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Follow The Drum: A Pride & Prejudice Variation
The British kingdom harbours a perilous secret. At its heart is Thomas Bennet.
Since dead men tell no tales, the patriarch of Longbourn must live in anonymity or face the unthinkable—being the cause of a foreign nation attacking his homeland. Skilled in deception and strategy, Bennet succeeded until his youngest daughter is born with a grievous affliction; the scrutiny she brings threatens to expose the very secrets he hides.
Mary Bennet, marked by her unusual appearance, becomes the centre of fear and gossip. As society and even her own family grow wary of her, Mary must confront her isolation with quiet resilience. Unaware of her father’s burden, she is thrust into a world of suspicion, where she discovers her role is not as insignificant as it once seemed.
Elizabeth Bennet faces her own trials as the family fractures under the weight of secrecy. Forced from Longbourn, drawn to the enigmatic Mr Darcy, Elizabeth must reconcile her blossoming feelings for him with the unsettling truths she uncovers. As Darcy’s past and his connection to her father come to light, Elizabeth is left questioning whom she can truly trust.
Follow the Drum is a gripping tale of sacrifice, loyalty, and impossible choices. When the fate of a kingdom rests on the secrets of one man, how far will he go to protect his family—and how high will the cost be?
Since dead men tell no tales, the patriarch of Longbourn must live in anonymity or face the unthinkable—being the cause of a foreign nation attacking his homeland. Skilled in deception and strategy, Bennet succeeded until his youngest daughter is born with a grievous affliction; the scrutiny she brings threatens to expose the very secrets he hides.
Mary Bennet, marked by her unusual appearance, becomes the centre of fear and gossip. As society and even her own family grow wary of her, Mary must confront her isolation with quiet resilience. Unaware of her father’s burden, she is thrust into a world of suspicion, where she discovers her role is not as insignificant as it once seemed.
Elizabeth Bennet faces her own trials as the family fractures under the weight of secrecy. Forced from Longbourn, drawn to the enigmatic Mr Darcy, Elizabeth must reconcile her blossoming feelings for him with the unsettling truths she uncovers. As Darcy’s past and his connection to her father come to light, Elizabeth is left questioning whom she can truly trust.
Follow the Drum is a gripping tale of sacrifice, loyalty, and impossible choices. When the fate of a kingdom rests on the secrets of one man, how far will he go to protect his family—and how high will the cost be?
390 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 27, 2025
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About the author
Barry S. Richman
8 books41 followersBarry S. Richman combines his background in the armed forces and expertise with a passion for Pride and Prejudice retellings.
After two decades of exploring countless stories from the JAFF universe, his wife challenged him to try writing one. During a trip to Istanbul, Barry wrote four pages that wove his real-world experiences into alternate-universe stories inspired by Jane Austen’s characters. He continued from there.
He published his first novel, Doubt Not, Cousin, in 2023, followed by The Scarred Duchess in 2024.
Follow The Drum continues his military-influenced alternate universe populated by characters familiar and new.
Barry and his “Jane Bennet” divide their time between Los Angeles and a seaside town in southwestern Turkey.
After two decades of exploring countless stories from the JAFF universe, his wife challenged him to try writing one. During a trip to Istanbul, Barry wrote four pages that wove his real-world experiences into alternate-universe stories inspired by Jane Austen’s characters. He continued from there.
He published his first novel, Doubt Not, Cousin, in 2023, followed by The Scarred Duchess in 2024.
Follow The Drum continues his military-influenced alternate universe populated by characters familiar and new.
Barry and his “Jane Bennet” divide their time between Los Angeles and a seaside town in southwestern Turkey.
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November 22, 2025
Secrets, Sacrifice, and a Really Mean Jane
Follow the Drum is the third novel by Barry S. Richman and once again features Captain Thomas Bennet, a central character in the author’s two previous books, but with a brand-new plot. Having completed a difficult and secret mission, he is quietly shielded and allowed to settle into life with his new wife, Franny—think government protection program. Together, they have three daughters—Jane, Elizabeth, and Mary. Over the course of twenty-five years, Bennet’s duty will come at a cost, straining his family while he wrestles with a past that won’t let go, creating mystery and unease.
Mary, born with albinism, is unjustly feared and distrusted by neighbours and shopkeepers, who whisper that she is cursed—or worse. Jane seems kind at first, but resentment festers, and her behaviour toward Mary turns shockingly cruel. Elizabeth, active, lively, and clever, is steadfast in her devotion to Mary, even as the growing hostility from others reaches a breaking point and results in a tragedy. When Bennet makes a drastic decision, it changes the course of all their lives.
Elizabeth, deeply wounded by Jane’s betrayal and devastated by her father’s choices, carries that resentment into her first meeting with Darcy after she and Bennet relocate to Derbyshire. Their romance is just a small, sweet, understated piece of the book, in my view—this isn’t primarily a Darcy and Elizabeth story.
While the plot is entirely new, readers of Richman will note the repeated roles of some long-standing Bennet protectors, as well as familiar faces from the Fitzwilliam and Darcy families. A mastiff named Hector, drawn to Mary, becomes another protector. Elizabeth’s devotion to Mary never wavers, even though they are miles apart for a time, while Jane’s complete lack of loyalty is striking. ‘Mean Jane’ trope lovers will give this portrayal a nod.
Bennet remains bound by duty and secrets he refuses to share throughout the book, causing a fracture between him and his daughters. Meanwhile, Jane’s absence is barely felt until shocking news suddenly propels her back to the reader’s attention.
I must say that I craved a little more insight into a stunning and heinous act committed by Jane and Miss Bingley, which occurs off-page. I wished for more information on what pushed them to go so far and how they did it. Similarly, Bennet’s silence gnawed at me. I kept wishing he would give Elizabeth and Mary more of him—some piece of why he stayed so closed off. Readers know, but they don’t. I liked him, and he wasn’t a bad man or father in my opinion, but he lost their respect, and that tugged at me. I do understand the ‘sacrifice for country’ part of the story, but still, I wanted a truly happy ending for him too—I’m sentimental like that. So… these gaps left me wanting just a little, but they didn’t take away from my overall enjoyment of the book. It’s another great read from a standout JAFF author.
For me, Richman’s writing always presents a suspenseful plot and sub-plots, twists that jolt me, and characters that draw me in so I feel their joys and pains. In Follow the Drum, he balances prejudice and isolation with strength and belonging—rejection and fear with connection and courage. I loved it and wholeheartedly recommend it.
As with Richman’s previous novels, due to scenes of a violent nature that may be disturbing to some readers, I have rated this a mature read.
I received an advance copy of this book from the author and am voluntarily leaving my review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library.
Audiobook - November 6-7, 2025
Samuel James is an outstanding audio performer. He gives the narration a live feel, as he truly acts out each role, giving each character their own personal portrayal. You can feel hi. exude every emotion the character experiences. I can’t praise him enough. Bravo. Absolutely recommend this audiobook. And the story told is so unique. So glad to have this on audio—it will definitely be a re-listen.
Follow the Drum is the third novel by Barry S. Richman and once again features Captain Thomas Bennet, a central character in the author’s two previous books, but with a brand-new plot. Having completed a difficult and secret mission, he is quietly shielded and allowed to settle into life with his new wife, Franny—think government protection program. Together, they have three daughters—Jane, Elizabeth, and Mary. Over the course of twenty-five years, Bennet’s duty will come at a cost, straining his family while he wrestles with a past that won’t let go, creating mystery and unease.
