Mute is a short MC romance read of Alec (Mute) and Katrina (Kat). Kat is a former foster kid scraping her way through nursing school, and Mute is the Sergent at Arms of the Dragon Runner’s MC. (he also can’t speak from having his vocal cords severed during a fight)
Both main characters were likable enough. I believe it comes with a trigger warning, but if you’re familiar with the genre you should be fine. (It’s not dark or overly violent.) This is the first book, so there’re several secondary characters thrown into the mix. The series might be a spinoff because I felt like I was supposed to be familiar with the older members of the club, but I never felt lost.
I had a couple issues, the first was the execution of the plot. I felt like the author had an idea but wasn’t sure how to get us there, so it read as a series of random events strung together. SPOILERS
For example, Mute likes Kat and Kat likes Mute, BUT Mute doesn’t think he’s good enough, so he pushes her away. Kat realizes he’s not into her and starts distancing/protecting herself. This goes on for quite a while with each of them just doing stuff. There’s not really feelings of angst or betrayal, neither is dying inside with longing. Then, around 65%, out of the blue
He looked at me with a depth I hadn’t seen in him before, and my breath left me. Someday, I would look back and know this was the turning point. This was when I, Katrina Vega, was silently claimed by a Dragon Runner called Mute. I became his woman, his old lady then and there, just like a puzzle piece fitting into another one, perfectly locked into place.
I was happy they got together with a good chunk of the book left (I hate it when they don’t couple up until the end), but I needed some sort of development/lead up/explanation to get there. Why suddenly does Mute feel worthy? Why is Kat now open to letting someone in?
Also, there was all this randomness with the characters that kept distracting me.
🤯 If Mute is Native American, why does he have a full mustache and a Jared Leto lookalike on the cover?
🤯 How does he grow and shrink in size (like the Hulk) when he’s angry?
🤯 How are they communicating telepathically? She gets entire conversations from facial expression and head tilts.
🤯 Why does Mute suddenly become unintelligent when he writes the letter? He doesn’t act like he’s dim; their telepathic conversations are normal; his texts are mostly normal; his typed response during Church is normal, but he sends her a letter that looks like an 9yr old wrote random parts of it. (misspelling loud goes way beyond only having a HS diploma)
🤯Why do the baddies giggle and speak like hillbillies?
🤯 Why is the epilogue from Betsy’s POV? It would’ve been more emotional coming from Mute and Kit.
Bottom Line- I liked the bones; having a nonverbal male was unique. I love the brotherhood of MC books. I just needed more. And I kept getting distracted by all the little illogical things.
Safety- He has sex with a club bunny and the h sees it. This is while they are both crushing but haven’t even really spoken. (no relationship at all) It doesn’t create any drama, the OW is never an issue and the h isn’t heartbroken. They never even discuss it. (I think that might be why he said he was an alcoholik (sic) in the letter… to give us a reason) As someone ok with OW shenanigans, I thought this was a major loss of potential angsty goodness and drama.