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Werewolf’s Heartsong: A Dark and Passionate Werewolf Romance
The LCD screen in the arena showed pictures of the seven fighters in the Alpha Class. There I was, with my new name. I looked strong, and my wolf was absolutely gorgeous. I looked to where my sister was sitting and she and the rest of her posse had jealous fury on their faces. I then look up to where my parents are and they’re glaring at my picture, if looks alone could set shit on fire.
I smirk at them then I turn away to face my opponent, everything else falling away but what was here on this platform. I take my skirt and cardigan off. Standing in just my tank and capris, I move into a fighting position and wait for the signal to start — To fight, to prove, and not hide myself anymore. This was going to be fun. I thought, a grin on my face. *Mature Audience Contains mature language, s*x, abuse and violence*
I smirk at them then I turn away to face my opponent, everything else falling away but what was here on this platform. I take my skirt and cardigan off. Standing in just my tank and capris, I move into a fighting position and wait for the signal to start — To fight, to prove, and not hide myself anymore. This was going to be fun. I thought, a grin on my face. *Mature Audience Contains mature language, s*x, abuse and violence*
220 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 6, 2025
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November 16, 2025
This was a DNF for me. I can see that there is potential there, but as many other people noted - there needs to be some major editing done. POVs changed in the middle of chapters without notice, grammar needs editing, and the format isn't great. I'm not sure how it got such a high rating. It seems it was written by a middle schooler and the majority of the reviewers might have been their friends.
(If it was written by a middle schooler, I would like to apologize for writing a bad review and to let you know that you have room for growth and you'll learn. Bad reviews aren't the end.)
(If it was written by a middle schooler, I would like to apologize for writing a bad review and to let you know that you have room for growth and you'll learn. Bad reviews aren't the end.)
November 1, 2025
Great potential
This story needs refining and editing but the base of it is fantastic. I enjoyed meeting the characters and will continue the story.
This story needs refining and editing but the base of it is fantastic. I enjoyed meeting the characters and will continue the story.
July 28, 2025
The only reason this review is 2 stars instead of 5 is the editing. Normally I don’t complain about a few mistakes here or there I’m more likely to finish reading a poorly edited book then a poorly thought out book. So this is my plea to the Author to please have this book edited by a professional. This wasn’t a few misspelled words or voice to type issues. Several chapters were partially repeated others were split when they shouldn’t have been the pov was constantly switching around with no header telling us whose pov we were reading more often then not. It took twice as long to read as necessary because of the issues in format. However the characters, the world building, the storyline and mythology were all awesome! If the author can get the editing worked out this series will be one a read over and over again!
August 23, 2025
The plot is decent, and the characters are likable, and I'm drawn to finish the story. My only complaint is that some of the details are just too descriptive (i.e., outfits, bedroom decor, etc), and there is a lot of repetition with the MFC. A lot of what surroubds the MFC feels very "marysue" like almost dream-like and less believable which can seperate the reader from the story. I know it's fantasy, but sometimes the plot needs to be a bit smoother and less too-the-point and MFC/MMC gets everything-on a-golden-platter. But overall, I am enjoying the story.
Update: Finished, and the ending felt rushed. I was left feeling unsatisfied in terms of book closure. The final battle was built up and built up, and then it was just done. Wasy fight, easy win. Over. I feel almost cheated after bonding with these characters for so long.
Update: Finished, and the ending felt rushed. I was left feeling unsatisfied in terms of book closure. The final battle was built up and built up, and then it was just done. Wasy fight, easy win. Over. I feel almost cheated after bonding with these characters for so long.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 3, 2025
Just- no
I read the whole thing just to make sure. I’m sure writing is hard and creating worlds and such and more power to you for giving it your all. Reading this was painful. You repeated chapters only changing few thing but literally same POV, switched POV mid chapter and didn’t tell us, too many characters too soon even you got the names confused. Started calling them Mom then switched to their real name but didn’t tell us who tf they were we had to guess. It’s like you tried for intrigue but everyone had the “inside scoop” it’s not dramatic if everyone comes to the same conclusion at the same time. There’s an alpha of alphas who KNEW what was going on… the whole family KNEW but just sat back like “can’t do anything. So sad. Hope she makes it to 18” wtf!? No. And she’s cool with it? No. Just. No.
