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In spite of some editorial misses [for example, "Where were there physical locations?" (p. 133)] and a few moments of rolling my eyes (for example, she cries and he feels her tears on his chest, ostensibly through his clothing), this is a solid debut novel in the genre.
(Note: I am aware that technically the aforementioned sentence could be correct in context. Rephrased it would be something akin to: "There were physical locations [located] where?," but if the reader has to pause... In context, simply omitting the sentence entirely (or changing it slightly) solves the problem. Really nit-picky, but it did slow me down!)