draft as St. Michael's Little Summer.
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First published July 16, 2014
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March 11, 2017
Remove the obstacles and you have a very different story outcome:
I loved this story. Our P&P characters were the same just the juxtaposition of their circumstances was different and therefore, so to the end results.
First Bingley had already taken Netherfield Park and without Darcy’s influence was able to establish his relationship with Jane without interference. Caroline objected greatly; however he never paid any attention to Caroline’s opinion on the matter.
Darcy and Georgiana met Elizabeth, Mrs. Gardiner and her children while strolling in a park in London. He was able to assess their behavior at a distance and in his own quiet way without the chaos of a large assembly grating on his last nerve. He observed their actions, their comportment, and decided that they were people of understanding and intellect.
Elizabeth was able to assess Mr. Darcy without the influence of any other person or circumstance. They met on equal ground and noted with pleasure the connections of Mrs. Gardiner having lived near his family in Derbyshire. Darcy also discovered that he knew of her father from school. He had followed him in debate and broke TB’s long held record. This alone earned her respect.
Georgiana immediately liked Elizabeth Bennet and wanted to further the friendship. Darcy was intrigued as he saw his shy sister virtually blossom in the presence of Elizabeth. He liked the connection very much. They invited Elizabeth along with the Gardiners to dinner and enjoyed meeting people of sense and quality. Darcy and Georgiana suggested that Elizabeth travel with them as they were leaving for Netherfield on the morrow.
While on the road Georgiana asked about her family. Elizabeth felt she needed to prepare her new acquaintances with what they might encounter when meeting her family. Fortunately no one was home when they arrived to embarrass her. They planned to meet the next night at the Meryton Assembly. Darcy requested a dance with her. She was pleased to accept.
Circumstances at the assembly differ here when Mr. Wickham arrived. He caused monumental trouble for Elizabeth and her family and, of all things, was assisted by Caroline herself. This was his perfect revenge on Darcy. It was insidious and cruel on both parts. I cannot believe how it played out. I am still stunned it happened. Rules of propriety can be so strict and can turn an innocent meeting into a compromise.
Darcy and Elizabeth each took their guilt trip regarding the scandal along separate paths. Darcy blamed himself as he knew Wickham only targeted Elizabeth’s family because he saw Darcy’s interest in her. Elizabeth reasoned that a man of society would not align himself to such a family. It was heartbreaking to read their anguish and despair. I couldn’t put it down as I just knew something had to bring them back together. And then Georgiana and Anne de Bourgh came to the rescue in an exchange of letters that pushed Lady Catherine into action. What a hoot.
Wickham was not pleased with his meeting with Darcy. He did not receive what he felt he deserved…although in our eyes he did. WOW! I did not see that coming. What a plan and very creative of Darcy to use Colonel Fitzwilliam’s position in the war office to place Wickham in the regulars in Newcastle.
*** SPOILER *** ***End Spoiler ***
Note: I won this book from the author and this is an honest review. Had I not liked it, I would have said so. However, I loved it and am glad I read it. It was a new and creative take on ODC. I like an occasional mix-up in P&P and appreciated the creative way Fairbanks presented her story. It was cute and I loved the interaction between Darcy and Elizabeth. There were minimal errors; some simply hide from the most fervent search to eliminate them.
I loved this story. Our P&P characters were the same just the juxtaposition of their circumstances was different and therefore, so to the end results.
First Bingley had already taken Netherfield Park and without Darcy’s influence was able to establish his relationship with Jane without interference. Caroline objected greatly; however he never paid any attention to Caroline’s opinion on the matter.
Darcy and Georgiana met Elizabeth, Mrs. Gardiner and her children while strolling in a park in London. He was able to assess their behavior at a distance and in his own quiet way without the chaos of a large assembly grating on his last nerve. He observed their actions, their comportment, and decided that they were people of understanding and intellect.
Elizabeth was able to assess Mr. Darcy without the influence of any other person or circumstance. They met on equal ground and noted with pleasure the connections of Mrs. Gardiner having lived near his family in Derbyshire. Darcy also discovered that he knew of her father from school. He had followed him in debate and broke TB’s long held record. This alone earned her respect.
Georgiana immediately liked Elizabeth Bennet and wanted to further the friendship. Darcy was intrigued as he saw his shy sister virtually blossom in the presence of Elizabeth. He liked the connection very much. They invited Elizabeth along with the Gardiners to dinner and enjoyed meeting people of sense and quality. Darcy and Georgiana suggested that Elizabeth travel with them as they were leaving for Netherfield on the morrow.
While on the road Georgiana asked about her family. Elizabeth felt she needed to prepare her new acquaintances with what they might encounter when meeting her family. Fortunately no one was home when they arrived to embarrass her. They planned to meet the next night at the Meryton Assembly. Darcy requested a dance with her. She was pleased to accept.
