Sigh...I had high hopes for Beneath Him. It has a possessive alpha determined to woo a feisty, independent woman, just my thing. But, the execution is sadly lacking, I'm afraid. Alex is the alpha in question. He's rich, hot, possessive, domineering and way too CONTROLLING! He meets Jessica when she literally runs into him in his offices, where she is the makeup artist on a shoot for the magazine he owns. He has one look (and feel) of her and he wants more, he wants all of her.
"I'm demanding and relentless when I go after something I want." His head pulls back, and his eyes bore into mine, holding me captive. "I want you, Jessica. All of you and nothing less."
Well, he gets her, after driving her absolutely mad calling and texting her, but only her body, at first. She's been burned in the past by a controlling man, so she's not about to let her heart get broken by another rich guy who only sleeps with a woman, then discards her when he acquires another toy. So it's only sex, or at least that's the charade Alex agrees to before he drops the bombshell that he wants all of her. She can't help but to go along with it, because he's hot, and great in bed. But, at the end right before that ubiquitous cliffhanger, she gets her heart broken all over again. How could she have been stupid enough to give into this man?!
I really like Jessica, she's the sole reason I didn't rate this lower. She's smart, feisty and independent. Alex is pretty much just a caricature of the possessive, controlling alpha. There's nothing particularly interesting or outstanding about him. He's like every other guy in romances, but without the depth that makes an alpha truly special.
And then there's the fact that C. Shell's writing is choppy. I'd suggest she learn how to use apostrophes, because without them, the language in her writing is much too formal and stilted. It took me out of the book every other sentence and made reading Beneath Him uncomfortable. I am interested in learning what happens in the next book, but not sure if I'll remember to check back to see if it's ever published. Considering that Beneath Him was published last year and I don't see a sequel anywhere, I'd say the chances of the sequel any time soon are about 0.
A good tightening of everything in Beneath Him would have been really helpful. Fleshing out Alex a lot would go a long way toward making him palatable. And some language readjusting too, would help. If all these things are done in the sequel (if one is ever published), then perhaps it would be a story worth reading. As Beneath Him stands, though, it's not that great and not worth a second read.
I received an ARC through NetGalley for an honest review.