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Oracus
Oracus: The Lavorian Rider
The Lavorian Rider is the first novel of Paul Gaskill's young-adult fantasy trilogy.
From living in a small village where knowledge of the King's dictatorial reign is unknown, Oracus' ordinary life is turned upside down when he forges a bond with a Lavorian and becomes its Rider. When the King's soldiers seize the village and kill his father, Oracus joins the rebellion and endeavours to exact his vengeance. With a Lavorian by his side, he becomes a vital factor in the war that will determine the land's fate.
Can Oracus survive and help to end the King's tyranny?
From living in a small village where knowledge of the King's dictatorial reign is unknown, Oracus' ordinary life is turned upside down when he forges a bond with a Lavorian and becomes its Rider. When the King's soldiers seize the village and kill his father, Oracus joins the rebellion and endeavours to exact his vengeance. With a Lavorian by his side, he becomes a vital factor in the war that will determine the land's fate.
Can Oracus survive and help to end the King's tyranny?
306 pages, ebook
First published August 4, 2014
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About the author
Paul Gaskill
11 books57 followersPaul Gaskill is a fantasy author from the UK. He was born in August '91 and completed his education at John Port School in Derby, where he took a liking to Mathematics. Fast forward a number of years and Paul studied Mathematics at University, then became a Financial Adviser. Despite the career in numbers, Paul's secret love was letters, and his novels were created during the evenings when everything finance during the daytime had been forgotten.
"Let me tell you a little bit about myself. I am a Mathematician turned Author - I was never quite Albert Einstein, but I knew much more than the average person about numbers, equations and formulae. But if you'd asked me what a semi-colon was used for, I'd have shrugged at you. Now it seems to be the other way around.
"I had a fairly normal childhood. I loved football (I still do) and I used to be out until dusk or beyond kicking a bag of air around a field or on a street. If it wasn't football, then it was usually another sport of some kind. Unless it was sneakily searching for golf balls on the local 9-hole golf course with friends and selling the balls we'd found back to the golfers who had lost them in the first place. Mischievous, but entrepreneurial, at a young age.
"I've been very lucky to grow up with loving parents who have helped me become the person I am. They're both intelligent and driven, and it has laid the foundation for me to do what I enjoy doing, and that is to write.
"Without this beginning to sound like a CV, I am ambitious about, and inspired by, creative writing (and I can work well in a team as well as efficiently by myself). Fantasy appeals so much to me because it is about creating something that nobody else has seen before. Worlds, lands, races, laws, politics, character personalities; everything is of my own invention. In some ways it gives a sense of power, but also a sense of pride that I've built something to provide enjoyment to others."
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April 14, 2018
Oracus is the main character in this young adult fantasy. I loved it! Oracus is unaware of his destiny as a Lavorian Rider, but things change rather quickly. He had lived his entire life of 19 yrs. in the isolated little village of Thessly, so isolated that the inhabitants were unaware of anything that went on outside of it. Of course, there were tales, but these were largely regarded as myths, since no one had ever seen anything described in them around there. Overnight, Oracus' life is turned upside down by something crashing to earth and hatching before his eyes-- it looked like a little lion but covered with metal bristly armor. What in the world? But he began to bond with it, and while hunting for food to feed his new pet, his village is decimated by an evil king's soldiers none of them had even known existed. Oracus is led on many eye-opening adventures, into Pharia, the fantastic land where lots of unusual creatures live, in a quest to try to defeat that same evil king and save Pharia from his cruel domination. Wow! I cannot wait to see what happens next in #2.... there was hints at maybe romance (Oracus definitely has a crush, and his crush seems to feel interest in him... but will it blossom?) Lots of twists, turns and unexpected happenings.... I wonder where the next installment will take Oracus?
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April 12, 2017
He was a young man, unaware of the world outside of his secluded village. The king didn’t know his village existed, which is probably why their lives were so idyllic. When Oracus was out hunting, a strange light appeared, along with a beautiful and mysterious woman and from that day on, Oracus’ life would never be the same. The stories and legends he had heard were about to become part of his reality, but not until he faced the greatest devastation and loss of his life.
A legendary creature of great power has chosen him to be his Rider. His Lavorian has found him and their bond will become unbreakable as they become one, lion and Man, filled with magical powers they will share. Little did Oracus know he would become a warrior who could help end the tyranny of a king gone bad. So many secrets have been kept from him and now it is his turn to keep the ugliness of the world away from the innocents and those he loves. The world’s fate is in his hands, can he survive long enough to meet the challenge?
Paul Gaskill’s THE LAVORIAN RIDER the first part of a spellbinding trilogy of adventure, coming of age and fantasy at its finest follows Oracus as his world spins out of control while he searches for where he belongs and how he can best serve his people. The weight of the world will rest on Oracus’ shoulders as this young adult fantasy/adventure unfolds with all the rich detail Paul Gaskill can give.
