'Galveston' is a good noir novel. The author, Nic Pizzolatto, is the creator of the HBO series, "True Detective" and seems to be using his talents in the lucrative TV business. As other reviewers have noted, the literary world is a lesser place with Pizzolatto's absence. He has the potential to be among the top noir writers of the past and the present. I believe this is Pizzolatto's first and only novel. He has published a couple of collections of short stories, also.
His story is about Roy Cady, a "bagman" and all-around-bad guy who works for a New Orleans crime boss collecting debts and messing people up if they have wronged his boss. Apparently Stan, his employer, doesn't take much to feel wronged. Stan is now romantically involved with Carmen, a girl who used to be involved with Roy and, prior to that, Angelo, both underling thugs in Stan's crime organization. Stan sends Roy and Angelo on a mission to rough up a suspected snitch. Stan advises that the men bring no guns, which Roy finds strange, and Roy begins to suspect a set-up and decides to bring his gun anyway and also hides a spring-loaded stiletto on his forearm. Roy and Angelo arrive at the snitch's place and, sure enough, the set up occurs, as three thugs attack them. In what can only be described as miraculous or preposterous, Roy emerges from his imminent execution as the last man standing. He hears a female whimper and passes by one room where he sees a dead girl to the room of another girl who goes by "Rocky." Both girls were there to service the snitch so it'd be easier for the three thugs to whack him. Some human part of Roy feels pity for the girl and against his criminal training and instincts he decides to take her along as he goes on the lam hiding from Stan, whom he rightly figures will be pissed when he finds his three hit men dead. To add to Roy's worries, earlier that day he had a doctor's appointment and his chest x-ray reveals he has lung cancer and is dying. The thought of impending death either by the cancer or by Stan's henchmen give him a lot to ponder as heads out on the highway escaping the Big Easy.
Thus begins a drive to Galveston with a stopover in Rocky's small Texas hometown where Roy waits outside, hears a gunshot and Rocky comes walking out with an adorable four-year-old girl. She says the girl is her sister but we later learn the little one is actually Rocky's child, courtesy of a rape by her stepfather, the man she shot and killed while rescuing her daughter. She doesn't tell Roy about the killing, but he later reads in the papers he scours daily looking for news about the shit that went down in New Orleans.
The couple, with little sister in tow, proceed to Galveston for no apparent reason. They stay in a seedy motel and Roy shaves his beard and shaves off his long hair to change his appearance. Roy gets Rocky and her sister/daughter a separate room and passes as the girls' uncle. The couple drink a lot, neglect the child, leaving her in the hands of a friendly pair of old ladies who are conveniently also renting a room. Roy reads about Rocky murdering her stepfather in one of the papers he scours and his criminal instincts kick in and he takes off alone in his 1984 F-150 truck and gets to Amarillo before deciding to go back. Roy waxes nostalgic and stops by Dallas to visit an old girlfriend who he's not seen in 11-12 years. There's no clear reason why he would do this and the ex is now married to a rich guy and lives in the sort of neighborhood where you're pulled for vagrancy if you're driving a car worth less than $80,000. They chat a bit and Roy tries to relive old times but the lady's not biting and tells him the past is not real, only the present.
When he gets back he finds, amazingly, that Rocky has returned to the world's oldest profession to make money. She has left the girl with the old ladies and the hotel owner, a crusty woman who knows the score and threatens to call social service and have the girl put in state custody unless Roy gets things under control. Rocky has been gone a few days and Roy goes on a detective mission to find her. Roy eventually catches up to her, chides her and life returns to some semblance of normality--for them, that is. Days are spent playing with the girl on the beach as Roy drinks and ponders. He also performs a routine (for him) murder of another motel resident, a junkie who is trying to interest Roy in a criminal scheme of stealing drugs from a shady physician. When the junkie reads the paper and connects Rocky to her stepfather's murder and tries to blackmail Roy, Roy has no choice but to kill him.
Roy then tries to blackmail his old boss because while surviving the hit the boss put on him, he has snatched up papers implicating the boss in corruption with the stevedore union. He demands that $75,000 be put in a bank account he has opened under his false ID. Roy has made a few mistakes during his escape. A call he made back to the doctor who diagnosed his lung cancer was traced to Galveston and Stan's henchman arrive and take him and Rocky away. Roy is given a severe beating that costs him his teeth, some of his skull bone and permanent damage to his hand. He is waiting for Stan to come and finish the job when, miracle of miracles, he is freed by Carmen, the woman blamed for this whole mess in the first place. He passes by Rocky, also presumably awaiting execution, and decides, this time, not to intervene with fate. He flees and attempts to get a passing car to stop and help him. He has no luck but does succeed in carjacking a man after stabbing him and manages to drive a short distance before crashing and ending up in the hospital.
