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The Twelve Kingdoms #3
The Talon of the Hawk
A HEAVY CROWN
Three daughters were born to High King Uorsin, in place of the son he wanted. The youngest, lovely and sweet. The middle, pretty and subtle, with an air of magic. And the eldest, the Heir. A girl grudgingly honed to leadership, not beauty, to bear the sword and honor of the king.
Ursula’s loyalty is as ingrained as her straight warrior’s spine. She protects the peace of the Twelve Kingdoms with sweat and blood, her sisters from threats far and near. And she protects her father to prove her worth. But she never imagined her loyalty would become an open question on palace grounds. That her father would receive her with a foreign witch at one side and a hireling captain at the other—that soldiers would look on her as a woman, not as a warrior. She also never expected to decide the destiny of her sisters, of her people, of the Twelve Kingdoms and the Thirteenth. Not with her father still on the throne and war in the air. But the choice is before her. And the Heir must lead…
Three daughters were born to High King Uorsin, in place of the son he wanted. The youngest, lovely and sweet. The middle, pretty and subtle, with an air of magic. And the eldest, the Heir. A girl grudgingly honed to leadership, not beauty, to bear the sword and honor of the king.
Ursula’s loyalty is as ingrained as her straight warrior’s spine. She protects the peace of the Twelve Kingdoms with sweat and blood, her sisters from threats far and near. And she protects her father to prove her worth. But she never imagined her loyalty would become an open question on palace grounds. That her father would receive her with a foreign witch at one side and a hireling captain at the other—that soldiers would look on her as a woman, not as a warrior. She also never expected to decide the destiny of her sisters, of her people, of the Twelve Kingdoms and the Thirteenth. Not with her father still on the throne and war in the air. But the choice is before her. And the Heir must lead…
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First published May 26, 2015
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May 18, 2015
3.5 Stars
Overall Series – 3.5 Stars
Mark of the Tala - 3.5 Stars
Tear’s of the Rose - 3.5 Stars
Ursula’s tale is one of love and sacrifice, she has given more than anyone realizes for family and country.
I love it when a story comes full circle and closes all of the threads nicely. Talon of the Hawk not only tells Ursula’s story but it also definitively closes up any threads left hanging from The Mark of the Tala and Tears of the Rose. By the end of Talon of the Hawk I think that all will agree that the fate of the Twelve Kingdoms and Salena’s daughters has been set and drawn to a great conclusion.
I was really excited for Ursula’s story. She is the warrior daughter, the one that has always had the brunt of the burden of the kingdom and dealing with their father Uorsin. She is adept at handling him, giving just enough information and treating each conversation with him as a battle where she must dodge, parry, retreat and advance with great skill. Ursula holds a special place in my heart as I have a soft spot for women who wield swords, I blame Xena warrior princess for this . I just didn’t expect the betrayal of her father to have run so deep and the pain that Ursula dealt with to be so much. While it wasn’t particularly expected it did explain some of the excuses that Ursula made for her father.
Ursula has returned home after defying her father and not bringing with her the son and heir Amelia birthed. As she enters the city she finds it is full of mercenaries hired by her father for extra protection. Uorsin is acting more paranoid than ever and his new paramour gives off a bad vibe as well. Ursula isn’t quite sure what to make of Harlan the handsome leader of the mercenaries. She also isn’t sure how she is going to get back out of the city to be able to help Amelia find her daughter or get through the border to Annfwn to find Andromeda either. So many problems and no one to rely on but perhaps Harlan can help her Ursula just needs to learn how to put her trust into another person, something she isn’t good at it, at all.
There are really two parts to the story. There is the romance between Harlan and Ursula and then the journey to find Stella, reunite the Twelve Kingdoms and avoid a flat out war. I liked the romance and Harlan is a great leading man. I’m not sure why he is taken with Ursula from the beginning, she is combatant and exceptionally mean to him at times, but he takes it in stride and does everything he can to break through all the walls she has built around herself. He was patient and kind and I appreciated the way he helped her come to terms with not only her past but also with her role in the future.
On Harlan’s end it was a little insta-love/lust but I liked how the story between them grew and took it’s time throughout the rest of the story.
The second part is the great adventure of saving a kingdom from falling into war and finding a way to reunite all the parts. Even though this is Ursula’s story it wouldn’t be complete without Andromeda and Amelia. It is the bringing together of all of the sisters and the goddess each one serves to form a trinity of sorts that is bigger than each of them individually. I loved the time spent in Annfwn . It is such a magical place and I love the stories of Tala that live there. A world where people change into animals as part of a magical culture is just wonderful. Andromeda has really grown into her role as queen and become comfortable with the magic that lives within her. She and Ursula had different paths and finally could come to an understanding about those paths.
Reading about all the sisters together again was wonderful and I think that they came to have a better understanding of each other after each went through their own trials. The bonds of sisterhood between them are strong and by the end of the series I knew that each sister was fierce, bold and strong in their own way.
It was a great world to visit, full of strong and wonderful women. Dafne and Jepp were a few of the favorites of mine in this book. Dafne is the logical, bookworm full of good advice, hard questions and intense loyalty. Jepp is the fun loving/deadly with a knife Hawk who will give any of the mercenaries a lesson or two in how to kill a man. She will also give them a lesson on how to *cough* play with *cough* a warrior woman off the field. I loved her adventurous and fun nature both on the battlefield and off.
I found something special about each story and each sister. I’m totally satisfied with the conclusion to each sister’s journey and will probably visit the Twelve Kingdoms again sometime.
Thank you to Netgalley and Kensington books for providing the ARC for review. Quotes taken are from an uncorrected proof and may not be in the final copy
Overall Series – 3.5 Stars
Mark of the Tala - 3.5 Stars
Tear’s of the Rose - 3.5 Stars
But if it came to your life or mine, I’d choose yours.”
Ursula’s tale is one of love and sacrifice, she has given more than anyone realizes for family and country.
I love it when a story comes full circle and closes all of the threads nicely. Talon of the Hawk not only tells Ursula’s story but it also definitively closes up any threads left hanging from The Mark of the Tala and Tears of the Rose. By the end of Talon of the Hawk I think that all will agree that the fate of the Twelve Kingdoms and Salena’s daughters has been set and drawn to a great conclusion.
I was really excited for Ursula’s story. She is the warrior daughter, the one that has always had the brunt of the burden of the kingdom and dealing with their father Uorsin. She is adept at handling him, giving just enough information and treating each conversation with him as a battle where she must dodge, parry, retreat and advance with great skill. Ursula holds a special place in my heart as I have a soft spot for women who wield swords, I blame Xena warrior princess for this . I just didn’t expect the betrayal of her father to have run so deep and the pain that Ursula dealt with to be so much. While it wasn’t particularly expected it did explain some of the excuses that Ursula made for her father.
Ursula has returned home after defying her father and not bringing with her the son and heir Amelia birthed. As she enters the city she finds it is full of mercenaries hired by her father for extra protection. Uorsin is acting more paranoid than ever and his new paramour gives off a bad vibe as well. Ursula isn’t quite sure what to make of Harlan the handsome leader of the mercenaries. She also isn’t sure how she is going to get back out of the city to be able to help Amelia find her daughter or get through the border to Annfwn to find Andromeda either. So many problems and no one to rely on but perhaps Harlan can help her Ursula just needs to learn how to put her trust into another person, something she isn’t good at it, at all.
There are really two parts to the story. There is the romance between Harlan and Ursula and then the journey to find Stella, reunite the Twelve Kingdoms and avoid a flat out war. I liked the romance and Harlan is a great leading man. I’m not sure why he is taken with Ursula from the beginning, she is combatant and exceptionally mean to him at times, but he takes it in stride and does everything he can to break through all the walls she has built around herself. He was patient and kind and I appreciated the way he helped her come to terms with not only her past but also with her role in the future.
”Your people will look to you to save them in the days ahead. They love you. You are their hero—we all can see it.
On Harlan’s end it was a little insta-love/lust but I liked how the story between them grew and took it’s time throughout the rest of the story.
The second part is the great adventure of saving a kingdom from falling into war and finding a way to reunite all the parts. Even though this is Ursula’s story it wouldn’t be complete without Andromeda and Amelia. It is the bringing together of all of the sisters and the goddess each one serves to form a trinity of sorts that is bigger than each of them individually. I loved the time spent in Annfwn . It is such a magical place and I love the stories of Tala that live there. A world where people change into animals as part of a magical culture is just wonderful. Andromeda has really grown into her role as queen and become comfortable with the magic that lives within her. She and Ursula had different paths and finally could come to an understanding about those paths.
”I found something that mattered.”
It stung. “Ordnung should have mattered to you.”
“You can’t force loyalty, Ursula. I never felt the way you did.”
Reading about all the sisters together again was wonderful and I think that they came to have a better understanding of each other after each went through their own trials. The bonds of sisterhood between them are strong and by the end of the series I knew that each sister was fierce, bold and strong in their own way.
It was a great world to visit, full of strong and wonderful women. Dafne and Jepp were a few of the favorites of mine in this book. Dafne is the logical, bookworm full of good advice, hard questions and intense loyalty. Jepp is the fun loving/deadly with a knife Hawk who will give any of the mercenaries a lesson or two in how to kill a man. She will also give them a lesson on how to *cough* play with *cough* a warrior woman off the field. I loved her adventurous and fun nature both on the battlefield and off.
I found something special about each story and each sister. I’m totally satisfied with the conclusion to each sister’s journey and will probably visit the Twelve Kingdoms again sometime.
Thank you to Netgalley and Kensington books for providing the ARC for review. Quotes taken are from an uncorrected proof and may not be in the final copy
February 1, 2023
Okay, I am really beginning to enjoy this world! This book was pretty much everything a fantasy romance lover looks for. It has all kinds of magic and shape-shifters, and witches and warriors - love and angst, fighting and treachery… all wrapped up with a satisfying ending.
I’m still working on figuring out where each book fits into the overall. It seems Ms. Kennedy has numerous, different series all set in one world. All the characters intertwine and make appearances in the various series, as does their character growth. So trying to read in any kind of timeline with consistency is really, REALLY hard!
BUT, the world and the characters are actually interesting enough that I’ll probably keep trying.
I’m still working on figuring out where each book fits into the overall. It seems Ms. Kennedy has numerous, different series all set in one world. All the characters intertwine and make appearances in the various series, as does their character growth. So trying to read in any kind of timeline with consistency is really, REALLY hard!
BUT, the world and the characters are actually interesting enough that I’ll probably keep trying.
February 23, 2015
A magnificent and satisfying conclusion to this epic trilogy! I am delighted to have received an ARC.
Defend, parry, attack, retreat, regroup
The mantra of a princess? Hardly, unless you are Ursula, heir to the High Throne of the Twelve Kingdoms, a honed and lethal warrior and tactician. It’s very lonely at the top though. She is separated from her sisters, bound by duty, honor and responsibility for others, battle-hardened and the respected commander of her elite Hawks, but never quite reaching the unattainable ideal of perfection set by someone who will always find her wanting. Ursula is forced to contend with a handsome, inscrutable mercenary from a foreign kingdom who is hired by King Uorsin as added security. The action is constantly unfolding, dark secrets revealed with challenges and satisfying resolutions, ultimately making this a a powerfully written conclusion to a fabulously executed fantasy saga.
I found this book to be an engaging, well-paced adventure, often heart-pounding and emotionally gripping. The characters are simply delightful, especially the irascible Dafne, Ursula’s librarian, confidant, ostensible lady-in-waiting who is no subservient sycophant. Harlan will melt your heart and curl your toes. Enough said. Princesses Andromeda and Amelia play a large part in this story and it was like revisiting old friends, the interactions between the sisters priceless. I like surprises in books and this is full of them, each one neatly wrapped and carefully placed to delight the reader at unexpected places. The strong emotional elements in this book make this a five-star read for me though. Ursula’s transformative journey brought me to tears in parts. The romance was a long, slow build but an oh so satisfying conclusion, one of Kennedy’s best IMHO. Get your fire extinguisher ready!
Action, adventure, romance and hot sex . . . .what’s not there to love?