Feel the fear of youth, the bravado and the daring of rebels determined to make the world right. Enter the battles, both from within and all around as blood is shed, and a reluctant hero is born!
Start to finish, Paul Gaskill writes with a skill that will both draw readers in and hold them glued to each page! What better audience than youth to feel the rush of attempting the impossible while hiding doubt within? Highly, highly recommended for any age, but definitely any child who dares to imagine other worlds and other times!
I received this copy from Paul Gaskill in exchange for my honest and voluntary review.
Trilogy: Oracus - Book 1
Publication Date: August 4, 2014
Publisher: Paul Gaskill
Genre: YA Fantasy
Print Length: 306 pages
Available from: Amazon | Barnes & Noble
For Reviews & More: http://tometender.blogspot.com
A legendary creature of great power has chosen him to be his Rider. His Lavorian has found him and their bond will become unbreakable as they become one, lion and Man, filled with magical powers they will share. Little did Oracus know he would become a warrior who could help end the tyranny of a king gone bad. So many secrets have been kept from him and now it is his turn to keep the ugliness of the world away from the innocents and those he loves. The world’s fate is in his hands, can he survive long enough to meet the challenge?
Paul Gaskill’s THE LAVORIAN RIDER the first part of a spellbinding trilogy of adventure, coming of age and fantasy at its finest follows Oracus as his world spins out of control while he searches for where he belongs and how he can best serve his people. The weight of the world will rest on Oracus’ shoulders as this young adult fantasy/adventure unfolds with all the rich detail Paul Gaskill can give.
Feel the fear of youth, the bravado and the daring of rebels determined to make the world right. Enter the battles, both from within and all around as blood is shed, and a reluctant hero is born!
Start to finish, Paul Gaskill writes with a skill that will both draw readers in and hold them glued to each page! What better audience than youth to feel the rush of attempting the impossible while hiding doubt within? Highly, highly recommended for any age, but definitely any child who dares to imagine other worlds and other times!
I received this copy from Paul Gaskill in exchange for my honest and voluntary review.
Trilogy: Oracus - Book 1
Publication Date: August 4, 2014
Publisher: Paul Gaskill
Genre: YA Fantasy
Print Length: 306 pages
Available from: Amazon | Barnes & Noble
For Reviews & More: http://tometender.blogspot.com
May 1, 2017
I really wasn't quite sure what to expect when I chose to read this book but I have to say it exceeded even my highest expectations. The author is a skilled wordsmith, using descriptive vocabulary to its most potent effect, bringing this fantasy world, it's people, beings, landscape and events to vivid and pulsating life in the imagination of the reader.
Life in an isolated village, with little connection to the outside world, definitely didn't prepare the hero of he story for the events which are about to unfurl. His discovery of and bonding to the strange creature heralds the total destruction of his previously harmonious community and all who lived and there, heralding the start of a new life, new discoveries and a quest to be undertaken. With new allies, unexpected family connections, an evil despot and deadly enemies, this is a well written, fast paced, action packed, fantasy adventure.
If you enjoy stories where a somewhat naive young man links with a mythical creature and together they're tasked with learning quickly and challenged to save their world, you'll love this. The characters - human and others - are well developed, warts and all. They are fallible, under pressure and need to be resilient to face all the dangers ahead for them to succeed. I have definitely found a new favourite fantasy series with superb world building and characters that I thoroughly enjoyed journeying to and look forward to discovering more about in future
I was gifted a copy of this book and chose to read and review it. This is my honest opinion after reading it.
Life in an isolated village, with little connection to the outside world, definitely didn't prepare the hero of he story for the events which are about to unfurl. His discovery of and bonding to the strange creature heralds the total destruction of his previously harmonious community and all who lived and there, heralding the start of a new life, new discoveries and a quest to be undertaken. With new allies, unexpected family connections, an evil despot and deadly enemies, this is a well written, fast paced, action packed, fantasy adventure.
If you enjoy stories where a somewhat naive young man links with a mythical creature and together they're tasked with learning quickly and challenged to save their world, you'll love this. The characters - human and others - are well developed, warts and all. They are fallible, under pressure and need to be resilient to face all the dangers ahead for them to succeed. I have definitely found a new favourite fantasy series with superb world building and characters that I thoroughly enjoyed journeying to and look forward to discovering more about in future
I was gifted a copy of this book and chose to read and review it. This is my honest opinion after reading it.
April 21, 2017
A great edition to the dystopian fantasy category of books.
Oracus a young man secluded in his little world where life is perfect well until it is not. The king of the kingdom knows nothing of Oracus villiage and that is probably why they have managed to live peacefully. That is until Oracus experiences loss like no other. My heart went out to him.
