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Fertile Valley #2
Fertile Valley 2
With second chances come new challenges...Peter Busch-McGinley is living his best life in Fertile Valley. He's making up for lost time with his daughter, bringing his grandpa's farm back to its former glory, and keeping up with his new duties as the Harvest Goddess' champion.
Yet a new darkness lurks in the woods. Mysterious shadows that feed on people's emotions, all working for an ominous creature that lives deep beneath the mine. He'll have to rely on help from an unlikely source to set things back on track again.
Can Pete find a way to work with the Queen of the Mines to save Fertile Valley? Or will the darkness claim them both?
Yet a new darkness lurks in the woods. Mysterious shadows that feed on people's emotions, all working for an ominous creature that lives deep beneath the mine. He'll have to rely on help from an unlikely source to set things back on track again.
Can Pete find a way to work with the Queen of the Mines to save Fertile Valley? Or will the darkness claim them both?
- GenresHarem
423 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 20, 2025
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Displaying 1 - 22 of 22 reviews
March 21, 2025
Great book!
I really enjoyed the continuation of this series and I hope it keeps going!
I appreciated that Queenie takes the initiative to help Pete with quite a few things. There's a few plot points that just wouldn't be taken care of otherwise. Having other characters actively participating in the plot is better than having a bunch of eye candy or trophy girls in my opinion.
It's a good slice of life storyline and it was nice to see the power of burgers bring people together. There's a good set up for the third book and Pete's powers are growing steadily throughout and not overpowering him to just breeze through the problems.
I think what Grandpa Joe left Pete is one of the best parts and my favorite words are, 'Whether you think you can or think you can't, you're right.'
I really enjoyed the continuation of this series and I hope it keeps going!
I appreciated that Queenie takes the initiative to help Pete with quite a few things. There's a few plot points that just wouldn't be taken care of otherwise. Having other characters actively participating in the plot is better than having a bunch of eye candy or trophy girls in my opinion.
It's a good slice of life storyline and it was nice to see the power of burgers bring people together. There's a good set up for the third book and Pete's powers are growing steadily throughout and not overpowering him to just breeze through the problems.
I think what Grandpa Joe left Pete is one of the best parts and my favorite words are, 'Whether you think you can or think you can't, you're right.'
March 28, 2025
4.5 stars. The story is developing, and the characters are generally interesting. I see definite parallels with the Master Class series with the general setup and the prominent child character, and I'll be honest, the latter is not my favourite bit to take up a lot of the word count. The scope seems to be expanding, so a fair bit of potential is left.
Overall it does its' thing well and is rated accordingly.
Overall it does its' thing well and is rated accordingly.
March 29, 2025
I am taken aback by Virgile and Annabelle.
The best lines I've read by Virgil or Annabelle. The sentiment in the final chapter made my heart nearly block my throat. I have heard the words I read since I was seated on my Mom's , I still do to this day. I fell in love with Annabelle when I read Radley's Home and the feelings just keep growing. I read to give my life substance, and at the age of 70, I hope I continue to find works that even approach this offering.
The best lines I've read by Virgil or Annabelle. The sentiment in the final chapter made my heart nearly block my throat. I have heard the words I read since I was seated on my Mom's , I still do to this day. I fell in love with Annabelle when I read Radley's Home and the feelings just keep growing. I read to give my life substance, and at the age of 70, I hope I continue to find works that even approach this offering.
March 22, 2025
An Ancient Goddess, Darkness, and Sexy Women...
The second installment of this adventure is just as much fun as the first!
A good man who just wants to improve his farm, build his family, and raise his daughter right, yet keeps finding himself at the center of escalating events.... with perhaps a bit more sexy fun than other men.
The second installment of this adventure is just as much fun as the first!
A good man who just wants to improve his farm, build his family, and raise his daughter right, yet keeps finding himself at the center of escalating events.... with perhaps a bit more sexy fun than other men.
April 1, 2025
Really Enjoyed it.
I have had my ups and downs with this story (including volume one). Sometimes wonderful, sometimes the MC is portrayed as a total prat. When is said, I landed on just much much I actually enjoyed this work. Well done, Authors Hawthorne and Knightly. I DO hope you decide to pen a third volume!
I have had my ups and downs with this story (including volume one). Sometimes wonderful, sometimes the MC is portrayed as a total prat. When is said, I landed on just much much I actually enjoyed this work. Well done, Authors Hawthorne and Knightly. I DO hope you decide to pen a third volume!
April 6, 2025
Engaging story deepens
Alternate universe, magic, fantasy races, save the valley, LitRPG, harem adult situations
Pete gets closer to his daughter, and more women of the valley express interest in helping him. Unexpected twists, and a decidedly different way to grind out XP. Charming ending, and look forward to the next book in the series. Excellent editing. Enjoyed.