I read the whole thing just to make sure. I’m sure writing is hard and creating worlds and such and more power to you for giving it your all. Reading this was painful. You repeated chapters only changing few thing but literally same POV, switched POV mid chapter and didn’t tell us, too many characters too soon even you got the names confused. Started calling them Mom then switched to their real name but didn’t tell us who tf they were we had to guess. It’s like you tried for intrigue but everyone had the “inside scoop” it’s not dramatic if everyone comes to the same conclusion at the same time. There’s an alpha of alphas who KNEW what was going on… the whole family KNEW but just sat back like “can’t do anything. So sad. Hope she makes it to 18” wtf!? No. And she’s cool with it? No. Just. No.
December 29, 2025
Gripping tale!
I stumbled across this book on one of the paid book apps and was so upset I had to either pay way too much to read a few chapters or wait days to get the free coins to read. I am so happy that this book is now on Kindle!!
Alora and her chosen family are so easy to connect to. Alora’s story is hard to stomach at times. The cruelty some people can unleash is just heartbreaking to read through. But she is so strong and has an amazing support system around her. It’s amazing how many points of view are in this story, the only draw back is that it switches who is talking and doesn’t indicate who it is. Once you get used to how the characters speak and think you can guess who the speaker is. I love where this story is going and cannot wait to see what else is in store for the rest of this group!
On to the next book!
I stumbled across this book on one of the paid book apps and was so upset I had to either pay way too much to read a few chapters or wait days to get the free coins to read. I am so happy that this book is now on Kindle!!
Alora and her chosen family are so easy to connect to. Alora’s story is hard to stomach at times. The cruelty some people can unleash is just heartbreaking to read through. But she is so strong and has an amazing support system around her. It’s amazing how many points of view are in this story, the only draw back is that it switches who is talking and doesn’t indicate who it is. Once you get used to how the characters speak and think you can guess who the speaker is. I love where this story is going and cannot wait to see what else is in store for the rest of this group!
On to the next book!
January 13, 2026
A good read with flaws
The storyline is a level above the typical abused werewolf genre, with the heroine here actually attending school and building her strength and skills. Nor does she live without any hope, waiting for a male saviour to accidentally meet her and carry her away.
No, there are intelligent adults in the community, who secretly work to help her progress in school, without her abusers knowing.
But my biggest bugbear, which lowers the quality of authorship in writings, is the leaving in of the drafts. An event is written about; and then written about again with a little more context. If an author can’t afford a proofreader they should delay publishing, until they themselves have read and reread the whole story in one go; to ensure the writing flows without missing or repeating events.
The storyline is a level above the typical abused werewolf genre, with the heroine here actually attending school and building her strength and skills. Nor does she live without any hope, waiting for a male saviour to accidentally meet her and carry her away.
No, there are intelligent adults in the community, who secretly work to help her progress in school, without her abusers knowing.
But my biggest bugbear, which lowers the quality of authorship in writings, is the leaving in of the drafts. An event is written about; and then written about again with a little more context. If an author can’t afford a proofreader they should delay publishing, until they themselves have read and reread the whole story in one go; to ensure the writing flows without missing or repeating events.
March 8, 2025
Decent story but…
I found the storyline quite enjoyable but it was very hard to follow along. In some places the author showed whose perspective it was from but in many instances the reader was left to guess. It was very muddled and confusing. At chapter 41 things began to repeat. Literally. Several chapters that were exactly the same as the one previous but with different details. I’d like to see the story conclude and look forward to the release of the next addition. Hopefully it will be a better edited book than this one.
I found the storyline quite enjoyable but it was very hard to follow along. In some places the author showed whose perspective it was from but in many instances the reader was left to guess. It was very muddled and confusing. At chapter 41 things began to repeat. Literally. Several chapters that were exactly the same as the one previous but with different details. I’d like to see the story conclude and look forward to the release of the next addition. Hopefully it will be a better edited book than this one.
March 28, 2025
This story truly has potential, but I found reading it was sometimes very annoying:
- Many times the story was repeated through a different characters perspective. And while that isn't per se wrong in these instances it was always almost word to word repetitions.
- Other times I found it very confusing in which Pov the story was written because there wasn't always an indicated change of perspective.
