Werewolf’s Heartsong The LCD screen in the arena showed pictures of the seven fighters in the Alpha Class. There I was, with my new name. I looked strong, and my wolf was absolutely gorgeous. I looked to where my sister was sitting and she and the rest of her posse had jealous fury on their faces. I then look up to where my parents are and they’re glaring at my picture, if looks alone could set shit on fire.
I smirk at them then I turn away to face my opponent, everything else falling away but what was here on this platform. I take my skirt and cardigan off. Standing in just my tank and capris, I move into a fighting position and wait for the signal to start — To fight, to prove, and not hide myself anymore. This was going to be fun. I thought, a grin on my face. *Mature Audience Contains mature language, s*x, abuse and violence*
There’s a lot of errors that need to be fixed in the books in this series. Especially when it comes to the names and titles and changes in character dialogues. A lot of repetition in the chapters in characters POV’s. This series definitely needs to be edited. But the storyline and the characters are still good despite the obvious flaws in the writing. I sincerely hope the author fixes these issues. Because the story itself is good… I’ll give it a 3 star… I’ll change it to 5 star if the author ever corrects these flaws.
Werewolf’s Heartsong The LCD screen in the arena showed pictures of the seven fighters in the Alpha Class. There I was, with my new name. I looked strong, and my wolf was absolutely gorgeous. I looked to where my sister was sitting and she and the rest of her posse had jealous fury on their faces. I then look up to where my parents are and they’re glaring at my picture, if looks alone could set shit on fire.
I smirk at them then I turn away to face my opponent, everything else falling away but what was here on this platform. I take my skirt and cardigan off. Standing in just my tank and capris, I move into a fighting position and wait for the signal to start — To fight, to prove, and not hide myself anymore. This was going to be fun. I thought, a grin on my face. *Mature Audience Contains mature language, s*x, abuse and violence* 251 pages, Kindle Edition
This story jumped right in from the ending of book one. No time jumps just straight from where it left off.
**SPOILERS** Alora is finally given her second chance mate and is walking go with confidence into the roll the moon goddess gave her. She is embracing who she was always meant to be while being showered in the love she has been missing with her “real” family. The ending of this book leaves you guessing in what will happen next and if any new bonds will be made when new members of the family enter the story.
The plot thickens and you can tell an epic battle is being prepared for.
Excited for the third installment and to see where Alora and her group go from here.
The character development in this sequel was phenomenal! I was completely hooked watching their story unfold—it felt so natural and powerful. The way the author deepened the bond between the main characters made their relationship feel authentic and emotionally satisfying. I especially loved how she began building her clan—strong, determined, and with so much heart. It added another rich layer to the story and made me even more invested in where this series is headed. Can’t wait for the next one!
I am really enjoying this story despite formatting and a noticeable amount of grammatical errors; which is odd for me because that would normally lead to me throwing into the DNF pile but I like the story enough that to see flaws only register as something that could be make these books significantly better, or cleaner I should say because the story and characters are solid, when fixed.
This is the second book in the series, and it was just as good as the first. A quick read, though. This book could have been put together to make one whole book vs. three individual books. All in all, I can't wait for the third book and find out the ending! POV's were better stated in this book than the first.
The basic story line is pretty good, and I can't say I didn't enjoy it. However, there are pages and pages of gratuitous sex (which I skipped). The worst part is the grammar, spelling and punctuation. The author has absolutely no concept of spelling. She wasn't even consistent with the misspellings. Even simple words like heal vs. heel were wrong.
The author really improved her writing for this second book of the series, but I still feel like that she is telling from too many persepectives. It's still very annoying to read a lot of repetitions. Even though I do believe some of the insights are very intriguing to get to know.
Thus story is jyst as engaging as the first, and had less editing errors. Some editing would still be useful to ensure POV is clear and consistently identified. It is also jarring that this is labeled as book 2, but it starts at chapu51.
Plot-wise, this is a ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ for me. There are a lot of spelling, grammar, and information mistakes. Some things do not match what was said in the first book, but they are smaller things. Overall, it’s a great book and was still easy for me to understand.
I really am enjoying this series. The editing was better in this book. The only complaint I have is when characters use curse words they aren't spelled out (example sh*t). Either curse fully or leave it out.
Heartsong Yes this series definitely plays on your heart. How a very sad and abusive upbringing Alora still supersedes studies and excel! Love and fate will always prevail! Great read
I have paid to read this before. I give it 3 1/2stars. I love the story line. Still needs quite a bit of editing but I can't wait to read the rest of it.
Is book 2 about a Witch/Werewolf Hybrid called Rain and her mate Mathew Frost Stonemaker... Or is it just a continuation of Werewolf Heartsong with Alora Luna Heartsong story...
I hope that Witch’s Heartsong and Dragon’s Heartsong will be here soon!! Want to read them all and I know there’s 2 more books after Warewolfs Heartsong