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Follow The Drum: A Pride & Prejudice Variation
The British kingdom harbours a perilous secret. At its heart is Thomas Bennet.
Since dead men tell no tales, the patriarch of Longbourn must live in anonymity or face the unthinkable—being the cause of a foreign nation attacking his homeland. Skilled in deception and strategy, Bennet succeeded until his youngest daughter is born with a grievous affliction; the scrutiny she brings threatens to expose the very secrets he hides.
Mary Bennet, marked by her unusual appearance, becomes the centre of fear and gossip. As society and even her own family grow wary of her, Mary must confront her isolation with quiet resilience. Unaware of her father’s burden, she is thrust into a world of suspicion, where she discovers her role is not as insignificant as it once seemed.
Elizabeth Bennet faces her own trials as the family fractures under the weight of secrecy. Forced from Longbourn, drawn to the enigmatic Mr Darcy, Elizabeth must reconcile her blossoming feelings for him with the unsettling truths she uncovers. As Darcy’s past and his connection to her father come to light, Elizabeth is left questioning whom she can truly trust.
Follow the Drum is a gripping tale of sacrifice, loyalty, and impossible choices. When the fate of a kingdom rests on the secrets of one man, how far will he go to protect his family—and how high will the cost be?
Since dead men tell no tales, the patriarch of Longbourn must live in anonymity or face the unthinkable—being the cause of a foreign nation attacking his homeland. Skilled in deception and strategy, Bennet succeeded until his youngest daughter is born with a grievous affliction; the scrutiny she brings threatens to expose the very secrets he hides.
Mary Bennet, marked by her unusual appearance, becomes the centre of fear and gossip. As society and even her own family grow wary of her, Mary must confront her isolation with quiet resilience. Unaware of her father’s burden, she is thrust into a world of suspicion, where she discovers her role is not as insignificant as it once seemed.
Elizabeth Bennet faces her own trials as the family fractures under the weight of secrecy. Forced from Longbourn, drawn to the enigmatic Mr Darcy, Elizabeth must reconcile her blossoming feelings for him with the unsettling truths she uncovers. As Darcy’s past and his connection to her father come to light, Elizabeth is left questioning whom she can truly trust.
Follow the Drum is a gripping tale of sacrifice, loyalty, and impossible choices. When the fate of a kingdom rests on the secrets of one man, how far will he go to protect his family—and how high will the cost be?
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Published March 27, 2025
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Barry S. Richman
4 books45 followersBarry S. Richman is a military veteran whose work explores character, restraint, and moral consequence within the Regency world of Jane Austen. His lifelong engagement with Pride and Prejudice began unexpectedly in 2003, while recuperating at home after a routine medical procedure. What began as a single rereading soon became a sustained immersion; he has yet to put Austen’s world down.
Over the next two decades, Richman read thousands of Pride and Prejudice variations, developing a deep familiarity with the canon and its many interpretive traditions. His wife—whom he fondly calls his own “Jane Bennet”—watched him finish novels at a remarkable pace and eventually suggested that he write one himself. For years, he dismissed the idea, citing time, work, and responsibility. Circumstances, however, had other plans.
During the upheaval of the COVID pandemic, Richman and his wife made a decisive change in direction, restructuring their lives and long-term plans. The period proved formative, sharpening his focus on endurance, adaptation, and the quiet consequences of disruption—concerns that would come to shape his work.
Writing became both discipline and refuge. Richman began asking the questions that had long preoccupied him as a reader: What if the canon bent differently? What happens before the moment Austen shows us? What is owed, and what is endured, in silence?
From those questions emerged a sustained engagement with Austen’s world, approached not as pastiche but as serious historical and moral inquiry. Richman’s work focuses on what precedes the familiar moments of the canon, and on the private reckonings that shape character long before they are seen.
Barry S. Richman divides his time between his beloved abla’s home in Florida and his retirement home in southwestern Turkey, with his wife of more than thirty years. Together, they continue to build a life shaped by curiosity, movement, and the enduring power of Austen’s world.
Over the next two decades, Richman read thousands of Pride and Prejudice variations, developing a deep familiarity with the canon and its many interpretive traditions. His wife—whom he fondly calls his own “Jane Bennet”—watched him finish novels at a remarkable pace and eventually suggested that he write one himself. For years, he dismissed the idea, citing time, work, and responsibility. Circumstances, however, had other plans.
During the upheaval of the COVID pandemic, Richman and his wife made a decisive change in direction, restructuring their lives and long-term plans. The period proved formative, sharpening his focus on endurance, adaptation, and the quiet consequences of disruption—concerns that would come to shape his work.
Writing became both discipline and refuge. Richman began asking the questions that had long preoccupied him as a reader: What if the canon bent differently? What happens before the moment Austen shows us? What is owed, and what is endured, in silence?
From those questions emerged a sustained engagement with Austen’s world, approached not as pastiche but as serious historical and moral inquiry. Richman’s work focuses on what precedes the familiar moments of the canon, and on the private reckonings that shape character long before they are seen.
Barry S. Richman divides his time between his beloved abla’s home in Florida and his retirement home in southwestern Turkey, with his wife of more than thirty years. Together, they continue to build a life shaped by curiosity, movement, and the enduring power of Austen’s world.
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November 22, 2025
Secrets, Sacrifice, and a Really Mean Jane
Follow the Drum is the third novel by Barry S. Richman and once again features Captain Thomas Bennet, a central character in the author’s two previous books, but with a brand-new plot. Having completed a difficult and secret mission, he is quietly shielded and allowed to settle into life with his new wife, Franny—think government protection program. Together, they have three daughters—Jane, Elizabeth, and Mary. Over the course of twenty-five years, Bennet’s duty will come at a cost, straining his family while he wrestles with a past that won’t let go, creating mystery and unease.
Mary, born with albinism, is unjustly feared and distrusted by neighbours and shopkeepers, who whisper that she is cursed—or worse. Jane seems kind at first, but resentment festers, and her behaviour toward Mary turns shockingly cruel. Elizabeth, active, lively, and clever, is steadfast in her devotion to Mary, even as the growing hostility from others reaches a breaking point and results in a tragedy. When Bennet makes a drastic decision, it changes the course of all their lives.
Elizabeth, deeply wounded by Jane’s betrayal and devastated by her father’s choices, carries that resentment into her first meeting with Darcy after she and Bennet relocate to Derbyshire. Their romance is just a small, sweet, understated piece of the book, in my view—this isn’t primarily a Darcy and Elizabeth story.
While the plot is entirely new, readers of Richman will note the repeated roles of some long-standing Bennet protectors, as well as familiar faces from the Fitzwilliam and Darcy families. A mastiff named Hector, drawn to Mary, becomes another protector. Elizabeth’s devotion to Mary never wavers, even though they are miles apart for a time, while Jane’s complete lack of loyalty is striking. ‘Mean Jane’ trope lovers will give this portrayal a nod.
Bennet remains bound by duty and secrets he refuses to share throughout the book, causing a fracture between him and his daughters. Meanwhile, Jane’s absence is barely felt until shocking news suddenly propels her back to the reader’s attention.
I must say that I craved a little more insight into a stunning and heinous act committed by Jane and Miss Bingley, which occurs off-page. I wished for more information on what pushed them to go so far and how they did it. Similarly, Bennet’s silence gnawed at me. I kept wishing he would give Elizabeth and Mary more of him—some piece of why he stayed so closed off. Readers know, but they don’t. I liked him, and he wasn’t a bad man or father in my opinion, but he lost their respect, and that tugged at me. I do understand the ‘sacrifice for country’ part of the story, but still, I wanted a truly happy ending for him too—I’m sentimental like that. So… these gaps left me wanting just a little, but they didn’t take away from my overall enjoyment of the book. It’s another great read from a standout JAFF author.
For me, Richman’s writing always presents a suspenseful plot and sub-plots, twists that jolt me, and characters that draw me in so I feel their joys and pains. In Follow the Drum, he balances prejudice and isolation with strength and belonging—rejection and fear with connection and courage. I loved it and wholeheartedly recommend it.
