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Masked Men
Hold Your Breath
All I wanted was to add a little excitement to my love life, maybe take a risk and step out of my comfort zone. Unfortunately, my bright idea to tie myself to a chair for my now ex-boyfriend went horribly wrong, and I got a little stuck. Humiliated, I had no choice but to call my stepbrother, Micah, for help, and because the universe has a twisted sense of humor, he brought his two best friends, Jace and Zac, along for the ride.
To escape the embarrassment, I left for my family’s Easter holiday early, but I wasn’t expecting company, especially not three masked strangers who seem to know exactly how to make me feel alive. They’re everything I’ve been missing—bold, attentive, and completely irresistible. For the first time, I can truly let go of my fears.
When I can no longer ignore the truth staring me in the face, that all three men want me, I’m forced to confront my deepest fears. The walls I’ve built around my heart crumble, leaving me vulnerable to the possibility of something real. Now, I have to decide if I’m brave enough to take a leap of faith and be theirs, or if I’ll let my fear keep me from the love I never saw coming.
To escape the embarrassment, I left for my family’s Easter holiday early, but I wasn’t expecting company, especially not three masked strangers who seem to know exactly how to make me feel alive. They’re everything I’ve been missing—bold, attentive, and completely irresistible. For the first time, I can truly let go of my fears.
When I can no longer ignore the truth staring me in the face, that all three men want me, I’m forced to confront my deepest fears. The walls I’ve built around my heart crumble, leaving me vulnerable to the possibility of something real. Now, I have to decide if I’m brave enough to take a leap of faith and be theirs, or if I’ll let my fear keep me from the love I never saw coming.
166 pages, Paperback
Published March 12, 2025
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April 4, 2025
⭐️5 🌶️5
I’ll always eat up why choose , masked men & primal play🤭
I’ll always eat up why choose , masked men & primal play🤭
April 29, 2025
well that was.. interesting
April 5, 2026
The final Masked Men book that I needed to read to complete the ones that Jaye Pratt has released so far and once again I loved it!!
This book was fast paced, fun, spicy and such a great time.
I felt all of Willow’s insecurities and watching Micah, Jace and Zac help her overcome them was so beautiful. I loved the relationship between the men and the way Willow just fit with each of them.
I’m so glad to have read this whole series now and I’m actually keen to go back and read them all in order so I can connect all the crossovers. Cause they all connect in their own way and I love it.
Such a great Easter read! Definitely recommend.
This book was fast paced, fun, spicy and such a great time.
I felt all of Willow’s insecurities and watching Micah, Jace and Zac help her overcome them was so beautiful. I loved the relationship between the men and the way Willow just fit with each of them.
I’m so glad to have read this whole series now and I’m actually keen to go back and read them all in order so I can connect all the crossovers. Cause they all connect in their own way and I love it.
Such a great Easter read! Definitely recommend.
May 17, 2025
I really enjoyed this one the characters were amazing and I, loved how Willow respected their relationship and would apologise if she felt she over stepped before she knew
I also love that their parents are so supportive of their unusual dynamic
I also love that their parents are so supportive of their unusual dynamic
April 4, 2025
Jaye Pratt has done it again with another 🔥🔥🔥 as hell masked men novella.
I love how her novellas start with her thoughts as a mum vs thoughts as an author. Always gives me a good laugh.
If you love a good MMFM (may have got the code wrong) stepbrother romance I highly recommend giving this book a read.
Also I wonder what is in the other Easter eggs....
I love how her novellas start with her thoughts as a mum vs thoughts as an author. Always gives me a good laugh.
If you love a good MMFM (may have got the code wrong) stepbrother romance I highly recommend giving this book a read.
Also I wonder what is in the other Easter eggs....
March 16, 2025
"I'm going to F!#k you now. And remember, if I push on your head, hold your breath".
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
Jaye Pratt!!!! This woman holds a spot in my heart with her masked men series. They each take a place in my comfort read zone, and any time I am feeling like I'm falling into a slump... ill simply pick up one of these masked men books and comfort read.
Willow is a self-conscious FMC, which is not normally something I go for when choosing reads, however Jaye has done her justice in the character development, by the end of the book she is a bad arse women, who knows who she is and what she wants, turns out all she needed to find that confidence was her stepbrother who hates her and his 2 lovers, to find her butt arse naked and tied to a chair.
Micha (the beautiful broody soul he is) has been keeping a secret from his family for years, and an even bigger secret from his stepsister. One bout of shit luck on willow's end sends his life in a manic spiral, in the absolute most delicious way.
Then you have Jace and Zac, these mennnnn ooooft. The way these three build up willows self-confidence after her family have been putting her down for years, is just beautiful.
Hold your Breath is a MMMF reverse harem read. Full of spice, banter, self-healing and so much love. I'll be classing this as my fluffy romance recommendation from now on!!
!!TROPES!!
forced proximity, forbidden love, opposites attract, secret romance, why choose, masked men, polyamorous, best friends step sibling, grumpy/sunshine, love at first sight, betrayal/redemption, banter to love, reverse harem, self-discovery journey, found family, plus size FMC
!!TRIGGERS!!
bodily fluids, bondage, diets, head held underwater, emotional abuse, family conflict, gaslighting (not by mains), graphic sex, nudity, shaming (not by mains)
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
Jaye Pratt!!!! This woman holds a spot in my heart with her masked men series. They each take a place in my comfort read zone, and any time I am feeling like I'm falling into a slump... ill simply pick up one of these masked men books and comfort read.
Willow is a self-conscious FMC, which is not normally something I go for when choosing reads, however Jaye has done her justice in the character development, by the end of the book she is a bad arse women, who knows who she is and what she wants, turns out all she needed to find that confidence was her stepbrother who hates her and his 2 lovers, to find her butt arse naked and tied to a chair.