Mary, born with albinism, is unjustly feared and distrusted by neighbours and shopkeepers, who whisper that she is cursed—or worse. Jane seems kind at first, but resentment festers, and her behaviour toward Mary turns shockingly cruel. Elizabeth, active, lively, and clever, is steadfast in her devotion to Mary, even as the growing hostility from others reaches a breaking point and results in a tragedy. When Bennet makes a drastic decision, it changes the course of all their lives.
Elizabeth, deeply wounded by Jane’s betrayal and devastated by her father’s choices, carries that resentment into her first meeting with Darcy after she and Bennet relocate to Derbyshire. Their romance is just a small, sweet, understated piece of the book, in my view—this isn’t primarily a Darcy and Elizabeth story.
While the plot is entirely new, readers of Richman will note the repeated roles of some long-standing Bennet protectors, as well as familiar faces from the Fitzwilliam and Darcy families. A mastiff named Hector, drawn to Mary, becomes another protector. Elizabeth’s devotion to Mary never wavers, even though they are miles apart for a time, while Jane’s complete lack of loyalty is striking. ‘Mean Jane’ trope lovers will give this portrayal a nod.
Bennet remains bound by duty and secrets he refuses to share throughout the book, causing a fracture between him and his daughters. Meanwhile, Jane’s absence is barely felt until shocking news suddenly propels her back to the reader’s attention.
I must say that I craved a little more insight into a stunning and heinous act committed by Jane and Miss Bingley, which occurs off-page. I wished for more information on what pushed them to go so far and how they did it. Similarly, Bennet’s silence gnawed at me. I kept wishing he would give Elizabeth and Mary more of him—some piece of why he stayed so closed off. Readers know, but they don’t. I liked him, and he wasn’t a bad man or father in my opinion, but he lost their respect, and that tugged at me. I do understand the ‘sacrifice for country’ part of the story, but still, I wanted a truly happy ending for him too—I’m sentimental like that. So… these gaps left me wanting just a little, but they didn’t take away from my overall enjoyment of the book. It’s another great read from a standout JAFF author.
For me, Richman’s writing always presents a suspenseful plot and sub-plots, twists that jolt me, and characters that draw me in so I feel their joys and pains. In Follow the Drum, he balances prejudice and isolation with strength and belonging—rejection and fear with connection and courage. I loved it and wholeheartedly recommend it.
As with Richman’s previous novels, due to scenes of a violent nature that may be disturbing to some readers, I have rated this a mature read.
I received an advance copy of this book from the author and am voluntarily leaving my review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library.
Audiobook - November 6-7, 2025
Samuel James is an outstanding audio performer. He gives the narration a live feel, as he truly acts out each role, giving each character their own personal portrayal. You can feel hi. exude every emotion the character experiences. I can’t praise him enough. Bravo. Absolutely recommend this audiobook. And the story told is so unique. So glad to have this on audio—it will definitely be a re-listen.
June 3, 2025
4.5 stars rounded up to 5 stars.
This book if full of intrigue and I admit that at times I had difficulty remembering just who is who.
Bennet has served his country well and is then knighted and given the estate of Longbourne and another estate in Derbyshire as a reward but also as a way of protecting him from those seeking revenge for his actions for England.
He marries Frannie Gardiner and they have 5 girls BUT three don't survive birth. Jane, Elizabeth and Mary are not the loving and close sisters of canon. Mary, born with albinism, is labeled as a witch due to that appearance. I did like her development in this story into a highly skilled nurse who also serves her country well. She and Colonel Fitzwilliam take up a large part of the story.
I did not at all like Jane and I would have liked more about her and Caroline Bingley's fate at the end.
Elizabeth and Mary have a very close relationship but are separated as Mr. Bennet directs the lives of his daughters.
There is much intrigue and we read much about the protections set in place, secretly, to protect Bennet. Here we read of tortures and killings. I particularly liked the role of Hector, although he got little page space.
I have read several other of this author's stories and rated them highly. I highly recommend his stories. (Although this was not a quick read for me.)
This book if full of intrigue and I admit that at times I had difficulty remembering just who is who.
Bennet has served his country well and is then knighted and given the estate of Longbourne and another estate in Derbyshire as a reward but also as a way of protecting him from those seeking revenge for his actions for England.
He marries Frannie Gardiner and they have 5 girls BUT three don't survive birth. Jane, Elizabeth and Mary are not the loving and close sisters of canon. Mary, born with albinism, is labeled as a witch due to that appearance. I did like her development in this story into a highly skilled nurse who also serves her country well. She and Colonel Fitzwilliam take up a large part of the story.
I did not at all like Jane and I would have liked more about her and Caroline Bingley's fate at the end.
Elizabeth and Mary have a very close relationship but are separated as Mr. Bennet directs the lives of his daughters.
There is much intrigue and we read much about the protections set in place, secretly, to protect Bennet. Here we read of tortures and killings. I particularly liked the role of Hector, although he got little page space.
I have read several other of this author's stories and rated them highly. I highly recommend his stories. (Although this was not a quick read for me.)
April 2, 2025
My Rating: 4.5* rounded up to 5*
Political intrigue. A clandestine mission. A country’s secret. Revenge and securing a family’s safety.
Mr. Richman’s debut novel, ‘Doubt Not, Cousin’ is a favourite of mine. With his latest rendering, ‘Follow the Drum’, we are given a new outside-the-box variation that takes these characters along a different path. One of intrigue, secrets and protecting a knight of the realm and his family. I ordered the paperback the day it came out! I had to own it!
“Bennet’s sense of duty runs deep – he’s one of those rare officers well-suited to shoulder burdens alone.” (quote from the book)
The story begins with a death of a sailor and what had caused this action. Captain Thomas Bennet is tasked with a clandestine mission. One he was well capable of completing. He is named Knight Companion of the Order of the Bath upon his return... Sir Thomas Bennet. However, the consequences of the mission will have repercussions on him and his family for many years to come.
“Do nothing to attract attention. You are a gentleman farmer. You are Mr. Thomas Bennet. Nothing more.” (quote from the book)
For his service and protection, Mr. Thomas Bennet is given the estate Longbourn in Hertfordshire with protectors working within the estate and in Meryton. Life begins idyllically, marriage to Francine Gardiner, two lovely daughters with another child on the way, and a prosperous estate. But as he dreams of his next child being a son, those dreams are shattered by the birth of another daughter, Mary, that causes the midwife and maid to spread vicious tales…’devil’s child’. Life becomes a challenge of protecting the family but especially Mary.
“Welcome to the tangled web that is the family named Bennet.” (quote from the book)
This is very much a story of Mr. Bennet and his family and what he and the powers that be do to protect them. It is a multi-faceted story showing both the political manoeuverings behind the scenes and those who want to gain access to the First Circles as well as a man bent on revenge. It is a story of a father not willing to share the burden of his deeds…”May my sins not be visited upon my children.” It is also a story about sisters, the dynamics that shape them as well as the experiences they each must face…some more than others.
I was thoroughly engrossed in this novel. Don’t expect light and fluffy – it is far from that. It is about the machinations of governments; it is about war and the violence that comes from it.
“His name was Hector. He taught me that trust can survive the darkest deeds.” (quote from the book)
My emotions were engaged. There is humour and tears for I choked up several times. Elizabeth and Darcy’s first encounter is quite memorable as was their next. Their story is in here but not as contentious. Mary, for me, is the star that shines in this story. Her journey was the hardest…”We all face our storms. What matters is how we weather them.” But it was also the most fulfilling.
However, I did have a few frustrations…Jane Bennet in particular. Her storyline made sense up to a point. The place it fell apart for me was the end. It is a shocker and one that I could not push the boundaries of my imagination to go to. I would have preferred a set down of epic of proportions, but it was not to be. But this isn’t my story. There were other things about her story that didn’t sit well with me…follow through.