As with Richman’s previous novels, due to scenes of a violent nature that may be disturbing to some readers, I have rated this a mature read.
I received an advance copy of this book from the author and am voluntarily leaving my review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library.
Audiobook - November 6-7, 2025
Samuel James is an outstanding audio performer. He gives the narration a live feel, as he truly acts out each role, giving each character their own personal portrayal. You can feel hi. exude every emotion the character experiences. I can’t praise him enough. Bravo. Absolutely recommend this audiobook. And the story told is so unique. So glad to have this on audio—it will definitely be a re-listen.
Follow the Drum is the third novel by Barry S. Richman and once again features Captain Thomas Bennet, a central character in the author’s two previous books, but with a brand-new plot. Having completed a difficult and secret mission, he is quietly shielded and allowed to settle into life with his new wife, Franny—think government protection program. Together, they have three daughters—Jane, Elizabeth, and Mary. Over the course of twenty-five years, Bennet’s duty will come at a cost, straining his family while he wrestles with a past that won’t let go, creating mystery and unease.
Mary, born with albinism, is unjustly feared and distrusted by neighbours and shopkeepers, who whisper that she is cursed—or worse. Jane seems kind at first, but resentment festers, and her behaviour toward Mary turns shockingly cruel. Elizabeth, active, lively, and clever, is steadfast in her devotion to Mary, even as the growing hostility from others reaches a breaking point and results in a tragedy. When Bennet makes a drastic decision, it changes the course of all their lives.
Elizabeth, deeply wounded by Jane’s betrayal and devastated by her father’s choices, carries that resentment into her first meeting with Darcy after she and Bennet relocate to Derbyshire. Their romance is just a small, sweet, understated piece of the book, in my view—this isn’t primarily a Darcy and Elizabeth story.
While the plot is entirely new, readers of Richman will note the repeated roles of some long-standing Bennet protectors, as well as familiar faces from the Fitzwilliam and Darcy families. A mastiff named Hector, drawn to Mary, becomes another protector. Elizabeth’s devotion to Mary never wavers, even though they are miles apart for a time, while Jane’s complete lack of loyalty is striking. ‘Mean Jane’ trope lovers will give this portrayal a nod.
Bennet remains bound by duty and secrets he refuses to share throughout the book, causing a fracture between him and his daughters. Meanwhile, Jane’s absence is barely felt until shocking news suddenly propels her back to the reader’s attention.
I must say that I craved a little more insight into a stunning and heinous act committed by Jane and Miss Bingley, which occurs off-page. I wished for more information on what pushed them to go so far and how they did it. Similarly, Bennet’s silence gnawed at me. I kept wishing he would give Elizabeth and Mary more of him—some piece of why he stayed so closed off. Readers know, but they don’t. I liked him, and he wasn’t a bad man or father in my opinion, but he lost their respect, and that tugged at me. I do understand the ‘sacrifice for country’ part of the story, but still, I wanted a truly happy ending for him too—I’m sentimental like that. So… these gaps left me wanting just a little, but they didn’t take away from my overall enjoyment of the book. It’s another great read from a standout JAFF author.
For me, Richman’s writing always presents a suspenseful plot and sub-plots, twists that jolt me, and characters that draw me in so I feel their joys and pains. In Follow the Drum, he balances prejudice and isolation with strength and belonging—rejection and fear with connection and courage. I loved it and wholeheartedly recommend it.
As with Richman’s previous novels, due to scenes of a violent nature that may be disturbing to some readers, I have rated this a mature read.
I received an advance copy of this book from the author and am voluntarily leaving my review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library.
Audiobook - November 6-7, 2025
Samuel James is an outstanding audio performer. He gives the narration a live feel, as he truly acts out each role, giving each character their own personal portrayal. You can feel hi. exude every emotion the character experiences. I can’t praise him enough. Bravo. Absolutely recommend this audiobook. And the story told is so unique. So glad to have this on audio—it will definitely be a re-listen.
June 3, 2025
4.5 stars rounded up to 5 stars.
This book if full of intrigue and I admit that at times I had difficulty remembering just who is who.
Bennet has served his country well and is then knighted and given the estate of Longbourne and another estate in Derbyshire as a reward but also as a way of protecting him from those seeking revenge for his actions for England.
He marries Frannie Gardiner and they have 5 girls BUT three don't survive birth. Jane, Elizabeth and Mary are not the loving and close sisters of canon. Mary, born with albinism, is labeled as a witch due to that appearance. I did like her development in this story into a highly skilled nurse who also serves her country well. She and Colonel Fitzwilliam take up a large part of the story.
I did not at all like Jane and I would have liked more about her and Caroline Bingley's fate at the end.
Elizabeth and Mary have a very close relationship but are separated as Mr. Bennet directs the lives of his daughters.
There is much intrigue and we read much about the protections set in place, secretly, to protect Bennet. Here we read of tortures and killings. I particularly liked the role of Hector, although he got little page space.
I have read several other of this author's stories and rated them highly. I highly recommend his stories. (Although this was not a quick read for me.)
This book if full of intrigue and I admit that at times I had difficulty remembering just who is who.
Bennet has served his country well and is then knighted and given the estate of Longbourne and another estate in Derbyshire as a reward but also as a way of protecting him from those seeking revenge for his actions for England.
He marries Frannie Gardiner and they have 5 girls BUT three don't survive birth. Jane, Elizabeth and Mary are not the loving and close sisters of canon. Mary, born with albinism, is labeled as a witch due to that appearance. I did like her development in this story into a highly skilled nurse who also serves her country well. She and Colonel Fitzwilliam take up a large part of the story.
I did not at all like Jane and I would have liked more about her and Caroline Bingley's fate at the end.
Elizabeth and Mary have a very close relationship but are separated as Mr. Bennet directs the lives of his daughters.
There is much intrigue and we read much about the protections set in place, secretly, to protect Bennet. Here we read of tortures and killings. I particularly liked the role of Hector, although he got little page space.
I have read several other of this author's stories and rated them highly. I highly recommend his stories. (Although this was not a quick read for me.)
April 2, 2025
My Rating: 4.5* rounded up to 5*
Political intrigue. A clandestine mission. A country’s secret. Revenge and securing a family’s safety.
Mr. Richman’s debut novel, ‘Doubt Not, Cousin’ is a favourite of mine. With his latest rendering, ‘Follow the Drum’, we are given a new outside-the-box variation that takes these characters along a different path. One of intrigue, secrets and protecting a knight of the realm and his family. I ordered the paperback the day it came out! I had to own it!
“Bennet’s sense of duty runs deep – he’s one of those rare officers well-suited to shoulder burdens alone.” (quote from the book)
The story begins with a death of a sailor and what had caused this action. Captain Thomas Bennet is tasked with a clandestine mission. One he was well capable of completing. He is named Knight Companion of the Order of the Bath upon his return... Sir Thomas Bennet. However, the consequences of the mission will have repercussions on him and his family for many years to come.
“Do nothing to attract attention. You are a gentleman farmer. You are Mr. Thomas Bennet. Nothing more.” (quote from the book)
For his service and protection, Mr. Thomas Bennet is given the estate Longbourn in Hertfordshire with protectors working within the estate and in Meryton. Life begins idyllically, marriage to Francine Gardiner, two lovely daughters with another child on the way, and a prosperous estate. But as he dreams of his next child being a son, those dreams are shattered by the birth of another daughter, Mary, that causes the midwife and maid to spread vicious tales…’devil’s child’. Life becomes a challenge of protecting the family but especially Mary.
“Welcome to the tangled web that is the family named Bennet.” (quote from the book)
This is very much a story of Mr. Bennet and his family and what he and the powers that be do to protect them. It is a multi-faceted story showing both the political manoeuverings behind the scenes and those who want to gain access to the First Circles as well as a man bent on revenge. It is a story of a father not willing to share the burden of his deeds…”May my sins not be visited upon my children.” It is also a story about sisters, the dynamics that shape them as well as the experiences they each must face…some more than others.