Micha (the beautiful broody soul he is) has been keeping a secret from his family for years, and an even bigger secret from his stepsister. One bout of shit luck on willow's end sends his life in a manic spiral, in the absolute most delicious way.
Then you have Jace and Zac, these mennnnn ooooft. The way these three build up willows self-confidence after her family have been putting her down for years, is just beautiful.
Hold your Breath is a MMMF reverse harem read. Full of spice, banter, self-healing and so much love. I'll be classing this as my fluffy romance recommendation from now on!!
!!TROPES!!
forced proximity, forbidden love, opposites attract, secret romance, why choose, masked men, polyamorous, best friends step sibling, grumpy/sunshine, love at first sight, betrayal/redemption, banter to love, reverse harem, self-discovery journey, found family, plus size FMC
!!TRIGGERS!!
bodily fluids, bondage, diets, head held underwater, emotional abuse, family conflict, gaslighting (not by mains), graphic sex, nudity, shaming (not by mains)
August 29, 2025
Book Review: Hold My Breath by Jaye Pratt
Okay, let me start this by saying: we ALL know I’m obsessed with the masked men series so of course, I dove headfirst into Hold My Breath. Except… I got sidetracked halfway through because my brain is a feral raccoon with shiny distractions. BUT I CAME BACK, and oh boy, I’m glad I did.
So, we meet Willow. Poor girl ties herself to a chair blindfolded and naked (as you do, obviously) boyfriend from hell didn’t help and dumped her and ends up having to call her stepbrother for help. Casual Tuesday vibes, right?, plot twist, said stepbrother shows up with his TWO boyfriends in tow. From there, we slide straight into the chaos of stepbrother-actually-loves-her + reverse harem deliciousness. And let’s be real, WE LOVE A REVERSE HAREM.
I was vibing, enjoying my little “this is fine 🔥🐇🔥” moment when suddenly… they pushed her head underwater while doing it. Excuse me?? That’s apparently where the title comes from. Willow said kink unlocked, meanwhile I said WHAT THE HELL DID I JUST READ. Flabbergasted. Shooketh. Did I keep reading? Absolutely.
Also, can we just pause to appreciate that ALL THIS WAS HAPPENING DURING EASTER? 🐰 They were out here calling her little bunny while the family was due to show up, and I was wheezing. Peak chaotic energy.
But beneath the wild, messy vibes, there’s this beautiful thread of self-confidence, mental health, and learning to love yourself. And honestly? That hit me right in the chest. For all the chaos, it was also deeply heartfelt, and I loved that balance.
Chaotic. Beautiful. Bunny-approved. 🐇
Solid read from me.
Okay, let me start this by saying: we ALL know I’m obsessed with the masked men series so of course, I dove headfirst into Hold My Breath. Except… I got sidetracked halfway through because my brain is a feral raccoon with shiny distractions. BUT I CAME BACK, and oh boy, I’m glad I did.
So, we meet Willow. Poor girl ties herself to a chair blindfolded and naked (as you do, obviously) boyfriend from hell didn’t help and dumped her and ends up having to call her stepbrother for help. Casual Tuesday vibes, right?, plot twist, said stepbrother shows up with his TWO boyfriends in tow. From there, we slide straight into the chaos of stepbrother-actually-loves-her + reverse harem deliciousness. And let’s be real, WE LOVE A REVERSE HAREM.
I was vibing, enjoying my little “this is fine 🔥🐇🔥” moment when suddenly… they pushed her head underwater while doing it. Excuse me?? That’s apparently where the title comes from. Willow said kink unlocked, meanwhile I said WHAT THE HELL DID I JUST READ. Flabbergasted. Shooketh. Did I keep reading? Absolutely.
Also, can we just pause to appreciate that ALL THIS WAS HAPPENING DURING EASTER? 🐰 They were out here calling her little bunny while the family was due to show up, and I was wheezing. Peak chaotic energy.
But beneath the wild, messy vibes, there’s this beautiful thread of self-confidence, mental health, and learning to love yourself. And honestly? That hit me right in the chest. For all the chaos, it was also deeply heartfelt, and I loved that balance.
Chaotic. Beautiful. Bunny-approved. 🐇
Solid read from me.
May 7, 2026
Hold Your Breath (Masked Men) by Jaye Pratt
⭐⭐⭐⭐🌶️🌶️🌶️
Standalone * Dark Romance * Curvy FMC * Why Choose * Polyamory * MMM * MFMM * Taboo * Step Siblings * Masked Men * Holiday (Easter) * BDSM * Primal Play * Body Issues * Diet Culture * Emotional Support * Found Family * Forced Proximity * Gaslighting (Not Main MC's)
📖168 pages 🎧3h57
🎙️ Narrated by Darcy Stark & Savannah Rogers (Dual Audio)
Jaye Pratt has a full Masked Men series, all standalones with light interconnected threads, like the kink app that allows users to safely explore their darkest fantasies. You don’t need to read the others to understand this one, as enough context is provided. Each book leans into why choose or polyamory with an HEA, and some definitely push the taboo line more than others. This one including a step-sibling dynamic.
Another fun detail is how each book ties into a holiday, making them perfect for seasonal reads. This one lightly features Easter.
At under 200 pages, this is a quick, fast-paced read that jumps into the spice pretty early. While there is an underlying storyline, these books are very much spice-forward, so definitely go in expecting that.
What I did really appreciate here was the FMC’s journey with her insecurities. After years of being torn down by family through snide remarks, gaslighting, and diet culture, her self-confidence is at an all-time low. Watching the men build her back up, support her, and help her see her worth was such a strong and emotional element woven into the story.
Another standout aspect is the relationship dynamic. While I’ve labeled it as why choose for accessibility, this one leans more into true polyamory, with multiple connections forming within the group, not just centered around the FMC. It adds an extra layer to the relationships that I always find interesting to explore.