Circumstances at the assembly differ here when Mr. Wickham arrived. He caused monumental trouble for Elizabeth and her family and, of all things, was assisted by Caroline herself. This was his perfect revenge on Darcy. It was insidious and cruel on both parts. I cannot believe how it played out. I am still stunned it happened. Rules of propriety can be so strict and can turn an innocent meeting into a compromise.
Darcy and Elizabeth each took their guilt trip regarding the scandal along separate paths. Darcy blamed himself as he knew Wickham only targeted Elizabeth’s family because he saw Darcy’s interest in her. Elizabeth reasoned that a man of society would not align himself to such a family. It was heartbreaking to read their anguish and despair. I couldn’t put it down as I just knew something had to bring them back together. And then Georgiana and Anne de Bourgh came to the rescue in an exchange of letters that pushed Lady Catherine into action. What a hoot.
Wickham was not pleased with his meeting with Darcy. He did not receive what he felt he deserved…although in our eyes he did. WOW! I did not see that coming. What a plan and very creative of Darcy to use Colonel Fitzwilliam’s position in the war office to place Wickham in the regulars in Newcastle.
*** SPOILER *** ***End Spoiler ***
Note: I won this book from the author and this is an honest review. Had I not liked it, I would have said so. However, I loved it and am glad I read it. It was a new and creative take on ODC. I like an occasional mix-up in P&P and appreciated the creative way Fairbanks presented her story. It was cute and I loved the interaction between Darcy and Elizabeth. There were minimal errors; some simply hide from the most fervent search to eliminate them.
September 11, 2014
This was a sweet story and I really enjoyed it! I am very impressed given the length - I don't usually like novellas as they often feel rushed, as there isn't enough time to develop the story or the characters, but this one really didn't feel rushed at all.
I think the route the author decided to take the story down really worked for the length of it; the idea that they haven't met at Meryton, where Darcy famously insults Lizzy, means that they can get off to a better start. Also, as they hit it off much better and like each other straight away, there is a lot less pride, prejudice and misunderstanding, which was perfect for a story of this length.
What I most enjoyed about having Lizzy and Darcy meet in a completely different situation was the effect this had on Darcy; the events of this story after the meeting in Hyde Park are pretty much like we know it to happen in Pride and Prejudice. However, as a result of their Hyde Park meeting and Darcy's consequential wish to please Lizzy, his behaviour when he does arrive at Meryton is as it ought to have been; he is much more civil to the country folk of Meryton and he even views Lizzy's family in a more forgiving light, as really Mrs Bennet isn't any worse than his own aunt, Lady Catherine! As well as Darcy's altered behaviour in such scenes, there are also some fun twists to other events, such as Lady Catherine's visit to scare Lizzy away from Darcy - this is brought about in a new and interesting way and by a most unexpected character as well! Another factor in this variation which I really enjoyed was that Darcy meets the non-embarrassing members of Lizzy's family, the Gardiners, first, and also that Lizzy gets to meet Darcy's sister, Georgiana, much sooner - and before Lady Catherine!
The author, even in such a short story, highlights quite a few interesting thoughts and comparisons that I had never really thought about or noticed before. For example, when Lizzy is worried about the possible loss of the Darcys regard for her after they have met the rest of her family, Georgiana points out that both her and Mr Darcy are still friends with Bingley despite his unfortunate sisters!
I have already mentioned how Darcy's behaviour changes as a result of his accidentally meeting with Lizzy, but as well as the influence she has over him starting to take effect much sooner (and without the need for him to be accused of being proud, arrogant and ungentleman-like in a most horrible refusal!), there is an interesting idea played around with in that Darcy has always believed that birth, rank and lineage do not automatically make people more superior than others, however because of how he was brought up and of what society would say, he hasn't spoken up about his own views. I found this twist on Darcy's character as an explanation for his pride an interesting path to explore.
Lizzy is just as lively as we would expect her to be. She is her outspoken, witty, impertinent self. She is particularly pragmatic in this story with her views on society and how the world is changing, and it is this attitude which is what captures Darcy's attention when he happens to overhear Lizzy having such a conversation with her aunt Gardiner.
As I have already said, I love that Lizzy and Darcy's first meeting gets off to a much better start when Darcy is immediately drawn to this beautiful young woman playing with a child with her petticoats six inches deep in mud! As the relationship develops between them you can't help but love them; their teasing of and debating with each other, and later their flirting, are very sweet! The debates they have are brilliant and the author's own intelligence shines through in them. We know they cross verbal swords in canon, however this time Lizzy isn't purposefully trying to annoy, mock or invoke disapproval from Darcy which makes a change!