One day when Oracus was out hunting a strange light appeared. With a beautiful young woman in tow. From these events Oracus's life is never the same again. The stories and legends he knew by heart were all going to become reality.
A lavorian has chooses Oracus to be his rider. There bond is unbearable by magical powers they are one and the same person. Joined forever to each other. The fate of the world is in his hands as he try's to stop the king gone bad and save the world. Keeping his people safe.
This is a wonderful coming of age story which follows Oracus as he tries to disco by who he truely is.
Paul's writing is wonderful. It drags you in from the very start. He seems to know exactly what his readers want and delivers again and again. I could put this book down I was hooked. Thank you Paul for contacting me and allowing me to read your book for an honest review. Highly recommend to all.
Oracus a young man secluded in his little world where life is perfect well until it is not. The king of the kingdom knows nothing of Oracus villiage and that is probably why they have managed to live peacefully. That is until Oracus experiences loss like no other. My heart went out to him.
One day when Oracus was out hunting a strange light appeared. With a beautiful young woman in tow. From these events Oracus's life is never the same again. The stories and legends he knew by heart were all going to become reality.
A lavorian has chooses Oracus to be his rider. There bond is unbearable by magical powers they are one and the same person. Joined forever to each other. The fate of the world is in his hands as he try's to stop the king gone bad and save the world. Keeping his people safe.
This is a wonderful coming of age story which follows Oracus as he tries to disco by who he truely is.
Paul's writing is wonderful. It drags you in from the very start. He seems to know exactly what his readers want and delivers again and again. I could put this book down I was hooked. Thank you Paul for contacting me and allowing me to read your book for an honest review. Highly recommend to all.
May 25, 2020
I received this book from the author in exchange for an honest review. My thoughts are completely my own.
Adventure, vengeance and mythical creatures, what's not to love?
This was a bit hard to get into in the beginning but once you dive into the story more it definitely grabs your attention. The plot is very intriguing and has a unique side to it. I loved the world-building and how it's all written in this really magical way. Sometimes it felt like I was reading a fairy tale, which is of course a good thing. Again I loved the vivid writing and how it brings the story to life.
I liked Oracus as a character and some of the others as well although they fell a tiny bit flat, like you don't really get to see their personalities that much, which I'm a little sad about but it will probably be developed more in the next books.
I loved the pacing, it was slower at some parts but never boring, you know? The last battle was really good. I liked the ending and how we got closure but at the same time it makes you interested to know where the story goes from there.
Overall, I think this was a good book with an interesting premise and a cool fantasy world with awesome mythical creatures as companions, and I enjoyed it.
Adventure, vengeance and mythical creatures, what's not to love?
This was a bit hard to get into in the beginning but once you dive into the story more it definitely grabs your attention. The plot is very intriguing and has a unique side to it. I loved the world-building and how it's all written in this really magical way. Sometimes it felt like I was reading a fairy tale, which is of course a good thing. Again I loved the vivid writing and how it brings the story to life.
I liked Oracus as a character and some of the others as well although they fell a tiny bit flat, like you don't really get to see their personalities that much, which I'm a little sad about but it will probably be developed more in the next books.
I loved the pacing, it was slower at some parts but never boring, you know? The last battle was really good. I liked the ending and how we got closure but at the same time it makes you interested to know where the story goes from there.
Overall, I think this was a good book with an interesting premise and a cool fantasy world with awesome mythical creatures as companions, and I enjoyed it.
May 31, 2017
Welcome to a cool new young adult fantasy book . Let me introduce you to Oracus a young man from a small village. He is living a good life because the king doesn't know his village is even there. He has left them alone . But there is more to Oracus then even he knows . With the help of his lavorian that he has bonded with and the rebellion team . He will save his village and the land and end the kings tyranny once and for all .
This is a book full of fantasy and is such a good read . You will be sucked in to the story and will want to cheer for Oracus and his friends . He is taken from a small village and becomes such an important part of saving the land that he loves. There is so much that has been hidden from Oracus when he finds out that he is a rider as his lavorian creature finds him . They go through some trials and tribulations as they grow to trust each other . Now throw in an evil king who is destroying everything and everyone Oracus loves . They must come together to fight the king and save the world . Oracus grows up fast and you see him come to terms with things that have turned his world upside down . Together with his friends you see them become a great team that fights the evil.
This is a very sweet fantasy story that is also a gripping coming of age story in it . I got sucked into the story in the first chapter . The author puts so much into this story , the fantasy is great and the characters are wonderful . You just want to hug them all at one point .and tell them that every thing will be ok . The problems that Oracus goes through like finding his place in the world , are problems that most people go through at one time or another . This is a great book for those who want to get lost in a good fantasy that will sweep you off your feet and taken away to a world where good versus evil . You will cheer and cry. I will highly recommend this book for any person of any age that just wants a good read . You will be glued to the pages . Great book for the kids this summer
March 8, 2017
This book was great. It's fast paced and original. Probably my favourite series, it just has something about it that I really like. There are superpowers, which I love, and the Lavorians are a great idea. I usually expect the first book in a trilogy to fizzle out and prepare you for the second, but this had a twist that quite shocked me. This book is recommended.