Defend, parry, attack, retreat, regroup
The mantra of a princess? Hardly, unless you are Ursula, heir to the High Throne of the Twelve Kingdoms, a honed and lethal warrior and tactician. It’s very lonely at the top though. She is separated from her sisters, bound by duty, honor and responsibility for others, battle-hardened and the respected commander of her elite Hawks, but never quite reaching the unattainable ideal of perfection set by someone who will always find her wanting. Ursula is forced to contend with a handsome, inscrutable mercenary from a foreign kingdom who is hired by King Uorsin as added security. The action is constantly unfolding, dark secrets revealed with challenges and satisfying resolutions, ultimately making this a a powerfully written conclusion to a fabulously executed fantasy saga.
I found this book to be an engaging, well-paced adventure, often heart-pounding and emotionally gripping. The characters are simply delightful, especially the irascible Dafne, Ursula’s librarian, confidant, ostensible lady-in-waiting who is no subservient sycophant. Harlan will melt your heart and curl your toes. Enough said. Princesses Andromeda and Amelia play a large part in this story and it was like revisiting old friends, the interactions between the sisters priceless. I like surprises in books and this is full of them, each one neatly wrapped and carefully placed to delight the reader at unexpected places. The strong emotional elements in this book make this a five-star read for me though. Ursula’s transformative journey brought me to tears in parts. The romance was a long, slow build but an oh so satisfying conclusion, one of Kennedy’s best IMHO. Get your fire extinguisher ready!
Action, adventure, romance and hot sex . . . .what’s not there to love?
February 2, 2020
I absolutely love the first two books in this series, so I was very excited to get an ARC of The Talon of the Hawk.
Now I will have to confess that I had a difficult relationship with Ursula in the previous books, especially in book one. Half the time I liked her, and half the time I wanted to kick her for being a big bossypants to her sisters. So even though I longed for this book ever since finishing The Tears of the Rose, I was wondering if I could love Ursula as much as her sisters.
I shouldn't have worried: this is such a wonderful read and Ursula is an awesome character.
Ursula is a strong heroine, but with hurts and doubts that might break her if she lets them. She's learned to keep her feelings hidden, while trying hard to do what's right and to do what's honorable, but those might not be the same. I felt for her and cheered her on. Hoping she'd find a way to balance her love for her sisters with her feelings of duty.
Then she meets Harlan, a mercenary who sets his eyes on her. He sees more than just the mask that Ursula shows the world, and tries hard to get to the woman behind it.
The way Harlan and Ursula interact with each other is wonderful to read. Their courtship is half battle, half romance. Ursula is stubborn, but in Harlan she met her match. I was rooting for him to get Ursula to open up and let him inside her defenses.
As for the overall story: The events started in the first book find a thrilling climax in this one. This series was meant to be a trilogy at first, so the major storylines are solved. still there are lots of things that would lend themselves perfectly for more stories, and I'm happy that there will at least be two more books in this series. You can bet I'll be impatiently waiting for those.
I'm not sure if this book is readable as a standalone. You would probably miss out on things. But apart from that: this series is too good to just skip the first two books. so if you haven't started on this series yet: Get reading!
Now I will have to confess that I had a difficult relationship with Ursula in the previous books, especially in book one. Half the time I liked her, and half the time I wanted to kick her for being a big bossypants to her sisters. So even though I longed for this book ever since finishing The Tears of the Rose, I was wondering if I could love Ursula as much as her sisters.
I shouldn't have worried: this is such a wonderful read and Ursula is an awesome character.
Ursula is a strong heroine, but with hurts and doubts that might break her if she lets them. She's learned to keep her feelings hidden, while trying hard to do what's right and to do what's honorable, but those might not be the same. I felt for her and cheered her on. Hoping she'd find a way to balance her love for her sisters with her feelings of duty.
Then she meets Harlan, a mercenary who sets his eyes on her. He sees more than just the mask that Ursula shows the world, and tries hard to get to the woman behind it.
The way Harlan and Ursula interact with each other is wonderful to read. Their courtship is half battle, half romance. Ursula is stubborn, but in Harlan she met her match. I was rooting for him to get Ursula to open up and let him inside her defenses.
As for the overall story: The events started in the first book find a thrilling climax in this one. This series was meant to be a trilogy at first, so the major storylines are solved. still there are lots of things that would lend themselves perfectly for more stories, and I'm happy that there will at least be two more books in this series. You can bet I'll be impatiently waiting for those.
I'm not sure if this book is readable as a standalone. You would probably miss out on things. But apart from that: this series is too good to just skip the first two books. so if you haven't started on this series yet: Get reading!
April 5, 2015
Every time I finish a book in this series and declare it better than the last, I feel like I'm betraying my past self but DAMN THIS BOOK IS FANTASTIC. I had The Tears of the Rose on my best of 2014 list, but honestly, this book eclipses it, in terms of the gravity of Ursula's story and the payoff of the ongoing mythology of the Twelve Kingdoms. And Harlan is by far my favorite hero of the series. Damn.
December 19, 2024
The h was very stubborn and needed to stand up to her abusive father. I found her constant pushbak tedious but also real. She was difficult for good reason, hiding her care for her people and taking abuse to protect them. Good ending to the series.
May 9, 2016
4 stars
To be honest, it been a while (or years) since I read
and
, book 1 and 2 respectively from The Twelve Kingdoms series. While the world building is not magnificent, I did enjoy read Jeffe Kennedy's story and always search for a good fantasy romance. The Twelve Kingdoms is about three sister, Princess Andromeda or Andi, the shy and awkward that become Queen of Tala at first book. Then, Princess Amelia or Ami, a naive and too bright person that finally grow mature at second book. And now, now finally readers will get to know about the first daughter, the heir of Twelve Kingdoms, Princess Ursula or Essla, whom through the eyes of her younger sisters, depict as cold, ruthless and heartless woman. But, did she?
I always waiting for Ursula's story, since I'm a first daughter too. I often think that Andi and Ami's thought are unfair of her. I know that Ursula just want the best for her sisters, and especially the 12 Kingdoms. That's why it's hard to read her voice at first. She's so determined, too determined you are not sure to admire her determination or break her thick skull. Her loyalty to her father, Uorsin is beyond loyal and it will make readers question her sanity. If you already read book 1 and 2 (and yes, you must read it, because Talon of the Hawk is not stand alone), you will know that Uorsin is not the brightest character in the series. He's a tyrant, megalomaniac, and often make me question his capability as a king. Ursula unbreakable loyalty to Uorsin is beyond me. But, Kennedy show that Ursula's loyalty is not come by her heart, but mostly by her fear even she's not realize it at first. Kennedy peel Ursula's layer by layer, like an onion, show readers what hidden beneath this fierce and strong-willed warrior.
And boy, it's heart breaking to read! The reason why Ursula become herself, a cold and ruthless person, especially why she can't enjoy the pleasure of sex is already break my heart. Kennedy try to write it carefully, since it's too emotional to read and I know it's not easy to be told too.
I'm glad to finally see the real Ursula, and see how she too, like Andi and Ami, change to become a better person. I like her relationship with Harlan, the mercenary. They are my favorite couple from 12 Kingdoms. Harlan is alpha, but with beta trait that will make you go..awwwww. I know it's weird to see how fast he fallin' over Ursula, hard. He's also pledge his heart and love to Ursula, from the first time he met her. I don't mind tho. Ursula already battered, body, mind and heart. She's tortured, and to pair her with another tortured person is useless. Ursula find her perfect match in Harlan, and that man didn't disappoint to try his best to heal Ursula's wounds. The sex also not as steamy as the previous books, but consider what Ursula had been through, I think it's okay.
The Talon of the Hawk is the conclusion of 12 Kingdoms, but not the last book. In this book, finally the three sisters unite and understand each other after they parting ways. The aspect of the three goddesses (Danu, Moranu and Glorianna) still there, and now it's Danu's time since she's Ursula's deity patron. The conflict now not just how Ursula safe her kingdom from a malicious witch that influence her father, but also help Ami save her daughter (event from book 2). My disappointment is..beside the world building that seems so simple, the court politic also simple, the conflict with Tala is too long, but, the last conflict with the witch and Uorsin feel anti-climatic. Maybe because the length of the book is limited? Since this one is categorized into fantasy (with romance), I don't mind a longer book, tho. Up to 500 pages maybe (okay, not all people can read all those pages like you, Ren!), so Kennedy can not just explore Ursula's character development, but also her confrontation with her enemy. Make it grandeur, perhaps. The conflict with Harlan's real identity also come too late, just for the sake for more drama that, imho, actually not necessary.
The next book,
will tell readers story from Daphne Mailloux's POV, a librarian that accompany the three princesses since the start of the series. I hope her story will be good, since she's a scholar. A librarian too! As a fantasy romance, 12 Kingdoms series is very underrated. I think if you love fantasy with a good dollop of romance, The Talon of the Hawk is can't be missed. If you new to 12 Kingdoms series, I suggest to read The Mark of the Tala first, so you will get to know each sister personally.
To be honest, it been a while (or years) since I read
and
, book 1 and 2 respectively from The Twelve Kingdoms series. While the world building is not magnificent, I did enjoy read Jeffe Kennedy's story and always search for a good fantasy romance. The Twelve Kingdoms is about three sister, Princess Andromeda or Andi, the shy and awkward that become Queen of Tala at first book. Then, Princess Amelia or Ami, a naive and too bright person that finally grow mature at second book. And now, now finally readers will get to know about the first daughter, the heir of Twelve Kingdoms, Princess Ursula or Essla, whom through the eyes of her younger sisters, depict as cold, ruthless and heartless woman. But, did she?I always waiting for Ursula's story, since I'm a first daughter too. I often think that Andi and Ami's thought are unfair of her. I know that Ursula just want the best for her sisters, and especially the 12 Kingdoms. That's why it's hard to read her voice at first. She's so determined, too determined you are not sure to admire her determination or break her thick skull. Her loyalty to her father, Uorsin is beyond loyal and it will make readers question her sanity. If you already read book 1 and 2 (and yes, you must read it, because Talon of the Hawk is not stand alone), you will know that Uorsin is not the brightest character in the series. He's a tyrant, megalomaniac, and often make me question his capability as a king. Ursula unbreakable loyalty to Uorsin is beyond me. But, Kennedy show that Ursula's loyalty is not come by her heart, but mostly by her fear even she's not realize it at first. Kennedy peel Ursula's layer by layer, like an onion, show readers what hidden beneath this fierce and strong-willed warrior.
And boy, it's heart breaking to read! The reason why Ursula become herself, a cold and ruthless person, especially why she can't enjoy the pleasure of sex is already break my heart. Kennedy try to write it carefully, since it's too emotional to read and I know it's not easy to be told too.
I'm glad to finally see the real Ursula, and see how she too, like Andi and Ami, change to become a better person. I like her relationship with Harlan, the mercenary. They are my favorite couple from 12 Kingdoms. Harlan is alpha, but with beta trait that will make you go..awwwww. I know it's weird to see how fast he fallin' over Ursula, hard. He's also pledge his heart and love to Ursula, from the first time he met her. I don't mind tho. Ursula already battered, body, mind and heart. She's tortured, and to pair her with another tortured person is useless. Ursula find her perfect match in Harlan, and that man didn't disappoint to try his best to heal Ursula's wounds. The sex also not as steamy as the previous books, but consider what Ursula had been through, I think it's okay.
The Talon of the Hawk is the conclusion of 12 Kingdoms, but not the last book. In this book, finally the three sisters unite and understand each other after they parting ways. The aspect of the three goddesses (Danu, Moranu and Glorianna) still there, and now it's Danu's time since she's Ursula's deity patron. The conflict now not just how Ursula safe her kingdom from a malicious witch that influence her father, but also help Ami save her daughter (event from book 2). My disappointment is..beside the world building that seems so simple, the court politic also simple, the conflict with Tala is too long, but, the last conflict with the witch and Uorsin feel anti-climatic. Maybe because the length of the book is limited? Since this one is categorized into fantasy (with romance), I don't mind a longer book, tho. Up to 500 pages maybe (okay, not all people can read all those pages like you, Ren!), so Kennedy can not just explore Ursula's character development, but also her confrontation with her enemy. Make it grandeur, perhaps. The conflict with Harlan's real identity also come too late, just for the sake for more drama that, imho, actually not necessary.
The next book,
will tell readers story from Daphne Mailloux's POV, a librarian that accompany the three princesses since the start of the series. I hope her story will be good, since she's a scholar. A librarian too! As a fantasy romance, 12 Kingdoms series is very underrated. I think if you love fantasy with a good dollop of romance, The Talon of the Hawk is can't be missed. If you new to 12 Kingdoms series, I suggest to read The Mark of the Tala first, so you will get to know each sister personally.