⭐⭐⭐⭐🌶️🌶️🌶️
Standalone * Dark Romance * Curvy FMC * Why Choose * Polyamory * MMM * MFMM * Taboo * Step Siblings * Masked Men * Holiday (Easter) * BDSM * Primal Play * Body Issues * Diet Culture * Emotional Support * Found Family * Forced Proximity * Gaslighting (Not Main MC's)
📖168 pages 🎧3h57
🎙️ Narrated by Darcy Stark & Savannah Rogers (Dual Audio)
Jaye Pratt has a full Masked Men series, all standalones with light interconnected threads, like the kink app that allows users to safely explore their darkest fantasies. You don’t need to read the others to understand this one, as enough context is provided. Each book leans into why choose or polyamory with an HEA, and some definitely push the taboo line more than others. This one including a step-sibling dynamic.
Another fun detail is how each book ties into a holiday, making them perfect for seasonal reads. This one lightly features Easter.
At under 200 pages, this is a quick, fast-paced read that jumps into the spice pretty early. While there is an underlying storyline, these books are very much spice-forward, so definitely go in expecting that.
What I did really appreciate here was the FMC’s journey with her insecurities. After years of being torn down by family through snide remarks, gaslighting, and diet culture, her self-confidence is at an all-time low. Watching the men build her back up, support her, and help her see her worth was such a strong and emotional element woven into the story.
Another standout aspect is the relationship dynamic. While I’ve labeled it as why choose for accessibility, this one leans more into true polyamory, with multiple connections forming within the group, not just centered around the FMC. It adds an extra layer to the relationships that I always find interesting to explore.
March 24, 2025
5 stars for the book and the spice 🥵
Hold Your Breath by Jaye Pratt is another incredible addition to the Masked Men series—and it did not disappoint. This MMMF reverse harem novella is packed with spice, banter, healing, and self-love, and I was hooked from start to finish.
Zac, Jace, and Micah are the glorious MMCs we all need in our lives. Each one brings something deliciously different to the table, and together they’re an absolute dream. I wouldn’t be mad if this is how my Easter planned out, let’s be honest 😏
Willow is a plus-size FMC who starts off shy, self-conscious, and struggling with body image—something I can really relate to. Watching her grow into her confidence and learn to embrace herself with the support (and love) of her men was so empowering. Her journey felt real and raw, and it made all the spicy moments that much more meaningful.
And speaking of spice… Jaye delivers. The quote that fully lives rent-free in my mind?
“I’m going to f!#k you now. And remember, if I push on your head, hold your breath.”
Like… excuse me?! That line alone deserves a standing ovation.
Jaye’s writing is phenomenal—easy to read, impossibly hot, and filled with characters that linger in your head long after the last page. If you’re after a short, steamy read with heart, this one’s an absolute must.
Hold Your Breath by Jaye Pratt is another incredible addition to the Masked Men series—and it did not disappoint. This MMMF reverse harem novella is packed with spice, banter, healing, and self-love, and I was hooked from start to finish.
Zac, Jace, and Micah are the glorious MMCs we all need in our lives. Each one brings something deliciously different to the table, and together they’re an absolute dream. I wouldn’t be mad if this is how my Easter planned out, let’s be honest 😏
Willow is a plus-size FMC who starts off shy, self-conscious, and struggling with body image—something I can really relate to. Watching her grow into her confidence and learn to embrace herself with the support (and love) of her men was so empowering. Her journey felt real and raw, and it made all the spicy moments that much more meaningful.
And speaking of spice… Jaye delivers. The quote that fully lives rent-free in my mind?
“I’m going to f!#k you now. And remember, if I push on your head, hold your breath.”
Like… excuse me?! That line alone deserves a standing ovation.
Jaye’s writing is phenomenal—easy to read, impossibly hot, and filled with characters that linger in your head long after the last page. If you’re after a short, steamy read with heart, this one’s an absolute must.
March 15, 2025
⭐️4🌶️4💧0
📗 MMMF
📕 Masked Men
📘 Stepbrother
📙Super Hot Voyeuristic Scene
📚Easter Themes
This novella is a spicy quick read that def leaves you wanting! I’m living in my Masked men era and this one certainly ticked the boxes!! I just have one question… what was in the rest of the eggs? IYKYK
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📗 MMMF
📕 Masked Men
📘 Stepbrother
📙Super Hot Voyeuristic Scene
📚Easter Themes
This novella is a spicy quick read that def leaves you wanting! I’m living in my Masked men era and this one certainly ticked the boxes!! I just have one question… what was in the rest of the eggs? IYKYK
#holdyourbreath #jayepratt #steamybooks
#bookrecs #steamyreads #audiobook #bookaholic #readingtime #bookshelf #instabooks #bookblogger #bookreview #booktok #reading #booklover #bookworm #booknerd #goodreads #aussiebookstagrammers #aussies #australianreaders #darkromance #reading #beyondoverbooked #bookstagrammer #readersofinstagram #instabook #booksofinstagram #booksarelife#darkromance #spicybooklover
March 24, 2025
2025:
"What went so wrong in my life that I think so little of myself?"
This book gave me all sorts of feels - a wild roller coaster ride of emotions.
There are very little words I can use to describe this book other than WOW.
The spice from this instalment of Pratt's Masked Men Novellas is the same as what we've come to know and love.
The storyline - the characters - the vulnerability...
The dynamics of this book just hit much harder than the others.
In the best and worst of ways; I'm equally in love and heart broken with this story.
I'll be forever grateful that I picked up that first book!
"I hate the thought of being alone, yet letting people in is harder because it gives them the power to leave you."
Jess made me choose: Jace.
"What went so wrong in my life that I think so little of myself?"
This book gave me all sorts of feels - a wild roller coaster ride of emotions.