Overall, I loved the book. It is a journey of finding the strength to face prejudice and fear and forging a path of fulfillment. It is also about the lengths a parent will go to for their children.
I highly recommend it!
April 13, 2025
3.5 rounded up to 4 stars
This is a compelling three-part story, all of which are contained in this single novel. Those seeking a traditional variation of Pride and Prejudice where just one or two changes affects the trajectory of events, however, will not find it here.
The first part of the book relates the story of Captain Thomas Bennet, a loyal, resourceful officer who fulfills his mission to the Crown brilliantly in 1781. He also is owed a deep debt of gratitude from the Earl of Matlock. In reward, he receives a knighthood and two estates. The secrets he carries require him to be well-protected and to live quietly out of the public eye, so he settles at Longbourn near Meryton, where he meets and marries Francine Gardiner. His title and powerful London connections are kept a secret even from his own family.
This becomes impossible when his third child, Mary, is born. She is unmistakably different from the norm. The family's more superstitious neighbors believe she is a witch or a demon and that the Bennet family must be in league with the devil. Mary grows into a sweet, empathic girl who has an amazing gift with animals. Unfortunately, tensions in the community and even within the family over her presence escalate to the point where Mr. Bennet (aka Sir Thomas) believes the only way to keep everyone safe is to separate them. Jane is happy to go live with the Gardiners, while Mary, over Elizabeth's heated objection, is to go to a place where she will be accepted despite her unusual appearance.
That's an overly simplified summary of all that happens before even reaching the book’s second section. Numerous storylines and points of view begin and develop, eventually converging at the end of the third book.
After the excellent build-up, I was disappointed with the end. It struck me as a poor plot choice that’s inconsistent with Sir Thomas’s supposed genius. I also didn’t understand his continued refusal to give his daughters answers, considering what his family has endured because of his secrets.
This action-filled book is nicely written and edited, and the characters are vivid. It does take an attentive reader to keep track of all the names, but it’s worth the effort. The main characters are prayerful people of faith, and the message against bigotry against those who look “different” comes through loud and clear. Be warned that there are scenes of extreme violence, bloodshed, and death both on the battlefield and off.
Also be aware that the “Pride and Prejudice” in the title is misleading. There’s little in the story that resembles it: Mr. and Mrs. Bennet have a respectful, loving relationship. Mr. Bennet is an attentive master of Longbourn rather than being indolent, and there’s no entail to disturb Mrs. Bennet’s nerves. There are only the three daughters (twin daughters die in childbirth), Mary’s character is considerably different from the original, and while Mrs. Bennet is overly effusive in praising the beauty of her eldest, she is a loving mother to them all. Jane is downright nasty. Mary's storyline eclipses Elizabeth's. Rather than romance, the story’s emphasis is on the war that enveloped most of Europe during this time. Darcy doesn’t even enter the book until more than halfway through. Yes, he insults Elizabeth within her hearing before meeting her-- which is about the only true similarity I noted-- but the assembly where this occurs is far from Meryton, and Elizabeth addresses the situation immediately rather than stewing over it.
Despite my reservations, it’s a wonderful story in every way right up to the misstep at the climax (which is still a thrilling scene). And perhaps these not very Pride and Prejudice-like characters should have different names.
Content is clean but bloody.
This is a compelling three-part story, all of which are contained in this single novel. Those seeking a traditional variation of Pride and Prejudice where just one or two changes affects the trajectory of events, however, will not find it here.
The first part of the book relates the story of Captain Thomas Bennet, a loyal, resourceful officer who fulfills his mission to the Crown brilliantly in 1781. He also is owed a deep debt of gratitude from the Earl of Matlock. In reward, he receives a knighthood and two estates. The secrets he carries require him to be well-protected and to live quietly out of the public eye, so he settles at Longbourn near Meryton, where he meets and marries Francine Gardiner. His title and powerful London connections are kept a secret even from his own family.
This becomes impossible when his third child, Mary, is born. She is unmistakably different from the norm. The family's more superstitious neighbors believe she is a witch or a demon and that the Bennet family must be in league with the devil. Mary grows into a sweet, empathic girl who has an amazing gift with animals. Unfortunately, tensions in the community and even within the family over her presence escalate to the point where Mr. Bennet (aka Sir Thomas) believes the only way to keep everyone safe is to separate them. Jane is happy to go live with the Gardiners, while Mary, over Elizabeth's heated objection, is to go to a place where she will be accepted despite her unusual appearance.
That's an overly simplified summary of all that happens before even reaching the book’s second section. Numerous storylines and points of view begin and develop, eventually converging at the end of the third book.
After the excellent build-up, I was disappointed with the end. It struck me as a poor plot choice that’s inconsistent with Sir Thomas’s supposed genius. I also didn’t understand his continued refusal to give his daughters answers, considering what his family has endured because of his secrets.
This action-filled book is nicely written and edited, and the characters are vivid. It does take an attentive reader to keep track of all the names, but it’s worth the effort. The main characters are prayerful people of faith, and the message against bigotry against those who look “different” comes through loud and clear. Be warned that there are scenes of extreme violence, bloodshed, and death both on the battlefield and off.
Also be aware that the “Pride and Prejudice” in the title is misleading. There’s little in the story that resembles it: Mr. and Mrs. Bennet have a respectful, loving relationship. Mr. Bennet is an attentive master of Longbourn rather than being indolent, and there’s no entail to disturb Mrs. Bennet’s nerves. There are only the three daughters (twin daughters die in childbirth), Mary’s character is considerably different from the original, and while Mrs. Bennet is overly effusive in praising the beauty of her eldest, she is a loving mother to them all. Jane is downright nasty. Mary's storyline eclipses Elizabeth's. Rather than romance, the story’s emphasis is on the war that enveloped most of Europe during this time. Darcy doesn’t even enter the book until more than halfway through. Yes, he insults Elizabeth within her hearing before meeting her-- which is about the only true similarity I noted-- but the assembly where this occurs is far from Meryton, and Elizabeth addresses the situation immediately rather than stewing over it.
Despite my reservations, it’s a wonderful story in every way right up to the misstep at the climax (which is still a thrilling scene). And perhaps these not very Pride and Prejudice-like characters should have different names.
Content is clean but bloody.
April 26, 2025
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: Mature: heed the warning. MATURE: It’s wartime, and there were descriptions of battles, death, injuries, and medical procedures. A mob scene created havoc, chaos, and the death of a character due to superstitious beliefs.
>>Angst Level: High, gripping, and nail-biting at times. Have oxygen on hand. I held my breath so long, I nearly passed out. I may have lost some brain cells. Whew! Breathe, just breathe.
>>Source: KU, I volunteered to leave a review. Prologue, plus 60 chapters, plus an epilogue. It was divided into three books. I will always read a book by this author; hands down.
>>Religious Element: it was the suspicious,, witch-hunt type of religious fanaticism. There were also prayers for strength and solace.
>>Trope:[1] NSN Jane [2] A very different Mary
Richman does not fool around with his stories. They are beyond canon and certainly outside the box. Many of his characters were featured in his previous books. I love seeing ‘the crew’ return as I am fond of them. I like the fact that Bennet is more than he seems. Everyone is more than they seem. The fate of the nation was riding on the shoulders of our characters. People would die keeping the secret of actions that happened years before. Revenge was a powerful motive that pushed this story forward. OMG! I held my breath through most of the book. It was that gripping, and ICNPID.