January 12, 2016
[I received a copy of this novel through NetGalley, in exchange for an honest review.]
This book concludes the “Twelve Kingdoms” trilogy (at least, I think it does, as I'm not aware of a fourth book being in the works). Just as Andromeda and Amelia had their novels in the series, this time Ursula gets hers, too. Ursula, the elder sister and Heir to the throne, fiercely noble and loyal, trying to do what she feels is right, upholding her rank without overstepping it. Ursula, who always did her best to protect her younger sisters from darkness that stemmed from far deeper than was led to see in the previous novels.
There was quite a dichotomy to Ursula's character. She got to know Salena for the longest, but int turn, her death also hurt her the most. She honed her skills, her mind, her body through hard training and sheer willpower, and had to learn very quickly to navigate court politics and to handle her father, who was clearly not the kindest nor most balanced person; yet at the same time, she felt she had to let go of a lot of other things that she perceived as going against this—because deep inside, she could never physically become the son, the male heir Uorsin always wanted, and didn't want to look “too feminine” or “weak”. She showed herself a pillar of strength, paving the way for her sisters' freedom, while keeping herself trapped and isolated out of love for them and out of her perception of loyalty. In the end, what she had to learn wasn't to become “stronger”, but to accept that sometimes, being strong also means allowing other people to help you.
In general, her evolution was a positive one. She made a lot of mistakes, and sometimes her determination to not change was mind-boggling; however, when she acknowledged what had gone wrong, she always tried to change it, to become better, even though it meant challenging her own world, the truth she had built for herself, a truth that could leave her to collapse if it was to disappear.
And here is where I'm not very satisfied with the story: because a lot of those changes came through Harlan. (That's no spoiler: the romance was obvious from the beginning. Bonus for the sex scenes that weren't as ridiculous as in the other books, because Ursula didn't shy away from more down-to-earth vocabulary.) Now, Harlan was a very decent human being and male love interest, let it be said: a strong mercenary warrior, who liked Ursula precisely for her warrior qualities and for basically who she was, never looking to change her, to make her into someone different, or expecting her to conform to some kind of ideal. Granted, he annoyed me at first, with his habit of getting into Ursula's personal space—I felt it was insta-love on his part, and that the falling-in-mutual-love part went too fast, as if he insinuated himself into Ursula's life without leaving her any choice in the matter. On the other hand, once she got to spill her guts, he supported her all the way, encouraged her, showed much patience and understanding. No Uorsin was he.
However, this also carried the message that for Ursula to “get better”, to get reconciled with herself, she necessarily had to find “a man” and “a love interest”. I found it diminished the importance of her character development here, of how strong she was supposed to be, and of other forms of love: not her sisters, not Dafne, not an exceptional friendship, but a guy first and foremost. An unusual damsel in distress she was, but yet again one who needed saving by a man. Also, Harlan's presence looked like a forced trigger, to spur her into action; without his presence, Ursula may not have developed into the person she had to become, may have remained at Ordnung all the time, or may have made her decisions much too late.
Another big problem I had was the introduction of Illyria in the story. Terin and the rebels, alright, since we already saw them in the previous books. Illyria, though, didn't have much background nor motives to her: why did she want the Star so badly, to the point of coming to Ordnung for it? What did she really aim for? Was there more to learn about Deyrr? Was she really needed to enforce what a tyrant Uorsin was? The High King had already demonstrated previously that he could do that very well on his own... especially once the way he treated Ursula was clearly revealed.
Finally, the ending felt pretty abrupt, considering the build-up. Half the book was devoted to romance, and it didn't leave as much room as needed to tie up both Ursula's story and the three sisters' arcs, not to mention the political plot around the High Throne and the Heir.
Conclusion: Good siblings dynamics; a satisfying ending, but too quickly wrapped; an additional villain that didn't add much to the story; and a love story that, while interesting, left me wondering about the whole damsel in distress thing. 2.5 stars / “It's OK” rating.
This book concludes the “Twelve Kingdoms” trilogy (at least, I think it does, as I'm not aware of a fourth book being in the works). Just as Andromeda and Amelia had their novels in the series, this time Ursula gets hers, too. Ursula, the elder sister and Heir to the throne, fiercely noble and loyal, trying to do what she feels is right, upholding her rank without overstepping it. Ursula, who always did her best to protect her younger sisters from darkness that stemmed from far deeper than was led to see in the previous novels.
There was quite a dichotomy to Ursula's character. She got to know Salena for the longest, but int turn, her death also hurt her the most. She honed her skills, her mind, her body through hard training and sheer willpower, and had to learn very quickly to navigate court politics and to handle her father, who was clearly not the kindest nor most balanced person; yet at the same time, she felt she had to let go of a lot of other things that she perceived as going against this—because deep inside, she could never physically become the son, the male heir Uorsin always wanted, and didn't want to look “too feminine” or “weak”. She showed herself a pillar of strength, paving the way for her sisters' freedom, while keeping herself trapped and isolated out of love for them and out of her perception of loyalty. In the end, what she had to learn wasn't to become “stronger”, but to accept that sometimes, being strong also means allowing other people to help you.
In general, her evolution was a positive one. She made a lot of mistakes, and sometimes her determination to not change was mind-boggling; however, when she acknowledged what had gone wrong, she always tried to change it, to become better, even though it meant challenging her own world, the truth she had built for herself, a truth that could leave her to collapse if it was to disappear.
And here is where I'm not very satisfied with the story: because a lot of those changes came through Harlan. (That's no spoiler: the romance was obvious from the beginning. Bonus for the sex scenes that weren't as ridiculous as in the other books, because Ursula didn't shy away from more down-to-earth vocabulary.) Now, Harlan was a very decent human being and male love interest, let it be said: a strong mercenary warrior, who liked Ursula precisely for her warrior qualities and for basically who she was, never looking to change her, to make her into someone different, or expecting her to conform to some kind of ideal. Granted, he annoyed me at first, with his habit of getting into Ursula's personal space—I felt it was insta-love on his part, and that the falling-in-mutual-love part went too fast, as if he insinuated himself into Ursula's life without leaving her any choice in the matter. On the other hand, once she got to spill her guts, he supported her all the way, encouraged her, showed much patience and understanding. No Uorsin was he.
However, this also carried the message that for Ursula to “get better”, to get reconciled with herself, she necessarily had to find “a man” and “a love interest”. I found it diminished the importance of her character development here, of how strong she was supposed to be, and of other forms of love: not her sisters, not Dafne, not an exceptional friendship, but a guy first and foremost. An unusual damsel in distress she was, but yet again one who needed saving by a man. Also, Harlan's presence looked like a forced trigger, to spur her into action; without his presence, Ursula may not have developed into the person she had to become, may have remained at Ordnung all the time, or may have made her decisions much too late.
Another big problem I had was the introduction of Illyria in the story. Terin and the rebels, alright, since we already saw them in the previous books. Illyria, though, didn't have much background nor motives to her: why did she want the Star so badly, to the point of coming to Ordnung for it? What did she really aim for? Was there more to learn about Deyrr? Was she really needed to enforce what a tyrant Uorsin was? The High King had already demonstrated previously that he could do that very well on his own... especially once the way he treated Ursula was clearly revealed.
Finally, the ending felt pretty abrupt, considering the build-up. Half the book was devoted to romance, and it didn't leave as much room as needed to tie up both Ursula's story and the three sisters' arcs, not to mention the political plot around the High Throne and the Heir.
Conclusion: Good siblings dynamics; a satisfying ending, but too quickly wrapped; an additional villain that didn't add much to the story; and a love story that, while interesting, left me wondering about the whole damsel in distress thing. 2.5 stars / “It's OK” rating.
May 18, 2015
Loyalty cannot be bought, but it can be swayed. Ursula is the oldest child of the High King Uorsin. She's also the current heir for the twelve kingdoms. She is loyal to a fault and derides mercenaries whose loyalty can be bought by coin. Ursula in a losing war. Her values are not in alignment with how she is behaving which is causing her constant inner turmoil. The phrase which comes to mind for Ursula is "Lie to Me".
Many may think Ursula is a brave heroine constantly sacrificing for her sisters. Whilst it is true that Ursula protected her sisters from her power mad father, Ursula's way of protect is foolish. By turning a blind eye to the atrocities perpetrated by her father is a self-deception which ends up causing more harm than good. In this final book in the trilogy, Ms. Kennedy captures how most females, no matter how strong, will behave. For Ursula, family means the most. When she accuses Harlan, a mercenary captain for being wavering, she's merely projecting. Ursula's misguided loyalty and belief that she's a good daughter will make everything right. When a King behaves above the law, it is now time to remind the King, he is not. This key understanding is missed by Ursula who is supposedly such an amazing strategist. If she was really so good at strategy, she would have been able to protect those she loved better. Instead, she let her desire for her father's approval make her helpless.
From a character perspective, I'm not impressed by Ursula at all. She's pigheaded, judgmental, willfully blind to her father and all around prickly. For me, she's an anti-heroine who never quite redeems herself. Each decision she makes to right an injustice is forced upon her by her family or loved ones. She is purely reactive rather than proactive which is odd considering the character profile. This is what makes her unimpressive. Her actions speak louder than words and they say, "only if I must". Of the three sisters, Andi is truest to herself and most admirable.
The action in this story goes at a decent pace. It keeps the story moving. The added evil villain in this story almost seemed an overkill and unnecessary. However, in the interest of finally pushing the reluctant Ursula into action, the new villain and threat did its job. The addition of Harlan as a love interest for Ursula is what makes this story good. Harlan is much maligned for his honest profession as a mercenary. He's gentlemanly and steadfast. The abuse he receives as the hands of Ursula are many and painful. I felt sorry for him to fall in love with such a closed off and damaged woman. Without him as a catalyst, the entire story would have fallen apart. This is the case of a white knight coming the rescue of an unwilling damsel in distress. This paranormal romance is recommended to those who love a man whose loyalty is unwavering.
*provided by NetGalley
Many may think Ursula is a brave heroine constantly sacrificing for her sisters. Whilst it is true that Ursula protected her sisters from her power mad father, Ursula's way of protect is foolish. By turning a blind eye to the atrocities perpetrated by her father is a self-deception which ends up causing more harm than good. In this final book in the trilogy, Ms. Kennedy captures how most females, no matter how strong, will behave. For Ursula, family means the most. When she accuses Harlan, a mercenary captain for being wavering, she's merely projecting. Ursula's misguided loyalty and belief that she's a good daughter will make everything right. When a King behaves above the law, it is now time to remind the King, he is not. This key understanding is missed by Ursula who is supposedly such an amazing strategist. If she was really so good at strategy, she would have been able to protect those she loved better. Instead, she let her desire for her father's approval make her helpless.
From a character perspective, I'm not impressed by Ursula at all. She's pigheaded, judgmental, willfully blind to her father and all around prickly. For me, she's an anti-heroine who never quite redeems herself. Each decision she makes to right an injustice is forced upon her by her family or loved ones. She is purely reactive rather than proactive which is odd considering the character profile. This is what makes her unimpressive. Her actions speak louder than words and they say, "only if I must". Of the three sisters, Andi is truest to herself and most admirable.
The action in this story goes at a decent pace. It keeps the story moving. The added evil villain in this story almost seemed an overkill and unnecessary. However, in the interest of finally pushing the reluctant Ursula into action, the new villain and threat did its job. The addition of Harlan as a love interest for Ursula is what makes this story good. Harlan is much maligned for his honest profession as a mercenary. He's gentlemanly and steadfast. The abuse he receives as the hands of Ursula are many and painful. I felt sorry for him to fall in love with such a closed off and damaged woman. Without him as a catalyst, the entire story would have fallen apart. This is the case of a white knight coming the rescue of an unwilling damsel in distress. This paranormal romance is recommended to those who love a man whose loyalty is unwavering.
*provided by NetGalley
July 26, 2015
The Talon of the Hawk is a 5 star fantasy romance read. Kennedy displays her writing skill by humanizing a cold untouchable warrior and letting us see her as a woman and a sister. This series just keeps getting better and better!
We first met Andromeda and were introduced to the Tala. From book one the Tala were shown as these outsiders that held mysterious powers and were to be feared while the High King ruled his kingdoms with an iron fist but at least they were safe. Throughout Andy and Ami’s books your perception of the High King and the Tala shift so by the time you pick up The Talon of the Hawk, Ursula’s book, you are thinking the Tala need to win and get rid of the High Throne.
