Author Phil M. Williams likes to think of his books as “thought provoking” (his words), though the only thought the three I’ve read have provoked in me was “Thank goodness I got them for free” (courtesy of BookBub). I would hate to have paid for them.
His latest effort, No Conscience, is about Mary Shaw, a serial liar and thief who is eventually exposed by her eldest son Wesley. In Mary Shaw, Phil M. Williams aspires to portray a woman with ... well, no conscience, the primary characteristic of a sociopath.
Those of his readers who are literate and educated know that such a portrayal had been classically done before and infinitely better by John Steinbeck in East of Eden. In Chapter 8, Steinbeck introduces the perfectly named Cathy Ames, one of American Literature’s most fascinating characters, and manages to accomplish in 20 pages what Phil M. Williams was unable to accomplish in 300.
Instead, not having the skill to rely on his own words, Phil M. Williams refers extensively in No Conscience to a non-fiction book by psychologist Martha Stout about sociopathology, claiming that about 4% of the population are sociopaths, or 13 million people in the US alone.
Now, I don’t believe that in my 70 years I’ve led an especially sheltered life or have been blessed with excessively good luck, but as an adult I’ve only come across one, maybe two individuals who have caused harm to others with no conscience. I don’t know where Martha Stout got her staggering numbers, but Phil M. Williams accepts and repeats them without reservation.
That’s not all Mr. Williams repeats. Like his other two books I’ve read for free, Mr. Williams displays a very limited vocabulary. Thus, his characters purse their lips, show their palms, grin, scowl, smirk and exhale over 160 times, meaning that’s what they’re doing at least every second page.
If Mr. Williams would concentrate more on entertaining his readers than in “exploring” (his word again) what he considers Important Social Issues, he might not have written a better book, but he might have written a less pretentious one.