But I've read this authors book through a reading app first so I know it might be a work in progress, so I really do believe this book with its captivating story has potential.
- Many times the story was repeated through a different characters perspective. And while that isn't per se wrong in these instances it was always almost word to word repetitions.
- Other times I found it very confusing in which Pov the story was written because there wasn't always an indicated change of perspective.
But I've read this authors book through a reading app first so I know it might be a work in progress, so I really do believe this book with its captivating story has potential.
September 14, 2025
Good story but a lot of issues!!
This was a good story with multiple POVs but at times there was no warning on whose POV I was reading. I would have to back track, read over and guess if a clue wasn’t given immediately. The downside of so many point of views is that things get repeated and it gets very annoying when I have to read it just in case I didn’t miss whose perspective I was currently reading. A lot of grammar issues but I pushed through it all because it is a good story. Moving on to the second book.
This was a good story with multiple POVs but at times there was no warning on whose POV I was reading. I would have to back track, read over and guess if a clue wasn’t given immediately. The downside of so many point of views is that things get repeated and it gets very annoying when I have to read it just in case I didn’t miss whose perspective I was currently reading. A lot of grammar issues but I pushed through it all because it is a good story. Moving on to the second book.
September 24, 2025
good story… BUT….
This is a really good story. I only gave it a four star rating simply because I didn’t like reading things twice… the repetition in the chapters with the change of the characters POV’s was aggravating. If the author decides to make changes I hope she takes that into consideration and edit that in a way that still keeps it tied to the previous POV without the repetition. But other than that…the story itself is great! I’m actually looking forward to reading the rest of this.
This is a really good story. I only gave it a four star rating simply because I didn’t like reading things twice… the repetition in the chapters with the change of the characters POV’s was aggravating. If the author decides to make changes I hope she takes that into consideration and edit that in a way that still keeps it tied to the previous POV without the repetition. But other than that…the story itself is great! I’m actually looking forward to reading the rest of this.
January 21, 2026
I’ll read Again, but..,
I’ve read this on other websites before finding here on Amazon. While I still enjoy it, the lack of editing and double chapters throw me off, but only slightly(I just scroll through once I realize). And I guess I was so engrossed the first time read it that I didn’t realize how there’s no break before POV switches.
Overall I believe if this was or is edited properly it’d be even more amazing, because the story is very good and informative about its world.
On to finish the others
I’ve read this on other websites before finding here on Amazon. While I still enjoy it, the lack of editing and double chapters throw me off, but only slightly(I just scroll through once I realize). And I guess I was so engrossed the first time read it that I didn’t realize how there’s no break before POV switches.
Overall I believe if this was or is edited properly it’d be even more amazing, because the story is very good and informative about its world.
On to finish the others
April 21, 2025
I wish I could give this book two ratings. The first would be for the story, which is great! The characters are developed and the story is at a great pace. The next would be for editing…holy cow, the author needs to go back and edit. This book had repeated chapters and changes in the POV without posting who it is. This was originally a PPC on websites and I don’t think there was much editing before publishing. Totally read the story, it’s wonderful, but be prepared for editing issues.
August 27, 2025
good storyline
This storyline is good but it’s hard to tell whose POV it is a lot of times.
Theres several instances of using the wrong name for the character and there’s 2 or 3 chapters that are repeated.
In one chapter there’s talk of a playlist that plays multiple songs listing each one by title and band, changing the song every couple seconds in a span of time that should only take a few minutes.
It’s got a lot of good potential but it really needs a good editor.
This storyline is good but it’s hard to tell whose POV it is a lot of times.
Theres several instances of using the wrong name for the character and there’s 2 or 3 chapters that are repeated.
In one chapter there’s talk of a playlist that plays multiple songs listing each one by title and band, changing the song every couple seconds in a span of time that should only take a few minutes.
It’s got a lot of good potential but it really needs a good editor.
November 6, 2025
Good story, bad editing
I have enjoyed this story for the most part but find it overkill to make the heroine superpowered.
The author needs to label POV for all the characters if she’s going to label any. There are countless chapters where whose POV we are reading is unknown until several paragraphs in.
There are at least two chapters that are repeated: 41 & 42, then 43 & 44, if I remember correctly.