>>Rating: Mature: heed the warning. MATURE: It’s wartime, and there were descriptions of battles, death, injuries, and medical procedures. A mob scene created havoc, chaos, and the death of a character due to superstitious beliefs.
>>Angst Level: High, gripping, and nail-biting at times. Have oxygen on hand. I held my breath so long, I nearly passed out. I may have lost some brain cells. Whew! Breathe, just breathe.
>>Source: KU, I volunteered to leave a review. Prologue, plus 60 chapters, plus an epilogue. It was divided into three books. I will always read a book by this author; hands down.
>>Religious Element: it was the suspicious,, witch-hunt type of religious fanaticism. There were also prayers for strength and solace.
>>Trope:[1] NSN Jane [2] A very different Mary
Richman does not fool around with his stories. They are beyond canon and certainly outside the box. Many of his characters were featured in his previous books. I love seeing ‘the crew’ return as I am fond of them. I like the fact that Bennet is more than he seems. Everyone is more than they seem. The fate of the nation was riding on the shoulders of our characters. People would die keeping the secret of actions that happened years before. Revenge was a powerful motive that pushed this story forward. OMG! I held my breath through most of the book. It was that gripping, and ICNPID.
March 25, 2025
Wonderfully refreshing and unlike any other Pride and Prejudice Variation!
I won’t outline the plot here but to say this was a completely original alternative universe variation and feels like we have gone back to the style that Barry so excellently began with Doubt Not Cousin. Bringing the male perspective to JAFF with his masterful caricatures of male roles weaved so cleverly throughout his stories. I rarely enjoy stories based on a non Darcy/Lizzy centric plot but this one just grabbed me from the beginning. The suspense and intrigue throughout kept my interest whilst the Bennet’s lived out their lives. I love getting so much of Mary’s perspective and more of the Colonel. The way they came together and understood each other’s unique struggles was really engaging and I enjoy the way Barry brings in the extraordinary and makes it key to the storyline. I will be re-reading this often and really hope there will be an audiobook because I think it would be brilliant if it was narrated and acted out.
I won’t outline the plot here but to say this was a completely original alternative universe variation and feels like we have gone back to the style that Barry so excellently began with Doubt Not Cousin. Bringing the male perspective to JAFF with his masterful caricatures of male roles weaved so cleverly throughout his stories. I rarely enjoy stories based on a non Darcy/Lizzy centric plot but this one just grabbed me from the beginning. The suspense and intrigue throughout kept my interest whilst the Bennet’s lived out their lives. I love getting so much of Mary’s perspective and more of the Colonel. The way they came together and understood each other’s unique struggles was really engaging and I enjoy the way Barry brings in the extraordinary and makes it key to the storyline. I will be re-reading this often and really hope there will be an audiobook because I think it would be brilliant if it was narrated and acted out.
March 28, 2025
Moving
A gripping and emotional variation inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Barry S. Richman. It was a wonderful story and my only complaint is I want more. It was darker in tone and events than most stories in this genre but he just keeps getting better with each new story he writes. I can’t wait to see what he has in store for us in his next adventure.
A gripping and emotional variation inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Barry S. Richman. It was a wonderful story and my only complaint is I want more. It was darker in tone and events than most stories in this genre but he just keeps getting better with each new story he writes. I can’t wait to see what he has in store for us in his next adventure.
March 28, 2025
Excellent
If you like intrigue, romance, and a thrilling spy story this will not disappoint. As unique a P&P story where the villain is evil, the heroes and heroine are wonderfully unusual. This is one I'll reread.
If you like intrigue, romance, and a thrilling spy story this will not disappoint. As unique a P&P story where the villain is evil, the heroes and heroine are wonderfully unusual. This is one I'll reread.
March 26, 2025
"I will always wonder if a certain healer is content to remain in one place or still feels the pull of duty—of making a difference—even in the violence of tempests.”
This story is SPECTACULAR.
It might be a Pride and Prejudice variation at its core, but it is a deep and detailed story of war, betrayal, family, and resilience. The familiar characters, setting, and relationships are reimagined, so while the reader may feel the pull of the familiar, this story is raw and gritty, which is sometimes missing in the world of JAFF. And although this begins as a Mr. Bennet story, it really becomes a sister story, with Elizabeth and Mary in very unexpected circumstances.
A Mary story often has a redemption arc where the author seeks to make her less pedantic and/or more beautiful. This Mary is the absolute star of this story, and she fights for every scrap of faith that she has while struggling to believe that it is God's plan for her to endure unspeakable terrors. It makes her feel relatable and authentic. She isn't really broken, but others absolutely see her that way. It is a long time before others see her worth, but what trauma this sweet girl must endure.
But the Bennet secret underscores the entirety of the book, and the reader must endure much violence, angst, and frustration to get to a satisfying ending. This also isn't a story that wraps in a pretty bow, but that continues to give it a more true-to-life feeling. I laughed, I cried, I gasped... this story will stick with me for a LONG time.
Fans of P&P or not, anyone can enjoy this incredible story. It has it all.
Trigger warning: descriptions of graphic violence
I received a complimentary copy of the author's story to read and review. All thoughts contained here are my own.
This story is SPECTACULAR.
It might be a Pride and Prejudice variation at its core, but it is a deep and detailed story of war, betrayal, family, and resilience. The familiar characters, setting, and relationships are reimagined, so while the reader may feel the pull of the familiar, this story is raw and gritty, which is sometimes missing in the world of JAFF. And although this begins as a Mr. Bennet story, it really becomes a sister story, with Elizabeth and Mary in very unexpected circumstances.
A Mary story often has a redemption arc where the author seeks to make her less pedantic and/or more beautiful. This Mary is the absolute star of this story, and she fights for every scrap of faith that she has while struggling to believe that it is God's plan for her to endure unspeakable terrors. It makes her feel relatable and authentic. She isn't really broken, but others absolutely see her that way. It is a long time before others see her worth, but what trauma this sweet girl must endure.
But the Bennet secret underscores the entirety of the book, and the reader must endure much violence, angst, and frustration to get to a satisfying ending. This also isn't a story that wraps in a pretty bow, but that continues to give it a more true-to-life feeling. I laughed, I cried, I gasped... this story will stick with me for a LONG time.
Fans of P&P or not, anyone can enjoy this incredible story. It has it all.
Trigger warning: descriptions of graphic violence
I received a complimentary copy of the author's story to read and review. All thoughts contained here are my own.
March 27, 2025
An Austenesque Mission Impossible!
A mesmerizing tale of power, corruption, war, innocence, superstition, ignorance, romance, good, and evil. This alternate universe follows an endangered Bennet family, with the father torn between his loyalty to his country and his family. Featured sisters are Jane, Lizzy and Mary, with very non-canon characterizations for Jane and Mary, who is born with physical “differences”. Several redefined characters from the author’s previous book “Doubt Not Cousin” appear and add to the story. The family is assisted by a “Mission Impossible” Team as they deal with intrigue, vile villains, intricate plots within plots, torture and the terrors of war, with moments of shocking violence.
Throughout the story, there is an underlying respect and admiration for the strength and intelligence of capable women, especially those who "follow the drum". In this variation, we see a multitude of women who " follow" individually and in groups, in many cases acting as the leading partners in their personal relationships. We also learn a great deal about the nursing support offered to soldiers of that time as those women who "followed the drum" performed with great courage and dedication in horrible conditions. A fascinating, well-researched tale that resonates with today’s power struggles! I received an ARC of this book and am voluntarily leaving my honest review.