I was thoroughly engrossed in this novel. Don’t expect light and fluffy – it is far from that. It is about the machinations of governments; it is about war and the violence that comes from it.
“His name was Hector. He taught me that trust can survive the darkest deeds.” (quote from the book)
My emotions were engaged. There is humour and tears for I choked up several times. Elizabeth and Darcy’s first encounter is quite memorable as was their next. Their story is in here but not as contentious. Mary, for me, is the star that shines in this story. Her journey was the hardest…”We all face our storms. What matters is how we weather them.” But it was also the most fulfilling.
However, I did have a few frustrations…Jane Bennet in particular. Her storyline made sense up to a point. The place it fell apart for me was the end. It is a shocker and one that I could not push the boundaries of my imagination to go to. I would have preferred a set down of epic of proportions, but it was not to be. But this isn’t my story. There were other things about her story that didn’t sit well with me…follow through.
Overall, I loved the book. It is a journey of finding the strength to face prejudice and fear and forging a path of fulfillment. It is also about the lengths a parent will go to for their children.
I highly recommend it!
October 22, 2025
a very good story
The originality of the story is much fun. Richard Feynman, a great physicist,
has spoken of seeing math and physics in colors. Lizzy sees people in colors.
The story is very interesting and we see quite a bit of Darcy flailing around socially. Angst level is medium.
Georgiana’s story is quite sad, in a subtle kind of way. Worse it’s could really have happened.
Last but not least, the Wickham arc finishes vague enough that we can imagine any number of endings. We get to use our imaginations about his future. I choose dark. 😀
The originality of the story is much fun. Richard Feynman, a great physicist,
has spoken of seeing math and physics in colors. Lizzy sees people in colors.
The story is very interesting and we see quite a bit of Darcy flailing around socially. Angst level is medium.
Georgiana’s story is quite sad, in a subtle kind of way. Worse it’s could really have happened.
Last but not least, the Wickham arc finishes vague enough that we can imagine any number of endings. We get to use our imaginations about his future. I choose dark. 😀
April 13, 2025
3.5 rounded up to 4 stars
This is a compelling three-part story, all of which are contained in this single novel. Those seeking a traditional variation of Pride and Prejudice where just one or two changes affects the trajectory of events, however, will not find it here.
The first part of the book relates the story of Captain Thomas Bennet, a loyal, resourceful officer who fulfills his mission to the Crown brilliantly in 1781. He also is owed a deep debt of gratitude from the Earl of Matlock. In reward, he receives a knighthood and two estates. The secrets he carries require him to be well-protected and to live quietly out of the public eye, so he settles at Longbourn near Meryton, where he meets and marries Francine Gardiner. His title and powerful London connections are kept a secret even from his own family.
This becomes impossible when his third child, Mary, is born. She is unmistakably different from the norm. The family's more superstitious neighbors believe she is a witch or a demon and that the Bennet family must be in league with the devil. Mary grows into a sweet, empathic girl who has an amazing gift with animals. Unfortunately, tensions in the community and even within the family over her presence escalate to the point where Mr. Bennet (aka Sir Thomas) believes the only way to keep everyone safe is to separate them. Jane is happy to go live with the Gardiners, while Mary, over Elizabeth's heated objection, is to go to a place where she will be accepted despite her unusual appearance.
That's an overly simplified summary of all that happens before even reaching the book’s second section. Numerous storylines and points of view begin and develop, eventually converging at the end of the third book.
After the excellent build-up, I was disappointed with the end. It struck me as a poor plot choice that’s inconsistent with Sir Thomas’s supposed genius. I also didn’t understand his continued refusal to give his daughters answers, considering what his family has endured because of his secrets.
This action-filled book is nicely written and edited, and the characters are vivid. It does take an attentive reader to keep track of all the names, but it’s worth the effort. The main characters are prayerful people of faith, and the message against bigotry against those who look “different” comes through loud and clear. Be warned that there are scenes of extreme violence, bloodshed, and death both on the battlefield and off.
Also be aware that the “Pride and Prejudice” in the title is misleading. There’s little in the story that resembles it: Mr. and Mrs. Bennet have a respectful, loving relationship. Mr. Bennet is an attentive master of Longbourn rather than being indolent, and there’s no entail to disturb Mrs. Bennet’s nerves. There are only the three daughters (twin daughters die in childbirth), Mary’s character is considerably different from the original, and while Mrs. Bennet is overly effusive in praising the beauty of her eldest, she is a loving mother to them all. Jane is downright nasty. Mary's storyline eclipses Elizabeth's. Rather than romance, the story’s emphasis is on the war that enveloped most of Europe during this time. Darcy doesn’t even enter the book until more than halfway through. Yes, he insults Elizabeth within her hearing before meeting her-- which is about the only true similarity I noted-- but the assembly where this occurs is far from Meryton, and Elizabeth addresses the situation immediately rather than stewing over it.
Despite my reservations, it’s a wonderful story in every way right up to the misstep at the climax (which is still a thrilling scene). And perhaps these not very Pride and Prejudice-like characters should have different names.
Content is clean but bloody.
This is a compelling three-part story, all of which are contained in this single novel. Those seeking a traditional variation of Pride and Prejudice where just one or two changes affects the trajectory of events, however, will not find it here.
The first part of the book relates the story of Captain Thomas Bennet, a loyal, resourceful officer who fulfills his mission to the Crown brilliantly in 1781. He also is owed a deep debt of gratitude from the Earl of Matlock. In reward, he receives a knighthood and two estates. The secrets he carries require him to be well-protected and to live quietly out of the public eye, so he settles at Longbourn near Meryton, where he meets and marries Francine Gardiner. His title and powerful London connections are kept a secret even from his own family.
This becomes impossible when his third child, Mary, is born. She is unmistakably different from the norm. The family's more superstitious neighbors believe she is a witch or a demon and that the Bennet family must be in league with the devil. Mary grows into a sweet, empathic girl who has an amazing gift with animals. Unfortunately, tensions in the community and even within the family over her presence escalate to the point where Mr. Bennet (aka Sir Thomas) believes the only way to keep everyone safe is to separate them. Jane is happy to go live with the Gardiners, while Mary, over Elizabeth's heated objection, is to go to a place where she will be accepted despite her unusual appearance.
That's an overly simplified summary of all that happens before even reaching the book’s second section. Numerous storylines and points of view begin and develop, eventually converging at the end of the third book.
After the excellent build-up, I was disappointed with the end. It struck me as a poor plot choice that’s inconsistent with Sir Thomas’s supposed genius. I also didn’t understand his continued refusal to give his daughters answers, considering what his family has endured because of his secrets.
This action-filled book is nicely written and edited, and the characters are vivid. It does take an attentive reader to keep track of all the names, but it’s worth the effort. The main characters are prayerful people of faith, and the message against bigotry against those who look “different” comes through loud and clear. Be warned that there are scenes of extreme violence, bloodshed, and death both on the battlefield and off.
Also be aware that the “Pride and Prejudice” in the title is misleading. There’s little in the story that resembles it: Mr. and Mrs. Bennet have a respectful, loving relationship. Mr. Bennet is an attentive master of Longbourn rather than being indolent, and there’s no entail to disturb Mrs. Bennet’s nerves. There are only the three daughters (twin daughters die in childbirth), Mary’s character is considerably different from the original, and while Mrs. Bennet is overly effusive in praising the beauty of her eldest, she is a loving mother to them all. Jane is downright nasty. Mary's storyline eclipses Elizabeth's. Rather than romance, the story’s emphasis is on the war that enveloped most of Europe during this time. Darcy doesn’t even enter the book until more than halfway through. Yes, he insults Elizabeth within her hearing before meeting her-- which is about the only true similarity I noted-- but the assembly where this occurs is far from Meryton, and Elizabeth addresses the situation immediately rather than stewing over it.
Despite my reservations, it’s a wonderful story in every way right up to the misstep at the climax (which is still a thrilling scene). And perhaps these not very Pride and Prejudice-like characters should have different names.
