The sound is soft, barely audible. But to him, it means everything. The lock sliding into place. The surrender of control. The loss of his freedom. The proof that his pleasure no longer belongs to him.
Gregg thought he understood what he was asking for when he handed me the key. A little teasing, a little denial—something to deepen the games we played in the bedroom. But neither of us was prepared for how far this would go. How much I would take. How much he would crave it.
Now, his world revolves around my pleasure. His frustration fuels my amusement. His suffering becomes my greatest indulgence. And the more I push him, the more I ruin him, the more desperate he becomes to please me.
But every game must come to an end. Every fantasy must meet reality.
And when the moment of truth arrives, when he finally holds the key to his own future, only one question remains.
It’s a well written story, but has some parts that are a little unbelievable. They don’t detract from the story and do allow it to move along faster.
Like in the beginning, she doesn’t know what a chastity cage is when she sees one. But right away she knows about edging, denial and ruined orgasms.
Possible, sure-likely, I don’t think so.
Anyway like I said, it doesn’t really detract from the story.
But the real problem is does this woman really enjoy sex, or not. After she locks him up, she goes months without being f**ked and even says that she likes the power more than sex.
She enjoys denying someone else more than she likes having it herself.
But don’t get me wrong. All the time we are reading about this change in their relationship, it’s still a very sexy story.
I should have mentioned that the story is written with the wife being the story teller. So unlike many other stories, we really learn about her feelings, her desires.
We don’t get that same point of view from the husband and. As I was reading I thought, what an interesting story would it be to read the same story, but from the husband’s perspective.
The biggest issue I have is the ending.
If I were you, I’d read the story before you read my opinion. I think you’d have more fun that way.
So to continue if you must. At the end they go to a cottage in the woods for a long weekend. She says it’s something that they do to relax and get away with some regularity.
But she has a plan. She’s going to unlock him for the weekend and work on him to get him to agree to be locked up for as long as she wants.
But while they go through the weekend having wonderful sex, she realizes that she misses having him in her and misses it a lot. You begin to feel that she may let it all be in the past.
I won’t go so far as to tell you what happens, other than to say that they never/ever sit down and discuss how they might be able to have it all.
The whole story is her becoming FemDom to the extent of not having sex herself. She’s happier denying him.
Then she gets all soft herself.
For me things flip too fast, but I won’t tell you how it turns out.