He is tried on various counts and is patched up with metal and screws and then sentenced to 12 years in Louisiana's infamous Angola Penitentiary. He does the 12 years without incident, having had prior prison experience to help him through this latest sojourn. He takes up book-reading in prison, and probably would have been a useful contributor on Goodreads.
As he does in "True Detective," Pizzolatto shifts back and forth in time, mostly in the book's latter chapters. Roy is back living in Galveston, having fled Louisiana after his prison stretch. Twenty years pass in Galveston and Roy leads a quiet life working part-time as a handyman in exchange for pocket money and housing. He attends AA meetings on occasion, as he has given up drinking long ago, and reads books. The lung spots on his ancient x-ray were not full-blown cancer, so he has lived with this strange medical condition a long time.
The denouement involves a man in an inconspicuous Jaguar making inquiries about him at his residence and waiting outside some of his hangouts. Roy figures this is another of Stan's henchmen coming to take him out but the man turns out to be a detective that the little girl, now a grown woman, has hired to track Roy down and decipher her missing past. A giant storm is headed directly toward Galveston but, in another miraculous occurrence, Tiffany, Rocky's long-lost daughter, makes her way to Roy's residence, seeming unaware that a storm that will destroy the city looms close by. Roy tells her the truth about everything and she leaves, taking his dog she has promised to keep. We hear nothing of her emotional reaction to all he tells her but we do learn she is a successful professional who was adopted by a "good" family and raised in Tyler, now living in Austin. She leaves as Roy awaits the storm that will take him out of this life. The end. Some reviewers have seen this as Roy's "redemption." I'm not sure I'd agree.
The Good:
The novel's strongest point is its writing, which is clear and to-the-point, most of the time. I had read in some magazine that Pizzolatto was heavily influenced by Faulkner. This may be; but the novel contained no four-page sentences or meandering impediments to the actual story, for which I am thankful. He is also good at portraying how a criminal thug like Roy thinks and behaves. It is not by accident that Roy has a credible but fake ID which he uses after going on the lam. It is also not a coincidence that he keeps his hair long and has a shaggy beard, so that if he is being tracked by police or thugs he can dramatically alter his appearance. His killing of the junkie attempting to blackmail him is also believable. Roy is a dangerous man, and is paid to be a menacing guy inured to using brute force without compunction.
Pizzolatto also captures the chaos of those living on the seedy underside of life. His characters are not people who get up in the morning, eat breakfast and go to an office job. They hurt other people, like Roy, or maybe stop by the house they grew up in to shoot their stepfather to death. It's clear that Pizzolatto knows something about the seamy side of life and how many criminals think.
The not-so-good:
Pizzolatto's thug anti-hero, Roy, is a man given to self-reflection. From my past work, I've had occasion to encounter a great many guys like Roy--big guys with long, shaggy hair and hard looks known to do bad things. I'm not saying that all of these men can be stereotyped as lacking the ability or propensity to engage in reflection about their actions, life, etc. I am saying, though, that I've never seen a man similar to Roy who did so much reflecting and did so using words like "blowsy," or using phrases like, "I deemed the weather offensive, the way the air lay on me like a giant tongue, clammy and warm and gritty as embers." Most of these men were men of action, and tended to curse a lot, which Roy rarely does. Pizzolatto is great when Roy speaks in clear, simple English and when Roy muses in fancier ways, the writing remains top-notch--it just makes Roy appear as if he's an ex-MFA student whose life went awry a ways back but still retains vestiges of his former self via his studious ruminations.
While I acknowledge that there are all sorts of crime bosses, some given to behavior that is self-defeating, it is hard (for me) to believe that a gangster running a successful criminal enterprise in a major city would conspire to kill two of his employees just because they had previous liaisons with his current girlfriend. It's not my story, of course, and I suppose anything's possible, but I'd love to meet Pizzolatto and ask him the reason he used the woman as the unwitting femme fatale. Crime bosses generally attract lots of women, as do even low-level criminals. It is not for nothing that in my town we have a saying:
"If you want to see the prettiest women in town, visit the jail on Thursday afternoons." (visiting day)
All-in-all, though, Pizzolatto has given me fits trying to spell his name and has crafted a fine first novel that shows a lot of promise should he decide to leave the big money of HBO behind and return to writing books.