Damnnnnnnn, after the brilliance that was Blood Orange this sorely doesn’t measure up. I’m disappointed. ***spoilers ahead***
TW miscarriage, pregnancy, child abduction etc
Firstly, I didn’t really connect with Valtu as the love interest in this book, and I ADORED him in Blood Orange, so that was naturally a big issue. I know why he erases his memories but he turns into a downright cunt and stays that way for at least the full first half of the novel, meaning I wasn’t really rooting for him or his relationship with Rose and just thought he was being an asshole. Like he’s literally giving toxic alpha-hole and not in a hot way.
Then there’s poor Rose who just wants to love him regardless of literally anything. She loves him despite him murdering her… And for what?! When Valtu finally figures it all out he pussies out and erases his memories of her AGAIN?! Like fuck me man, you are being the absolute WORST. But don’t worry, because that little speed bump is resolved within the next 5 pages with the worlds simplest resolution and we magically have the old Valtu back. I mean, thank god, but still. We wait until 75% for this…
I didn’t really connect that much with Rose’s new family either. I think this is the problem of having her be a ‘different person’ in book one and book two. I know the author makes a point of continuously pointing out that she’s “all four of these women” but I was so connected to Dahlia from book one that the storyline of Rose’s parents and missing brother didn’t really move me. I just didn’t care about them? We get hardly any time with them so I was just like, meh whatever. Rose doesn’t actually get any of her own personality developed at all. I did, however, really like Dylan. He was funny and he had good chemistry with Rose in the few scenes he had. Him meeting Lief for the first time at the end was really sweet and funny.
I also feel like Rose was done dirty later on in that her whole development arc was basically glossed over. She becomes a vampire, hardly acclimatises to that before then also realising she’s still a witch/can wield magic, making her extremely gifted and powerful, and we get very little detail or exploration of this. She sort of just takes it all in stride and hardly bats an eye. I mean go off queen, but a little more depth here would have been nice.
Also what the ever loving FUCK was the ghost baby scene? My god, trigger warning as hell for miscarriage related shit. Christ on a bike INDEED. We literally did not need a full scene of a zombie baby crawling back up her vagina chomping on her cervix!!!! Seriously. This scene gave literal HORROR vibes which was soooo out of pocket with the rest of the book. Absolutely wild.
Don’t even get me started on poor Lief. They come in and turn his fucking world upside down and essentially abduct him back after killing his entire family and you’re gonna tell me he just merrily trots off with them afterwards cause of HYPNOSIS? Lmaoooooooo okay. All that meandering plot for this to be the outcome?
Not to mention that the entire secondary plot from book one is completely lost in this book. We get a few flashbacks at the start that show the crew decimating the siblings who are summoning the demons, Saara and Aleksi, which is resolved in like, 5 minutes? Then we find out Saara survived and has replaced her brother with some other random and they’re still working towards the same end goal of enslaving humans, but this is now apparently a non issue and no one cares about it anymore? They’re just like, welp oh well not my problem. Babe, why did you spend the whole of book one trying to stop them then? Also why do we keep mentioning Saara in this book if they’re no longer part of the plot?! I kept thinking all of this would tie in together in the end but it doesn’t. If it was going to be no longer relevant just kill her off at the beginning?
Alright, now on to the smut. Given I absolutely loved the smut in book one, I was let down in this one. There was just soooo much of it and I just didn’t care about it. Valtu has still got a mouth on him but he only uses it half the time. They basically fuck in missionary every time and she constantly comes within 0.2 seconds. Plus every scene is so fast paced and only last for a paragraph or two, meaning there’s little depth or descriptive language happening. There’s one scene towards the end where literal FISTING is just shoved in there (pun intended). Like he is fingering her and then just… immediately fisting… she barely says anything about it and then it’s completely glossed over. Ummmmm, girlfriend was a virgin two weeks ago???? Towards the end we also had a prime opportunity for some breeding kink that was poorly under-utilised. It was just lacklustre to me.
Honestly just so much of this writing and this plot felt lazy. There are a bunch of typos/sentences that don’t read correctly and there are soooo many breadcrumbs/tidbits that are thrown throughout that serve literally no purpose and have no meaning. For an interconnected series that was frustrating.
I didn’t like their HEA, I felt like it was easy and boring. I’m just going to pretend Blood Orange is a stand alone and make up my own end chapter tbh 😂