I have enjoyed this story for the most part but find it overkill to make the heroine superpowered.
The author needs to label POV for all the characters if she’s going to label any. There are countless chapters where whose POV we are reading is unknown until several paragraphs in.
There are at least two chapters that are repeated: 41 & 42, then 43 & 44, if I remember correctly.
January 6, 2026
⭐️⭐️⭐️
This book has a great foundation but needs a lot of work on the details. I am not one of those readers that are grammer police but this book is in need of an editor. The switch in POV's without warning takes the reader out of the story trying to figure out who is speaking. I really enjoy the characters and the storyline even with the need for an editor. I will definitely be continuing this series.
This book has a great foundation but needs a lot of work on the details. I am not one of those readers that are grammer police but this book is in need of an editor. The switch in POV's without warning takes the reader out of the story trying to figure out who is speaking. I really enjoy the characters and the storyline even with the need for an editor. I will definitely be continuing this series.
January 11, 2026
Most excellent read!
Werewolf's Heartsong caught my attention with the first sentence. The storyline is most excellent. I love the various POV's. The development of each character is done so well and so intentionally, you either love them or hate them immediately. This book is near impossible to put down. Do yourself a favor and make sure you have plenty of time to devote to reading!
Werewolf's Heartsong caught my attention with the first sentence. The storyline is most excellent. I love the various POV's. The development of each character is done so well and so intentionally, you either love them or hate them immediately. This book is near impossible to put down. Do yourself a favor and make sure you have plenty of time to devote to reading!
January 13, 2026
Don't buy.
The main story line has potential. There are countless spelling mistakes and grammar faults. Chapters are repeated, there's no flow between different character perspectives. This book is available to read free online and the re write version is better but incomplete. The only reason I got this as with it being properly published I thought it would have been the re write its not.
The main story line has potential. There are countless spelling mistakes and grammar faults. Chapters are repeated, there's no flow between different character perspectives. This book is available to read free online and the re write version is better but incomplete. The only reason I got this as with it being properly published I thought it would have been the re write its not.
January 17, 2026
terrible editing
The concept of the story was great, and the main characters had depth and endurance. However, there were duplicated chapters towards the end, and the point of view (POV) was not clearly defined at the beginning. This made it difficult to follow the story until the point was reached. The editing was seriously lacking. The effort in writing was a good attempt.
Thanks for the short escape.
The concept of the story was great, and the main characters had depth and endurance. However, there were duplicated chapters towards the end, and the point of view (POV) was not clearly defined at the beginning. This made it difficult to follow the story until the point was reached. The editing was seriously lacking. The effort in writing was a good attempt.
Thanks for the short escape.
January 28, 2026
absolutely addictive
This book would have gotten 5 stars from me if editing was done. This story and world Angie built is so fascinating and beautiful! There are some really sad things in this book. I’ve been on an emotional roller coaster! It’s an excellent read. Full of shifters, witch’s and so many more. I’m so excited to keep reading. All my book buddies would absolutely love this series!!! Thank you Angie for sharing this amazing book with us…
This book would have gotten 5 stars from me if editing was done. This story and world Angie built is so fascinating and beautiful! There are some really sad things in this book. I’ve been on an emotional roller coaster! It’s an excellent read. Full of shifters, witch’s and so many more. I’m so excited to keep reading. All my book buddies would absolutely love this series!!! Thank you Angie for sharing this amazing book with us…
March 20, 2025
it’s ok could use more editing
Abrupt ending. Interesting story but can be hard to keep track of which character is thinking or being followed at different points in the story particularly at the start of a chapter before it jumps and we get told of a new characters pov. This can also lead the story to feeling a bit jumpy.
Abrupt ending. Interesting story but can be hard to keep track of which character is thinking or being followed at different points in the story particularly at the start of a chapter before it jumps and we get told of a new characters pov. This can also lead the story to feeling a bit jumpy.
March 26, 2025
About Dam Time....Lol😊
I have been waiting & Hoping the book would come out as a EBook, it is one of my faavorites. if i had to choose a dislike it would be where a couple of chapters repeated themselves.
If your looking for a story that holds your attention, read this...you will & hopefully you'll enjoy.
