This book was pretty stupid, if I'm being honest. Let's see, first of all. Eden was supposed to be dating Santos alone, therefore, the person who had the right to be angry that she walked away, was him. The other friends were just that, friends and just because they were in love with her at the time, I don't think it gave them the right to get so angry at her and attack her for the way she ended up, but they still did.
Second, the main conflict of why they broke up seemed to me to play out in a very stupid way. I'm not referring to the abuse Eden suffered, but the way they fell for Santos' dad's lies when they could have easily talked it out and worked it out. I understand they were teenagers, but seriously. It didn't cross Eden's mind to, I don't know, ask him what he meant by he already knew? it didn't occur to him to think he was talking about something else? why on earth do they make teenagers look like fools? The way the conflict played out was silly.
Third. The sexual scenes in this book were the most uncomfortable thing in the world to read. They all, but absolutely all happened under unpleasant circumstances. The first when she was doing her job as a prostitute, the second when Vanni practically molested her, the third with Marcos in the gym, then that scene in the bar with all of them. There was no romance in this book, which made no sense if it's an HR. They were very cringe-worthy scenes to read and not at all erotic, but very robotic.
Fourth. The way they degraded the main character throughout the book was just disgusting. Let's see, I know it's a dark romance (which are some of my favorite plots) but they usually come with redemption for the harem characters and here there was no such thing.How is it possible that after finding out the real reason Eden ran away, they weren't able to apologize to her.They weren't able to treat her better.And they want me to buy into that romance?
Fifth: drug addiction was a theme that could have been very helpful for the development of Eden's character, but here they threw it away. How is it possible that the idiot Marcos gave her cigarettes to smoke while she was still trying to recover? gave her alcohol? Not to mention that it's pretty hard for a person who was an addict for so long not to have a very painful and very long withdrawal. Eden only lasted about 3 weeks with symptomatology and after that it was pretty much nil. The authors lacked research in this part.
Sixth: Eden needs a psychologist. She was abused millions of times, before she had to disappear and after she disappeared. I just don't understand why the writers didn't make this more believable.
There was no character development, no plot, no relationships, no feelings. I felt them empty, flat, without any kind of emotion. They were all interchangeable with each other, you couldn't tell any of the love interests apart.
I expected more considering it's only two books and the worst thing is that they had a lot of material to cut from this story but unfortunately it fell short. Very disappointing.