Content is clean but bloody.
April 26, 2025
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: Mature: heed the warning. MATURE: It’s wartime, and there were descriptions of battles, death, injuries, and medical procedures. A mob scene created havoc, chaos, and the death of a character due to superstitious beliefs.
>>Angst Level: High, gripping, and nail-biting at times. Have oxygen on hand. I held my breath so long, I nearly passed out. I may have lost some brain cells. Whew! Breathe, just breathe.
>>Source: KU, I volunteered to leave a review. Prologue, plus 60 chapters, plus an epilogue. It was divided into three books. I will always read a book by this author; hands down.
>>Religious Element: it was the suspicious,, witch-hunt type of religious fanaticism. There were also prayers for strength and solace.
>>Trope:[1] NSN Jane [2] A very different Mary
Richman does not fool around with his stories. They are beyond canon and certainly outside the box. Many of his characters were featured in his previous books. I love seeing ‘the crew’ return as I am fond of them. I like the fact that Bennet is more than he seems. Everyone is more than they seem. The fate of the nation was riding on the shoulders of our characters. People would die keeping the secret of actions that happened years before. Revenge was a powerful motive that pushed this story forward. OMG! I held my breath through most of the book. It was that gripping, and ICNPID.
>>Rating: Mature: heed the warning. MATURE: It’s wartime, and there were descriptions of battles, death, injuries, and medical procedures. A mob scene created havoc, chaos, and the death of a character due to superstitious beliefs.
>>Angst Level: High, gripping, and nail-biting at times. Have oxygen on hand. I held my breath so long, I nearly passed out. I may have lost some brain cells. Whew! Breathe, just breathe.
>>Source: KU, I volunteered to leave a review. Prologue, plus 60 chapters, plus an epilogue. It was divided into three books. I will always read a book by this author; hands down.
>>Religious Element: it was the suspicious,, witch-hunt type of religious fanaticism. There were also prayers for strength and solace.
>>Trope:[1] NSN Jane [2] A very different Mary
Richman does not fool around with his stories. They are beyond canon and certainly outside the box. Many of his characters were featured in his previous books. I love seeing ‘the crew’ return as I am fond of them. I like the fact that Bennet is more than he seems. Everyone is more than they seem. The fate of the nation was riding on the shoulders of our characters. People would die keeping the secret of actions that happened years before. Revenge was a powerful motive that pushed this story forward. OMG! I held my breath through most of the book. It was that gripping, and ICNPID.
October 18, 2025
Duty vs. Love plagues the hero and a unique way of seeing the world can’t untangle the affairs of the heart for the heroine in a Pride and Prejudice variation touched with a hint of magical realism. Barry S Richman’s Colour My World is only my second entrée into his writing, but his first book had a profound impact on me so I was more than willing to delve into the latest.
Told in alternating narrative and beginning with the times long before the original P&P timeline, Colour My World introduces both main characters as children.
Fitzwilliam as a nine-year-old child learning important truths at his mother’s wise and tender-loving side while learning to become the worthy and dutiful heir to the vast Pemberley estate from his stern, duty-bound father. An incident occurs in his teen years when the sleezy steward’s son, George Wickham tries to insinuate himself with Darcy’s little sister Georgiana and Darcy gets knocked down trying to protect her and his big, soldier cousin Fitzwilliam has to step in and thrash Wickham. His father is disappointed in him which seems to be constant since Darcy’s mother passed away. Darcy is determined never to leave Georgiana unprotected again and to somehow gain his disdainful father’s approval.
Meanwhile, young Lizzy Bennet is a hoyden at times and barrels her horse at a fence only to have a severe fall with a blow to the head that causes her to suddenly see clouds of color around all the people in her life. Her father is the first to learn of her condition when her accident forces him to see how his neglect to family was partly to blame for Lizzy’s wild behavior that led to her fall. Her father takes an interest in family propriety and his daughters’ futures and this steadies them all so that later, Darcy can still have his shocking moment at the Assembly when he meets a woman of unusual appearance and the whole neighborhood thinks he is disgusted by her. He has a harder path to love as a result.
Colour My World takes away some of Austen’s original conflicts and inserts a new set of hurdles for Darcy and Lizzy to overcome. I was vested in the story from the outset feeling the ache for Darcy who desperately wanted his father’s love and approval and is a protector to his sister because his father blames her for his wife dying as a result of Georgiana’s birth even while he turns into his seeming cold, proud, duty-bound father when he tries to learn to run the estate at a young age and rear his sister as a parent. Encountering Elizabeth and seeing the fulfillment of his mother’s parting foresight about the woman he will love is the point at which he loses the stone around his heart.
At the same time, Elizabeth has relied on her condition to read and discern people for so long that encountering someone with no color aura throws her off her game. Darcy confuses her and forces her to evaluate her refusal to see past his first insult even though he apologized and demonstrated he was not intending to slight her.
I loved how Barry Richman wrote those lighthearted family banters to tweak Lizzy for her stubbornness and refusal to acknowledge her feelings. Refusing to acknowledge that even her aerie emotions reading tell her what is truly happening. In modern-day terms, Elizabeth Bennet is experiencing a version of condition known as Synesthesia. She sees emotions in color. It was fun to see this seem almost mystical in the story. Now, Darcy’s diary gifted by his mother is a magical device allowing her voice to reach him from beyond the grave- or is a really cunning valet behind all that? Darcy finds the timely advice given worth it either way.
All in all, this was magical and heartwarming, well developed in characters and relationships all around. Colour My World was a deeply satisfying read that I can recommend to others who want a sweet romance and love slipping back into Austen’s P&P world.
I rec'd an eARC via author's marketing assistant to read in exchange for an honest review.
My full review will post on my Instagram page @sophiarose1816 10.3.25
Told in alternating narrative and beginning with the times long before the original P&P timeline, Colour My World introduces both main characters as children.
Fitzwilliam as a nine-year-old child learning important truths at his mother’s wise and tender-loving side while learning to become the worthy and dutiful heir to the vast Pemberley estate from his stern, duty-bound father. An incident occurs in his teen years when the sleezy steward’s son, George Wickham tries to insinuate himself with Darcy’s little sister Georgiana and Darcy gets knocked down trying to protect her and his big, soldier cousin Fitzwilliam has to step in and thrash Wickham. His father is disappointed in him which seems to be constant since Darcy’s mother passed away. Darcy is determined never to leave Georgiana unprotected again and to somehow gain his disdainful father’s approval.
Meanwhile, young Lizzy Bennet is a hoyden at times and barrels her horse at a fence only to have a severe fall with a blow to the head that causes her to suddenly see clouds of color around all the people in her life. Her father is the first to learn of her condition when her accident forces him to see how his neglect to family was partly to blame for Lizzy’s wild behavior that led to her fall. Her father takes an interest in family propriety and his daughters’ futures and this steadies them all so that later, Darcy can still have his shocking moment at the Assembly when he meets a woman of unusual appearance and the whole neighborhood thinks he is disgusted by her. He has a harder path to love as a result.
Colour My World takes away some of Austen’s original conflicts and inserts a new set of hurdles for Darcy and Lizzy to overcome. I was vested in the story from the outset feeling the ache for Darcy who desperately wanted his father’s love and approval and is a protector to his sister because his father blames her for his wife dying as a result of Georgiana’s birth even while he turns into his seeming cold, proud, duty-bound father when he tries to learn to run the estate at a young age and rear his sister as a parent. Encountering Elizabeth and seeing the fulfillment of his mother’s parting foresight about the woman he will love is the point at which he loses the stone around his heart.
At the same time, Elizabeth has relied on her condition to read and discern people for so long that encountering someone with no color aura throws her off her game. Darcy confuses her and forces her to evaluate her refusal to see past his first insult even though he apologized and demonstrated he was not intending to slight her.
