The story starts out kinda slow for me, but mostly because Raven comes across as a boring character at first. The bombs are written in incredible detail and the Barritt writing is excellent, as usual. I just didn't get into the story until almost halfway through.
The reason for Jake "ghosting" Raven was a weak plot point. He really compromised himself out of duty, not love, for someone even if it seemed for a noble reason. And I guess he figured Raven could never forgive him when it was all a misunderstanding on his part. If Raven was the true love of his life, then he should have trusted her with the truth at the first opportunity instead of thinking she was better off and hopefully they never see each other again. I'm glad it all worked out. Hopefully off page, he will finally remove the wedding ring around his neck (I would consider that the right thing to do-isn't there another way he can honor his deceased?).
Never would've guessed the culprit in this story and it didn't end conclusively, just that the ones responsible are in custody as the story ends. Definitely want to know more about Atlas's story next!