This book left me hungry, but not necessarily in a good way.
I bought this series as a single ebook on Barnes and Noble, simply because the whole trilogy was only $5. Well, you get what you pay for, I guess.
Let me begin by saying that these books weren't bad. However, they also were certainly not good.
The following review contains spoilers for the series.
The characters were very flat and a little to shiny. Everyone was perfect looking, not a single ugly face in the whole book. Even when they'd been through a battle and were covered in blood, they were still flawless. They were also incredibly two-dimensional. The main characters: Emily; Brianna; Aern; and Logan, were exactly as they first appeared. They changed very little over the course of the trilogy, other than realizing some powers that were previously unknown. These new powers didn't change their already perfect personalities or create any unattractive character traits, as you would expect them to. In fact, Brianna and Emily come into their new powers and instantly master them without so much as a blink or grimace. They're also remarkably well-adjusted and nice for two displaced foster children who grew up knowing they were the subject of an apocalyptic prophecy.
Characterization aside, the romances are equally unbelievable. They fall in love instantly and irrevocably. Despite knowing each other for a matter of days, or sometimes only hours, they realize they've found their true soul mate, nevermind that most of the time they've been together was spent on the run and very little was devoted to getting to know each other. Of course, the characters are so flat and two-dimensional that they probably learned everything there was to know about each other after only a few minutes. Still, even fantasy romance doesn't work like this.
My other major issue was with the world-building. A fantasy novel is only as good as the world in which is lives. This is an urban fantasy, for sure, but other than that, I don't understand where we were or why we were there. The city was non-descript and had an obscene amount of abandoned factories (really, it was a bit ridiculous). The time period was not established. Is this today? Is it some unnamed future? Is it even really Earth?
And what about these Seven Lines and the Shadows? I gave up trying to figure out their history after the second book, because there just weren't any usable clues. They just came out of the woodwork thousands of years ago, apparently, though that's never really addressed. And they somehow live apart from regular human "commonbloods," and nobody seems to care. There's too much left to the imagination, and not enough details for my imagination to run with.
Overall, the whole series felt really disconnected and sparse, to me. I feel like the plot had a lot of potential and the characters could have been really dynamic, but the books were so short that it all sort of felt underdeveloped. I'm a middle school Language Arts teacher, and to me, it was the sort of book that I would have handed back to a student and said, "It has good bones, but I need more meat, more detail!"
Did I read it? Yes. Is it the worst book I've read? Probably not. But, it's also the sort of book that I won't be going back to for a re-read.
The potential was there. The bones of the story were good. There just wasn't enough meat to fill me up. The books left me wanting more, but not in the way they should. As far as what happens next, despite the near-cliffhanger, I really couldn't care less (based on the pattern, they'll get through it with a minimum of meaningful casualties and everyone will recover in a matter of hours), but I would kind of like to know more about the characters and the story that already happened.
It wasn't a fulfilling read, and for that reason, I could never recommend it to a friend.