I have already mentioned how we see Lizzy's influence on Darcy from almost the earliest moments of their acquaintance, but Lizzy is also influenced by the much more positive and trusting - and unprejudiced! - opinion she has of Darcy, particularly when both Wickham and Caroline Bingley come along to try and warn her off! This isn't a story full of disagreements, problems and angst, but there are some obstacles the couple must face, which keep things interesting. I am glad this was the case, however, because this is only a short story; if it was all angst from page one till the very end it would have felt like a rather unrealistic happy ending for them, and also the blurb suggests there won't be as many problems as he isn't nearly as proud, nor her as prejudiced! As it is, the journey of their friendship and love doesn't feel at all rushed or unbelievable in my opinion as I think the author got the balance right.
I mentioned briefly how it was nice for Lizzy to meet Georgiana much sooner, at the very beginning in fact when she meets Darcy. Georgiana features throughout this whole story and I always enjoy getting to read more about her. I felt so sorry for her as we see just how upset she is by a certain event thanks to a certain scoundrel and how affected she has been. She and her brother seem to have a really strong bond as we see Darcy equally as affected by seeing his sister so upset, especially when he feels he is the most to blame! Georgiana is very sweet though, and what was lovely was her immediate ease and comfort with this stranger they meet, a Miss Elizabeth Bennet. We see her grow in confidence as Elizabeth's lively nature helps to bring her out of her saddened state. Those two really become great friends! We also get to see Georgiana turn her hand to match-making - much more subtlety than Mrs Bennet! - as she can't fail to notice the immediate connection and bond between her new friend and her brother. She plays a very important role in their relationship in fact!
Where would we be without Wickham and Caroline Bingley causing trouble; they do, and plenty of it! They were particularly well portrayed as my 'hatred and anger meter' hit pretty much top and I wanted to slap or kick (or worse!) at various points in the story! They get their due however, don't you worry!
There was a very sweet - and very important - new character called Michael, one of the Gardiner children. He was adorable! His childish innocence and often inappropriate comments or questions were great and very funny!
I have said how the author's intelligence is clear in even such a short story, but also this was very well written and the historical accuracy was brilliant. The characterisation was also very good, my favourites being Darcy and Georgiana. There were some fun twists and slight changes to canon as well, which I really enjoyed. If this is what the author can do in under 100 pages I can't wait to read a full length novel!
If you have a spare hour or so and want a nice break one afternoon or a quick bedtime read then this is the book to choose!
I think the route the author decided to take the story down really worked for the length of it; the idea that they haven't met at Meryton, where Darcy famously insults Lizzy, means that they can get off to a better start. Also, as they hit it off much better and like each other straight away, there is a lot less pride, prejudice and misunderstanding, which was perfect for a story of this length.
What I most enjoyed about having Lizzy and Darcy meet in a completely different situation was the effect this had on Darcy; the events of this story after the meeting in Hyde Park are pretty much like we know it to happen in Pride and Prejudice. However, as a result of their Hyde Park meeting and Darcy's consequential wish to please Lizzy, his behaviour when he does arrive at Meryton is as it ought to have been; he is much more civil to the country folk of Meryton and he even views Lizzy's family in a more forgiving light, as really Mrs Bennet isn't any worse than his own aunt, Lady Catherine! As well as Darcy's altered behaviour in such scenes, there are also some fun twists to other events, such as Lady Catherine's visit to scare Lizzy away from Darcy - this is brought about in a new and interesting way and by a most unexpected character as well! Another factor in this variation which I really enjoyed was that Darcy meets the non-embarrassing members of Lizzy's family, the Gardiners, first, and also that Lizzy gets to meet Darcy's sister, Georgiana, much sooner - and before Lady Catherine!
The author, even in such a short story, highlights quite a few interesting thoughts and comparisons that I had never really thought about or noticed before. For example, when Lizzy is worried about the possible loss of the Darcys regard for her after they have met the rest of her family, Georgiana points out that both her and Mr Darcy are still friends with Bingley despite his unfortunate sisters!
I have already mentioned how Darcy's behaviour changes as a result of his accidentally meeting with Lizzy, but as well as the influence she has over him starting to take effect much sooner (and without the need for him to be accused of being proud, arrogant and ungentleman-like in a most horrible refusal!), there is an interesting idea played around with in that Darcy has always believed that birth, rank and lineage do not automatically make people more superior than others, however because of how he was brought up and of what society would say, he hasn't spoken up about his own views. I found this twist on Darcy's character as an explanation for his pride an interesting path to explore.
Lizzy is just as lively as we would expect her to be. She is her outspoken, witty, impertinent self. She is particularly pragmatic in this story with her views on society and how the world is changing, and it is this attitude which is what captures Darcy's attention when he happens to overhear Lizzy having such a conversation with her aunt Gardiner.