A mesmerizing tale of power, corruption, war, innocence, superstition, ignorance, romance, good, and evil. This alternate universe follows an endangered Bennet family, with the father torn between his loyalty to his country and his family. Featured sisters are Jane, Lizzy and Mary, with very non-canon characterizations for Jane and Mary, who is born with physical “differences”. Several redefined characters from the author’s previous book “Doubt Not Cousin” appear and add to the story. The family is assisted by a “Mission Impossible” Team as they deal with intrigue, vile villains, intricate plots within plots, torture and the terrors of war, with moments of shocking violence.
Throughout the story, there is an underlying respect and admiration for the strength and intelligence of capable women, especially those who "follow the drum". In this variation, we see a multitude of women who " follow" individually and in groups, in many cases acting as the leading partners in their personal relationships. We also learn a great deal about the nursing support offered to soldiers of that time as those women who "followed the drum" performed with great courage and dedication in horrible conditions. A fascinating, well-researched tale that resonates with today’s power struggles! I received an ARC of this book and am voluntarily leaving my honest review.
May 12, 2025
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4.5* rounded up
I found the novel to be a gripping story, a deliberation of the meanings of duty, faith, and love. Within those concepts, the various relationships reveal different layers. Darcy's famous adherence to duty and Elizabeth's pluck within the confines of society are contrasted to those qualities in Colonel Fitzwilliam and Mary in the wider realm of life and war. The canon relationship is not belittled, but the depth of the latter couple's struggles really highlights the differences. Mary's story is so touching; I thought her to be the true heroine in this tale.
4.5* rounded up
I found the novel to be a gripping story, a deliberation of the meanings of duty, faith, and love. Within those concepts, the various relationships reveal different layers. Darcy's famous adherence to duty and Elizabeth's pluck within the confines of society are contrasted to those qualities in Colonel Fitzwilliam and Mary in the wider realm of life and war. The canon relationship is not belittled, but the depth of the latter couple's struggles really highlights the differences. Mary's story is so touching; I thought her to be the true heroine in this tale.
March 27, 2025
B. Richman has woven an engaging tale of espionage and conspiracy utilizing some of the powerful characters of 'Doubt Not, Cousin' in new roles. Each primary character is fleshed out with dynamic personalities and storylines that are interwoven to create an tapestry of intrigue that keeps the reader on his toes tracking the drama to its conclusion. I had an advance copy and could not put it down until I had read it through - then read it again to savor the nuances. Highly recommend.
March 28, 2025
Secret missions and the long-term consequences
If you’re looking for a sweet and clean Darcy & Elizabeth centered story this is NOT the one for you. For those concerned about Darcy & Elizabeth: yes, they do come together, so no worry there, and they do have a few canon moments, but not all of them in this alternate universe that Barry S. Richman created. Instead, you dive into Mr. Bennet’s life long before he married and throw in military, espionage, sabotage, revenge, protectors, tragedy, and more. What comes out is a world where prejudices and pride show themselves in different ways. This story is not for the faint of heart, but for those who are willing to endure along with our favorite characters and what journey they travel through life and how things change. We have a mix of canon, original and fanfic characters (i.e. Matlock) some who you will fall in love with and others you won’t. Do not expect all the personalities to be canon as some are altered as well. There is one animal, whose devotion is exceptional (everyone could use a Hector!). If you have read (or better yet, listen to the audiobook) Richman’s Doubt Not, Cousin and enjoyed it you will want to make sure to read this. This story is one that I will gladly read again.
If you’re looking for a sweet and clean Darcy & Elizabeth centered story this is NOT the one for you. For those concerned about Darcy & Elizabeth: yes, they do come together, so no worry there, and they do have a few canon moments, but not all of them in this alternate universe that Barry S. Richman created. Instead, you dive into Mr. Bennet’s life long before he married and throw in military, espionage, sabotage, revenge, protectors, tragedy, and more. What comes out is a world where prejudices and pride show themselves in different ways. This story is not for the faint of heart, but for those who are willing to endure along with our favorite characters and what journey they travel through life and how things change. We have a mix of canon, original and fanfic characters (i.e. Matlock) some who you will fall in love with and others you won’t. Do not expect all the personalities to be canon as some are altered as well. There is one animal, whose devotion is exceptional (everyone could use a Hector!). If you have read (or better yet, listen to the audiobook) Richman’s Doubt Not, Cousin and enjoyed it you will want to make sure to read this. This story is one that I will gladly read again.
March 30, 2025
duty to country vs family.
I could not put this down. This variation put Elizabeth and Jane at odds. It maintains the basic character of Jane Austin while explaining in a showing dialogue with some explanations but the weaving of characters changes was well done.
Also Mary life is significantly different but she hold her faith while still questioning. There are many details and almost all of them signify in leading to a specific climax. The epilogue told about side characters future there was still dialogue between two of the main characters.
I feel it was well written and told a story between duty to country vs family.
I could not put this down. This variation put Elizabeth and Jane at odds. It maintains the basic character of Jane Austin while explaining in a showing dialogue with some explanations but the weaving of characters changes was well done.
Also Mary life is significantly different but she hold her faith while still questioning. There are many details and almost all of them signify in leading to a specific climax. The epilogue told about side characters future there was still dialogue between two of the main characters.
I feel it was well written and told a story between duty to country vs family.
July 12, 2025
Quite an intrigue!
A most powerful plot borrowing the characters of Pride and Prejudice but not really applying their usual traits. That said, this is an amazing page turner tale, written with great talent.
A most powerful plot borrowing the characters of Pride and Prejudice but not really applying their usual traits. That said, this is an amazing page turner tale, written with great talent.
July 29, 2025
He has done it again, if not besting himself. Oh my…
I’m left with my jaw hanging open, in awe, in love, in utmost admiration. And gratitude. Yes, gratitude. 5* isn’t enough rating to describe his story. The world building is brutal and brilliant. There are so many ‘threads pulled’ out of canon and yet Austen’s Pride and Prejudice is still there in its lifeblood.
You will recognize some characters that have inhabited Richman’s previous works, his own creation and familiar characters from canon that he has given more presence and influence than in the original.
Jane still gets her Bingley, but oh how painful that was to watch how it happens. Mary, one of my favorite supporting characters gets an entirely different life, full of pain and tragedy, but triumphant in the end. Mr Bennet is completely different in this world of the author’s. His role is pivotal in the plot, a much stronger character, much kinder to his wife, yet human and torn between duty and the desire to help his daughters cope with the life the world has thrown at them. He separates the sisters in order to protect them, but breaks their hearts in the process.
Elizabeth and Darcy still meet, under different circumstances yet very familiar to those who enjoy not only the original P&P but most of the variations out there. However, Darcy gets paid back for that original slight, physically and painfully. Holy cow, Elizabeth! And then they fall pretty hard for each other. Elizabeth’s life takes a different turn after she and her father move north for a few years. But this is where she meets Darcy. And learns some new skills.
The plot centers around a vendetta against Sir Thomas Bennet and the wheels of evil intent surrounding him at Longbourn close in around him. Bennet’s supporters and protectors close in around the evildoers waiting for the plan to come to a head. It ends brutally and with necessity. It’s an intense, intelligent campaign to identify the enemy and set in place the countermeasures to bring them down before they can take Sir Thomas.
