4.75 🌟
holy shit how i loved this! this was the perfect friends to lovers slow burn. 🧡
i love a grumpy girl and a golden boy and this satisfied my hunger for that. she was also the bull rider and he's a single dad. do i need to say more?
the way dakota went from seeing wyatt as her friend to the love interest developed gradually and perfectly. usually they're thinking about how attractive they are from the start but she really wasn't!!!! and she was a little mean to him but it was fine, i enjoy a gal with some spice 🔥🔥
wyatt, oh the golden retriever wyatt. what a doll. i love a cinnamon roll blondie boy. he was so sweet and so devastatingly in love with dakota. what a gem 😭 where can i order my own
their romance was a slower burn than id anticipated, but it worked wonderfully for the story. and once it burned, it went up in flames!!! goddamn the mouth on that wyatt had me giggling and blushing like a fangirl🙂↕️🙂↕️
of course we've got a healthy dose of a small town romance, wyatt's amazing mothers, dakota's loving father (daddy issues are screaming rn), and some ex conflict. but it cleaned up so nicely. also the way dakota fell soooo hard for wyatt's daughter is sooo sweet.
the only reason(s) this isn't a 5 star read is because around the 50-60% mark, it got a litttle repetitive, and while i understand the effect of the slow burn, i don't like when books tend to go in circles, with wyatt trying to get her to see him as more than a friend, etc. there were also some sentences that needed shaping up in terms of structure, but hopefully the finished product will have touched on that. there was this part where dakota wasn't even present or mentioned in the conversation and wyatt's train of thought went right to her, but it just didn't even fit. it seemed like a paragraph that should've just been deleted. their internal monologue is also only about each other after a while and i hate when a book deviates like that, hence the rating and the repetitiveness.
furthermore, wyatt's daughters name wasn't vienna in the previous book (haven't read it) and they switched it because of the song? i guess im just tired of seeing that song everywhere.... it felt like it was added for brownie points and not for authenticity. not to mention the 1 tiktok song that was mentioned in this book like please stop
i wish that their past had been expanded on more thoroughly. apparently she saved his life by pulling him out of a creek? and they spent summers together but other years apart? i have a bad memory but i don't remember why they were always apart, and wish we'd gotten some more backstory. again, their inner monologue mostly focused on thinking about each other, so we don't get a whole lot of actual plot once the ball gets rollin. i also thought it was his mom's flower farm in texas and then by the end of the book im learning the moms don't even live in texas??? so where the hell are they???
those are small gripes i had and were easy to look past, so that's why i still rated this so highly. thank you so much to the author and lovenotes for the arc!!💘
tropes:
- single daddy
- bullrider girl
- reverse grumpy x sunshine
- (slow dancing in the kitchen)
- small town
- obsessed mmc
- he's younger by 2 years
- friends to lovers