As I have already said, I love that Lizzy and Darcy's first meeting gets off to a much better start when Darcy is immediately drawn to this beautiful young woman playing with a child with her petticoats six inches deep in mud! As the relationship develops between them you can't help but love them; their teasing of and debating with each other, and later their flirting, are very sweet! The debates they have are brilliant and the author's own intelligence shines through in them. We know they cross verbal swords in canon, however this time Lizzy isn't purposefully trying to annoy, mock or invoke disapproval from Darcy which makes a change!
I have already mentioned how we see Lizzy's influence on Darcy from almost the earliest moments of their acquaintance, but Lizzy is also influenced by the much more positive and trusting - and unprejudiced! - opinion she has of Darcy, particularly when both Wickham and Caroline Bingley come along to try and warn her off! This isn't a story full of disagreements, problems and angst, but there are some obstacles the couple must face, which keep things interesting. I am glad this was the case, however, because this is only a short story; if it was all angst from page one till the very end it would have felt like a rather unrealistic happy ending for them, and also the blurb suggests there won't be as many problems as he isn't nearly as proud, nor her as prejudiced! As it is, the journey of their friendship and love doesn't feel at all rushed or unbelievable in my opinion as I think the author got the balance right.
I mentioned briefly how it was nice for Lizzy to meet Georgiana much sooner, at the very beginning in fact when she meets Darcy. Georgiana features throughout this whole story and I always enjoy getting to read more about her. I felt so sorry for her as we see just how upset she is by a certain event thanks to a certain scoundrel and how affected she has been. She and her brother seem to have a really strong bond as we see Darcy equally as affected by seeing his sister so upset, especially when he feels he is the most to blame! Georgiana is very sweet though, and what was lovely was her immediate ease and comfort with this stranger they meet, a Miss Elizabeth Bennet. We see her grow in confidence as Elizabeth's lively nature helps to bring her out of her saddened state. Those two really become great friends! We also get to see Georgiana turn her hand to match-making - much more subtlety than Mrs Bennet! - as she can't fail to notice the immediate connection and bond between her new friend and her brother. She plays a very important role in their relationship in fact!
Where would we be without Wickham and Caroline Bingley causing trouble; they do, and plenty of it! They were particularly well portrayed as my 'hatred and anger meter' hit pretty much top and I wanted to slap or kick (or worse!) at various points in the story! They get their due however, don't you worry!
There was a very sweet - and very important - new character called Michael, one of the Gardiner children. He was adorable! His childish innocence and often inappropriate comments or questions were great and very funny!
I have said how the author's intelligence is clear in even such a short story, but also this was very well written and the historical accuracy was brilliant. The characterisation was also very good, my favourites being Darcy and Georgiana. There were some fun twists and slight changes to canon as well, which I really enjoyed. If this is what the author can do in under 100 pages I can't wait to read a full length novel!
If you have a spare hour or so and want a nice break one afternoon or a quick bedtime read then this is the book to choose!
July 1, 2016
This is a story of almost zero pride and no prejudice and then time compressed.
In this version of P & P Mr. Darcy doesn't immediately join Bingley at Netherfield; misses the first assembly, can't influence Bingley's opinion, isn't introducced to Mr. Collins and has no preconceived notions of the Bennets.
When he and Georgiana encounter Lizzy, Mr. Gardiner and the Gardiner children in the park everything accelerates quickly. Dinner at Darcy house, Lizzy joining the Darcy's in their carriage for the ride to Hertfordshire and Mr. Darcy asking her to dance at the next assembly - which happens to be the next day.
On day two Georgiana meets the Bennets, Lydia meets Wickham and Caroline threatens Lizzy.
On day 3 Lydia and Wickham will marry and Darcy gets involved.
Whirlwind doesn't begin to describe this short story.
In this version of P & P Mr. Darcy doesn't immediately join Bingley at Netherfield; misses the first assembly, can't influence Bingley's opinion, isn't introducced to Mr. Collins and has no preconceived notions of the Bennets.
When he and Georgiana encounter Lizzy, Mr. Gardiner and the Gardiner children in the park everything accelerates quickly. Dinner at Darcy house, Lizzy joining the Darcy's in their carriage for the ride to Hertfordshire and Mr. Darcy asking her to dance at the next assembly - which happens to be the next day.
On day two Georgiana meets the Bennets, Lydia meets Wickham and Caroline threatens Lizzy.
On day 3 Lydia and Wickham will marry and Darcy gets involved.
Whirlwind doesn't begin to describe this short story.
August 26, 2018
A sweet and romantic fast read.
A little over-explained, I prefer to be kept guessing... 3.5* rounded up to 4.
ODC met in London, pre-canon which left us with a whole new story.
Darcy eavesdropped on Elizabeth and her aunt and was bewitched before they where even introduced. His awkward social skills and the Lydia/Wickham debacle in combination with the interfering miss Bingley, muddled things up but Georgiana saved the day.
Recommend.
A little over-explained, I prefer to be kept guessing... 3.5* rounded up to 4.