That is until you get to know Ursula, what she believes in, and the type of leader she is and can be. The Talon of the Hawk brings hope that there is a cure for the dying lands and that the Tala can become part of something instead of being alienated.
Ursula is such a strong character and has a good heart. She has been used by her father and yet she holds her sense of honor above his word. In the beginning of the novel she is returning home from thwarting his plans and she still has the guts to walk into that throne room, head held high. The mercenaries her father hired quickly become her allies as she flees the castle and goes on the hunt for her sisters.
It is quite the journey and it brings resolution to the semi-cliffy book two left us in. And then we get the end scene where Ursula uses the star of Annfwn. That is all that will be said because it’s too good to spoil. If you enjoy Jeffe’s writing or if you enjoy fantasy romance you need to pick up this series!
We first met Andromeda and were introduced to the Tala. From book one the Tala were shown as these outsiders that held mysterious powers and were to be feared while the High King ruled his kingdoms with an iron fist but at least they were safe. Throughout Andy and Ami’s books your perception of the High King and the Tala shift so by the time you pick up The Talon of the Hawk, Ursula’s book, you are thinking the Tala need to win and get rid of the High Throne.
That is until you get to know Ursula, what she believes in, and the type of leader she is and can be. The Talon of the Hawk brings hope that there is a cure for the dying lands and that the Tala can become part of something instead of being alienated.
Ursula is such a strong character and has a good heart. She has been used by her father and yet she holds her sense of honor above his word. In the beginning of the novel she is returning home from thwarting his plans and she still has the guts to walk into that throne room, head held high. The mercenaries her father hired quickly become her allies as she flees the castle and goes on the hunt for her sisters.
It is quite the journey and it brings resolution to the semi-cliffy book two left us in. And then we get the end scene where Ursula uses the star of Annfwn. That is all that will be said because it’s too good to spoil. If you enjoy Jeffe’s writing or if you enjoy fantasy romance you need to pick up this series!
July 20, 2015
Review courtesy of Dark Faerie Tales
Quick & Dirty: Dark, high fantasy with erotic romance. A little slow at times but for the most part was an engaging read that I thoroughly enjoyed!
Opening Sentence: The bright pennants of Ordnung, High King Uorsin’s rampant bear topping them all, snapped in the cool breezes from the high mountain peaks.
The Review:
The Talon of the Hawk is the last novel in the Twelve Kingdoms Trilogy. It does a nice job of wrapping up the series but it spends a lot of time in the country of Annfwn solving their problems than it does at Castle Ordnung and solving the problems of an evil king and dying empire. I would highly recommend reading the previous two novels of this series in order to know the characters and what is going on. The stories really do build off of one another. Each story in this series has been told from the point of view of one of the sisters. The Talon of the Hawk is Ursula’s story.
Princess Ursula returns home to Castle Ordnung without her sister, Amelia, and her heir much to the chagrin of her father, King Uorsin. Ursula finds that a lot has changed since she has left. A foreign army or mercenaries is now guarding the castle. Her father has a foreign witch at his beck and call and important people are missing. Uorsin believes Ursula a traitor now and abuses her and locks her up.
Ursula escapes with the help of the mercenary army because the leader, Harlan, is in love with her. He swears fealty to her without breaking his contract agreement with Uorsin. Ursula goes on the run to Annfwn hoping to find both of her sisters (Andromeda & Amelia) and Amelia���s daughter who was kidnapped.
Ursula is the older sister who has always been the heir to the throne. She has been trained as a warrior since she was five. She has speed and her trusty sword to aid her in battle. Ursula has also been a protector to her two younger sisters, keeping them away from their father’s wrath. She also has no interest in men so much so that her sisters think that she is gay and the bards sing songs about her sword being her partner. The King is the only master in her mind. She takes his word for law and she tries not to fail him, even though she hasn’t been doing a good job when it comes to her sisters and what he wants.
Harlan begins to undo all the safeguards and barriers that Ursula has put up for herself. She has a lot of issues – and let me tell you, one of them is really bad. Harlan is a mercenary with a heart of gold and has no ill will towards Ursula even though that is all she can think about. I loved Harlan’s loyalty and how he manages to break down Ursula’s walls.
The Talon of the Hawk is a dark, high fantasy with erotic romance. I really enjoyed the buildup tension between Ursula and Harlan’s relationship. The writing was quite descriptive. There were a few slow spots at times but for the most part there was so much going on that the story kept me engaged and wanting to read more. The only thing I was disappointed in was how quickly everything wrapped up. There has to be more to this story and I definitely want to know what happens afterwards.
Overall, this is a series that I would recommend for those who like high fantasy with heavy romantic scenes. This story alone has some really dark George R.R. Martin undertones. This story isn’t all sunshine and roses but it was still a very engaging read.
Notable Scene:
His words stung, far more than they should have. Danu! Such a viciously targeted strike. He’d opened the way to this wound, breaking the scar tissue with his questions, flattery, and attention. A weapon so finely honed I’d never felt it going in. I’d been fine, all of that squarely in the past. Now he’d made that old injury seep with blood and pus once more. With pain. I nearly staggered from the ache. Of course that scared me. I couldn’t keep bleeding like this.
“Fine. I am afraid. You called me fearless and you were wrong about that, also.”
“Also?”
“You thought you could cozen and seduce me. It will never happen.”
“Ah. I understand. I never figured you for a coward, Ursula.”
“Think what you like. I’m not interested in having the good opinion of a mercenary.” I hauled myself back, almost regretting that last attack. A clean slice, meant to hurt enough to end this dance between us once and for all.
He absorbed the strike silently, a warrior to the end.
“Be ready to ride out in the morning.” I said, and turned to go.
“Ursula,” he called after me.
Unwilling, I stopped, looked over my shoulder into the shadows. “What?”
“Do you realize that’s the first time you’ve used my name? And you did it to break my heart.”
I steeled mine. “Then you know I mean it.” With that, I strode off to take the first watch. He would get over it soon enough.
Better now than later.
FTC Advisory: Jeffe Kennedy/Kensington provided me with a copy of The Talon of the Hawk. No goody bags, sponsorships, “material connections,” or bribes were exchanged for my review.
Quick & Dirty: Dark, high fantasy with erotic romance. A little slow at times but for the most part was an engaging read that I thoroughly enjoyed!
Opening Sentence: The bright pennants of Ordnung, High King Uorsin’s rampant bear topping them all, snapped in the cool breezes from the high mountain peaks.
The Review:
The Talon of the Hawk is the last novel in the Twelve Kingdoms Trilogy. It does a nice job of wrapping up the series but it spends a lot of time in the country of Annfwn solving their problems than it does at Castle Ordnung and solving the problems of an evil king and dying empire. I would highly recommend reading the previous two novels of this series in order to know the characters and what is going on. The stories really do build off of one another. Each story in this series has been told from the point of view of one of the sisters. The Talon of the Hawk is Ursula’s story.
Princess Ursula returns home to Castle Ordnung without her sister, Amelia, and her heir much to the chagrin of her father, King Uorsin. Ursula finds that a lot has changed since she has left. A foreign army or mercenaries is now guarding the castle. Her father has a foreign witch at his beck and call and important people are missing. Uorsin believes Ursula a traitor now and abuses her and locks her up.
Ursula escapes with the help of the mercenary army because the leader, Harlan, is in love with her. He swears fealty to her without breaking his contract agreement with Uorsin. Ursula goes on the run to Annfwn hoping to find both of her sisters (Andromeda & Amelia) and Amelia���s daughter who was kidnapped.
Ursula is the older sister who has always been the heir to the throne. She has been trained as a warrior since she was five. She has speed and her trusty sword to aid her in battle. Ursula has also been a protector to her two younger sisters, keeping them away from their father’s wrath. She also has no interest in men so much so that her sisters think that she is gay and the bards sing songs about her sword being her partner. The King is the only master in her mind. She takes his word for law and she tries not to fail him, even though she hasn’t been doing a good job when it comes to her sisters and what he wants.
Harlan begins to undo all the safeguards and barriers that Ursula has put up for herself. She has a lot of issues – and let me tell you, one of them is really bad. Harlan is a mercenary with a heart of gold and has no ill will towards Ursula even though that is all she can think about. I loved Harlan’s loyalty and how he manages to break down Ursula’s walls.
The Talon of the Hawk is a dark, high fantasy with erotic romance. I really enjoyed the buildup tension between Ursula and Harlan’s relationship. The writing was quite descriptive. There were a few slow spots at times but for the most part there was so much going on that the story kept me engaged and wanting to read more. The only thing I was disappointed in was how quickly everything wrapped up. There has to be more to this story and I definitely want to know what happens afterwards.
Overall, this is a series that I would recommend for those who like high fantasy with heavy romantic scenes. This story alone has some really dark George R.R. Martin undertones. This story isn’t all sunshine and roses but it was still a very engaging read.
Notable Scene:
His words stung, far more than they should have. Danu! Such a viciously targeted strike. He’d opened the way to this wound, breaking the scar tissue with his questions, flattery, and attention. A weapon so finely honed I’d never felt it going in. I’d been fine, all of that squarely in the past. Now he’d made that old injury seep with blood and pus once more. With pain. I nearly staggered from the ache. Of course that scared me. I couldn’t keep bleeding like this.
“Fine. I am afraid. You called me fearless and you were wrong about that, also.”
“Also?”
“You thought you could cozen and seduce me. It will never happen.”
“Ah. I understand. I never figured you for a coward, Ursula.”
“Think what you like. I’m not interested in having the good opinion of a mercenary.” I hauled myself back, almost regretting that last attack. A clean slice, meant to hurt enough to end this dance between us once and for all.
He absorbed the strike silently, a warrior to the end.
“Be ready to ride out in the morning.” I said, and turned to go.
“Ursula,” he called after me.
Unwilling, I stopped, looked over my shoulder into the shadows. “What?”
“Do you realize that’s the first time you’ve used my name? And you did it to break my heart.”
I steeled mine. “Then you know I mean it.” With that, I strode off to take the first watch. He would get over it soon enough.
Better now than later.
FTC Advisory: Jeffe Kennedy/Kensington provided me with a copy of The Talon of the Hawk. No goody bags, sponsorships, “material connections,” or bribes were exchanged for my review.
May 7, 2018
Oh wow. Jeffe Kennedy really takes it to the next level with this third book in her Twelve Kingdoms series. I didn’t realize that I needed Ursula’s book until I started reading it and I’ve got to tell you, this book is not for the faint of heart.
So far, we’ve only seen Ursula through the eyes of her younger sisters. We know she is strong and powerful, almost masculine. The heir to their father’s throne, she leads armies, she eschews relationships, and she demonstrates unwavering loyalty to the king. All of those things are true, but what we could never see through the first person POVs of Amelia and Andromeda is that her power and strength have come at a very steep price.
The King has grown wilder and more power hungry with each book. Or maybe, it would be more accurate to say, it’s become more obvious with each book. What’s also obvious now is that the journey each sister has taken has been in tandem with each identifying with one of the three goddesses. As they each come into their power, they come closer to balancing the gifts each goddess represents. Ursula is the sword.
The hero of the story is Harlan, the leader of a group of mercenary soldiers conscripted by the king. He is taken with Ursula right away. He is floored by her strength and her strategic mind, but it’s a devotion she struggles to accept. The woman has some serious demons to overcome. Not only that, it’s hard to fall in love while your world is falling down around you. Ursula’s father has gone completely off the deep end, thanks at least in part to a dark sorceress. If Urusula hadn’t run, her life would be in danger. She must reunite with her sisters to find Ami’s stolen child in Annfwn, while facing the truth about herself, her future, and her mother’s legacy.
Without spoiling, I have to warn you that if you have certain triggers, this book will be hard reading… heck, it was disturbing for me and I don’t have triggers. But it wasn’t gratutious, just sad, and what we learn about Ursula’s past is so telling about the woman she has become. That she is able to move beyond it at all is a testament to her strength and her will… but she isn’t whole. That’s part of what is so remarkable about Harlan. He is so patient and utterly devoted to her. Even when she pushes him away, he never lets her down. He is amazing.
This isn’t just a love story, though. It brings all of the sisters together for a fitting end to the original trilogy. We get closure on all the romances as well as satisfying conclusion to the series arc.