There are very little words I can use to describe this book other than WOW.
The spice from this instalment of Pratt's Masked Men Novellas is the same as what we've come to know and love.
The storyline - the characters - the vulnerability...
The dynamics of this book just hit much harder than the others.
In the best and worst of ways; I'm equally in love and heart broken with this story.
I'll be forever grateful that I picked up that first book!
"I hate the thought of being alone, yet letting people in is harder because it gives them the power to leave you."
Jess made me choose: Jace.
May 31, 2025
This one was not exactly my favorite one in this series, but it was still a good read. I liked that Willow had a pretty good character development. She will definitely need to work on her confidence, but I know Micah. Jace and Zac will make sure she gets the confidence back. I dont like how her mom didn't realize how much her sister's words affected Willow, though. You really thought she could handle her aunt called her fat and stuff?! Come on now.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 10, 2025
4⭐️ 5🌶️
I LOVE this series.
Once again Jaye has smashed it!
Quick read, finished in 1 session. I literally couldn’t put the book down.
3 masked men, 1 gorgeous lady.
Gotta love the odds.
Also love the Easter theme!
I LOVE this series.
Once again Jaye has smashed it!
Quick read, finished in 1 session. I literally couldn’t put the book down.
3 masked men, 1 gorgeous lady.
Gotta love the odds.
Also love the Easter theme!
February 2, 2026
I rated it 3 & 1/2 stars
A sexy, fast paced novella featuring three guys and a girl who needs a little extra loving. Fun, easy read.
A sexy, fast paced novella featuring three guys and a girl who needs a little extra loving. Fun, easy read.
March 26, 2025
Yesss Jaye - you did it again!
I love these books - and I love me some masked men ;)
Just do yourself a favour and read this, read allll of jayes works
I love these books - and I love me some masked men ;)
Just do yourself a favour and read this, read allll of jayes works
March 25, 2025
I am a massive Jaye Pratt and Masked Men Series fan! Each one keeps getting better and this was no exception! This is a must read!
If you love masked men, spicy spicy novella’s and well written characters, you must read this! All of these novella’s live rent free in my mind.
If you love masked men, spicy spicy novella’s and well written characters, you must read this! All of these novella’s live rent free in my mind.
March 15, 2026
This book was everything! I couldn’t put it down. I loved Willow’s story and how her men really healed her. This series just keeps getting better and I can’t wait to see what happens next.
November 13, 2025
Who do you call when your naked tied to a chair and your boyfriend dumps you? Your step brother. Who’s he bringing along? His two “bestfriends”. Deciding to arrive at the family Easter celebrations a week early, how else are you going to pass the time, if not by agreeing to sign up to a website that brings your fantasies to life. This little bunny does get caught by 3 masked men during a fun little Easter egg hunt, and let’s just say, it’s not chocolate eggs she’s sucking on 😏
MMMF
MMMF
March 20, 2025
Who knew easter could get any better! But add masked men chasing you through the woods and its a dream come true!!!
January 16, 2026
Favourite Quote: "Who doesn't like an adult Easter hunt before being chased by masked men and f*cked hard."
Unfortunately this book has absolutely plummeted down my enjoyment of this series. Normally I'm an absolute sucker for a step-brother trope and this had that alongside step-brother's best friends/boyfriends. All good things right? Except everyone relationship in it was just absolutely mashed together in the jumpiest scenes and vibes anyone has experienced. I also feel like genuinely half the book was focused on the fact the FMC was plus-sized. Now I'm a plus-size girlie, usually love a bit of body positivity and diversity. Only this had absolutely none of the positivity beside the generic MMC "you're perfect as you are". Instead it just hyper-focused on her size and the parts of herself she didn't like and really jerked you out of the storyline.
1⭐️
Unfortunately this book has absolutely plummeted down my enjoyment of this series. Normally I'm an absolute sucker for a step-brother trope and this had that alongside step-brother's best friends/boyfriends. All good things right? Except everyone relationship in it was just absolutely mashed together in the jumpiest scenes and vibes anyone has experienced. I also feel like genuinely half the book was focused on the fact the FMC was plus-sized. Now I'm a plus-size girlie, usually love a bit of body positivity and diversity. Only this had absolutely none of the positivity beside the generic MMC "you're perfect as you are". Instead it just hyper-focused on her size and the parts of herself she didn't like and really jerked you out of the storyline.
1⭐️
March 18, 2025
5⭐
4🌶️
Just like the FMC's in these books, I just can't get enough of Jaye Pratt's masked men, and Micah, Jase and Zac are nooooooooo exception!!! 🥵🥵🥵
Fast paced, high heat and a great read. Jaye's ability to have so many similar storylines that are all written in a way that makes them original stories is amazing and this one does not disappoint!
The pre-existing MMM relationship made for a great point of difference from the earlier books, and the MM scenes in the book were very well written (but let's be honest, all of Jaye's spicy scenes are absolute 🔥🔥🔥).
I loved the connections within this book to the previous storylines as well, it gave the story a lot more depth and those links gave insight into the backstory and character development of the people involved without having to explain it on page!
As always, definitely a recommended read. My Shelf trophy has been ordered and is already on its way!
I choose in the Why Choose: Zac stole my heart in this one!
Tropes: MMMF, Multi POV, forced proximity, opposites attract, insta love, forbidden love, one night stand to more, secret romance, why choose, masked men, polyamorous, only one bed, kink, banter to love, taboo, step-siblings, found family, curvy FMC,
Triggers:
Anxiety, bodily fluids, bondage, bullying, cheating, drowning (kind of- it was during spicy scene...), family conflict, fear, graphic sex, homophobia, infidelity, nudity, pressure, self hate (body image), primal kink
4🌶️
Just like the FMC's in these books, I just can't get enough of Jaye Pratt's masked men, and Micah, Jase and Zac are nooooooooo exception!!! 🥵🥵🥵
Fast paced, high heat and a great read. Jaye's ability to have so many similar storylines that are all written in a way that makes them original stories is amazing and this one does not disappoint!