ODC met in London, pre-canon which left us with a whole new story.
Darcy eavesdropped on Elizabeth and her aunt and was bewitched before they where even introduced. His awkward social skills and the Lydia/Wickham debacle in combination with the interfering miss Bingley, muddled things up but Georgiana saved the day.
Recommend.
January 16, 2015
A refreshing novella
For the most part I loved this novella!! I just didn't like how fast it went and how short it was!! I loved how Ms Fairbanks was able to still allow both E&D's to remain true to their characters according to P&P, just quicken up the events a bit. I believe any JAFFer will enjoy this novella, though will also agree with me that it should have been longer!!!
For the most part I loved this novella!! I just didn't like how fast it went and how short it was!! I loved how Ms Fairbanks was able to still allow both E&D's to remain true to their characters according to P&P, just quicken up the events a bit. I believe any JAFFer will enjoy this novella, though will also agree with me that it should have been longer!!!
November 2, 2024
Loved this one. :)
Reread: same
Reread: same
March 19, 2016
THE GENTLEMAN'S IMPERTINENT DAUGHTER
First of all, for those who don't know, this is a novella length story which makes it perfect for a longer read that can still be devoured in one sitting (time constraints meant I had to spread it over two days, though). It's also a variation on the canon storyline for quite a bit of the story, though many of the elements are still there, just arranged differently.
Bingley has leased Netherfield earlier and Darcy hasn't gone with him but remained in London with Georgiana after the Ramsgate incident. Elizabeth is also in London, staying with the Gardiners, having already refused Mr. Collins' proposal. Darcy, Georgiana and Elizabeth meet in Hyde Park whilst she's out with Mrs. Gardiner and her children. Their friendship develops rather quickly after this. All of the usual suspects make an appearance. Wickham, Miss Bingley and Lady C. are their typical selves and that's as much as I'll say about the plot.
I did find the odd typo in my Kindle edition and as I'm very much a novel length reader mainly, the plot did seem a little rushed towards the end. Having said that, it's a lovely, sweet story that is perfect for sitting down with on a cold afternoon with a cup of hot tea or chocolate. There's no explicit content so this is suitable for all audiences.
First of all, for those who don't know, this is a novella length story which makes it perfect for a longer read that can still be devoured in one sitting (time constraints meant I had to spread it over two days, though). It's also a variation on the canon storyline for quite a bit of the story, though many of the elements are still there, just arranged differently.
Bingley has leased Netherfield earlier and Darcy hasn't gone with him but remained in London with Georgiana after the Ramsgate incident. Elizabeth is also in London, staying with the Gardiners, having already refused Mr. Collins' proposal. Darcy, Georgiana and Elizabeth meet in Hyde Park whilst she's out with Mrs. Gardiner and her children. Their friendship develops rather quickly after this. All of the usual suspects make an appearance. Wickham, Miss Bingley and Lady C. are their typical selves and that's as much as I'll say about the plot.
I did find the odd typo in my Kindle edition and as I'm very much a novel length reader mainly, the plot did seem a little rushed towards the end. Having said that, it's a lovely, sweet story that is perfect for sitting down with on a cold afternoon with a cup of hot tea or chocolate. There's no explicit content so this is suitable for all audiences.
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January 16, 2015A refreshing novella
For the most part I loved this novella!! I just didn't like how fast it went and how short it was!! I loved how Ms Fairbanks was able to still allow both E&D's to remain true to their characters according to P&P, just quicken up the events a bit. I believe any JAFFer will enjoy this novella, though will also agree with me that it should have been longer!!!
For the most part I loved this novella!! I just didn't like how fast it went and how short it was!! I loved how Ms Fairbanks was able to still allow both E&D's to remain true to their characters according to P&P, just quicken up the events a bit. I believe any JAFFer will enjoy this novella, though will also agree with me that it should have been longer!!!
February 12, 2020
Predictable, low angst, and sweet.
October 24, 2016
Short story (under 100 pages) of Darcy first meeting Elizabeth in London. She is visiting with the Gardiners after she turns down mr Collins and Darcy overhears her speaking to her aunt about her idea of love, her family, Bingley, Collins and everything in between. He first sees her twirling her cousins around a park with her hem 6 inches deep in mid and then sees her wit and hears her inner thoughts through eavesdropping. Georgiana quickly gets to know the ladies in the park and invites them over for dinner at Darcy house. Darcy in his own surroundings is at ease and is attracted to Elizabeth physically and intellectually. Thus they both make a good impression on the other before they both go to Hertforshire. It sounds like an easy course to courtship but Darcy is still to meet the Bennets, Wickham still causes trouble and of course lady Catherine still wants to have her say.
August 27, 2015
I liked how this started. He had time to watch her, and not say certain things. Oh Darcy, I may love you, but you are an ass Sir.