I loved how Barry Richman wrote those lighthearted family banters to tweak Lizzy for her stubbornness and refusal to acknowledge her feelings. Refusing to acknowledge that even her aerie emotions reading tell her what is truly happening. In modern-day terms, Elizabeth Bennet is experiencing a version of condition known as Synesthesia. She sees emotions in color. It was fun to see this seem almost mystical in the story. Now, Darcy’s diary gifted by his mother is a magical device allowing her voice to reach him from beyond the grave- or is a really cunning valet behind all that? Darcy finds the timely advice given worth it either way.
All in all, this was magical and heartwarming, well developed in characters and relationships all around. Colour My World was a deeply satisfying read that I can recommend to others who want a sweet romance and love slipping back into Austen’s P&P world.
I rec'd an eARC via author's marketing assistant to read in exchange for an honest review.
My full review will post on my Instagram page @sophiarose1816 10.3.25
March 25, 2025
Wonderfully refreshing and unlike any other Pride and Prejudice Variation!
I won’t outline the plot here but to say this was a completely original alternative universe variation and feels like we have gone back to the style that Barry so excellently began with Doubt Not Cousin. Bringing the male perspective to JAFF with his masterful caricatures of male roles weaved so cleverly throughout his stories. I rarely enjoy stories based on a non Darcy/Lizzy centric plot but this one just grabbed me from the beginning. The suspense and intrigue throughout kept my interest whilst the Bennet’s lived out their lives. I love getting so much of Mary’s perspective and more of the Colonel. The way they came together and understood each other’s unique struggles was really engaging and I enjoy the way Barry brings in the extraordinary and makes it key to the storyline. I will be re-reading this often and really hope there will be an audiobook because I think it would be brilliant if it was narrated and acted out.
I won’t outline the plot here but to say this was a completely original alternative universe variation and feels like we have gone back to the style that Barry so excellently began with Doubt Not Cousin. Bringing the male perspective to JAFF with his masterful caricatures of male roles weaved so cleverly throughout his stories. I rarely enjoy stories based on a non Darcy/Lizzy centric plot but this one just grabbed me from the beginning. The suspense and intrigue throughout kept my interest whilst the Bennet’s lived out their lives. I love getting so much of Mary’s perspective and more of the Colonel. The way they came together and understood each other’s unique struggles was really engaging and I enjoy the way Barry brings in the extraordinary and makes it key to the storyline. I will be re-reading this often and really hope there will be an audiobook because I think it would be brilliant if it was narrated and acted out.
October 3, 2025
Wonderful storytelling
Another unique P & P variation from Barry S Richman. Loved the back story of Darcys mother, ruthless Colonel & friends and the slow D&E burn. The authors writing style is lyrical and visual. As I read, scenes clearly played out in my mind, like a well edited film. Definitely 5 star for me.
Another unique P & P variation from Barry S Richman. Loved the back story of Darcys mother, ruthless Colonel & friends and the slow D&E burn. The authors writing style is lyrical and visual. As I read, scenes clearly played out in my mind, like a well edited film. Definitely 5 star for me.
November 10, 2025
Wonderful
After a horse throws her at fifteen, Elizabeth's world changes. One of her eyes is a different color, and she can suddenly see people's moods or intentions manifest as an aura of color around them, or as objects that suggest feelings. This event also alters Mr Bennett, in that he resolves to protect Elizabeth from people who perceive her as strange, and he decides to take charge of his unruly family. Meanwhile, before Darcy's mother dies, she secretly predicts to him some things about the woman he will one day marry. When he's older, he begins the search for the woman of his mother's premonition.
I like this author. His characters are always very forthright, and there's lots of melodrama. I particularly enjoy his treatment of Colonel Fitzwilliam in all of his books. The romance is lovely, and so is having the Bennett family rational and loving. I deducted a star mainly because of the scene later in the story when Lady Catherine arrives at Netherfield Park and rides roughshod over everyone, without any pushback from anyone. That silliness took me right out of an otherwise nice storyline. However, the book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly.
After a horse throws her at fifteen, Elizabeth's world changes. One of her eyes is a different color, and she can suddenly see people's moods or intentions manifest as an aura of color around them, or as objects that suggest feelings. This event also alters Mr Bennett, in that he resolves to protect Elizabeth from people who perceive her as strange, and he decides to take charge of his unruly family. Meanwhile, before Darcy's mother dies, she secretly predicts to him some things about the woman he will one day marry. When he's older, he begins the search for the woman of his mother's premonition.
I like this author. His characters are always very forthright, and there's lots of melodrama. I particularly enjoy his treatment of Colonel Fitzwilliam in all of his books. The romance is lovely, and so is having the Bennett family rational and loving. I deducted a star mainly because of the scene later in the story when Lady Catherine arrives at Netherfield Park and rides roughshod over everyone, without any pushback from anyone. That silliness took me right out of an otherwise nice storyline. However, the book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly.
October 13, 2025
How do you see people?
In this latest variation Barry S Richman takes us along as Elizabeth has a riding accident that changes how she can see the world and Darcy is subjected to emotional isolation after his mother passes.
Darcy focuses so hard on things that he ends up shutting off his family including his sister. Thankfully Col Fitzwilliam is there when needed to smack him and take care of a few problems (love Col F’s brothers in arms).
Elizabeth ends up relying so much on her changed perspective that she misses a few things, including what people tell her are obvious. Both Darcy and Elizabeth have some communication hurdles they have to overcome. There’s several things that Darcy did poorly and would have liked to see corrected publicly.
There were a couple of tiny quibbles that would have been nice to be tied up or expanded upon, thinking of Mr. Hurst and later Bingley. These are not significant to the story, but just peaked my curiosity on a couple of things. I have to say I loved the Bennet’s Governess!
Yep, I will definitely read this again.
In this latest variation Barry S Richman takes us along as Elizabeth has a riding accident that changes how she can see the world and Darcy is subjected to emotional isolation after his mother passes.
Darcy focuses so hard on things that he ends up shutting off his family including his sister. Thankfully Col Fitzwilliam is there when needed to smack him and take care of a few problems (love Col F’s brothers in arms).
Elizabeth ends up relying so much on her changed perspective that she misses a few things, including what people tell her are obvious. Both Darcy and Elizabeth have some communication hurdles they have to overcome. There’s several things that Darcy did poorly and would have liked to see corrected publicly.
There were a couple of tiny quibbles that would have been nice to be tied up or expanded upon, thinking of Mr. Hurst and later Bingley. These are not significant to the story, but just peaked my curiosity on a couple of things. I have to say I loved the Bennet’s Governess!
Yep, I will definitely read this again.
October 11, 2025
tries too hard
The author spent so much time and effort trying to make the dialogue profound that the story was almost an afterthought. Also, the author made Elizabeth incredibly annoying.
The author spent so much time and effort trying to make the dialogue profound that the story was almost an afterthought. Also, the author made Elizabeth incredibly annoying.
March 28, 2025
Moving
A gripping and emotional variation inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Barry S. Richman. It was a wonderful story and my only complaint is I want more. It was darker in tone and events than most stories in this genre but he just keeps getting better with each new story he writes. I can’t wait to see what he has in store for us in his next adventure.
A gripping and emotional variation inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Barry S. Richman. It was a wonderful story and my only complaint is I want more. It was darker in tone and events than most stories in this genre but he just keeps getting better with each new story he writes. I can’t wait to see what he has in store for us in his next adventure.
October 8, 2025
I wish I liked it better
The beginning of the story was engaging. I enjoyed reading what shaped Darcy and Elizabeth into the individuals they became. As always, I am grateful for Richman's character, Richard Fitzwilliam, from "Doubt Not, Cousin." I look for him in every story, and he certainly did not disappoint.
However, Darcy came across as socially awkward in Meryton. While the author is creative, I have to admit that I’m not a fan of the “silence” or “less is more” approach to interactions, as they don’t build chemistry. I often find myself wondering why a character wouldn't be put off by such behavior. For instance, there were many moments when characters would abruptly leave a room without saying a proper goodbye. I would consider that rude, but apparently, it's okay.
Overall, there are scenes that I loved, some that I liked, and others that I didn't care for or understand.