The pre-existing MMM relationship made for a great point of difference from the earlier books, and the MM scenes in the book were very well written (but let's be honest, all of Jaye's spicy scenes are absolute 🔥🔥🔥).
I loved the connections within this book to the previous storylines as well, it gave the story a lot more depth and those links gave insight into the backstory and character development of the people involved without having to explain it on page!
As always, definitely a recommended read. My Shelf trophy has been ordered and is already on its way!
I choose in the Why Choose: Zac stole my heart in this one!
Tropes: MMMF, Multi POV, forced proximity, opposites attract, insta love, forbidden love, one night stand to more, secret romance, why choose, masked men, polyamorous, only one bed, kink, banter to love, taboo, step-siblings, found family, curvy FMC,
Triggers:
Anxiety, bodily fluids, bondage, bullying, cheating, drowning (kind of- it was during spicy scene...), family conflict, fear, graphic sex, homophobia, infidelity, nudity, pressure, self hate (body image), primal kink
May 4, 2026
Hold Your Breath – Jaye Pratt
⭐️⭐️ (2/5)
I wanted to like this… I really did. The premise had so much potential and honestly? Some parts did hit. But overall… yeah, no.
First things first, I could not do the audiobook. The narrator annoyed me within minutes, so I switched to the ebook. Already off to a rough start.
Now the actual story…
We open with Willow tying herself up, naked, spread open for her boyfriend… only for him to walk in, take one look, and basically go “nah, not for me” and leave her there. I’m sorry??? 😭 the secondhand embarrassment nearly took me out.
And THEN she calls her stepbrother Micah… who shows up with his two boyfriends — Jace and Zac.
Now this part? I was intrigued.
Because listen 👉 the MM relationship between the guys? Loved. That. Their dynamic was honestly the best part of the whole book. It felt natural, it felt established, and I would have 100% read a book just about them.
But instead… we add Willow.
And I’m not even trying to be mean, but the way she was written just didn’t work for me.
We get pages and pages of her body insecurities — which, okay, valid. I get that. I have insecurities too. But then she turns around and signs up for this whole masked “hunt/chase” situation where strangers are going to see her naked and pursue her???
I’m sorry but… that disconnect threw me off completely.
Because real insecurity doesn’t just switch off like that. It doesn’t go: “I hate my body” → “let me go be hunted naked by masked men”
Like… girl. Be so serious for a second.
I understand it’s fantasy. I do. But the emotional build didn’t match the actions, and it pulled me out of the story hard.
That said…
There were things I did enjoy:
- The stepbrother dynamic? Messy. Taboo. I ate that up.
- The masked men element? Hot concept, no complaints.
- The Easter egg hunt idea (with the “rewards” inside)? Actually kind of creative and fun.
- The guys themselves? Easily the highlight. Different personalities, good chemistry, and honestly deserved better.
But overall?
The story leaned heavily into:
- quick emotional shifts
- unrealistic character reactions
- and a fantasy that didn’t feel grounded enough to sell it
It’s very much a “shame → exposure → validation” type of story, but the execution just didn’t land for me.
Final thoughts?
This book will definitely work for readers who want:
- fast-paced dark romance
- high spice
- taboo dynamics
- and a heavy validation fantasy
But for me?
I couldn’t fully buy into it.
The men deserved their own story.
And Willow… just didn’t convince me.
Still… that Easter hunt? I’ll give you that one.
⭐️⭐️ (2/5)
I wanted to like this… I really did. The premise had so much potential and honestly? Some parts did hit. But overall… yeah, no.
First things first, I could not do the audiobook. The narrator annoyed me within minutes, so I switched to the ebook. Already off to a rough start.
Now the actual story…
We open with Willow tying herself up, naked, spread open for her boyfriend… only for him to walk in, take one look, and basically go “nah, not for me” and leave her there. I’m sorry??? 😭 the secondhand embarrassment nearly took me out.
And THEN she calls her stepbrother Micah… who shows up with his two boyfriends — Jace and Zac.
Now this part? I was intrigued.
Because listen 👉 the MM relationship between the guys? Loved. That. Their dynamic was honestly the best part of the whole book. It felt natural, it felt established, and I would have 100% read a book just about them.
But instead… we add Willow.
And I’m not even trying to be mean, but the way she was written just didn’t work for me.
We get pages and pages of her body insecurities — which, okay, valid. I get that. I have insecurities too. But then she turns around and signs up for this whole masked “hunt/chase” situation where strangers are going to see her naked and pursue her???
I’m sorry but… that disconnect threw me off completely.
Because real insecurity doesn’t just switch off like that. It doesn’t go: “I hate my body” → “let me go be hunted naked by masked men”
Like… girl. Be so serious for a second.
I understand it’s fantasy. I do. But the emotional build didn’t match the actions, and it pulled me out of the story hard.
That said…
There were things I did enjoy:
- The stepbrother dynamic? Messy. Taboo. I ate that up.
- The masked men element? Hot concept, no complaints.
- The Easter egg hunt idea (with the “rewards” inside)? Actually kind of creative and fun.
- The guys themselves? Easily the highlight. Different personalities, good chemistry, and honestly deserved better.
But overall?
The story leaned heavily into:
- quick emotional shifts
- unrealistic character reactions
- and a fantasy that didn’t feel grounded enough to sell it
It’s very much a “shame → exposure → validation” type of story, but the execution just didn’t land for me.
Final thoughts?
This book will definitely work for readers who want:
- fast-paced dark romance
- high spice
- taboo dynamics
- and a heavy validation fantasy
But for me?