Anyway they meet in a park. He never went with Bingley. They like each other. They meet again. Wickham does show up. But meeting at another place makes such a difference for many things.
A short novella that actually made me like Darcy more. That goes for Lizzy too when I think of it. They were not so proud and prejudiced ;)
But it did make me dislike her mother more, oh that woman.
And then they lived happily ever after.
Anyway they meet in a park. He never went with Bingley. They like each other. They meet again. Wickham does show up. But meeting at another place makes such a difference for many things.
A short novella that actually made me like Darcy more. That goes for Lizzy too when I think of it. They were not so proud and prejudiced ;)
But it did make me dislike her mother more, oh that woman.
And then they lived happily ever after.
July 3, 2022
Very sweet
A romantic and entertaining tale that keeps most of the angst low but that still allows for romance and very endearing moments. Highly recommended!
A romantic and entertaining tale that keeps most of the angst low but that still allows for romance and very endearing moments. Highly recommended!
January 22, 2015
I wish I could praise and recommend this book, and I read it with an intention of doing so. I’m sorry to say it was not at all to my taste—which is not to say that it wouldn’t appeal to someone else!
Though I’ve read a lot of Jane Austen fan fiction of one kind or another, this was the first “Pride and Prejudice variation” novel I have read, in which scenes and characters from the original are altered to suit the writer. I think that approach to JAFF is simply not for me; I prefer works that stay within the parameters of the original story and shed fresh light on it.
The Gentleman’s Impertinent Daughter is a short novella. That form is not perhaps well suited to the telling of the entire arc of a romance, especially when it is linked to the more expansive work of a Jane Austen. The scenes were many and felt rushed. They unfolded mostly as a series of conversations (and some of the dialogue was quite good, well written and entertaining), but between those scenes, the development of the characters was mostly reported to us, not shown through action or illuminated from within a character’s mind. The plot line felt somewhat arbitrary to me, following the wishes of the author more than the dictates of the characters’ personalities. Also, the point of view slewed back and forth among Elizabeth and Darcy and an omniscient narrator, resulting in a loss of suspense—there was no mystery about what motivated any of the characters.
Unlike some other readers, I have to confess that I was not impressed with the quality of the research or the use of Regency-era language. I would have enjoyed it more had it been set in another place and time, where the characters would have been freer to speak frankly on short acquaintance, to speak baldly to and about their elders, and so on, without violating (my understanding of) Regency manners and mores. Another JAFF novel I read this year, Haunting Mr. Darcy, also misused Regency language and manners to a degree, but I gave it more of a pass: the freedoms were excusable because they were happening in an Otherworld, while Elizabeth was unconscious and the rules of polite society were suspended. Simply labeling the heroine “impertinent” did not seem to me a sufficient justification for her words and actions, and the misbehavior of antagonist characters such as Wickham and Mrs. Bennet was overdrawn.
I am sorry to be so negative and wish that I had more positive comments to offer.
Though I’ve read a lot of Jane Austen fan fiction of one kind or another, this was the first “Pride and Prejudice variation” novel I have read, in which scenes and characters from the original are altered to suit the writer. I think that approach to JAFF is simply not for me; I prefer works that stay within the parameters of the original story and shed fresh light on it.
The Gentleman’s Impertinent Daughter is a short novella. That form is not perhaps well suited to the telling of the entire arc of a romance, especially when it is linked to the more expansive work of a Jane Austen. The scenes were many and felt rushed. They unfolded mostly as a series of conversations (and some of the dialogue was quite good, well written and entertaining), but between those scenes, the development of the characters was mostly reported to us, not shown through action or illuminated from within a character’s mind. The plot line felt somewhat arbitrary to me, following the wishes of the author more than the dictates of the characters’ personalities. Also, the point of view slewed back and forth among Elizabeth and Darcy and an omniscient narrator, resulting in a loss of suspense—there was no mystery about what motivated any of the characters.
Unlike some other readers, I have to confess that I was not impressed with the quality of the research or the use of Regency-era language. I would have enjoyed it more had it been set in another place and time, where the characters would have been freer to speak frankly on short acquaintance, to speak baldly to and about their elders, and so on, without violating (my understanding of) Regency manners and mores. Another JAFF novel I read this year, Haunting Mr. Darcy, also misused Regency language and manners to a degree, but I gave it more of a pass: the freedoms were excusable because they were happening in an Otherworld, while Elizabeth was unconscious and the rules of polite society were suspended. Simply labeling the heroine “impertinent” did not seem to me a sufficient justification for her words and actions, and the misbehavior of antagonist characters such as Wickham and Mrs. Bennet was overdrawn.
I am sorry to be so negative and wish that I had more positive comments to offer.