As with the previous installments, the world building is great, the read is easy, and I devoured it in a matter of hours. Again, I only wish I had a little more time on the back-end to savor the HEA. It was over before I was ready.
If you are a fantasy romance fan and you haven’t tried these books, you totally should. I would recommend.
Rating: B+
So far, we’ve only seen Ursula through the eyes of her younger sisters. We know she is strong and powerful, almost masculine. The heir to their father’s throne, she leads armies, she eschews relationships, and she demonstrates unwavering loyalty to the king. All of those things are true, but what we could never see through the first person POVs of Amelia and Andromeda is that her power and strength have come at a very steep price.
The King has grown wilder and more power hungry with each book. Or maybe, it would be more accurate to say, it’s become more obvious with each book. What’s also obvious now is that the journey each sister has taken has been in tandem with each identifying with one of the three goddesses. As they each come into their power, they come closer to balancing the gifts each goddess represents. Ursula is the sword.
The hero of the story is Harlan, the leader of a group of mercenary soldiers conscripted by the king. He is taken with Ursula right away. He is floored by her strength and her strategic mind, but it’s a devotion she struggles to accept. The woman has some serious demons to overcome. Not only that, it’s hard to fall in love while your world is falling down around you. Ursula’s father has gone completely off the deep end, thanks at least in part to a dark sorceress. If Urusula hadn’t run, her life would be in danger. She must reunite with her sisters to find Ami’s stolen child in Annfwn, while facing the truth about herself, her future, and her mother’s legacy.
Without spoiling, I have to warn you that if you have certain triggers, this book will be hard reading… heck, it was disturbing for me and I don’t have triggers. But it wasn’t gratutious, just sad, and what we learn about Ursula’s past is so telling about the woman she has become. That she is able to move beyond it at all is a testament to her strength and her will… but she isn’t whole. That’s part of what is so remarkable about Harlan. He is so patient and utterly devoted to her. Even when she pushes him away, he never lets her down. He is amazing.
This isn’t just a love story, though. It brings all of the sisters together for a fitting end to the original trilogy. We get closure on all the romances as well as satisfying conclusion to the series arc.
As with the previous installments, the world building is great, the read is easy, and I devoured it in a matter of hours. Again, I only wish I had a little more time on the back-end to savor the HEA. It was over before I was ready.
If you are a fantasy romance fan and you haven’t tried these books, you totally should. I would recommend.
Rating: B+
August 8, 2022
The Talon of the Hawk is the finale of the Twelve Kingdoms series, and this is the story where we get to see Ursula's story. I was super excited for this one, as Ursula is the sister that has the most mystery behind her. All we really see from her in the two books is her loyalty to their father and her commitment to the Twelve Kingdom. I actually LOVED this one so fiercely, and seeing her story was such fun. Ursula is such a tough heroine, and she has had to put a shield around her to protect herself. And I will be honest the romance that is developed here is top notch. Jeffe Kennedy did wonders with her book.
So the gist of the story is that Ursula due to her sacrifices to her sisters, is put in a bad spot with her father and he doesn't trust her and is also planning on replacing her as the heir with her nephew. The king is growing more insane by the moment, but Ursula will do all that she can to show her loyalty. And then comes in the hero, Harlan, is to work with her to maintain that loyalty by the command of her father. But there is something about Harlan that reaches to Ursula, and a friendship eventually forms between them. But as tensions rise in the kingdom, and Ursula is having to fight for the lives of her people, a difficult choice will be placed on her shoulders and she will have to choose what she is willing to do for it.
I had so much fun with this book and as a finale it was purely epic but still left room at the end for more books (which from my knowledge there are connecting books to this series). I really loved how the growth of this story was built and the way that the author just was able to endear me to the heroine. These types of heroines can be really challenging for me to relate to, but there was so much goodness in Ursula and her journey was so beautiful. The most entertaining moments in this book was the bantering between Ursual and her love interest, Harlan. My goodness, these two have explosive chemistry. Harlan stands up to Ursula and tells her like it is, he is so supportive and protective but also respects her and lets her fight her own battles. I just adored that about him. It's like he understood what she needed at all the right times. They have such a strong connection to each other and I really felt like she needed a man like Harlan, who just wanted to be her partner and not take anything away from her and stand by her side.
Overall I found The Talon of the Hawk to be a brilliant conclusion and gave me all the satisfying feelings I could have expected from this story. Jeffe Kennedy is brilliant in her storytelling and I am eager to explore more of her work!
So the gist of the story is that Ursula due to her sacrifices to her sisters, is put in a bad spot with her father and he doesn't trust her and is also planning on replacing her as the heir with her nephew. The king is growing more insane by the moment, but Ursula will do all that she can to show her loyalty. And then comes in the hero, Harlan, is to work with her to maintain that loyalty by the command of her father. But there is something about Harlan that reaches to Ursula, and a friendship eventually forms between them. But as tensions rise in the kingdom, and Ursula is having to fight for the lives of her people, a difficult choice will be placed on her shoulders and she will have to choose what she is willing to do for it.
I had so much fun with this book and as a finale it was purely epic but still left room at the end for more books (which from my knowledge there are connecting books to this series). I really loved how the growth of this story was built and the way that the author just was able to endear me to the heroine. These types of heroines can be really challenging for me to relate to, but there was so much goodness in Ursula and her journey was so beautiful. The most entertaining moments in this book was the bantering between Ursual and her love interest, Harlan. My goodness, these two have explosive chemistry. Harlan stands up to Ursula and tells her like it is, he is so supportive and protective but also respects her and lets her fight her own battles. I just adored that about him. It's like he understood what she needed at all the right times. They have such a strong connection to each other and I really felt like she needed a man like Harlan, who just wanted to be her partner and not take anything away from her and stand by her side.
Overall I found The Talon of the Hawk to be a brilliant conclusion and gave me all the satisfying feelings I could have expected from this story. Jeffe Kennedy is brilliant in her storytelling and I am eager to explore more of her work!
July 8, 2020
Excellent finish to this trilogy!
If you haven't read the previous two books in The Twelve Kingdoms series, I recommend you do that before reading this one, as they are interconnected and flow from one to the next. But each one has a complete couple romance, and here it is strong, fierce and wary Ursula meeting Harlan, a mercenary soldier hired by her tyrant King father, a man who ultimately sides with her in the test of loyalty and devotion. Several plot arcs are culminated in this story, but there are also new characters and new developments that make it clear that the worldbuilding is not complete and that there are more tales to come.
The worldbuilding is exciting and unique and I particularly liked the religious aspects of the three goddesses - Glorianna, Moranu, and Danu and how each of the sisters embodies the traits of one of the goddesses - Ami for Glorianna (indeed she is consider Glorianna's avatar/embodiment and the head of her house of worship, Andromeda for Moranu and the Tala kingdom, and Ursula for Danu and her warrior traits.
I've read the books that come after this one, and am greatly looking forward to a reread as I head into the final stories in the series!
If you haven't read the previous two books in The Twelve Kingdoms series, I recommend you do that before reading this one, as they are interconnected and flow from one to the next. But each one has a complete couple romance, and here it is strong, fierce and wary Ursula meeting Harlan, a mercenary soldier hired by her tyrant King father, a man who ultimately sides with her in the test of loyalty and devotion. Several plot arcs are culminated in this story, but there are also new characters and new developments that make it clear that the worldbuilding is not complete and that there are more tales to come.
The worldbuilding is exciting and unique and I particularly liked the religious aspects of the three goddesses - Glorianna, Moranu, and Danu and how each of the sisters embodies the traits of one of the goddesses - Ami for Glorianna (indeed she is consider Glorianna's avatar/embodiment and the head of her house of worship, Andromeda for Moranu and the Tala kingdom, and Ursula for Danu and her warrior traits.
I've read the books that come after this one, and am greatly looking forward to a reread as I head into the final stories in the series!
October 20, 2020
Ursula was so far my least favorite sister, but this book raised her up to the top spot. Great romance & action. I will definitely read more about the world of the Twelve Kingdoms.
July 5, 2015
To be fair, I was never a fan of Ursula. She seemed like her father's child. The warrior princess who will follow duty. But the facade began to fall apart in this one. Sure she was still loyal, but also started to see reason. And I understood why she kept up that I am strong, I do as I am told thing....
So we all know by now that the king is an a-hole, and trust me, if you think he could not get any worse...oh you are mistaken, he is truly a tyrant. How Ursula still can follow him, oh I wondered, but she was shaped and broken by him. I felt so sorry for her.
But she will start to see that things must change. This kingdom is falling to bits. She must learn to let go. In the end she was almost my favorite sister..make that favorite. Her story was emotional.
There is love too. I did not really trust the guy, he loved too easily. She took her time and fought it, while he loved at once. And I being a suspicious person found that strange. At least he loosened her up.
And at the end I found out that there will be more books, so that will be fun. Dafne is up next, I have no idea what that will be about but I look forward to reading more.
The most emotional of the three books. Our warrior heir finds her way.
So we all know by now that the king is an a-hole, and trust me, if you think he could not get any worse...oh you are mistaken, he is truly a tyrant. How Ursula still can follow him, oh I wondered, but she was shaped and broken by him. I felt so sorry for her.
But she will start to see that things must change. This kingdom is falling to bits. She must learn to let go. In the end she was almost my favorite sister..make that favorite. Her story was emotional.
There is love too. I did not really trust the guy, he loved too easily. She took her time and fought it, while he loved at once. And I being a suspicious person found that strange. At least he loosened her up.
And at the end I found out that there will be more books, so that will be fun. Dafne is up next, I have no idea what that will be about but I look forward to reading more.
The most emotional of the three books. Our warrior heir finds her way.
May 25, 2016
The cover of this book reminds me of:
What soldier fights in a leather bustier?
This book was a big disappointment after the previous two. I'm not going to go into a lot of detail because if you've read the first two books, you'll still want to read this one.
Basically, I think the romance took up way too much space in a complicated story. This is particularly true of the lame romantic conflict at the end. This book is at its climax and the story for all three books is being wrapped up and suddenly there's a lame romantic conflict out of nowhere. At least it's resolved quickly.
The Annfwn revolutionary subplot seemed very simplistic and just never resonated for me the way that Ursula's dynastic and governance problems did.
I wish we could find out what happens next, but this is a romance series and there are no more sisters. Ursula's story doesn't feel finished because she has so many challenges still to overcome. She's a great character and it doesn't feel fair to tell only half her story.
Still, this series is worth reading for the first two books.
What soldier fights in a leather bustier?
This book was a big disappointment after the previous two. I'm not going to go into a lot of detail because if you've read the first two books, you'll still want to read this one.
Basically, I think the romance took up way too much space in a complicated story. This is particularly true of the lame romantic conflict at the end. This book is at its climax and the story for all three books is being wrapped up and suddenly there's a lame romantic conflict out of nowhere. At least it's resolved quickly.
The Annfwn revolutionary subplot seemed very simplistic and just never resonated for me the way that Ursula's dynastic and governance problems did.
I wish we could find out what happens next, but this is a romance series and there are no more sisters. Ursula's story doesn't feel finished because she has so many challenges still to overcome. She's a great character and it doesn't feel fair to tell only half her story.
Still, this series is worth reading for the first two books.
December 31, 2015
This 3rd book and the end of the main story of the 3 sisters was exceptional but at times since due to many hints along the way you kind of knew what was going to happen in general at the end it makes the readers want to scan ahead but too many things are going on to allow that luxury :)
The story was deeper and overlapped the other 2 stories much more while dealing with a lot of internal things for Ursula to work through but a lot of emotion in this part of the story.
Bottom Line: Without writing a novel, the trilogy was great entertainment, this conclusion to the trilogy gave a fitting end to everything we have read in the preceding 1000+ pages so other than possibly dragging a small bit in a few places (which might seem that way because of so much action) it was exceptional entertainment. 4 Stars
The story was deeper and overlapped the other 2 stories much more while dealing with a lot of internal things for Ursula to work through but a lot of emotion in this part of the story.
Bottom Line: Without writing a novel, the trilogy was great entertainment, this conclusion to the trilogy gave a fitting end to everything we have read in the preceding 1000+ pages so other than possibly dragging a small bit in a few places (which might seem that way because of so much action) it was exceptional entertainment. 4 Stars
November 22, 2018
Content note: this book deals with child rape. There's also explicit sexual content.
I really liked Ursula - she's straightlaced and straightforward, and unflinchingly loyal to her father. This book is about her developing her own mental compass. And finding a husband.
