The book started off too slow. And I particularly dislike time lapses. One minute they met, the other they jumped 3 months ahead.
Jax and Sasha met outside a grocery store. They flirted and chitchatted amicably. She even wanted to date him and kiss him (she admitted further along in the book). I understand instant infatuation and attraction, but from there to want to instant date and kiss? Yeah not my cup of tea.
Then she realised he was going to be her boss, she turned into this uptight distant grumpy person for whatever reason that we are not privy to.
The author made it hard for us to like the MFC and at this point I don't blame Jax for the way he keeps his distance and give her a hard time.
Plus what's with all the ambiguity with different characters mentioned in the books like Eddie, Micah and Emery! Devney Perry wanted us to make assumptions and imagine different scenarios about these side characters but I didn’t appreciate it! I believe her intention was to get us intrigued but for me it was just annoying keeping us in the dark like that. 🤷♀️
Then the party arrives and Sasha gets drunk with merely two glasses of alcohol. Obviously, she lets down her inhibitions and they have a more than an underwhelming first tumble in the sheets.
But alas, the morning after. The Walk of Shame. Avoiding serious confrontations because yeah it is immature... I mean easier like that! 🤦♀️
There is nothing worse than a fliety and insecure MFC. Own your actions, voice your thoughts woman!
Oh for freaks' sakes. Devney and her time jumps. 6 weeks again of radio silence! Aaaaand she's pregnant! *gasp* shocker!
Devney Perry doesn't do character building. She just skips and shoots.
Meet cute. BAM they can't stand each other. BAM three months later. BAM one night stand. BAM 6 weeks later. BAM she's pregnant.
How are we supposed to keep up or to feel that they're growing feelings for each other!
This is getting so annoying. Sasha is just weird. Unpleasant. Stuck up. Why does he even like her, ok she's pretty but other than that she has no redeemable qualities! I would understand people liking some traits about others but what does she have to offer? She's closed off. Doesn't trust him. She's not friendly. She's not kind. She keeps to herself. She ambiguous. She's a grump and rude! Ughhh 🙄
Couldn't care less about her or Jax for that matter. They're having a child for heaven's sake yet they don't want to share history, background, their pasts, their lives, nothing. They're just a couple of strangers who hooked up, got knocked up and now they want to bring a poor baby into this world. And then we wonder what is wrong with the younger generations! Well.... 👆
At this point, I just want to know who the heck Eddie is and be done with it.
If I could've skipped the first 85% of the book and just read the last 15% it would have saved me so much frustration and irritation. The first 85% deserves a mere .5 but I'll round it up to 2 just for the last 15%.
Oh and we finally know who Eddie is LOL
I would have dnf'd this book if it weren't a BR with Chris and Lori. Thanks ladies for another super fun book commentaries.