3.5 stars
thanks to netgalley, the publisher and the author for an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
"i didn't plan any of that, it ambushed me"
i strongly recommend listening to the interview with sandi toskvig at the end, as it gave me a lot of context to the novel which helped me to appreciate it more. knowing that the author started writing this book in early 2019 made me realise that just because it was on the nose (eg elo and fleet) didn't mean she was apeing real life but actually predicted it, that she is actually the real life "widow of andy gill" mentioned in the book (along with how she worked as a journalist at time magazine) emphasises how deeply personal this work is for her, and that the music throughout was taken from a song written by the friends of her husband.
unfortunately though, whilst reading, i felt that the (quite simple) message of the time machine by hg wells is sadly lost within this retelling. i appreciate that its core message was replaced with many others, more complex and woven together smartly. but until i knew (after reading) just how personal those themes were to the author, to be honest they weren't really connecting with me. i thought, until i was a decent way in to the book, that it was "just" about a pandemic and a tech giant. (specifically, it seems to be about covid 19 and elon musk, even if that is by coincidence.) by the end the audience know that there's much more going on, but the fact that it was concepted that way does unintentionally come through sometimes.
i think the other main issue was that this novel often felt scattered. time and perspective jumps around without warning, and whilst i can appreciate that the intent is to give a "timey wimey" sort of effect, it just didn't come across that way, it felt random and uncollected. some of the events that are included are simply confusing or, to be honest, boring which is not something that should happen in a c.250 page book. for example, all the sections with joao didn't lend much meaning or balance; they seemed to detract from the overall political and personal themes rather than adding to them or even contrasting with them.
finally, i also didn't love the voice actor for the audiobook, which may have unduly influenced my experience. when i saw how many audiobooks she has narrated, i was shocked, because the reading was very flat at times and the accents were often quite bad.
onto what i did enjoy, even before hearing the interview at the end, because there was still plenty to like about this book.
-the theme of special, lucky, cherished love was really nice to read. just two people that weather the storms together no matter what; they have a somewhat 'ordinary' but incredibly lasting love. these are my favourite types of romances to read, where you see the realistic and everyday parts of a long term relationship play out on the page.
-i also enjoyed that morgan is a gender neutral character, or rather that their gender is cleverly never specified, leaving any reader to experience morgan's love for dory in a way that is closer to how they themselves might experience it. the ideas briefly explored around gender with biphron gave further depth to this theme. obviously, hg wells' original work firmly cements the traditional gender roles of the time so it was refreshing to see them challenged within this retelling.
-the meta-framing of dory's memoir within the book was clever gave additional layers of stability to the story. it also felt like it may have been paying homage to the intertextuality used by hg wells, which gives a good balance to the "remixing" of his ideas mentioned above.
-the challenging of the death penalty, even for someone as reprehensible as elo, was done very well - even if a bit caricature during the events of the trial. it added some interesting philosophising to the end section.
-i loved the final ending and post script as well. dory deserves a happy ending and to be allowed to take control of her and morgan's future (without it being saccharine, as the events are still somewhat open ended).
overall i think this is a highly personal book which makes a solid fiction-debut for this author. don't skip the interview with sandi toskvig afterwards.