We see more of Ami's religious side in this book too.
In general, I felt that the prose is decent, but the worldbuilding could have been more. We've got three sisters who love each other, a father who is steadily descending into madness, and an unknown magic kingdom on their borders. There's also a magic system that might or might not be unique to their continent. But we don't deal with that. We deal with sisters falling in love and discovering who they are.
2/5 stars
I really liked Ursula - she's straightlaced and straightforward, and unflinchingly loyal to her father. This book is about her developing her own mental compass. And finding a husband.
We see more of Ami's religious side in this book too.
In general, I felt that the prose is decent, but the worldbuilding could have been more. We've got three sisters who love each other, a father who is steadily descending into madness, and an unknown magic kingdom on their borders. There's also a magic system that might or might not be unique to their continent. But we don't deal with that. We deal with sisters falling in love and discovering who they are.
2/5 stars
April 9, 2015
This is an amazing book I hadn’t read the first 2 books yet but that didn’t detract from my enjoyment of this one. I am going to get the other because the writing was very well done and the world building clearly laid out so the reader didn’t miss anything without reading the others in the series. If you like the Chronicles of Elantra series you will love this one. I have tried to find other books as good them and finally I have found one.
June 17, 2015
Although Ursula was less annoying than Amelia, her willful blindness was difficult to understand. Harlan is a great character and the best part of The Talon of the Hawk. The world building continued to be magical, and the villains proved approriately evil. The trilogy is an enjoyable romantic fantasy, but I don't think I will reread it.
May 18, 2020
The third in the Twelve Kingdoms series, before it branched off into the Uncharted Realms series, which is all really the same series but there are now more than Twelve Kingdoms, so I guess they needed a new name to the series.
ANYhow...The Talon of the Hawk was a fitting finish to a strong series about three sisters discovering their destiny and finding their partners along the way. This one was a little darker because it was about the oldest sister, Ursula, who This plot point determines a lot about her personality, and in a way drives her relationship with Harlon, who is trying very hard to win her heart.
Harlon is one of those love interests who is a bit too perfect, in my opinion. Totally committed, totally patient, totally self-sacrificing...real people have flaws...it’s what makes them interesting.
Ursula was a great hero, though, and I loved seeing the three sisters reunited and working together now that they have all discovered their badassery.
Between Jeffe Kennedy and NK Jemisin, I’m convinced that fantasy is best written by women.
ANYhow...The Talon of the Hawk was a fitting finish to a strong series about three sisters discovering their destiny and finding their partners along the way. This one was a little darker because it was about the oldest sister, Ursula, who This plot point determines a lot about her personality, and in a way drives her relationship with Harlon, who is trying very hard to win her heart.
Harlon is one of those love interests who is a bit too perfect, in my opinion. Totally committed, totally patient, totally self-sacrificing...real people have flaws...it’s what makes them interesting.
Ursula was a great hero, though, and I loved seeing the three sisters reunited and working together now that they have all discovered their badassery.
Between Jeffe Kennedy and NK Jemisin, I’m convinced that fantasy is best written by women.
November 14, 2018
I am not able to describe what this book is like (too much emotions going on), but I can tell a few things of how it felt to read this book (and the whole series):
-I got locked out of my apartment because I were so occupied with this book that I forgot that I had such responsibilities as remembering my keys
-I read this series back to back and I already want to reread
-I haven't been able to think about anything else than this book for a few days now and I know that I will think about this still in the future
-This series took me by suprise - I were prepared to get something good (or something bad) but HOLY COW THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE SERIES NOW
-I need sleep, I weren't able to get any before, because this book was haunting me and I just wanted to read
There are so many other things I could say, but I finished this last book just now and my mind is a total mess.
-I got locked out of my apartment because I were so occupied with this book that I forgot that I had such responsibilities as remembering my keys
-I read this series back to back and I already want to reread
-I haven't been able to think about anything else than this book for a few days now and I know that I will think about this still in the future
-This series took me by suprise - I were prepared to get something good (or something bad) but HOLY COW THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE SERIES NOW
-I need sleep, I weren't able to get any before, because this book was haunting me and I just wanted to read
There are so many other things I could say, but I finished this last book just now and my mind is a total mess.
September 21, 2020
Strong and rigid meets determined and stubborn.
Journey from denial to awareness and acceptance with an epic finale to tyrannical rule with magic and love in between
Journey from denial to awareness and acceptance with an epic finale to tyrannical rule with magic and love in between
July 4, 2015
Sweet baby Jesus! I was kind of mind blown reading this one. You see, in the first book, I didn't like Ursula at all. Some non savory words come to mind for her. LOL Then, in the second book, I really started to like her at the end. I was Mad at Ami, so Ursula didn't make me so frustrated. LOL But this book, wow! I am so impressed that this woman has made it out alive. Dear God, the unthinkable happened, and then another unthinkable happened, and I seriously weeped for her. I sat there with tears streaming down my face wanting to hug her so bad. And boy, oh boy, did I wanna punch her several time, but I now completely understand EVERY single choice she has ever made. EVER. Including her higher than though attitude, her need to please her ridiculously evil father, and her stand offish need to push everyone who loves her away. I don't know if I could have lived through everything she did. Not and still be a living soul. And she finally got my full attention because FINALLY at the damn last few pages, she did what I needed her to do all along, she let it all go. THANK YOU! I am so impressed with this trilogy. I really didn't want it to end, but it was done so flipping well that I know that the author's heart and soul went into this one. Lots of sacrifices here.
I'm going to struggle to talk about everything I want to without spoilers, but I will try my damnedest to do it. You see, it starts off with Ursula going back home, to her king. Well, there's a mess. A whole freaking army of foreigners have taken over guarding the castle and kingdom and king as well. Ursula did the right thing letting Ami go after her kidnapped child. Ummm, sorry, if you haven't read the first two. LOL I always loved Andi. She's been my favorite sister for a long time. But now, Ursula rivals her. She stands up to that crazy man of a father, she tries to protect others from his wrath, all the while trying to figure out what to do with the foreigners and figure out a way to leave her imprisoned walls of her castle to go help find her sisters. She really is serious about being a warrior. Everything she does revolves around it, but I think it's the only thing that will keep her alive, not just physically but mentally. Emotionally. She practices her skills like someone would meditate to keep themselves from succombing to stress. And this, right there, is how we meet Captain Harlan. I knew Ursula needed a significant other to undstand her but I NEVER thought we'd get to see it be done so well :) And I am so glad Harlan was able to not only crack her cement walls, but help her overcome the trauma I never would have guessed. This is more than just betrayal from the king, this is out right mind blowing. When I caught on, it took me a bit to figure it out before she spilled, I about lost my mind. So, maybe be prepared for a serious emotional storm for a bit in here.
There's two plot lines going here. Ursula and her fighting for her country, her father, and using Captain Harlan to find her sisters. But it's almost a second story with Ursula finally finding herself, what's she's made of, how she will finally love, and be loved, and figuring out what to do with what she's found. And with that, Harlan is definitely a book boyfriend. He had attraction to Ursula immediately, and I can see why. However, I would have maybe slapped her myself and walked away. He pursues not just her heart, but her mind with his own warrior skills. He gets her. She is pretty damn ugly to him, most of the book. And then he finally snags her, almost loses her, and then stands next to her willing to put his life out for hers. I loved him, and he's hilarious. He has these funny little snips that he says so seriously but it's just funny. And he makes Ursula feel human, so it's totally a win. Then we finally get to see Andi and Ami. I love all three sisters, and they have something special when they put themselves together. And their significant others are fascinating :) And though they fight when together, the will fight every single thing that comes between them. They really do have a very special bond. I want a spin off of the aftermath of everything that went down here!!!! Oh and could we add a good bit of Dafne, Jepp, and Marskal to that too. I loved them!!
Overall, the whole world building is magical. The writing is absolutely wonderful. The characters have a big piece of my heart. I want more. I can't have it. And not because this was a let down in any way, but because I loved it so much! I promise, this will be a keep forever series. ALWAYS! I am fascinated. So, with the very epic conclusion of this series... 6 PAWS!!! It was so deserving of so much. I am a fan for life!
I'm going to struggle to talk about everything I want to without spoilers, but I will try my damnedest to do it. You see, it starts off with Ursula going back home, to her king. Well, there's a mess. A whole freaking army of foreigners have taken over guarding the castle and kingdom and king as well. Ursula did the right thing letting Ami go after her kidnapped child. Ummm, sorry, if you haven't read the first two. LOL I always loved Andi. She's been my favorite sister for a long time. But now, Ursula rivals her. She stands up to that crazy man of a father, she tries to protect others from his wrath, all the while trying to figure out what to do with the foreigners and figure out a way to leave her imprisoned walls of her castle to go help find her sisters. She really is serious about being a warrior. Everything she does revolves around it, but I think it's the only thing that will keep her alive, not just physically but mentally. Emotionally. She practices her skills like someone would meditate to keep themselves from succombing to stress. And this, right there, is how we meet Captain Harlan. I knew Ursula needed a significant other to undstand her but I NEVER thought we'd get to see it be done so well :) And I am so glad Harlan was able to not only crack her cement walls, but help her overcome the trauma I never would have guessed. This is more than just betrayal from the king, this is out right mind blowing. When I caught on, it took me a bit to figure it out before she spilled, I about lost my mind. So, maybe be prepared for a serious emotional storm for a bit in here.
There's two plot lines going here. Ursula and her fighting for her country, her father, and using Captain Harlan to find her sisters. But it's almost a second story with Ursula finally finding herself, what's she's made of, how she will finally love, and be loved, and figuring out what to do with what she's found. And with that, Harlan is definitely a book boyfriend. He had attraction to Ursula immediately, and I can see why. However, I would have maybe slapped her myself and walked away. He pursues not just her heart, but her mind with his own warrior skills. He gets her. She is pretty damn ugly to him, most of the book. And then he finally snags her, almost loses her, and then stands next to her willing to put his life out for hers. I loved him, and he's hilarious. He has these funny little snips that he says so seriously but it's just funny. And he makes Ursula feel human, so it's totally a win. Then we finally get to see Andi and Ami. I love all three sisters, and they have something special when they put themselves together. And their significant others are fascinating :) And though they fight when together, the will fight every single thing that comes between them. They really do have a very special bond. I want a spin off of the aftermath of everything that went down here!!!! Oh and could we add a good bit of Dafne, Jepp, and Marskal to that too. I loved them!!
Overall, the whole world building is magical. The writing is absolutely wonderful. The characters have a big piece of my heart. I want more. I can't have it. And not because this was a let down in any way, but because I loved it so much! I promise, this will be a keep forever series. ALWAYS! I am fascinated. So, with the very epic conclusion of this series... 6 PAWS!!! It was so deserving of so much. I am a fan for life!
June 23, 2015
Originally posted on May 26 2015 at Butterfly-o-Meter Books:
In a Flutter: Brilliant!
Fluttering Thoughts:
Worldbuilding: The fantasy world of The Twelve Kingdoms is rich, beautiful, uber well put together. I loved Annfwn beyond measure, its shape-shifting citizens and magic, but the other kingdoms were nothing to scoff at either. Beautiful landscapes, gorgeous castles, all kinds of interesting people – like the very Viking-like delicious Dasnarians xDDD -. Much, much awesome!!
Characters: I will confess Ursula was my favorite of the three sisters, from the very beginning of the series. Her fierce loyalty and sense of right and wrong, of duty, of self-sacrifice in the name of caring for and protecting her loved ones…and now, through this read, getting a better grip on her self-imposed solitude and lack of trust in her (and other people’s) emotions/feelings endeared her all the more to me. I loved Ursula already as I started reading this novel, but by the end of it, I loved her fiercely. I was aching for her happy ending, for her to get what she deserved. And she did get it, by taking it herself, yet another thing I loved about her. She got things done, kicked ass and had an astute strategic mind. I’m so in love with her character I can’t even begin to describe it.
Harlan was beyond awesome, loyal, dedicated, strong yet aware he was second seat in this show. The man knew how to support and have Ursula’s back, and I loved and admired him for it. He loved her tenderly, sweetly, passionately – and they had scorching hot chemistry :D Yum!!