I couldn’t fully buy into it.
The men deserved their own story.
And Willow… just didn’t convince me.
Still… that Easter hunt? I’ll give you that one.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 26, 2025
The Masked Men series may be novellas, but they pack a punch when it comes to storyline, relatable characters and sizzling tension 🥵
This MMMF novella follows Willow as she wants to explore new things sexually with her (now ex) boyfriend, who turns out to be a grade A douche canoe. What’s a girl to do when tied nekkid to a chair? Call the Step Monster, aka Micah.
We’re then introduced to Micah and his “friends” Jace and Zac. We learn all the juicy details about these boys and their “friendship” through multiple POV’s that explain their backstories and shows how they’ve all come to be together. Willie of course has no idea that her hottie firefighter step brother is taken by Jace and Zac, or that he’s been lusting after her for years. Cue the masks, tensions, witty banter, spice and forbidden romance 🫣
I found Willow to be such a relatable FMC, showing us that there can always be doubts and insecurities if we’re told enough that we have them, which of course makes it harder to accept and believe compliments when they’re given. I love how she grows confidence within herself, with the help of her lovely men. The MMC’s, Micah, Jace and Zac, are hilarious, caring, supportive, respectful, uplifting and ready to get down and dirty 😉 they’re completely at ease within themselves and their relationship, that when they consider adding Willow to it, it’s an easy decision, she’s what they’ve been looking for.
The temptation for Willow is too much to ignore, signing up for an experience with a Masked Man to play with, except she didn’t expect three to come along. The more the merrier, right? 🫣 after the final reveal and feelings are on the line, what will the rest of the family think when they arrive at the house for their annual Easter festivities?
This novella is easy to devour in a day, especially if you want something easy to read but is always a wild rollercoaster of a ride. Jaye Pratt is always such a fabulously enjoyable author to read ❤️
This MMMF novella follows Willow as she wants to explore new things sexually with her (now ex) boyfriend, who turns out to be a grade A douche canoe. What’s a girl to do when tied nekkid to a chair? Call the Step Monster, aka Micah.
We’re then introduced to Micah and his “friends” Jace and Zac. We learn all the juicy details about these boys and their “friendship” through multiple POV’s that explain their backstories and shows how they’ve all come to be together. Willie of course has no idea that her hottie firefighter step brother is taken by Jace and Zac, or that he’s been lusting after her for years. Cue the masks, tensions, witty banter, spice and forbidden romance 🫣
I found Willow to be such a relatable FMC, showing us that there can always be doubts and insecurities if we’re told enough that we have them, which of course makes it harder to accept and believe compliments when they’re given. I love how she grows confidence within herself, with the help of her lovely men. The MMC’s, Micah, Jace and Zac, are hilarious, caring, supportive, respectful, uplifting and ready to get down and dirty 😉 they’re completely at ease within themselves and their relationship, that when they consider adding Willow to it, it’s an easy decision, she’s what they’ve been looking for.
The temptation for Willow is too much to ignore, signing up for an experience with a Masked Man to play with, except she didn’t expect three to come along. The more the merrier, right? 🫣 after the final reveal and feelings are on the line, what will the rest of the family think when they arrive at the house for their annual Easter festivities?
This novella is easy to devour in a day, especially if you want something easy to read but is always a wild rollercoaster of a ride. Jaye Pratt is always such a fabulously enjoyable author to read ❤️
July 6, 2025
♡ “Who doesn’t like an adult Easter hunt before being chased by masked men…” ♡
Willow’s first meeting with Jace and Zac had me absolutely dying: with both secondhand embarrassment and laughter. It was the perfect chaotic introduction to set the tone for this quick, high-spice read that fans of Jaye’s other novellas will instantly recognize and enjoy.
As with Jaye’s previous works, the book doesn’t just rely on steam; it also brings emotional depth. Willow’s insecurities are deeply relatable, and one of the most heartwarming parts of the story is how Micah, Jace, and Zac never let her fall victim to her own negative self-talk. Their support feels genuine, not performative, and adds a layer of emotional comfort to the heat.
♡ “You need to learn to love yourself. Every part of you is so damn perfect.” ♡
The dynamic between the three guys is another strong point. Jaye does a great job of making sure each character has a distinct personality and emotional role in the relationship. They each bring something different to the table, and just as importantly, they each need something that only this specific group can provide together.
♡ “I want her to know how f*cking beautiful she is, inside and out. Someone like her deserves the world, and I would do my f*cking best to give it to her if I had half a chance.” ♡
One of the book’s best messages is its strong thread of body positivity. It’s clear and impactful, though there were times it started to feel a bit repetitive. Willow’s insecurities are important to the story, but mentioning them in nearly every conversation made them feel a bit overemphasized. If you're in the mood for something quick and spicy, with a side of laugh-out-loud awkwardness, this one's for you.
Spice: 4/5
Tropes:
❀ Stepsiblings ❀
❀ RH / Why Choose ❀
❀ Masked Men ❀
❀ Easter Egg Hunt w/ a Twist ❀
Willow’s first meeting with Jace and Zac had me absolutely dying: with both secondhand embarrassment and laughter. It was the perfect chaotic introduction to set the tone for this quick, high-spice read that fans of Jaye’s other novellas will instantly recognize and enjoy.
As with Jaye’s previous works, the book doesn’t just rely on steam; it also brings emotional depth. Willow’s insecurities are deeply relatable, and one of the most heartwarming parts of the story is how Micah, Jace, and Zac never let her fall victim to her own negative self-talk. Their support feels genuine, not performative, and adds a layer of emotional comfort to the heat.
♡ “You need to learn to love yourself. Every part of you is so damn perfect.” ♡
The dynamic between the three guys is another strong point. Jaye does a great job of making sure each character has a distinct personality and emotional role in the relationship. They each bring something different to the table, and just as importantly, they each need something that only this specific group can provide together.