Mary was recruited out of a convent where she perfected her healing arts, to follow the drum, and be Colonel Fitzwilliam’s personal nurse. His character follows his original creation in Richman’s Doubt Not, Cousin. He cannot feel pain, which is both a blessing and a curse. In a war situation it is more a curse. Mary is general nurse staff for their regiment and sees so much suffering and death. But the Colonel is first priority if he needs her. When his wounds finally send him home Mary accompanies him. All the way home to Matlock where she is welcomed by Lady Matlock with open arms. She’s a permanent visitor, lavished with Lady Matlock’s doting desire for a daughter. Mary comes to love this family but yearns for her sister. Mary and Elizabeth’s reunion is endearing and long overdue. She’s happy to be going back home. Her appearance, which brought tragedy to their family before, has matured and become beautiful changing much except her eyes, while she still protects with colored glasses
The courting, the marriage, and another proposal wraps up this incredible story. I have barely touched the tip of the iceberg in this story. There’s so much more. I can’t recommend it highly enough! But readers who are squeamish about murder, war, blood and brutality may consider another of his works like The Scarred Duchess.
Remember my saying the word gratitude above? Yes, I am so grateful that this author chose this genre to explore and share his talents in. The world of fiction is much richer for it.
I’m left with my jaw hanging open, in awe, in love, in utmost admiration. And gratitude. Yes, gratitude. 5* isn’t enough rating to describe his story. The world building is brutal and brilliant. There are so many ‘threads pulled’ out of canon and yet Austen’s Pride and Prejudice is still there in its lifeblood.
You will recognize some characters that have inhabited Richman’s previous works, his own creation and familiar characters from canon that he has given more presence and influence than in the original.
Jane still gets her Bingley, but oh how painful that was to watch how it happens. Mary, one of my favorite supporting characters gets an entirely different life, full of pain and tragedy, but triumphant in the end. Mr Bennet is completely different in this world of the author’s. His role is pivotal in the plot, a much stronger character, much kinder to his wife, yet human and torn between duty and the desire to help his daughters cope with the life the world has thrown at them. He separates the sisters in order to protect them, but breaks their hearts in the process.
Elizabeth and Darcy still meet, under different circumstances yet very familiar to those who enjoy not only the original P&P but most of the variations out there. However, Darcy gets paid back for that original slight, physically and painfully. Holy cow, Elizabeth! And then they fall pretty hard for each other. Elizabeth’s life takes a different turn after she and her father move north for a few years. But this is where she meets Darcy. And learns some new skills.
The plot centers around a vendetta against Sir Thomas Bennet and the wheels of evil intent surrounding him at Longbourn close in around him. Bennet’s supporters and protectors close in around the evildoers waiting for the plan to come to a head. It ends brutally and with necessity. It’s an intense, intelligent campaign to identify the enemy and set in place the countermeasures to bring them down before they can take Sir Thomas.
Mary was recruited out of a convent where she perfected her healing arts, to follow the drum, and be Colonel Fitzwilliam’s personal nurse. His character follows his original creation in Richman’s Doubt Not, Cousin. He cannot feel pain, which is both a blessing and a curse. In a war situation it is more a curse. Mary is general nurse staff for their regiment and sees so much suffering and death. But the Colonel is first priority if he needs her. When his wounds finally send him home Mary accompanies him. All the way home to Matlock where she is welcomed by Lady Matlock with open arms. She’s a permanent visitor, lavished with Lady Matlock’s doting desire for a daughter. Mary comes to love this family but yearns for her sister. Mary and Elizabeth’s reunion is endearing and long overdue. She’s happy to be going back home. Her appearance, which brought tragedy to their family before, has matured and become beautiful changing much except her eyes, while she still protects with colored glasses
The courting, the marriage, and another proposal wraps up this incredible story. I have barely touched the tip of the iceberg in this story. There’s so much more. I can’t recommend it highly enough! But readers who are squeamish about murder, war, blood and brutality may consider another of his works like The Scarred Duchess.
Remember my saying the word gratitude above? Yes, I am so grateful that this author chose this genre to explore and share his talents in. The world of fiction is much richer for it.
August 28, 2025
I loved it!
Warning: Meant for mature audiences. Contains scenes that would scandalize the ton. Readers of a delicate constitution are advised to keep their fans and vinaigrettes close at hand.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is part of the “The Bennet Sister Variations: A Pride & Prejudice-Inspired” series. This is a gripping tale of sacrifice, loyalty, and impossible choices. When the fate of a kingdom rests on the secrets of one man, how far will he go to protect his family, and how high will the cost be?
The British kingdom harbours a perilous secret, and at its heart is Thomas Bennet.
Since dead men tell no tales, the patriarch of Longbourn must live in anonymity or face the unthinkable, being the cause of a foreign nation attacking his homeland. Skilled in deception and strategy, Bennet succeeded until his youngest daughter is born with a grievous affliction; the scrutiny she brings threatens to expose the very secrets he hides. Mary Bennet, marked by her unusual appearance, becomes the centre of fear and gossip. As society and even her own family grow wary of her, Mary must confront her isolation with quiet resilience. Unaware of her father’s burden, she is thrust into a world of suspicion, where she discovers her role is not as insignificant as it once seemed.
Elizabeth Bennet faces her own trials as the family fractures under the weight of secrecy. Forced from Longbourn, drawn to the enigmatic Mr Darcy, Elizabeth must reconcile her blossoming feelings for him with the unsettling truths she uncovers. As Darcy’s past and his connection to her father come to light, Elizabeth is left questioning whom she can truly trust. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
Warning: Meant for mature audiences. Contains scenes that would scandalize the ton. Readers of a delicate constitution are advised to keep their fans and vinaigrettes close at hand.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is part of the “The Bennet Sister Variations: A Pride & Prejudice-Inspired” series. This is a gripping tale of sacrifice, loyalty, and impossible choices. When the fate of a kingdom rests on the secrets of one man, how far will he go to protect his family, and how high will the cost be?
The British kingdom harbours a perilous secret, and at its heart is Thomas Bennet.
Since dead men tell no tales, the patriarch of Longbourn must live in anonymity or face the unthinkable, being the cause of a foreign nation attacking his homeland. Skilled in deception and strategy, Bennet succeeded until his youngest daughter is born with a grievous affliction; the scrutiny she brings threatens to expose the very secrets he hides. Mary Bennet, marked by her unusual appearance, becomes the centre of fear and gossip. As society and even her own family grow wary of her, Mary must confront her isolation with quiet resilience. Unaware of her father’s burden, she is thrust into a world of suspicion, where she discovers her role is not as insignificant as it once seemed.
Elizabeth Bennet faces her own trials as the family fractures under the weight of secrecy. Forced from Longbourn, drawn to the enigmatic Mr Darcy, Elizabeth must reconcile her blossoming feelings for him with the unsettling truths she uncovers. As Darcy’s past and his connection to her father come to light, Elizabeth is left questioning whom she can truly trust. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
May 2, 2025
Wow! Wonderful
Captain Thomas Bennett is a secret operative for the Crown who is recruited by the Earl of Matlock and other senior officers at Whitehall to perform a vital mission in the Dutch Republic. His mission is so successful and so destructive that he must be hidden away from the enemies. He's given Longbourn in Hertfordshire, he marries a woman he loves, and has three daughters. His third daughter, Mary, is born with a condition so rare and so little understood in this era that it results in unwelcome attention being drawn to the Bennett family, attention that the former Captain Bennett cannot afford.
This is an epic tale, with high angst and loads of drama. The action is fierce and fascinating, and this author always manages to make his good guys larger than life and romanticized to a high degree. This is a tale about courage in the face of adversity, the triumph of good over evil, and the power of love over all. The story uses the character names and locations of P&P, but that's about it. This is a total re-imagining, and it's superb.
The book is very well written and well edited. I sincerely hope Mr Richman continues to create JAFF. I recommend this book very highly. There's so much to it: wonderful romance; subtle humor; mystery; situations both heartbreaking and heartwarming; and more. This is a must read for any JAFF enthusiast.