I also loved seeing the three sisters reunited, and I’m thrilled about the end of the story for them and the Thirteen Kingdoms :D
Plot: The romantic arc of Ursula and Harlan’s HEA was awesome, a slow burn kind of romance with a lot of passion, and uber hot one on one – yet another one of Jeffe Kennedy’s strengths. The story had an alert pace, with cool action – battle scenes, chases -, but never in the detriment of character development. It’s not an agitated read, as we go through all of Ursula’s doubts and fears until we reach an ending I was personally rooting for ever since reading the first novel in this fabulous series.
Writing: First person, past narrative, Ursula’s POV. Her voice was what I expected from her, somewhat bound to protocol and being all proper, with subtle humor and a lot of heart. Loved it. Jeffe Kennedy’s usual kickass writing skills showed again in any and all departments: worldbuilding, tension-building, romance-building, character-building.
Curb Appeal: Cool cover, hooking blurb, instant buy author name – ever the impulsive buy material.
All in all, I highly recommend both the novel and the whole Twelve Kingdoms series to any fantasy romance lovers. It’s a sturdy read, it’s fun, exciting, imaginative, evokes loooots of feels, and it’s an awesome, frolicking fun ride! Take a chance on the series if you haven’t already. Super awesome writing, diverse characters, delicious and hot romance, power struggles, treason, murder, chases, fights, lots of ass-kicking, hearts breaking and mending… the best of all worlds.
I will for sure keep reading the series, and can’t wait for Dafne’s story!! xDDDD
Uorsin definitely deserved what happened to him in this novel, but if you’re curious about reading about him and Salena, the mother of the three sisters we’re read about so far, the prequel Negotiation novella is free on Amazon / Smashwords / Kobo for the release of The Talon of the Hawk, so grab it :D It’s short, but I read it real quick and loved it!
In a Flutter: Brilliant!
Fluttering Thoughts:
Worldbuilding: The fantasy world of The Twelve Kingdoms is rich, beautiful, uber well put together. I loved Annfwn beyond measure, its shape-shifting citizens and magic, but the other kingdoms were nothing to scoff at either. Beautiful landscapes, gorgeous castles, all kinds of interesting people – like the very Viking-like delicious Dasnarians xDDD -. Much, much awesome!!
Characters: I will confess Ursula was my favorite of the three sisters, from the very beginning of the series. Her fierce loyalty and sense of right and wrong, of duty, of self-sacrifice in the name of caring for and protecting her loved ones…and now, through this read, getting a better grip on her self-imposed solitude and lack of trust in her (and other people’s) emotions/feelings endeared her all the more to me. I loved Ursula already as I started reading this novel, but by the end of it, I loved her fiercely. I was aching for her happy ending, for her to get what she deserved. And she did get it, by taking it herself, yet another thing I loved about her. She got things done, kicked ass and had an astute strategic mind. I’m so in love with her character I can’t even begin to describe it.
Harlan was beyond awesome, loyal, dedicated, strong yet aware he was second seat in this show. The man knew how to support and have Ursula’s back, and I loved and admired him for it. He loved her tenderly, sweetly, passionately – and they had scorching hot chemistry :D Yum!!
I also loved seeing the three sisters reunited, and I’m thrilled about the end of the story for them and the Thirteen Kingdoms :D
Plot: The romantic arc of Ursula and Harlan’s HEA was awesome, a slow burn kind of romance with a lot of passion, and uber hot one on one – yet another one of Jeffe Kennedy’s strengths. The story had an alert pace, with cool action – battle scenes, chases -, but never in the detriment of character development. It’s not an agitated read, as we go through all of Ursula’s doubts and fears until we reach an ending I was personally rooting for ever since reading the first novel in this fabulous series.
Writing: First person, past narrative, Ursula’s POV. Her voice was what I expected from her, somewhat bound to protocol and being all proper, with subtle humor and a lot of heart. Loved it. Jeffe Kennedy’s usual kickass writing skills showed again in any and all departments: worldbuilding, tension-building, romance-building, character-building.
Curb Appeal: Cool cover, hooking blurb, instant buy author name – ever the impulsive buy material.
All in all, I highly recommend both the novel and the whole Twelve Kingdoms series to any fantasy romance lovers. It’s a sturdy read, it’s fun, exciting, imaginative, evokes loooots of feels, and it’s an awesome, frolicking fun ride! Take a chance on the series if you haven’t already. Super awesome writing, diverse characters, delicious and hot romance, power struggles, treason, murder, chases, fights, lots of ass-kicking, hearts breaking and mending… the best of all worlds.
I will for sure keep reading the series, and can’t wait for Dafne’s story!! xDDDD
Uorsin definitely deserved what happened to him in this novel, but if you’re curious about reading about him and Salena, the mother of the three sisters we’re read about so far, the prequel Negotiation novella is free on Amazon / Smashwords / Kobo for the release of The Talon of the Hawk, so grab it :D It’s short, but I read it real quick and loved it!
March 6, 2020
Third book of the trilogy of the Twelve Kingdoms. Three daughters, three duties, three goddesses. The trilogy is one long story told in three parts, by three first person narrators.
I am most like Andi in termperment, so I found her book my favorite. I am least like Amelia in temperment, so I initially stuggled with her book. Until she encountered Ash and found her metal. Ursula fell in the middle for me. While I don't connect to her warrior nature or athleticism, her looking through the glass window metaphor resounded.
"This, then, was what it felt like, that drove everyone so. I’d been forever outside, looking in the window through a thick pane of glass and not understanding. I’d seen people eating at the banquet table but hadn’t smelled the food or tasted it. Now the glass had shattered and I found myself starving."
*****
03/05/2020
You can’t say I’m not consistent. (Both in 2017 & now in 2020) I had tons to say about Andi’s book, was at a loss for words with Ami’s, and somewhere in between with Essla’s.
It’s nice to re-meet the characters knowing what is to come. I’d forgotten the through line with Dafne serving each sister in turn. Love Zynda all over again and it warmed my heart to see a brief glance or two of Zyr.
Ami is all that I’ve never been. I’m somewhat between Essla & Andi, but my “who I wish to be” is all Andi. I’m also clearly Moranu’s as well. Total night owl.
If I was visiting the Thirteen Kingdoms, I’d want to settle with the Tala. Love the beach, the bohemian vibe, the fondness for animals. And I’ve always been a sucker for a man with long dark hair & piercing blue eyes. And the animal nature, even moreso.
Writing this after reading through “The Fate of the Tala”. The split series is rather confusing, but in retrospect, there was a sense of conclusion within the trilogy and another at the completion of “The Fate of the Tala”. Though I love the world and all of the characters inhabiting it and hope to see another chapter.
****
03/06/2020.
Spoilers.
Ursula returns to Ordnung after Ami gives birth at Windroven and Ani & Ash sneak off to find the Tala who stole her daughter.
Ursula finds the city overrun with Dasarian mercenaries, the castle & town bursting at the seams. Uorsin has forbidden anyone from leaving either the castle or the surrounding village. Harlan, the Captain of the Dasarians, is instantly smitten with Ursula for her warrior’s grace and her skill at managing the king.
The king’s sanity is in question. He publicly rebukes Ursula (hitting her in front of the court) and announces his marriage to Illyria, Mistress of Deyrr. Illyria demands Selena’s jewelry as a wedding gift, hoping to obtain the Star of Affwyn.
As the situation deteriorates, Harlan & Ursula escape the city, returning to Affwyn to aide Ami & Ash in their search for Ami’s daughter. Stella has been captured by a group of Tala who still resent Selena’s departure and her daughters return.
Andi, Ami, and Ursula find themselves together for the first time since Andi fled Ordnung after attracting Rayfe’s attention. After saving Stella, they return to Ordnung to confront the high king together.
“Andromeda knows of wisdom and sacrifice. Amelia brings the love that’s needed. You are the blade that cuts through the knots and lances the wound.”
I am most like Andi in termperment, so I found her book my favorite. I am least like Amelia in temperment, so I initially stuggled with her book. Until she encountered Ash and found her metal. Ursula fell in the middle for me. While I don't connect to her warrior nature or athleticism, her looking through the glass window metaphor resounded.
"This, then, was what it felt like, that drove everyone so. I’d been forever outside, looking in the window through a thick pane of glass and not understanding. I’d seen people eating at the banquet table but hadn’t smelled the food or tasted it. Now the glass had shattered and I found myself starving."
*****
03/05/2020
You can’t say I’m not consistent. (Both in 2017 & now in 2020) I had tons to say about Andi’s book, was at a loss for words with Ami’s, and somewhere in between with Essla’s.
It’s nice to re-meet the characters knowing what is to come. I’d forgotten the through line with Dafne serving each sister in turn. Love Zynda all over again and it warmed my heart to see a brief glance or two of Zyr.
Ami is all that I’ve never been. I’m somewhat between Essla & Andi, but my “who I wish to be” is all Andi. I’m also clearly Moranu’s as well. Total night owl.
If I was visiting the Thirteen Kingdoms, I’d want to settle with the Tala. Love the beach, the bohemian vibe, the fondness for animals. And I’ve always been a sucker for a man with long dark hair & piercing blue eyes. And the animal nature, even moreso.
Writing this after reading through “The Fate of the Tala”. The split series is rather confusing, but in retrospect, there was a sense of conclusion within the trilogy and another at the completion of “The Fate of the Tala”. Though I love the world and all of the characters inhabiting it and hope to see another chapter.
****
03/06/2020.
Spoilers.
Ursula returns to Ordnung after Ami gives birth at Windroven and Ani & Ash sneak off to find the Tala who stole her daughter.
Ursula finds the city overrun with Dasarian mercenaries, the castle & town bursting at the seams. Uorsin has forbidden anyone from leaving either the castle or the surrounding village. Harlan, the Captain of the Dasarians, is instantly smitten with Ursula for her warrior’s grace and her skill at managing the king.
The king’s sanity is in question. He publicly rebukes Ursula (hitting her in front of the court) and announces his marriage to Illyria, Mistress of Deyrr. Illyria demands Selena’s jewelry as a wedding gift, hoping to obtain the Star of Affwyn.
As the situation deteriorates, Harlan & Ursula escape the city, returning to Affwyn to aide Ami & Ash in their search for Ami’s daughter. Stella has been captured by a group of Tala who still resent Selena’s departure and her daughters return.
Andi, Ami, and Ursula find themselves together for the first time since Andi fled Ordnung after attracting Rayfe’s attention. After saving Stella, they return to Ordnung to confront the high king together.
“Andromeda knows of wisdom and sacrifice. Amelia brings the love that’s needed. You are the blade that cuts through the knots and lances the wound.”
May 2, 2015
Note: this is the third book in a series where each book builds upon the events of the previous one. The books are best enjoyed when read in order.
The third book of the Twelve Kingdoms opens just after the concluding events of the previous story. Princess Ursula returns to Ordnung and High King Uorsin to discover the land and palace filled with foreign soldiers. Uorsin's mental health appears to be deteriorating at a rapid pace and publicly makes it clear that his kingdom will not go to Ursula. She realizes again her biggest shortcoming is that she is not a man.
At the High King's side is the mysterious captain of the Vervaldr, Harlan. The King bought protection from Harlan and his mercenaries, and Ursula is unsure of his motives since his loyalty can be purchased. Yet right from the moment they meet, Harlan is drawn to Ursula, and he finds ways to push her beyond her comfort zone.
I have mixed feelings about The Talon of the Hawk. While I enjoyed the overall story and outcomes, I struggled with Ursula's story. As with the previous two books, the story is shared from the first person point-of-view of the heroine, which in this book is Ursula, the eldest of Salena and Uorsin's daughters. Her romantic match is found with Harlan, although it takes some time for Ursula to discover this. Harlan is determined and unwavering in his commitment to Ursula, constantly putting pressure to coax her from her solitude. This is perfect for her because Ursula needs someone dominant and strong to match her own will and wits.
Although I find Ursula and Harlan an perfect fit, I never connected with their romance. Harlan found love in Ursula from the moment he laid eyes on her. Ursula is broken inside and rarely lets him close. I had difficulty believing in the sincerity of Harlan's love. I especially struggled with a scene when Ursula shares one of her darkest secrets and what followed. I attribute most of my difficulties to the authors ability to create well-developed characters, only this time around it backfired for me. Since the story is shared from Ursula's POV and she is such a lonely and cold person, distancing herself from anyone close, her unease and suspicions become mine. Therefore, I too never really believed in Harlan's declarations of love.
Putting Ursula's romance aside, I quite enjoyed the conclusion of the current story arc. The book follows through on all of the outstanding bits and brings to close all of the issues raised in the first three titles.
