Kelly is ready for an exciting new chapter after inheriting his grandmother's rundown Cupid Café. But when it comes to baking and brewing, he's not as skilled as he'd hoped—until he meets the tattooed and captivating Mitch Carson from across the street.
Mitch offers his handy expertise to help fix up the café, and what starts as a friendly collaboration soon becomes a playful rivalry filled with cheeky heart-shaped cookies and plenty of banter. As Spring approaches, the stakes rise with the annual festival, putting their budding romance to the test.
With insecurities and misunderstandings standing between them, will Kelly find the courage to embrace love and the community he’s always dreamed of? Join these two adorably mismatched men on a heartwarming journey of discovery, laughter, and unexpected connections.
This was a hard book for me to rate and review. For the most part I enjoyed the story. However, there were a lot of things that bothered me. I felt like I never really got to know either Mitch or Kelly very well. I wondered where Kelly came from and why he didn’t seem to own anything when he moved to town. I wondered when his grandmother died and why the cafe was in such bad shape. I also thought it was strange that a cafe only seemed to serve cookies and coffee. When they made love where was the discussion of safe sex or the use of condoms and lube? Also what was that fight about?
I wanted more from this. The characters were one dimensional, had no personal background, and I didn't buy their relationship. The timeline of everything was really fuzzy- was the cafe open or was it being renovated, when did Kelly make those cookies he gives to Mitch the first day he arrives at the store, how long was this festival, where did Mitch's friend Sam come from 3/4 of the way through the book, why did no one ever seem to actually work at their job? Also, why did people bring Kelly coffee when he makes it in the cafe (as one of the two things besides cookies this "cafe" seems to serve)? It was also very slow and repetitive and I was bored.
The whole book needs a complete overhaul. Nothing worked. Not the characters, not the relationship, not the plot. We never actually meet these characters, we know literally nothing about them. Nothing about their relationship is believable. Nothing even makes sense. Kelly is taking over the cafe from his grandmother but everything's in disrepair and dilapidated like it's been empty and abandoned for years, but suddenly it's open and operating with no time having passed? It's a cafe that only sells cookies? Not even coffee because people keep bringing him some. There's a festival going on the whole timeline of the book, but we can't tell if the book takes place over a weekend of it's a months-long festival. The third act "breakup" was so out of left field I had to go back and see if I had missed something. I hadn't. It literally came out of nowhere and made absolutely no sense. And then a character that not only we've never met, but has never even been mentioned, pops into the cafe and has the heart to heart with Kelly. I had to search the book for the name to see if I'd missed something, but once again I hadn't. The book just made to sense. The writing needed so much editing and polish. This book is less than 200 pages and took FOREVER to get through. I'm talking total slog. It was boring and repetitive and clunky. The ping ponging POV in the beginning when Mitch is watching Kelly try and fix the coffee machine is a prime example. Every paragraph switches POV's. It was so confusing, especially when the author wants you to believe Mitch could hear Kelly from across the street just because he (and only him) had a window open? I should have taken that as a sign and stopped reading there.
If you like over the top Hallmark movies, this book is probably for you.
Eventhough I love these kind of movies I have to say, it was sometimes a bit too much for me.
We didn't get any character descriptions, except what Mitch is wearing, like serious, probably 10 outfits but I have no clue how he looks. The characters didn't have a lot of depth to be honest. At first Mitch can do anything, like he is an artist, can bake, is a barista, is handy, worked in construction, good with dogs etc. On the other hand Kelly can't do anything at first, like he can't paint, bake, doesn't know much about the coffee maker etc. I don't know, at first he was painted as this incompetent dude and later he was a master in so many things. It was confusing.
We only got 1 pov, except for some little sentences where we get Mitch's pov. I dislike that, I wanted to meet both. There also wasn't a real epilogue, which disappointed me quite a bit. The big fight they had, came kinda out of the blue and didn't make any sense. Honestly it was a stupid fight, like seriously annoying but at least something exciting happened.
I read another book by Peyton Holmes before, what I loved way more! Still it's not a bad book at all!
I DNF’d this book at 18%. What I thought I was getting—a cute hallmark cafe / tattoo shop owner story—was also weighed down by annoying/meddlesome/nosey neighbors who just *assumed* the MC’s sexuality right out the gate in the first meeting, and clearly needs to get a life of their own so that every other sentence isn’t dropping hints about the cafe owner dating the tattoo shop owner. And the other MC? Kind of a dick imo. I don’t subscribe to the notion that being an asshole makes someone hot, so this was such a turn off. In no way should he have told the cafe owner, mid-ramble, to shut up and it be ok just because he “smirked” and is “hot”.
I saw another review that said they skimmed at 43% and honestly? Brave of them to have kept going. I really was going to, but I realized life is too short to read books that raise your blood pressure.
I have to say that this is the worst mm romance I've ever read. It was more about the cafe than anything else. And various events they held. It was so repetitive and there was no real depth to it. I only carried on reading it because I thought it had to get better at some point!
As cute as this story was I also found it rather slow and a wee bit boring now and then. The two main characters were totally sweet in there shy attraction and approach but that was so drawn out. I kept going hoping things would improve but finally at 48% I began to skim a little.
It dragged through the whole book. Thought I would never finish. Why was Kelly so scared? Never said why if there was trauma. Just kept saying he was scared and nervous all the time.
Meet cute to an nth degree, Holmes presents a small town rivalry that is overwhelmed with sugary romance. Throw in Scout, A grandmother, and flowers, it's a happily ever after.
This has the manic quality of a fever dream. It’s a little like when a small child watches a movie and then tries to explain the plot. I feel dumber now.