The beginning of the story was engaging. I enjoyed reading what shaped Darcy and Elizabeth into the individuals they became. As always, I am grateful for Richman's character, Richard Fitzwilliam, from "Doubt Not, Cousin." I look for him in every story, and he certainly did not disappoint.
However, Darcy came across as socially awkward in Meryton. While the author is creative, I have to admit that I’m not a fan of the “silence” or “less is more” approach to interactions, as they don’t build chemistry. I often find myself wondering why a character wouldn't be put off by such behavior. For instance, there were many moments when characters would abruptly leave a room without saying a proper goodbye. I would consider that rude, but apparently, it's okay.
Overall, there are scenes that I loved, some that I liked, and others that I didn't care for or understand.
October 9, 2025
Newly sprung in Meryton
4.5* rounded down
Reading a book from Mr. Richman reminds me of the fact that the love of Jane Austen is a truth universally known and encompasses all genders. There is no less romance or creativity, just a touch of je ne sais quoi that is the masculine touch. Once again, he writes a unique story that drew me in. With Darcy's foibles from after his mother's death to his arrival at the Meryton assembly, I found myself in Colonel Fitzwilliam's shoes regarding the desire to punch some sense into him. I acknowledge that reading about his experience led me to understand better his character and approach to life. I hope that the author does a second edition of this story where some typos and jumps in the narrative are addressed—I found Elizabeth's sudden change of attitude somewhat abrupt and uneven. Otherwise, this novel is another winner.
4.5* rounded down
Reading a book from Mr. Richman reminds me of the fact that the love of Jane Austen is a truth universally known and encompasses all genders. There is no less romance or creativity, just a touch of je ne sais quoi that is the masculine touch. Once again, he writes a unique story that drew me in. With Darcy's foibles from after his mother's death to his arrival at the Meryton assembly, I found myself in Colonel Fitzwilliam's shoes regarding the desire to punch some sense into him. I acknowledge that reading about his experience led me to understand better his character and approach to life. I hope that the author does a second edition of this story where some typos and jumps in the narrative are addressed—I found Elizabeth's sudden change of attitude somewhat abrupt and uneven. Otherwise, this novel is another winner.
March 28, 2025
Excellent
If you like intrigue, romance, and a thrilling spy story this will not disappoint. As unique a P&P story where the villain is evil, the heroes and heroine are wonderfully unusual. This is one I'll reread.
If you like intrigue, romance, and a thrilling spy story this will not disappoint. As unique a P&P story where the villain is evil, the heroes and heroine are wonderfully unusual. This is one I'll reread.
March 26, 2025
"I will always wonder if a certain healer is content to remain in one place or still feels the pull of duty—of making a difference—even in the violence of tempests.”
This story is SPECTACULAR.
It might be a Pride and Prejudice variation at its core, but it is a deep and detailed story of war, betrayal, family, and resilience. The familiar characters, setting, and relationships are reimagined, so while the reader may feel the pull of the familiar, this story is raw and gritty, which is sometimes missing in the world of JAFF. And although this begins as a Mr. Bennet story, it really becomes a sister story, with Elizabeth and Mary in very unexpected circumstances.
A Mary story often has a redemption arc where the author seeks to make her less pedantic and/or more beautiful. This Mary is the absolute star of this story, and she fights for every scrap of faith that she has while struggling to believe that it is God's plan for her to endure unspeakable terrors. It makes her feel relatable and authentic. She isn't really broken, but others absolutely see her that way. It is a long time before others see her worth, but what trauma this sweet girl must endure.
But the Bennet secret underscores the entirety of the book, and the reader must endure much violence, angst, and frustration to get to a satisfying ending. This also isn't a story that wraps in a pretty bow, but that continues to give it a more true-to-life feeling. I laughed, I cried, I gasped... this story will stick with me for a LONG time.
Fans of P&P or not, anyone can enjoy this incredible story. It has it all.
Trigger warning: descriptions of graphic violence
I received a complimentary copy of the author's story to read and review. All thoughts contained here are my own.
This story is SPECTACULAR.
It might be a Pride and Prejudice variation at its core, but it is a deep and detailed story of war, betrayal, family, and resilience. The familiar characters, setting, and relationships are reimagined, so while the reader may feel the pull of the familiar, this story is raw and gritty, which is sometimes missing in the world of JAFF. And although this begins as a Mr. Bennet story, it really becomes a sister story, with Elizabeth and Mary in very unexpected circumstances.
A Mary story often has a redemption arc where the author seeks to make her less pedantic and/or more beautiful. This Mary is the absolute star of this story, and she fights for every scrap of faith that she has while struggling to believe that it is God's plan for her to endure unspeakable terrors. It makes her feel relatable and authentic. She isn't really broken, but others absolutely see her that way. It is a long time before others see her worth, but what trauma this sweet girl must endure.
But the Bennet secret underscores the entirety of the book, and the reader must endure much violence, angst, and frustration to get to a satisfying ending. This also isn't a story that wraps in a pretty bow, but that continues to give it a more true-to-life feeling. I laughed, I cried, I gasped... this story will stick with me for a LONG time.
Fans of P&P or not, anyone can enjoy this incredible story. It has it all.
Trigger warning: descriptions of graphic violence
I received a complimentary copy of the author's story to read and review. All thoughts contained here are my own.
March 27, 2025
An Austenesque Mission Impossible!
A mesmerizing tale of power, corruption, war, innocence, superstition, ignorance, romance, good, and evil. This alternate universe follows an endangered Bennet family, with the father torn between his loyalty to his country and his family. Featured sisters are Jane, Lizzy and Mary, with very non-canon characterizations for Jane and Mary, who is born with physical “differences”. Several redefined characters from the author’s previous book “Doubt Not Cousin” appear and add to the story. The family is assisted by a “Mission Impossible” Team as they deal with intrigue, vile villains, intricate plots within plots, torture and the terrors of war, with moments of shocking violence.
Throughout the story, there is an underlying respect and admiration for the strength and intelligence of capable women, especially those who "follow the drum". In this variation, we see a multitude of women who " follow" individually and in groups, in many cases acting as the leading partners in their personal relationships. We also learn a great deal about the nursing support offered to soldiers of that time as those women who "followed the drum" performed with great courage and dedication in horrible conditions. A fascinating, well-researched tale that resonates with today’s power struggles! I received an ARC of this book and am voluntarily leaving my honest review.
A mesmerizing tale of power, corruption, war, innocence, superstition, ignorance, romance, good, and evil. This alternate universe follows an endangered Bennet family, with the father torn between his loyalty to his country and his family. Featured sisters are Jane, Lizzy and Mary, with very non-canon characterizations for Jane and Mary, who is born with physical “differences”. Several redefined characters from the author’s previous book “Doubt Not Cousin” appear and add to the story. The family is assisted by a “Mission Impossible” Team as they deal with intrigue, vile villains, intricate plots within plots, torture and the terrors of war, with moments of shocking violence.
Throughout the story, there is an underlying respect and admiration for the strength and intelligence of capable women, especially those who "follow the drum". In this variation, we see a multitude of women who " follow" individually and in groups, in many cases acting as the leading partners in their personal relationships. We also learn a great deal about the nursing support offered to soldiers of that time as those women who "followed the drum" performed with great courage and dedication in horrible conditions. A fascinating, well-researched tale that resonates with today’s power struggles! I received an ARC of this book and am voluntarily leaving my honest review.
May 12, 2025
I follow this author
4.5* rounded up
I found the novel to be a gripping story, a deliberation of the meanings of duty, faith, and love. Within those concepts, the various relationships reveal different layers. Darcy's famous adherence to duty and Elizabeth's pluck within the confines of society are contrasted to those qualities in Colonel Fitzwilliam and Mary in the wider realm of life and war. The canon relationship is not belittled, but the depth of the latter couple's struggles really highlights the differences. Mary's story is so touching; I thought her to be the true heroine in this tale.
