I received an advance reader copy of Crossing Lines and want to thank Roxy Winters and BookSirens for giving me a chance to read this book! I was under no obligation to leave a review, and all thoughts shared are my own.
Crossing Lines is about Olivia (Liv) Parker, a former hockey player who has subverted expectations of the hockey world by becoming the first female linesperson to officiate Stanley Cup series games. Ethan Holt, the captain of the Whistler Wolves, plays a hard game and has his eyes on a Cup. However, from the first time they share the ice during a game, there’s something heated between the two of them, and Liv has to navigate the precarious situation she’s found herself in—balancing attraction and lust for the captain against protecting the career she fought so hard for.
As someone who loves hockey and romances, I’ve recently been trying to find more good books in this genre to read. I was immediately interested by the premise of this book: a forbidden romance, a woman doing what no other has done before, a serious captain, and high-octane hockey. It’s obvious that Winters loves hockey by the way she writes—she has an understanding of the game, the penalties, and the inner workings of the league that only comes from someone who has either done a lot of research or someone who actually watches and loves the sport. The premise of this book, a linesperson and the captain of an NHL team falling for each other, is definitely original in the world of forbidden hockey romances. However, I was left feeling disappointed by this book.
To start, Crossing Lines is extremely fast-paced. A lot happens, but while reading, it didn’t feel like what was happening in the book matched up with what would be happening in real life during a playoff series. I think Crossing Lines definitely would have benefited from being longer.
On that note, the book really didn’t feel completely developed. The idea was great, but it seemed like Winters put emphasis on writing Liv and Ethan’s trysts—and not much else. I would have loved to see more of Liv’s turmoil while she struggled to choose between her career or Ethan. Perhaps it could have been filled out more by writing in multiple perspectives rather than being a solo POV. I think the bones of the story are there, but it’s lacking the meat and muscle that make a great romance.
I really wanted to like the main characters, but there wasn’t enough there to make me actually end up relating to any of them. At face value, I loved Liv, but very quickly, she started to get on my nerves. A big point of this book was that she had to work so hard to get to where she was in her career, but she was immediately willing to risk it all for Ethan. There isn’t much material between their encounters that would make me believe she’d choose—time and time again—to risk the career she had to fight tooth and claw for, for this man. Ethan was also written poorly, in my opinion. He didn’t show many moments of tenderness toward Liv, especially after pursuing her the way he was. He was kind of an asshole through the majority of the book, to be honest.
This one’s a little petty, but one of the teams mentioned in the book is the Halifax Highlanders. If you’re a fan of hockey, I’m sure you’ve seen all the hockey movies (like me). I immediately had to walk away for a bit once I read that team. The Halifax Highlanders are a fictional team from the movie Goon. It feels sort of lazy that, in a world of options for hockey team names, Winters would choose one that has already been used. It isn’t a trademarked name, but in my opinion, it borders on IP infringement.
Despite my complaints about the book, I was surprised by the ending. I definitely did not see the twist coming, and I actually really liked it. I do wish it had been teased a bit more throughout the beginning of the book, though, because I did feel a bit blindsided by it. Additionally, seeing Liv and Ethan interact more in-depth toward the end of the book showed a lot of promise, and it made me wish Winters had included more of their interactions outside of hookups earlier in the book.
In conclusion, I believe Winters shows a lot of promise as an author. Debuts can be tricky, but I think with some time and effort, Winters will be able to grow and produce a solid and popular title in the hockey romance genre. Crossing Lines fell short of my expectations, so I can’t rate it higher than 3 stars. However, I feel confident that Winters will continue to grow and improve as an author, and I’m eager to read her next release.
Once again, a big thank you to Roxy Winters and BookSirens for allowing me to read Crossing Lines! I was under no obligation to review, and all thoughts shared are my own.