In the end, I liked but not loved The Talon of the Hawk. Although the book brings a satisfactory conclusion to the trilogy, I found Ursula's individual tale a bit lacking. Part of the reason for this is that the author created Ursula and shared her POV so convincingly, that I never felt connected to her. Additionally, everything about her character's growth felt rushed in the end. Even at the 90% mark she hadn't changed in her heart when it came to the High King. I never really felt like she grew, rather that her changes just happened. However, I still enjoyed the overall tale and look forward to returning the the Twelve Kindoms and Annfwn.
My rating: B/B-
Review copy provided by Netgalley
The third book of the Twelve Kingdoms opens just after the concluding events of the previous story. Princess Ursula returns to Ordnung and High King Uorsin to discover the land and palace filled with foreign soldiers. Uorsin's mental health appears to be deteriorating at a rapid pace and publicly makes it clear that his kingdom will not go to Ursula. She realizes again her biggest shortcoming is that she is not a man.
At the High King's side is the mysterious captain of the Vervaldr, Harlan. The King bought protection from Harlan and his mercenaries, and Ursula is unsure of his motives since his loyalty can be purchased. Yet right from the moment they meet, Harlan is drawn to Ursula, and he finds ways to push her beyond her comfort zone.
I have mixed feelings about The Talon of the Hawk. While I enjoyed the overall story and outcomes, I struggled with Ursula's story. As with the previous two books, the story is shared from the first person point-of-view of the heroine, which in this book is Ursula, the eldest of Salena and Uorsin's daughters. Her romantic match is found with Harlan, although it takes some time for Ursula to discover this. Harlan is determined and unwavering in his commitment to Ursula, constantly putting pressure to coax her from her solitude. This is perfect for her because Ursula needs someone dominant and strong to match her own will and wits.
Although I find Ursula and Harlan an perfect fit, I never connected with their romance. Harlan found love in Ursula from the moment he laid eyes on her. Ursula is broken inside and rarely lets him close. I had difficulty believing in the sincerity of Harlan's love. I especially struggled with a scene when Ursula shares one of her darkest secrets and what followed. I attribute most of my difficulties to the authors ability to create well-developed characters, only this time around it backfired for me. Since the story is shared from Ursula's POV and she is such a lonely and cold person, distancing herself from anyone close, her unease and suspicions become mine. Therefore, I too never really believed in Harlan's declarations of love.
Putting Ursula's romance aside, I quite enjoyed the conclusion of the current story arc. The book follows through on all of the outstanding bits and brings to close all of the issues raised in the first three titles.
In the end, I liked but not loved The Talon of the Hawk. Although the book brings a satisfactory conclusion to the trilogy, I found Ursula's individual tale a bit lacking. Part of the reason for this is that the author created Ursula and shared her POV so convincingly, that I never felt connected to her. Additionally, everything about her character's growth felt rushed in the end. Even at the 90% mark she hadn't changed in her heart when it came to the High King. I never really felt like she grew, rather that her changes just happened. However, I still enjoyed the overall tale and look forward to returning the the Twelve Kindoms and Annfwn.
My rating: B/B-
Review copy provided by Netgalley
April 23, 2016
Review originally posted at RabidReads.com.
This is the third and finally book in The Twelve Kingdoms Trilogy. This one is told from the eldest sister’s POV. The story starts pretty much where the second book ends. Ursula insists on going back to Castle Ordnung without her youngest sister, or more importantly, her sister’s son. She quickly notices that much has changed since she was last in Ordnung.
Ursula quickly notices that her guards are few and far between and that there are new guards manning that castle. She quickly learns that these are hired mercenaries. Uorisn has become paranoid and feels that loyalty is better bought than earned. He is also not allowing anyone who comes into the castle to leave. This includes Ursula and her Hawks.
King Uorsin is a person who has been a jerk in my eyes since the first book when he threatened to kill Andi’s horse (pets are off limits in my mind). Well, I had no idea of how bad it would get until I entrenched into this book. Uorsin isn’t even keeping up appearances any more when he forcefully backhands Ursula in court in front of everyone. This isn’t the first time he’s hit her, but this is the first time in front of everyone. She has always made excuses for him, saying that he was trying to make a strong heir, etc. Ursula is always loyal to The Twelve Kingdoms, the High Throne and the High King. She will do anything to protect them.
Harlan is the leader of the mercenaries. He is sworn, based on his contract, to protect the royal family. He feels that he needs to protect Ursula from her father and herself. I really like Harlan. Now I don’t agree with him that bought loyalty is better than earned loyalty. But I do like him. He works really hard to protect Ursula and she needs it. She has always been the protector of her sisters, but no one has ever been there to protect her. She doesn’t even attempt to protect herself from the king.
I thought this was a great wrap up to the series. I’ve really enjoyed this world that Kennedy has built with the Twelve Kingdoms and Annwfn. I love the three goddesses and the mythology that surrounds them and how they work together, even as the people worship them separately. The characters are all wonderful. I very sad to to be leaving them now. Even though she wrapped up the story really well, I know I’m going to miss Ami, Andi and Essa and all their consorts. I’m also really going to miss Dafne who has been there for all three of the girls. I love how we got a story from each sister’s point of view and each had their happy ever after. If you’re looking for a high fantasy with a good romance, this is a wonderful story. I highly recommend it.
This is the third and finally book in The Twelve Kingdoms Trilogy. This one is told from the eldest sister’s POV. The story starts pretty much where the second book ends. Ursula insists on going back to Castle Ordnung without her youngest sister, or more importantly, her sister’s son. She quickly notices that much has changed since she was last in Ordnung.
Ursula quickly notices that her guards are few and far between and that there are new guards manning that castle. She quickly learns that these are hired mercenaries. Uorisn has become paranoid and feels that loyalty is better bought than earned. He is also not allowing anyone who comes into the castle to leave. This includes Ursula and her Hawks.
King Uorsin is a person who has been a jerk in my eyes since the first book when he threatened to kill Andi’s horse (pets are off limits in my mind). Well, I had no idea of how bad it would get until I entrenched into this book. Uorsin isn’t even keeping up appearances any more when he forcefully backhands Ursula in court in front of everyone. This isn’t the first time he’s hit her, but this is the first time in front of everyone. She has always made excuses for him, saying that he was trying to make a strong heir, etc. Ursula is always loyal to The Twelve Kingdoms, the High Throne and the High King. She will do anything to protect them.
Harlan is the leader of the mercenaries. He is sworn, based on his contract, to protect the royal family. He feels that he needs to protect Ursula from her father and herself. I really like Harlan. Now I don’t agree with him that bought loyalty is better than earned loyalty. But I do like him. He works really hard to protect Ursula and she needs it. She has always been the protector of her sisters, but no one has ever been there to protect her. She doesn’t even attempt to protect herself from the king.
I thought this was a great wrap up to the series. I’ve really enjoyed this world that Kennedy has built with the Twelve Kingdoms and Annwfn. I love the three goddesses and the mythology that surrounds them and how they work together, even as the people worship them separately. The characters are all wonderful. I very sad to to be leaving them now. Even though she wrapped up the story really well, I know I’m going to miss Ami, Andi and Essa and all their consorts. I’m also really going to miss Dafne who has been there for all three of the girls. I love how we got a story from each sister’s point of view and each had their happy ever after. If you’re looking for a high fantasy with a good romance, this is a wonderful story. I highly recommend it.
Either my wry tone penetrated her haze or the grip of the magic eased its hold, because she refocused on my face and gave me a crooked smile. “Well, we foreseers can’t make things too easy on our heroes.”
“Some hero I am.” I laughed and tugged at my hand, but she held it a moment longer.
“You’re my hero, Ursula. Always have been.” Then she let me go, shook back her hair, and rode up to enter the city beside her husband.
May 29, 2015
Originally Reviewed For: Tea and Book
Welcome to the Twelve Kingdoms.. The Talon of the Hawk is book three and if I read it right the last book in this trilogy. BUT according to Author Jeffe Kennedy, there will be at least two more books.. *Doing the Happy Dance* Now I have time to go back and read books one and two.
The Twelve Kingdoms have been united by finesse, brute strength and magic but the power that holds the throne has become corrupt (if he wasn't always) and the Kingdoms are shattering. Two of his daughters have fled and are immersed in their own challenges. But Ursula, the heir, has remained at his side. steadfast and true. True to the Throne and the King. Suffering neglect, abuse and worst of all in her opinion, distrust. Yet Ursula stands and takes it. Until...
If at all possible more evil has descended upon the Kingdom and it will take more than Ursula swearing all is well, all is good, the King is all to protect things. This woman must rip the blinders from her eyes and see the truth. Then she must become the woman she was truly meant to be. To let the shackles of false duty fall and rise as the true heir and eventual Queen of the Twelve Kingdoms.
And while she feels she must go it alone, she has the heart of a powerful soldier. A man of worth standing at her side, at her back, where ever she needs him to stand. Harlan, leader of a band of mercenaries loyal to the wording of the contract signed. Until he learns that his true loyalty is to a woman who is the hope of a kingdom, the woman who commands her world and his..
This is powerful stuff.. Epic fantasy!!! I absolutely adored this book!
What I didn't Like: It's written in 1st person. I allowed that to momentarily throw me off. I opened up saw it was written in first person and put it aside. I wouldn't have re opened it had I not committed to review it for Netgalley. I did put it off as long as possible. But seriously, I read one sentence saw the 1st person, which is usually so hard for me to get into and stopped. *hangs head in shame* DO. NOT. LET. THIS. STOP. YOU.
What I LOVED..
The rest of the book!! LOL.. Honestly. Flawlessly written characters with faults and flaws having to learn to rise above them before entering greatness. A lush sensual world slowly dying from the corruption of the magic. True evil, with rather gruesome skills and a petty tyrant who bullies the world into believing he deserves to be king..
It really doesn't get better than this. Jeffe Kennedy belongs up there with Anne Bishop and CL Wilson for writing these intriguing characters and wonderful story. Fantasy truly at it's best!
In case you missed it, I seriously recommend this book.
Shauni
This review is based on the ARC of The Talon of the Hawk, provided by netgalley
Welcome to the Twelve Kingdoms.. The Talon of the Hawk is book three and if I read it right the last book in this trilogy. BUT according to Author Jeffe Kennedy, there will be at least two more books.. *Doing the Happy Dance* Now I have time to go back and read books one and two.
The Twelve Kingdoms have been united by finesse, brute strength and magic but the power that holds the throne has become corrupt (if he wasn't always) and the Kingdoms are shattering. Two of his daughters have fled and are immersed in their own challenges. But Ursula, the heir, has remained at his side. steadfast and true. True to the Throne and the King. Suffering neglect, abuse and worst of all in her opinion, distrust. Yet Ursula stands and takes it. Until...
If at all possible more evil has descended upon the Kingdom and it will take more than Ursula swearing all is well, all is good, the King is all to protect things. This woman must rip the blinders from her eyes and see the truth. Then she must become the woman she was truly meant to be. To let the shackles of false duty fall and rise as the true heir and eventual Queen of the Twelve Kingdoms.
And while she feels she must go it alone, she has the heart of a powerful soldier. A man of worth standing at her side, at her back, where ever she needs him to stand. Harlan, leader of a band of mercenaries loyal to the wording of the contract signed. Until he learns that his true loyalty is to a woman who is the hope of a kingdom, the woman who commands her world and his..
This is powerful stuff.. Epic fantasy!!! I absolutely adored this book!
What I didn't Like: It's written in 1st person. I allowed that to momentarily throw me off. I opened up saw it was written in first person and put it aside. I wouldn't have re opened it had I not committed to review it for Netgalley. I did put it off as long as possible. But seriously, I read one sentence saw the 1st person, which is usually so hard for me to get into and stopped. *hangs head in shame* DO. NOT. LET. THIS. STOP. YOU.
What I LOVED..
The rest of the book!! LOL.. Honestly. Flawlessly written characters with faults and flaws having to learn to rise above them before entering greatness. A lush sensual world slowly dying from the corruption of the magic. True evil, with rather gruesome skills and a petty tyrant who bullies the world into believing he deserves to be king..
It really doesn't get better than this. Jeffe Kennedy belongs up there with Anne Bishop and CL Wilson for writing these intriguing characters and wonderful story. Fantasy truly at it's best!
In case you missed it, I seriously recommend this book.
Shauni
This review is based on the ARC of The Talon of the Hawk, provided by netgalley
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