4.5* rounded up
I found the novel to be a gripping story, a deliberation of the meanings of duty, faith, and love. Within those concepts, the various relationships reveal different layers. Darcy's famous adherence to duty and Elizabeth's pluck within the confines of society are contrasted to those qualities in Colonel Fitzwilliam and Mary in the wider realm of life and war. The canon relationship is not belittled, but the depth of the latter couple's struggles really highlights the differences. Mary's story is so touching; I thought her to be the true heroine in this tale.
March 27, 2025
B. Richman has woven an engaging tale of espionage and conspiracy utilizing some of the powerful characters of 'Doubt Not, Cousin' in new roles. Each primary character is fleshed out with dynamic personalities and storylines that are interwoven to create an tapestry of intrigue that keeps the reader on his toes tracking the drama to its conclusion. I had an advance copy and could not put it down until I had read it through - then read it again to savor the nuances. Highly recommend.
December 1, 2025
What is the price of duty?
“A gentleman’s first duty is to those he loves.” (quote from the book)
Step into the world of Mr. Richman’s books and you don’t want to leave. His distinctive style, pacing, and use of his original characters adds a further depth to his interpretation of Jane Austen’s beloved characters. New perspectives and challenges are the driving force, and one is given a unique variation that captures the imagination.
“Shadows flickered about their faces as they wove their tales, not outright deception, but something more insidious. Delight, not truth, nourished their tongues.” (quote from the book)
‘Colour my World’ deals with a rare condition dealt by trauma. Elizabeth Bennet is thrown from her horse, hitting her head. When she awakens, she sees ‘colour(s)’ around each member of the family and household. What she learns from observing her family and friends over the years is their ‘truth’. How does this accident impact Elizabeth and the Bennet family…especially Mr. Bennet? How does their trajectory deviate from canon? I will let you discover that on your own.
“Strength is not in never falling but in rising every time you do.” (quote from the book)
The book is written in Five Parts with a Prologue and Epilogue (Past/Present). I enjoyed this aspect as we get background on Darcy’s upbringing and how the death of his beloved mother impacts the entire Darcy family, as well as the ‘duty’ that is drilled into him from his father. We learn of a ‘special journal’ that he was given as child. The chapters on the past came across as journal entries, so it tied in nicely from that aspect. This Darcy is more stoic and taciturn than canon and more troubled. He has put himself through the ringer trying to prove to his worthiness. But it is with Georgiana that he has the most to lose. And let’s not forget his first reaction to Elizabeth in Hertfordshire! How does he dig himself out of that debacle?
“A fight is not merely a contest for victory, Cousin. Its conclusion must leave no room for a second.” (quote from the book)
And interspersed throughout the story, we have Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam and his team. The lessons he tries to impart to Darcy and the actions he takes. He is a favourite of mine, especially after Mr. Richman’s first book ‘Doubt Not, Cousin’. One of my all-time favourite books!
“It was her.” (quote from the book)
Both Elizabeth and Darcy have lessons to be learned. Both stumble and fall in their dance around each other. There are those around them that see more clearly and try to make them see what they struggle to admit. Lady Catherine does have her say but is soon trumped. Mr. Collins is nicely sidelined and Mr. Wickham…let’s just say he gets his just desserts!
I loved the book. Yes, I had a quibble or two about certain characters but not enough to remove any stars! There were so many wonderful quotes I would have liked to use in this review, but my review would never end! Now this novel will sit on my shelf next to all the others by Mr. Richman until I read it again!
I wonder what he will do with Lydia Bennet now that the other four sisters have had their own stories?
October 2, 2025
I am one of the fortunate ones who signed up for an arc read of Colour My World. Barry has done it again, finding a rare but plausible infliction and changing the whole dynamic of the Bennet characters. And around that dynamic for Elizabeth, has written for us an epic that will keep you wanting to read through the night. Another highly enjoyable read from an amazing author.
October 13, 2025
I am conflicted how to review this book on the one hand it was orginal and well written, on the other I found it vague and intuitive to read. It was redeemed for me by a satisfying epilogue.
March 28, 2025
Secret missions and the long-term consequences
If you’re looking for a sweet and clean Darcy & Elizabeth centered story this is NOT the one for you. For those concerned about Darcy & Elizabeth: yes, they do come together, so no worry there, and they do have a few canon moments, but not all of them in this alternate universe that Barry S. Richman created. Instead, you dive into Mr. Bennet’s life long before he married and throw in military, espionage, sabotage, revenge, protectors, tragedy, and more. What comes out is a world where prejudices and pride show themselves in different ways. This story is not for the faint of heart, but for those who are willing to endure along with our favorite characters and what journey they travel through life and how things change. We have a mix of canon, original and fanfic characters (i.e. Matlock) some who you will fall in love with and others you won’t. Do not expect all the personalities to be canon as some are altered as well. There is one animal, whose devotion is exceptional (everyone could use a Hector!). If you have read (or better yet, listen to the audiobook) Richman’s Doubt Not, Cousin and enjoyed it you will want to make sure to read this. This story is one that I will gladly read again.
If you’re looking for a sweet and clean Darcy & Elizabeth centered story this is NOT the one for you. For those concerned about Darcy & Elizabeth: yes, they do come together, so no worry there, and they do have a few canon moments, but not all of them in this alternate universe that Barry S. Richman created. Instead, you dive into Mr. Bennet’s life long before he married and throw in military, espionage, sabotage, revenge, protectors, tragedy, and more. What comes out is a world where prejudices and pride show themselves in different ways. This story is not for the faint of heart, but for those who are willing to endure along with our favorite characters and what journey they travel through life and how things change. We have a mix of canon, original and fanfic characters (i.e. Matlock) some who you will fall in love with and others you won’t. Do not expect all the personalities to be canon as some are altered as well. There is one animal, whose devotion is exceptional (everyone could use a Hector!). If you have read (or better yet, listen to the audiobook) Richman’s Doubt Not, Cousin and enjoyed it you will want to make sure to read this. This story is one that I will gladly read again.
March 30, 2025
duty to country vs family.
I could not put this down. This variation put Elizabeth and Jane at odds. It maintains the basic character of Jane Austin while explaining in a showing dialogue with some explanations but the weaving of characters changes was well done.
Also Mary life is significantly different but she hold her faith while still questioning. There are many details and almost all of them signify in leading to a specific climax. The epilogue told about side characters future there was still dialogue between two of the main characters.
I feel it was well written and told a story between duty to country vs family.
I could not put this down. This variation put Elizabeth and Jane at odds. It maintains the basic character of Jane Austin while explaining in a showing dialogue with some explanations but the weaving of characters changes was well done.
Also Mary life is significantly different but she hold her faith while still questioning. There are many details and almost all of them signify in leading to a specific climax. The epilogue told about side characters future there was still dialogue between two of the main characters.
I feel it was well written and told a story between duty to country vs family.
July 12, 2025
Quite an intrigue!
A most powerful plot borrowing the characters of Pride and Prejudice but not really applying their usual traits. That said, this is an amazing page turner tale, written with great talent.
A most powerful plot borrowing the characters of Pride and Prejudice but not really applying their usual traits. That said, this is an amazing page turner tale, written with great talent.
October 8, 2025
3.5 rounded up. I liked the idea of Elizabeth seeing the colors, having to get to know Mr Darcy instead of just observing. But they didn't get to know each other, they didn't even talk. He says he's in love, wants to marry her, but what does he even know about her other than his mom has a vision? He doesn't even tell her he cares for her until the very end. And Elizabeth, what's she supposed to think? She can't even figure out his character because he just stares instead of conversing. Her Dad teases her for being jealous when he talks, smiles, and laughs as he walks with Jane (Bingley asks him to talk with her), but as Darcy hadn't talked or smiled, let alone laughed, with her, how's she supposed to feel? But I think the outward frustration was a bit much, accusing Jane of "stealing" him (she wasn't, just wanted to see if Elizabeth would be jealous - which was mean), when she had no claim, no connection with him, she have even said she liked him and he gave to indication of any special regard to him. Then Jane teases her about it and is just vague, instead of reassuring her sister / talking with her.