♡ “I want her to know how f*cking beautiful she is, inside and out. Someone like her deserves the world, and I would do my f*cking best to give it to her if I had half a chance.” ♡
One of the book’s best messages is its strong thread of body positivity. It’s clear and impactful, though there were times it started to feel a bit repetitive. Willow’s insecurities are important to the story, but mentioning them in nearly every conversation made them feel a bit overemphasized. If you're in the mood for something quick and spicy, with a side of laugh-out-loud awkwardness, this one's for you.
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Spice: 4/5
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Tropes:
❀ Stepsiblings ❀
❀ RH / Why Choose ❀
❀ Masked Men ❀
❀ Easter Egg Hunt w/ a Twist ❀
January 22, 2026
I’ve been a huge fan of the Masked Men series by Jaye Pratt, and honestly, it’s had me in a chokehold. My only real gripe is that I wish this one had been duet narration—because let’s be real, duet makes such a difference. Thankfully, her more recent books are duet, and it absolutely elevates the experience.
The spice in this book was unhinged in the best way—easily a 4.5🔥. MMMF is officially one of my favourite tropes now, and I cannot get enough. Also… Easter being made spicy? Unexpected but very welcome. I devoured this book in about three hours, and it was such a great palate cleanser before jumping back into MF romances.
This entire series has my heart. Every book is addictive, the storylines are solid, and the spice is consistently incredible. One thing I really loved was the strong encouragement of self-love—it felt powerful and genuine. The acceptance between all the characters was done beautifully, and I love how Jaye weaves elements from her previous books into the newer ones. It makes longtime readers feel rewarded while also tempting new readers to go back and binge everything.
I don’t think I’ll ever get tired of Jaye Pratt or her books. If I had to nitpick, I just wish they were a little longer—but truly, that’s my only complaint. As for the narration, I don’t feel like the voices were the perfect fit, but I was able to look past it and still fully enjoy the story. Her newer duet-narrated books are definitely stronger in audio, but this one still pulled me in—and at the end of the day, that’s what matters most.
The spice in this book was unhinged in the best way—easily a 4.5🔥. MMMF is officially one of my favourite tropes now, and I cannot get enough. Also… Easter being made spicy? Unexpected but very welcome. I devoured this book in about three hours, and it was such a great palate cleanser before jumping back into MF romances.
This entire series has my heart. Every book is addictive, the storylines are solid, and the spice is consistently incredible. One thing I really loved was the strong encouragement of self-love—it felt powerful and genuine. The acceptance between all the characters was done beautifully, and I love how Jaye weaves elements from her previous books into the newer ones. It makes longtime readers feel rewarded while also tempting new readers to go back and binge everything.
I don’t think I’ll ever get tired of Jaye Pratt or her books. If I had to nitpick, I just wish they were a little longer—but truly, that’s my only complaint. As for the narration, I don’t feel like the voices were the perfect fit, but I was able to look past it and still fully enjoy the story. Her newer duet-narrated books are definitely stronger in audio, but this one still pulled me in—and at the end of the day, that’s what matters most.
March 12, 2025
I am loving these masked men novellas by Jaye Pratt and cannot get enough of them. A quick easy read that can be devoured in one sitting!
A forbidden romance between step siblings Willow and Micah, with his two besties tagging along for the ride!
When she gets help from Micah from an unfortunate situation, of course he brings his besties Jace and Zac.
Micah has an ongoing relationship with his house mates, Jace and Zac, which, of course Willow knew nothing about but when Willow caught a glimpse of Jace with Micah, she felt herself become aroused!! As you would...of course!!
Having had her full curvy figure ridiculed and shamed by her family for years, she had problems with her curves, believing she was not worthy of love!
Not so for the boys. Micah has always felt a pull towards his step sister and led her to believe he hated her as this made it easier to stay away from her!
But they all felt an insta attraction towards her (especially in her most vulnerable form) and wanted more time with her.
I loved the banter, the push and pull of Willow and the boys as they led her to live out her fantasies with 3 masked men!
Always a scorching hot read and this book did not disappoint.
So if you love reverse harem MMFM relationships then you are once again gonna love this one from Jaye.
A worthy 5 stars from me! Cannot wait for the next book....well I am hoping there is another in this enticing series!
A forbidden romance between step siblings Willow and Micah, with his two besties tagging along for the ride!
When she gets help from Micah from an unfortunate situation, of course he brings his besties Jace and Zac.
Micah has an ongoing relationship with his house mates, Jace and Zac, which, of course Willow knew nothing about but when Willow caught a glimpse of Jace with Micah, she felt herself become aroused!! As you would...of course!!
Having had her full curvy figure ridiculed and shamed by her family for years, she had problems with her curves, believing she was not worthy of love!
Not so for the boys. Micah has always felt a pull towards his step sister and led her to believe he hated her as this made it easier to stay away from her!
But they all felt an insta attraction towards her (especially in her most vulnerable form) and wanted more time with her.
I loved the banter, the push and pull of Willow and the boys as they led her to live out her fantasies with 3 masked men!
Always a scorching hot read and this book did not disappoint.
So if you love reverse harem MMFM relationships then you are once again gonna love this one from Jaye.
A worthy 5 stars from me! Cannot wait for the next book....well I am hoping there is another in this enticing series!
March 17, 2025
Shimmering Shamrock! I know this is an Easter-themed masked men novella, but that was all I could think while reading about Willow, Micah, Jace, and Zac. This MMMF, stepbrother, body-positive, why-choose romance takes spice to a whole new level.
This fast-paced, steamy read is impossible to put down. At least, I could not. Willow finds herself in a predicament and needs her stepbrother's help. When he comes to the rescue, he brings a couple of friends with him. Let’s just say this Easter is one hopping good time.