Captain Thomas Bennett is a secret operative for the Crown who is recruited by the Earl of Matlock and other senior officers at Whitehall to perform a vital mission in the Dutch Republic. His mission is so successful and so destructive that he must be hidden away from the enemies. He's given Longbourn in Hertfordshire, he marries a woman he loves, and has three daughters. His third daughter, Mary, is born with a condition so rare and so little understood in this era that it results in unwelcome attention being drawn to the Bennett family, attention that the former Captain Bennett cannot afford.
This is an epic tale, with high angst and loads of drama. The action is fierce and fascinating, and this author always manages to make his good guys larger than life and romanticized to a high degree. This is a tale about courage in the face of adversity, the triumph of good over evil, and the power of love over all. The story uses the character names and locations of P&P, but that's about it. This is a total re-imagining, and it's superb.
The book is very well written and well edited. I sincerely hope Mr Richman continues to create JAFF. I recommend this book very highly. There's so much to it: wonderful romance; subtle humor; mystery; situations both heartbreaking and heartwarming; and more. This is a must read for any JAFF enthusiast.
March 30, 2025
Worth the read
I get excited whenever Richman releases a new book because I look forward to the intrigue and, dare I say, the 'good guys' defending themselves, their country, or loved ones by any means necessary.
What I liked:
- Richman's original characters are back, including Richman's Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam.
- I enjoyed the storyline involving the Bennet sisters.
- The story held my interest.
My nitpick:
- There were a few interesting scenes that lacked closure. I would have loved to know the consequences instead of jumping to a new scene.
I get excited whenever Richman releases a new book because I look forward to the intrigue and, dare I say, the 'good guys' defending themselves, their country, or loved ones by any means necessary.
What I liked:
- Richman's original characters are back, including Richman's Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam.
- I enjoyed the storyline involving the Bennet sisters.
- The story held my interest.
My nitpick:
- There were a few interesting scenes that lacked closure. I would have loved to know the consequences instead of jumping to a new scene.
March 30, 2025
Heartbreaking and special
The issues depicted in this book were very deep and compelling.
1 - the issue of keeping a devastating secret, even to the degree of affecting family relationships.
2 - dealing with disabilities and hate from those not accepting of differences. My assumption is that Mary was albino which that era did not accept. Also the issues the colonel dealt with.
3 - and how the family splintered because of superstition and alienation. Jane was too caught up in false beliefs and lost her humanity.
Well worth reading- a very different take on P&P.
The issues depicted in this book were very deep and compelling.
1 - the issue of keeping a devastating secret, even to the degree of affecting family relationships.
2 - dealing with disabilities and hate from those not accepting of differences. My assumption is that Mary was albino which that era did not accept. Also the issues the colonel dealt with.
3 - and how the family splintered because of superstition and alienation. Jane was too caught up in false beliefs and lost her humanity.
Well worth reading- a very different take on P&P.
March 28, 2025
Barry is the master of writing Pride and Prejudice variations. His stories take you way beyond the general plots of other writers. He writes a complete story different from the original, but with the characters blended in, in such a marvelous way. I’ve read all of his books and each time they get better. Highly recommend. Make sure you put some time aside because you won’t want to put it down.
June 13, 2025
Wow. That was so very different from every other Jane Austen retelling I’ve read, but this is no bad thing! It gripped my attention and refused to let me lay it aside until I reached the end. Intriguing concept, interesting character development, and my favorite character was for sure Mary. Though I certainly loved Darcy and Lizzie too!
March 28, 2025
Speechless!!!
Barry Richman has once again left me struggling to find words that don't seem trite. After 10 minutes of sitting here waiting for my mind to sort itself out and be coherent, I have given up.
Buy and read this book!! It is sure to become a favorite re-read!
Barry Richman has once again left me struggling to find words that don't seem trite. After 10 minutes of sitting here waiting for my mind to sort itself out and be coherent, I have given up.
Buy and read this book!! It is sure to become a favorite re-read!
April 9, 2025
For those who have not yet read Barry Richman’s P&P vagaries, know that he is an intense writer and will use violence in his work. If that is a problem for you then this work is not for you. If you love an intensely told and well-crafted tale, do not miss this book. Some spoilers ahead!
“Wreek mij”… avenge me. For the most part this is Thomas Bennet and Mary Bennet’s story. Elizabeth and Darcy are both part of the story and achieve their HEA with minimal angst (Elizabeth can well defend herself) but they are more peripheral characters in this book. Thomas Bennet is a colonel in the regulars who, after carrying out a mission which earns the wrath of a vengeful brother, is given a knighthood, an estate (Longbourn), and the protection of a band of ruthless veterans by the crown. He then proceeds to blend into the neighborhood. He marries Frances Gardiner and they start a family. They have daughters…the eldest is Jane, beautiful and egotistical, the second is Elizabeth, lively and intelligent, the third is Mary, born with a shocking condition, and twins Catherine and Lydia, who die at birth.
The residents of Meryton are superstitious and reject Mary. Jane sides with the townspeople and is very resentful of Mary. Elizabeth becomes Mary’s protector. Mrs Bennet becomes a victim of the unruly people in the town and Jane, blaming Mary for her mother’s death, is disowned by Bennet and sent to live with the Gardiners. Mary is sent to a convent to learn healing (she has a natural gift) and Elizabeth and Bennet are sent to a new estate in Derbyshire to further hide Bennet. Jane’s story does not end well.
Colonel Fitzwilliam is a man who feels no pain. Like Mary many consider him to be unnatural. Mary is sent to Richard to be his private nurse and is “following the drum.” This is a poignant and engrossing story. Although both Mary and Elizabeth yearn to know why their family was torn apart there are ultimately no answers for them. But the just survive and the evil receive their due. Bravo Mr Richman!
“Wreek mij”… avenge me. For the most part this is Thomas Bennet and Mary Bennet’s story. Elizabeth and Darcy are both part of the story and achieve their HEA with minimal angst (Elizabeth can well defend herself) but they are more peripheral characters in this book. Thomas Bennet is a colonel in the regulars who, after carrying out a mission which earns the wrath of a vengeful brother, is given a knighthood, an estate (Longbourn), and the protection of a band of ruthless veterans by the crown. He then proceeds to blend into the neighborhood. He marries Frances Gardiner and they start a family. They have daughters…the eldest is Jane, beautiful and egotistical, the second is Elizabeth, lively and intelligent, the third is Mary, born with a shocking condition, and twins Catherine and Lydia, who die at birth.
The residents of Meryton are superstitious and reject Mary. Jane sides with the townspeople and is very resentful of Mary. Elizabeth becomes Mary’s protector. Mrs Bennet becomes a victim of the unruly people in the town and Jane, blaming Mary for her mother’s death, is disowned by Bennet and sent to live with the Gardiners. Mary is sent to a convent to learn healing (she has a natural gift) and Elizabeth and Bennet are sent to a new estate in Derbyshire to further hide Bennet. Jane’s story does not end well.
Colonel Fitzwilliam is a man who feels no pain. Like Mary many consider him to be unnatural. Mary is sent to Richard to be his private nurse and is “following the drum.” This is a poignant and engrossing story. Although both Mary and Elizabeth yearn to know why their family was torn apart there are ultimately no answers for them. But the just survive and the evil receive their due. Bravo Mr Richman!
March 26, 2025
Follow The Drum has it all: drama, political intrigue, some romance, revenge and tragedy. It is more of a historical espionage thriller than romance. The story is considerbaly different from canon. After a successful mission in the Netherlands, Mr Bennet retires to Longbourn in the English countryside. He takes a wife and they have three daughters, Jane, Elizabeth and Mary. But his secret past as an officer and the affliction Mary is born with are the causes for tragedy that will tear the Bennet family apart.