I have been waiting & Hoping the book would come out as a EBook, it is one of my faavorites. if i had to choose a dislike it would be where a couple of chapters repeated themselves.
If your looking for a story that holds your attention, read this...you will & hopefully you'll enjoy.
April 1, 2025
Story is good
First time I’ve read anything by this Author. I really like this story and where it’s going. With that said, there are a lot of mess ups in this book, pages repeating themselves, places where you don’t know who’s thoughts or words your reading. This Author needs help. But I am going to get the next book because I liked the story and I’m going to hope it’s better.
First time I’ve read anything by this Author. I really like this story and where it’s going. With that said, there are a lot of mess ups in this book, pages repeating themselves, places where you don’t know who’s thoughts or words your reading. This Author needs help. But I am going to get the next book because I liked the story and I’m going to hope it’s better.
September 23, 2025
i like
I really liked this book. But there were quite a few issues with it. For one I would get confused when it jumped from one person to another without telling you whose pov that it was. Also some of the chapters were doubled up and used as the following chapter as well. Over all it was a good book
I really liked this book. But there were quite a few issues with it. For one I would get confused when it jumped from one person to another without telling you whose pov that it was. Also some of the chapters were doubled up and used as the following chapter as well. Over all it was a good book
September 23, 2025
It's about time lol
I love this book and the updated version of it. Yes I have read it on other reading app platforms. And yes I bought it here too!!!!! Was wondering if she was going to do a full publish for it and waiting for it to happen. This is an amazing story and goes in depth on the characters.
I love this book and the updated version of it. Yes I have read it on other reading app platforms. And yes I bought it here too!!!!! Was wondering if she was going to do a full publish for it and waiting for it to happen. This is an amazing story and goes in depth on the characters.
September 30, 2025
good outline but room for improvement
There’s definitely improvement. Some of the names get over lapped as though it is talking about one character but says a wrong characters name. Sometime there is even mistakes not only with editing and grammatical errors, but also parts of the story repeating.
There’s definitely improvement. Some of the names get over lapped as though it is talking about one character but says a wrong characters name. Sometime there is even mistakes not only with editing and grammatical errors, but also parts of the story repeating.
October 5, 2025
A fun read
I was so happy to finally find this book, I’d seen snippets all over the place. It was a fun read. The story was interesting and had a good pace. I’ll definitely be reading the second in the series. I MUST know what happens next.
There were some editing issues that I noticed (which is the only reason for 4/5 stars).
I was so happy to finally find this book, I’d seen snippets all over the place. It was a fun read. The story was interesting and had a good pace. I’ll definitely be reading the second in the series. I MUST know what happens next.
There were some editing issues that I noticed (which is the only reason for 4/5 stars).
October 29, 2025
Thoughts
Spoilers
I have read this before on the internet. I really enjoyed this story but there are several sections that have been left out of this and multiple repeated chapters. They don’t have the full meeting with Sebastian in their “place” and the dinner is completely cut out. It is nice to have paragraphs that are actually understandable and not gibberish.
Spoilers
I have read this before on the internet. I really enjoyed this story but there are several sections that have been left out of this and multiple repeated chapters. They don’t have the full meeting with Sebastian in their “place” and the dinner is completely cut out. It is nice to have paragraphs that are actually understandable and not gibberish.
November 9, 2025
Great book
Wonderful story (even if everyone that's good is somehow a genius)l, 😂)
I have read this a platform as well as here. It looks like there is a bit missing from her meeting the vampire king.
And ch 44 is a repeat of 43. I recall another repeated chapter, but can't remember where
Wonderful story (even if everyone that's good is somehow a genius)l, 😂)
I have read this a platform as well as here. It looks like there is a bit missing from her meeting the vampire king.
And ch 44 is a repeat of 43. I recall another repeated chapter, but can't remember where
November 30, 2025
good book
Read an couple of alternate versions on another app. I preferred some of the details in those. Also this needs some editing for spelling and in the middle there is a few paragraphs that are duplicate rewrites. All in all a great story and would make a great series or movie IMO
Read an couple of alternate versions on another app. I preferred some of the details in those. Also this needs some editing for spelling and in the middle there is a few paragraphs that are duplicate rewrites. All in all a great story and would make a great series or movie IMO
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