Seams

by Lori Bell

Kelsey Duncan has settled into a life in New York City as a newspaper reporter. As a journalist, she thrives on telling other people’s stories. But it is her story, her life as a woman in her late twenties, that she sometimes wishes she could rewrite. Or at least rejuvenate with passion and excitement and fulfillment.When an accident occurs and she watches the life of the man she loves remain in limbo, it is Kelsey’s life that is forever changed inside of that hospital where Kyle Newman could live or die. Brain specialist, Dr. Brady Walker gives Kelsey hope in her time of despair. He’s intelligent, charming, easy on the eyes, and alluring. Kelsey gets caught up in who she becomes with this new man in her circle as he brings her a seamless feeling she has never experienced before.Choices are made, secrets are kept, and consequences inevitably must be faced. Seams is a captivating novel that begins with a woman’s need to find her true self and her destiny. As the story unfolds, that same woman learns how protecting the people you love is sometimes more important than anything else.

296 pages, Kindle Edition

First published February 25, 2014

Reviews

[Kathie Duame · Rating 1 out of 5]

The story line was good, but the writing was not.

[Angie Simmons · Rating 2 out of 5]

The good things- It was a quick mindless read. The sexual chemistry between Brady and Kelsey was great.

The bad things- Where do I even begin? Multiple typos, some that are small enough that they aren't bothersome, some that just hurt my brain. Constant switching back and forth between tenses. For Christ's sake- pick one already. Umm, Brady is psychotic and should be sued multiple times over for medical malpractice, but she winds up marrying him. Seriously? Let's cheer for the happy ending! Yeah, no thanks. You can't hear a baby's heartbeat at 5 weeks. Are you f-ing kidding me?

"The baby's heart starts to beat at around 6 weeks. You may be able to hear – and see – your baby's heart beat for the first time when you're about 8 weeks pregnant if you have an early ultrasound exam. Otherwise, you'll probably first hear it with a fetal Doppler at a regular prenatal care visit."

Found that in 5 seconds in a Google search. Could the author, who has children of her own, not do the same? And finally, if her due date was August 15th, then how did her water break 2 weeks before her due date, but it was late June? Do I chalk this up to a typo or inattention to detail?

I like supporting local authors, and I really and truly hope that in her books after this one, the author truly took the time to perfect her craft. I would be willing to try one more, but I'm not even sure that I should.

[Anne L. Krueger · Rating 1 out of 5]

I bought this book because I swear I read a reference to it in the NYTimes Book Review, and I like to support new authors. What a mistake. I admit that after the first 30 pages I skimmed it but I read enough to report It was dreadful. Awful writing and overwrought (like emotional schoolgirl vomit; omigod he looked so good in his tight scrubs!) and unbelievable as if the writer had never stepped foot in NYC (I don't live there anymore but would a young reporter really drive a car all over Manhattan? If yes, life has really changed for 20-somethings in the journalism field!). The characters were undeveloped. The plot was flimsy. The only thing I remotely liked was the little twist at the end—although predictable if you were paying attention, it had enough "sociopath" frisson about it to be interesting (and a smart move to get people to read book 2). Romantic fiction can be rich with character development (and good sex scenes). If that's your thing, I'd recommend you stick with Nora Roberts.

[Melissa · Rating 5 out of 5]

I really enjoyed this book. Very easy to read. It was recommended to me by one of my good friends who is a neighbor of the author. Can't wait for the sequel.

[Kim Spanhook · Rating 5 out of 5]

What great read and I couldn't put it down. This book keeps you wanting more! You can't believe what is happening to the characters as you read the book!!!! Can't wait for more from this author.

[Dorothy Wilken · Rating 5 out of 5]

I loved it!! It kept me very interested and was an easy read. I read this in about 2 days because I couldn't put it down.