I also think the color thing could have been explored / utilized more. Oh and she doesn't ever tell him about it!
I didn't hate it, but I didn't love it. I think it just frustrated me.
I also think the color thing could have been explored / utilized more. Oh and she doesn't ever tell him about it!
I didn't hate it, but I didn't love it. I think it just frustrated me.
October 21, 2025
Very good, but a bit confusing
First off, this is a very well written book, beautiful prose, and well crafted from a plot standpoint and the buildup to D&E's romance.
That said, I admit to feeling a bit lost at times, like I ought to have understood something, but didn't. As if it were a sequel, and I hadn't read the first in the series. It's not something I feel often when reading, and usually only in a mystery that has a denouement later. Here, though, I feel like it was a case of not enough explanation, things left a little too vague. Am I supposed to get why Col Fitzwilliam rides around with those other officers? How did Mrs. E get attached to the Bennets, and is it supposed to be quite so mysterious? Is everyone preternaturally perceptive, or are they just all hinting at being magical for no reason? I just felt a bit off the whole time and it never quite resolved for me.
First off, this is a very well written book, beautiful prose, and well crafted from a plot standpoint and the buildup to D&E's romance.
That said, I admit to feeling a bit lost at times, like I ought to have understood something, but didn't. As if it were a sequel, and I hadn't read the first in the series. It's not something I feel often when reading, and usually only in a mystery that has a denouement later. Here, though, I feel like it was a case of not enough explanation, things left a little too vague. Am I supposed to get why Col Fitzwilliam rides around with those other officers? How did Mrs. E get attached to the Bennets, and is it supposed to be quite so mysterious? Is everyone preternaturally perceptive, or are they just all hinting at being magical for no reason? I just felt a bit off the whole time and it never quite resolved for me.
November 20, 2025
Extremely interesting!
I never knew about this condition before, but I imagine it must be most confusing to wake up to it. This was a great idea for a story, told in a wholly relatable manner. I loved the change Elizabeth’s accident caused on her father, and consequently, on the whole family. Great tale!
I never knew about this condition before, but I imagine it must be most confusing to wake up to it. This was a great idea for a story, told in a wholly relatable manner. I loved the change Elizabeth’s accident caused on her father, and consequently, on the whole family. Great tale!
July 29, 2025
He has done it again, if not besting himself. Oh my…
I’m left with my jaw hanging open, in awe, in love, in utmost admiration. And gratitude. Yes, gratitude. 5* isn’t enough rating to describe his story. The world building is brutal and brilliant. There are so many ‘threads pulled’ out of canon and yet Austen’s Pride and Prejudice is still there in its lifeblood.
You will recognize some characters that have inhabited Richman’s previous works, his own creation and familiar characters from canon that he has given more presence and influence than in the original.
Jane still gets her Bingley, but oh how painful that was to watch how it happens. Mary, one of my favorite supporting characters gets an entirely different life, full of pain and tragedy, but triumphant in the end. Mr Bennet is completely different in this world of the author’s. His role is pivotal in the plot, a much stronger character, much kinder to his wife, yet human and torn between duty and the desire to help his daughters cope with the life the world has thrown at them. He separates the sisters in order to protect them, but breaks their hearts in the process.
Elizabeth and Darcy still meet, under different circumstances yet very familiar to those who enjoy not only the original P&P but most of the variations out there. However, Darcy gets paid back for that original slight, physically and painfully. Holy cow, Elizabeth! And then they fall pretty hard for each other. Elizabeth’s life takes a different turn after she and her father move north for a few years. But this is where she meets Darcy. And learns some new skills.
The plot centers around a vendetta against Sir Thomas Bennet and the wheels of evil intent surrounding him at Longbourn close in around him. Bennet’s supporters and protectors close in around the evildoers waiting for the plan to come to a head. It ends brutally and with necessity. It’s an intense, intelligent campaign to identify the enemy and set in place the countermeasures to bring them down before they can take Sir Thomas.
Mary was recruited out of a convent where she perfected her healing arts, to follow the drum, and be Colonel Fitzwilliam’s personal nurse. His character follows his original creation in Richman’s Doubt Not, Cousin. He cannot feel pain, which is both a blessing and a curse. In a war situation it is more a curse. Mary is general nurse staff for their regiment and sees so much suffering and death. But the Colonel is first priority if he needs her. When his wounds finally send him home Mary accompanies him. All the way home to Matlock where she is welcomed by Lady Matlock with open arms. She’s a permanent visitor, lavished with Lady Matlock’s doting desire for a daughter. Mary comes to love this family but yearns for her sister. Mary and Elizabeth’s reunion is endearing and long overdue. She’s happy to be going back home. Her appearance, which brought tragedy to their family before, has matured and become beautiful changing much except her eyes, while she still protects with colored glasses
The courting, the marriage, and another proposal wraps up this incredible story. I have barely touched the tip of the iceberg in this story. There’s so much more. I can’t recommend it highly enough! But readers who are squeamish about murder, war, blood and brutality may consider another of his works like The Scarred Duchess.
Remember my saying the word gratitude above? Yes, I am so grateful that this author chose this genre to explore and share his talents in. The world of fiction is much richer for it.
I’m left with my jaw hanging open, in awe, in love, in utmost admiration. And gratitude. Yes, gratitude. 5* isn’t enough rating to describe his story. The world building is brutal and brilliant. There are so many ‘threads pulled’ out of canon and yet Austen’s Pride and Prejudice is still there in its lifeblood.
You will recognize some characters that have inhabited Richman’s previous works, his own creation and familiar characters from canon that he has given more presence and influence than in the original.
Jane still gets her Bingley, but oh how painful that was to watch how it happens. Mary, one of my favorite supporting characters gets an entirely different life, full of pain and tragedy, but triumphant in the end. Mr Bennet is completely different in this world of the author’s. His role is pivotal in the plot, a much stronger character, much kinder to his wife, yet human and torn between duty and the desire to help his daughters cope with the life the world has thrown at them. He separates the sisters in order to protect them, but breaks their hearts in the process.
Elizabeth and Darcy still meet, under different circumstances yet very familiar to those who enjoy not only the original P&P but most of the variations out there. However, Darcy gets paid back for that original slight, physically and painfully. Holy cow, Elizabeth! And then they fall pretty hard for each other. Elizabeth’s life takes a different turn after she and her father move north for a few years. But this is where she meets Darcy. And learns some new skills.
The plot centers around a vendetta against Sir Thomas Bennet and the wheels of evil intent surrounding him at Longbourn close in around him. Bennet’s supporters and protectors close in around the evildoers waiting for the plan to come to a head. It ends brutally and with necessity. It’s an intense, intelligent campaign to identify the enemy and set in place the countermeasures to bring them down before they can take Sir Thomas.
Mary was recruited out of a convent where she perfected her healing arts, to follow the drum, and be Colonel Fitzwilliam’s personal nurse. His character follows his original creation in Richman’s Doubt Not, Cousin. He cannot feel pain, which is both a blessing and a curse. In a war situation it is more a curse. Mary is general nurse staff for their regiment and sees so much suffering and death. But the Colonel is first priority if he needs her. When his wounds finally send him home Mary accompanies him. All the way home to Matlock where she is welcomed by Lady Matlock with open arms. She’s a permanent visitor, lavished with Lady Matlock’s doting desire for a daughter. Mary comes to love this family but yearns for her sister. Mary and Elizabeth’s reunion is endearing and long overdue. She’s happy to be going back home. Her appearance, which brought tragedy to their family before, has matured and become beautiful changing much except her eyes, while she still protects with colored glasses
The courting, the marriage, and another proposal wraps up this incredible story. I have barely touched the tip of the iceberg in this story. There’s so much more. I can’t recommend it highly enough! But readers who are squeamish about murder, war, blood and brutality may consider another of his works like The Scarred Duchess.
Remember my saying the word gratitude above? Yes, I am so grateful that this author chose this genre to explore and share his talents in. The world of fiction is much richer for it.
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