Alternate universe, magic, fantasy races, save the valley, LitRPG, harem adult situations
Pete gets closer to his daughter, and more women of the valley express interest in helping him. Unexpected twists, and a decidedly different way to grind out XP. Charming ending, and look forward to the next book in the series. Excellent editing. Enjoyed.
March 21, 2025
Not very good
I really enjoyed the first book and was really looking forward to this book. I just finished it and was very disappointed with it. I'm sorry but I can't recommend this book.
I really enjoyed the first book and was really looking forward to this book. I just finished it and was very disappointed with it. I'm sorry but I can't recommend this book.
March 21, 2025
Loved it!
It was a great continuation with a kinda cool twist at the end. Not much for new characters, but we get to see Cindy fleshed out a little more. I'm excited for the next one.
It was a great continuation with a kinda cool twist at the end. Not much for new characters, but we get to see Cindy fleshed out a little more. I'm excited for the next one.
March 28, 2025
Five Stars! Great story.
I loved the second book in the Fertile Valley series. Great LitRPG adventures with Pete and his harem ladies and his dog Fierce boy. Amusing page turner of a story. Highly recommend!
I loved the second book in the Fertile Valley series. Great LitRPG adventures with Pete and his harem ladies and his dog Fierce boy. Amusing page turner of a story. Highly recommend!
April 4, 2025
The journey continues
Plot twist, growth and new experiences. These characters are becoming more enjoyable with each word. I think we all wish the valley so we can become part of it
Plot twist, growth and new experiences. These characters are becoming more enjoyable with each word. I think we all wish the valley so we can become part of it
April 4, 2025
Good Continuation
Good storytelling. Great character development. The plot includes the growth of the MC, challenges to be overcome, and changes within his family. It will be interesting to see how he adapts to the challenges he will face in book 3.
Good storytelling. Great character development. The plot includes the growth of the MC, challenges to be overcome, and changes within his family. It will be interesting to see how he adapts to the challenges he will face in book 3.
April 20, 2025
Absolutely Enjoyable!
Great second in series . The Harvest Champion is really making his way . The interaction of all the characters is really good and it's just getting started. I hope the series continues as it's a blast!
Great second in series . The Harvest Champion is really making his way . The interaction of all the characters is really good and it's just getting started. I hope the series continues as it's a blast!
March 21, 2025
The Authors
You both have great imaginations and I enjoy your individual books as well!
Please continue writing as you both have incredible talent.
Thank you!
You both have great imaginations and I enjoy your individual books as well!
Please continue writing as you both have incredible talent.
Thank you!
March 21, 2025
Another Amazing Book
As the title says, it’s another amazing book from this duo. I can’t wait for the next book(s?) in the series.
Thanks again Annabelle and Virgil
As the title says, it’s another amazing book from this duo. I can’t wait for the next book(s?) in the series.
Thanks again Annabelle and Virgil
March 22, 2025
Such a refreshing story
I couldn’t put it down and read the whole thing in one sitting. Keep them coming, because I can’t wait for the next one and the one after that.
I couldn’t put it down and read the whole thing in one sitting. Keep them coming, because I can’t wait for the next one and the one after that.
March 24, 2025
It's really good.
This series checks a lot of boxes for me. I am looking forward to more from this writing team and in this setting.
This series checks a lot of boxes for me. I am looking forward to more from this writing team and in this setting.
March 24, 2025
Good read
Read it for yourself and decide I liked it it was good to me but ya make your own opinion
Read it for yourself and decide I liked it it was good to me but ya make your own opinion
March 24, 2025
Old trouble becomes new trouble, but the outcome may not be what is expected. There us also nee trouble on the horizon.
March 25, 2025
Good Read 👍
I thoroughly enjoyed it. I sincerely hope that the rest of you out there enjoy it as much as I did.
I thoroughly enjoyed it. I sincerely hope that the rest of you out there enjoy it as much as I did.
April 19, 2025
Hella fun
I loved this series. I hope there's going to be more. They're certainly room for more. It was a lot of fun to read and the characters were believable
I loved this series. I hope there's going to be more. They're certainly room for more. It was a lot of fun to read and the characters were believable
April 22, 2025
The interaction between the MC and his daughter is cute.
4.8/5!
4.8/5!
June 3, 2025
great follow up to the first one
This was a fantastic read. It’s now my most favorite story. Not too wild and more slice of life. Love it.
This was a fantastic read. It’s now my most favorite story. Not too wild and more slice of life. Love it.
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