The main characters, except Elizabeth maybe, are different from canon. Mr. Bennet is a responsible father and husband. He is not neglectful of his daughters and wife. Mrs Bennet is a sensible, loving and protective mother to all her daughters. Elizabeth is clever, witty and lively, but also censorious of her father. Jane is not as angelic as in canon, to say the least. Mary, who suffers from an affliction, is timid, wise and brave. Darcy and the swoonworthy Col. Fitzwilliam make an appearance only in the second half of the story. I hoped that at the end, Mr Bennet would finally open up to his daughters and tell them the truth and explain why their famiily was destroyed. It was quite painful to watch their disappointment at him still choosing not to share more of him with them.
I found the story gripping and impressive. It was unpredictable at times. The main characters are well-written and complex. I can say that Col. Fitzwilliam is one of my favorite and for a moment there I was afraid that he and Mary wouldn't have their happy ever after. I'm glad it turned out well.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving my review.
The main characters, except Elizabeth maybe, are different from canon. Mr. Bennet is a responsible father and husband. He is not neglectful of his daughters and wife. Mrs Bennet is a sensible, loving and protective mother to all her daughters. Elizabeth is clever, witty and lively, but also censorious of her father. Jane is not as angelic as in canon, to say the least. Mary, who suffers from an affliction, is timid, wise and brave. Darcy and the swoonworthy Col. Fitzwilliam make an appearance only in the second half of the story. I hoped that at the end, Mr Bennet would finally open up to his daughters and tell them the truth and explain why their famiily was destroyed. It was quite painful to watch their disappointment at him still choosing not to share more of him with them.
I found the story gripping and impressive. It was unpredictable at times. The main characters are well-written and complex. I can say that Col. Fitzwilliam is one of my favorite and for a moment there I was afraid that he and Mary wouldn't have their happy ever after. I'm glad it turned out well.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving my review.
March 27, 2025
Follow The Drum is a delightful saga with many twists and turns that you will not want to put down until you have read it all the way through. You will want to reread it though, be forewarned, it is that good of a tale. If you have read either of Barry's previous book you have an idea of what to expect from this tale. You will also get to see Mr. Richman's original characters we have come to know and love. If you have not for whatever reason read one of Barry's books before then what are you waiting for? This tale has it all, mystery, intrigue, romance, and more. This book is about the Bennet family as a whole with emphasis on Mary and Elizabeth. I read any story with Mary as a main character and this one did not disappoint! We get our usual Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy-their meetings are a bit humorous. Jane's character is a surprise but a surprise I enjoyed. Mary however I feel was the main star of this one, along with dear Col. Fitzwilliam. I also really loved the original characters in this one particularly the Edge's and Hector. This was a fantastic read that I will definitely be rereading again!
I did receive a free copy for my honest review
I did receive a free copy for my honest review
March 24, 2025
The Father: a Soldier – The Daughter: a Nurse – The Link: a Secret
One book, three stories – all connected to one action in the father’s past.
Book 1: Thomas Bennet as a soldier
Book 2: Thoms Bennet as a married man with a family
Book 3: Thoams Bennet and two of his daughters factually confronted with the past
For me this intense book is above all Mary’s story – Mary with her very own specialties and faculties and her path to finding herself with her special gifts and her worth.
Yet it is also a book how one well-intended action of a person can affect the future of many people, especially also of the ones one loves and has pledged to protect them at all costs and therefore also to accept to never be able to unburden oneself completely and negate absolute honesty to the loved-ones – because of the secret.
I was lucky to get a copy in advance and I can recommend the book and – again - its creator.
It is not a book for the soft-hearted, as war is a topic, but many soft and tender moments are there too, especially thanks to Mary.
One book, three stories – all connected to one action in the father’s past.
Book 1: Thomas Bennet as a soldier
Book 2: Thoms Bennet as a married man with a family
Book 3: Thoams Bennet and two of his daughters factually confronted with the past
For me this intense book is above all Mary’s story – Mary with her very own specialties and faculties and her path to finding herself with her special gifts and her worth.
Yet it is also a book how one well-intended action of a person can affect the future of many people, especially also of the ones one loves and has pledged to protect them at all costs and therefore also to accept to never be able to unburden oneself completely and negate absolute honesty to the loved-ones – because of the secret.
I was lucky to get a copy in advance and I can recommend the book and – again - its creator.
It is not a book for the soft-hearted, as war is a topic, but many soft and tender moments are there too, especially thanks to Mary.
April 11, 2025
Definitely a different kind of P&P variation.
The characters are all accounted for, but in new and interesting ways, which really made me want to keep reading to see how this AU panned out.
The language was clipped, abrupt, with more insinuations than descriptions. It was harsh with the realities of a different side of that period, less on the drawing rooms, and more on the military aspects and how rough life really was away from the silks and Bond Street. But you know what? It works.
The storyline kept me guessing, made me mad at the unfairness of life sometimes, made me feel vindicated at other times, and I read every word to the end. Because every word counted - if you skimmed, you might miss something that becomes important later.
There was just a hint of E and D, barely enough to make it count as a P&P story. So don't read it for the E & D interactions. Read it for the Bennet family intrigues in a time of turmoil, strong protective men, strong independent women, and of course, an HEA.
The characters are all accounted for, but in new and interesting ways, which really made me want to keep reading to see how this AU panned out.
The language was clipped, abrupt, with more insinuations than descriptions. It was harsh with the realities of a different side of that period, less on the drawing rooms, and more on the military aspects and how rough life really was away from the silks and Bond Street. But you know what? It works.
The storyline kept me guessing, made me mad at the unfairness of life sometimes, made me feel vindicated at other times, and I read every word to the end. Because every word counted - if you skimmed, you might miss something that becomes important later.
There was just a hint of E and D, barely enough to make it count as a P&P story. So don't read it for the E & D interactions. Read it for the Bennet family intrigues in a time of turmoil, strong protective men, strong independent women, and of course, an HEA.
August 8, 2025
3⭐️
After reading Doubt Not Cousin by the same author and loving the story, this was a little bit of a let down. I think reusing the same character/personality traits and stories for most of the main characters felt like a cop out to me. This could be because I fell in love with those characters in the previous book and I got to know them, where as in this book the characters are not as well fleshed out. And instead of Kitty being the extraordinary lady with a hurtful past, it is Mary. I just was not as satisfied with the way this story was handled.
After reading Doubt Not Cousin by the same author and loving the story, this was a little bit of a let down. I think reusing the same character/personality traits and stories for most of the main characters felt like a cop out to me. This could be because I fell in love with those characters in the previous book and I got to know them, where as in this book the characters are not as well fleshed out. And instead of Kitty being the extraordinary lady with a hurtful past, it is Mary. I just was not as satisfied with the way this story was handled.
March 29, 2025
Thank you for writing books with the same Mr D and Col F and supporting original characters. I thoroughly enjoyed this book. You know it is good when you have to put it down and walk away for a second. You know it is good when you audibly gasp. You know it is good when you are calling family members to you (loudly) just so you can tell them what happened and they are actually interested in hearing more. I did all of the above. You have won my loyalty as a reader and I can only commend you for your excellence. Thank you so much.
PS Also, I loved this book so much that I went and purchased all of this author's books for cash money. (I read this on kindle unlimited but he deserves all the money.)
PS Also, I loved this book so much that I went and purchased all of this author's books for cash money. (I read this on kindle unlimited but he deserves all the money.)
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