February 13, 2016
Not enough impertinence
Was a cute sweet short story. This author likes to make the best out of our beloved characters. So much so that there really is no angst and all problems are easily resolved. There is a little misunderstanding but again the characters reason it out and come to the correct conclusions. I personally like to see some more conflict and angst and that is why I gave only 3 stars.
Was a cute sweet short story. This author likes to make the best out of our beloved characters. So much so that there really is no angst and all problems are easily resolved. There is a little misunderstanding but again the characters reason it out and come to the correct conclusions. I personally like to see some more conflict and angst and that is why I gave only 3 stars.
September 7, 2014
Quick, light, fun.
Light work, starts off with a simple twist on how Elizabeth and Darcy meet. Could have turned sappy and trite but author does a good job moving the story along with just enough tension to keep a true P&P fan's interest.
Light work, starts off with a simple twist on how Elizabeth and Darcy meet. Could have turned sappy and trite but author does a good job moving the story along with just enough tension to keep a true P&P fan's interest.
October 27, 2023
Good book
I liked the story and I like it when the villains, Caroline and Wickham get their comeuppance. Loved Darcy and lizzys love story. Would have liked to had an epilogue a few hears I. The future!
I liked the story and I like it when the villains, Caroline and Wickham get their comeuppance. Loved Darcy and lizzys love story. Would have liked to had an epilogue a few hears I. The future!
January 17, 2015
Very sweet and romantic. A what-if that shows the results of D and E meeting in London rather than Meryton -- with very different results.
April 10, 2022
Apparently not only doin own this book and read it before - I have no clue when I bought it or when I read it. I’m going to guess that I got this for free and back before I started using Goodreads - so maybe 2018. I gave it 4 stars at that time and upon reread I’m knocking it down to 3. Not this this isn’t a good book but it’s more of a medium read for me. There is ZERO angst in this non-canon story but a bit too sweet and floofy for me now.
March 22, 2024
2.5-stars rounded up
June 24, 2020
In this Pride and Prejudice variation, Darcy overhears all the key points about Elizabeth and her opinions - her family, the entail, etc. In short he learns everything that in canon, it takes until the Hunsford proposal to know. He also is introduced to her via Georgiana due to a chance interaction at Hyde Park with her Aunt Gardiner. With all this knowledge, their interaction in Meryton is a bit different as he can't stop thinking about her.
August 15, 2014
A short story variation of Pride and Prejudice, occurring after Elizabeth has refused Mr. Collins and is visiting the Gardiners in London.
The Darcys are strolling in Hyde Park where they encounter Elizabeth and the Gardiners, and Georgiana quickly gets to talk to them. They each make a good impression on each other but they have yet to meet each others families.
The Darcys are strolling in Hyde Park where they encounter Elizabeth and the Gardiners, and Georgiana quickly gets to talk to them. They each make a good impression on each other but they have yet to meet each others families.
September 2, 2014
Great short story. Fun, and enjoyable read.
August 12, 2015
Short, sweet and just lovely. This variation has Elizabeth and Darcy first meeting in London when Elizabeth is staying with the Gardiners. Very enjoyable, indeed.
August 6, 2020
Easy breezy
This is one of those short tales in which Darcy is not like Darcy at all. Our usual Mr Darcy is stern, quiet, and overly cautious. In this version, he is easily bowled over by a pretty face and a musical laugh. The story begins in Hyde Park in London, where Darcy is walking with Georgiana, and Elizabeth is with her Aunt Gardiner and her young cousins. Georgiana returns a ball to the youngest Gardiner child and strikes up a conversation with him, leading to introductions all around. Darcy is immediately enchanted by Elizabeth's joy, wit, kindness, and her powers of debate. He's a lost man.
Bingley is already at Netherfield Park, and Charlotte is already married to Mr Collins, so those issues are finished before Darcy and Elizabeth meet. Elizabeth accompanies Darcy and Georgiana to Hertfordshire, and Darcy attends the Meryton assembly already resolved to make a good impression on the citizens of Meryton, as Elizabeth has recommended he do so. This is where Wickham enters the plot, and along with Caroline Bingley, seriously messes up all of Darcy's plans.
This is a short story, so there isn't much time for any profound plot development. There is some minor heartbreak, but all issues are quickly and neatly swept away. If you're looking for a romantic confection, this is a pleasant way to pass a couple of hours. The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it for something light.
This is one of those short tales in which Darcy is not like Darcy at all. Our usual Mr Darcy is stern, quiet, and overly cautious. In this version, he is easily bowled over by a pretty face and a musical laugh. The story begins in Hyde Park in London, where Darcy is walking with Georgiana, and Elizabeth is with her Aunt Gardiner and her young cousins. Georgiana returns a ball to the youngest Gardiner child and strikes up a conversation with him, leading to introductions all around. Darcy is immediately enchanted by Elizabeth's joy, wit, kindness, and her powers of debate. He's a lost man.