The chemistry between the characters is electric, and the story moves at the perfect pace for a novella. It is short but delivers everything it promises. There is steam, intrigue, and plenty of heart. The body positivity woven into the story makes it even more refreshing. Each character brings something unique, making it impossible to pick a favorite.
I cannot wait for the next installment. Every book in this series keeps outdoing the last, and I still cannot decide which one I love most. If you love spicy novellas with strong bonds and no unnecessary drama, this one is a must-read.
I received an advance reader copy of this book from the author. This review is purely from my perspective, and all opinions are my own. I am under no obligation to review the book.
This fast-paced, steamy read is impossible to put down. At least, I could not. Willow finds herself in a predicament and needs her stepbrother's help. When he comes to the rescue, he brings a couple of friends with him. Let’s just say this Easter is one hopping good time.
The chemistry between the characters is electric, and the story moves at the perfect pace for a novella. It is short but delivers everything it promises. There is steam, intrigue, and plenty of heart. The body positivity woven into the story makes it even more refreshing. Each character brings something unique, making it impossible to pick a favorite.
I cannot wait for the next installment. Every book in this series keeps outdoing the last, and I still cannot decide which one I love most. If you love spicy novellas with strong bonds and no unnecessary drama, this one is a must-read.
I received an advance reader copy of this book from the author. This review is purely from my perspective, and all opinions are my own. I am under no obligation to review the book.
October 30, 2025
When life throws a curveball and leaves a person tied naked to a chair, sometimes they have to bite the bullet and call the one person they really don't want to call to get them out of their embarrassing predicament. Cue Willow calling Micah, resigned to enduring some relentless teasing, but at least she won't be naked after. Or tied to a chair, I guess.
No lie, things didn't quite turn out the way Willow thought. Micah did come to her rescue, but he brought his two hunky friends and now they've all seen her naked. They also went out for drinks after because why not? And Willow might have had to tell the men what led to the situation they found her in.
So Willow does what anyone would do when faced with all that and flees to the house her family is staying at for the holidays early to get herself in order. Except the massive house is Micah's and he knows exactly where she is. He and his BFFs are determined to give Willow the experience she's craving. Repeatedly.
As it turns out, Willow thought Micah hated her, but he's really only been trying to keep himself in check. Now? He's letting himself off the leash. He's going to convince Willow the four of them have a future worth fighting for. *thumbs up*
-Kelly @ Reading the Paranormal
No lie, things didn't quite turn out the way Willow thought. Micah did come to her rescue, but he brought his two hunky friends and now they've all seen her naked. They also went out for drinks after because why not? And Willow might have had to tell the men what led to the situation they found her in.
So Willow does what anyone would do when faced with all that and flees to the house her family is staying at for the holidays early to get herself in order. Except the massive house is Micah's and he knows exactly where she is. He and his BFFs are determined to give Willow the experience she's craving. Repeatedly.
As it turns out, Willow thought Micah hated her, but he's really only been trying to keep himself in check. Now? He's letting himself off the leash. He's going to convince Willow the four of them have a future worth fighting for. *thumbs up*
-Kelly @ Reading the Paranormal
February 10, 2026
DNF at page 120 of 162. I LOATHE LOATHE LOATHE LOATHE LOATHE the "insecure curvy girl" trope,because it is their ENTIRE PERSONALITY,and willow was no exception. Typically ,I don't one star for my literary pet peeves,as those are my personal hangups,and the quality of a book can be quite good while still being something I don't necessarily enjoy. But I DESPISED willow's lack of confidence and low self esteem, and ABSOLUTELY COULD NOT TAKE any more of her "I'm fat and ugly and no one could possibly love my fat,ugly self" ANY. MORE. EVERY thought she had was "I"m fat." EVERY. THOUGHT. As is completely normal,there was more author info after the conclusion of the book,so really the book ended before page 162,and at page 120 she was still putting herself down,and that is too far into a book to not have grown as a character. Honestly,I LOVE the Samantha Barrett RHs,with bold heroines and unrepentant heroes,but the Jaye Pratt ones have horrible,irritating and/or cringe FMC characters,and I don't know if I can continue with this series. My thoughts only. Feel free to read and form your own. But don't say you weren't warned.
April 3, 2026
I just wanted to add a little excitement to my love life—maybe take a risk, step out of my comfort zone. But my bright idea to tie myself to a chair for my now ex-boyfriend went horribly wrong. I couldn’t get out. Humiliated, I had no choice but to call my stepbrother, Micah, for help. And because the universe has a twisted sense of humor, he brought his two best friends, Jase and Zac, along for the rescue.
I thought I could escape the embarrassment by heading to my family’s Easter holiday early, but I wasn’t expecting company—especially not three masked strangers who seem to know exactly how to make me feel alive. They’re everything I’ve been missing: bold, attentive, and completely irresistible. For the first time, I let go of my fears.
But when I can no longer ignore the truth staring me in the face—that all three of them want me, I’m forced to confront my deepest fears. The walls I’ve built around my heart crumble, leaving me vulnerable to the possibility of something real. Now, I have to decide if I’m brave enough to take a leap of faith and be theirs—or if I’ll let my fears keep me from the love I never saw coming.
I thought I could escape the embarrassment by heading to my family’s Easter holiday early, but I wasn’t expecting company—especially not three masked strangers who seem to know exactly how to make me feel alive. They’re everything I’ve been missing: bold, attentive, and completely irresistible. For the first time, I let go of my fears.
But when I can no longer ignore the truth staring me in the face—that all three of them want me, I’m forced to confront my deepest fears. The walls I’ve built around my heart crumble, leaving me vulnerable to the possibility of something real. Now, I have to decide if I’m brave enough to take a leap of faith and be theirs—or if I’ll let my fears keep me from the love I never saw coming.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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