Bingley is already at Netherfield Park, and Charlotte is already married to Mr Collins, so those issues are finished before Darcy and Elizabeth meet. Elizabeth accompanies Darcy and Georgiana to Hertfordshire, and Darcy attends the Meryton assembly already resolved to make a good impression on the citizens of Meryton, as Elizabeth has recommended he do so. This is where Wickham enters the plot, and along with Caroline Bingley, seriously messes up all of Darcy's plans.
This is a short story, so there isn't much time for any profound plot development. There is some minor heartbreak, but all issues are quickly and neatly swept away. If you're looking for a romantic confection, this is a pleasant way to pass a couple of hours. The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it for something light.
August 31, 2022
3.5 stars rounded up to 4 stars
This is a novella so events are not dragged out and the romance is a shortened version.
Bingley has already leased Netherfield and met Jane. Darcy does not interfere in that romance. He is in London along with Georgiana who is recovering from the Ramsgate debacle. While walking in Hyde Park he observes Elizabeth interacting with her younger cousin, Michael, whirling him around, ignoring that her dress is becoming mud stained, etc. Darcy is enchanted and interacts with Michael, Elizabeth and Mrs. Gardiner. Soon the two parties have arranged not only to dine together but also that Elizabeth will travel with Darcy, Georgiana and Mrs. Annesley to Herefordshire.
Elizabeth and Darcy are falling in love but, as in canon, there are some reservations: can he court a women with such a family and no connections? Darcy & Elizabeth have some interesting discussions as to what truly matters in a character. Wickham, Caroline and Lady Catherine add to the doubts Elizabeth has that Darcy could ever attach himself to her. And, again, Lydia adds a problem to the formula.
This was a short sweet variation, which I enjoyed.
This is a novella so events are not dragged out and the romance is a shortened version.
Bingley has already leased Netherfield and met Jane. Darcy does not interfere in that romance. He is in London along with Georgiana who is recovering from the Ramsgate debacle. While walking in Hyde Park he observes Elizabeth interacting with her younger cousin, Michael, whirling him around, ignoring that her dress is becoming mud stained, etc. Darcy is enchanted and interacts with Michael, Elizabeth and Mrs. Gardiner. Soon the two parties have arranged not only to dine together but also that Elizabeth will travel with Darcy, Georgiana and Mrs. Annesley to Herefordshire.
Elizabeth and Darcy are falling in love but, as in canon, there are some reservations: can he court a women with such a family and no connections? Darcy & Elizabeth have some interesting discussions as to what truly matters in a character. Wickham, Caroline and Lady Catherine add to the doubts Elizabeth has that Darcy could ever attach himself to her. And, again, Lydia adds a problem to the formula.
This was a short sweet variation, which I enjoyed.
April 8, 2019
The story is a simple alternate retelling of P&P with more that what's comfortable of straight quotes from the original, but reshaped in a completely different context and by different characters as well (which is quite awkward to read!).
The overall tone is light and one ponders if the ridiculously rushed and cartoonish characters are ment seriously in a romance story, of if it is secretly a farse...
The novella portrays a simplistic storyline, flat one dimensional characters, too typical dialogue (characters talk making huge effort to sound as their original counterparts all-the-time resulting in a strained unnatural reflection).
Happy ever after and not an unpleasant experience of reading, only of low quality, farsical and rushed -- too bad.
The overall tone is light and one ponders if the ridiculously rushed and cartoonish characters are ment seriously in a romance story, of if it is secretly a farse...
The novella portrays a simplistic storyline, flat one dimensional characters, too typical dialogue (characters talk making huge effort to sound as their original counterparts all-the-time resulting in a strained unnatural reflection).
Happy ever after and not an unpleasant experience of reading, only of low quality, farsical and rushed -- too bad.
March 15, 2024
This sweet, clean romance is a feel good variation of P&P. The romance bypasses the things in canon that are a hindrance to Darcy & Elizabeth's relationship by letting them meet in a completely different setting and Wickham only raising his ugly head later after Darcy has already established himself to be a good person. The conflict instead is due to misunderstanding each other's reaction to Wickham. A little communication could have resolved it much sooner but Lady C. does her thing which allows Darcy to understand Elizabeth better.
The story is short so it works well to get a Darcy fix when one only has a limited time to read.
No sex, language or violence
The story is short so it works well to get a Darcy fix when one only has a limited time to read.
No sex, language or violence
December 28, 2017
This was a really cute variation and I loved the beginning when they met.
April 23, 2020
Quick, short and fun read
An earlier meeting that leads to a quicker HEA. Author did a really good job using and integrating text from P&P.
An earlier meeting that leads to a quicker HEA. Author did a really good job using and integrating text from P&P.
September 7, 2025
The story is a bit rushed in places, perhaps, but I enjoy it very much. Being fairly short, I've reread it several times and am always happy when finished.
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