March 3, 2016
I really enjoyed this book. I love it when the main character comes from this type of background and I think the idea of the Lavorians was very original.
May 24, 2020
This book is fantastic. It's as if the author knows exactly what I like, the story develops exactly how I'd hoped!
May 2, 2020
2.5 stars rounded up. I received this book as an ARC via NetGalley after Paul Gaskill DM'd me on Instagram in exchange for an honest review. Thank you for considering me, and for giving me this book to review.
I have somewhat mixed feelings about this book for a lot of reasons. It really reminds me of the 80's fantasy novels that I grew up on (especially David Eddings). See: ordinary boy goes on quest with friends to save world after tragedy in the family. It's nothing new. Most elements of this book could pay homage to any number of classic quest-style fantasies with a good vs evil trope as its core element. This isn't necessarily a bad thing, but I could see where this was going from a mile off. The characters were also very tropey and in line with this style of book.
I think my main issue is that it was very predictable, and I just wasn't invested because there were no twists and turns which makes fantasy exciting for me.
I have somewhat mixed feelings about this book for a lot of reasons. It really reminds me of the 80's fantasy novels that I grew up on (especially David Eddings). See: ordinary boy goes on quest with friends to save world after tragedy in the family. It's nothing new. Most elements of this book could pay homage to any number of classic quest-style fantasies with a good vs evil trope as its core element. This isn't necessarily a bad thing, but I could see where this was going from a mile off. The characters were also very tropey and in line with this style of book.
I think my main issue is that it was very predictable, and I just wasn't invested because there were no twists and turns which makes fantasy exciting for me.
August 1, 2017
I was lucky enough to have been contacted by Paul Gaskill with the offer to be able to read this book in e-book form in exchange for an honest review. I am so glad that I accepted! This book is right up my alley and pulls at my fantasy loving heart. I love the characters and their interactions. I want to be Kivali. I can feel the hate for their enemies with every breath. When the book ended I actually threw my hands in the air because I did not want it to end and want to know what happens next. I will be going out to buy this series on my next paycheck for sure! Love love love it!
March 28, 2022
Fire Rider
Thank you to Netgalley and Paul Gaskell for a review e-copy of this book.
This book had me at magic and dragons. With a premise that reminded me slightly of Eragon (which I adore) I read it almost as soon as it hit my kindle.
Fire Rider follows Oracus who becomes the rider of a Lavorian and aided by his new super powers go on a quest to avenge the death of his father and the destruction of his village at the hands of a tyrannical King.
As advertised, I got a definite PJO/Eragon vibe and tbh the book is exactly as described and sometimes that’s just what you need. It’s only whilst typing this review that I’m realising that it was released a good few years ago so I’m off to track down a sequel and just get stuck right in.
In the interest of transparency i’d like to add that the concepts in this book aren’t new. They’ve been done before and I admit that they’ve been done better (in the aforementioned books) but there was something so comforting about this read that it was doubly exciting just because of it. It was extremely well written and the author is clearly a gifted writer. It’s concise, and not overly complex and just one you can dig into without the need for a break. I’m also a sucker for great world building and this book definitely hit that spot for me. The lack of an info dump was also so refreshing because they’re becoming so common in YA fantasy lately.
Definitely an author I’m going to check out properly.
Thank you to Netgalley and Paul Gaskell for a review e-copy of this book.
This book had me at magic and dragons. With a premise that reminded me slightly of Eragon (which I adore) I read it almost as soon as it hit my kindle.
Fire Rider follows Oracus who becomes the rider of a Lavorian and aided by his new super powers go on a quest to avenge the death of his father and the destruction of his village at the hands of a tyrannical King.
As advertised, I got a definite PJO/Eragon vibe and tbh the book is exactly as described and sometimes that’s just what you need. It’s only whilst typing this review that I’m realising that it was released a good few years ago so I’m off to track down a sequel and just get stuck right in.
In the interest of transparency i’d like to add that the concepts in this book aren’t new. They’ve been done before and I admit that they’ve been done better (in the aforementioned books) but there was something so comforting about this read that it was doubly exciting just because of it. It was extremely well written and the author is clearly a gifted writer. It’s concise, and not overly complex and just one you can dig into without the need for a break. I’m also a sucker for great world building and this book definitely hit that spot for me. The lack of an info dump was also so refreshing because they’re becoming so common in YA fantasy lately.
Definitely an author I’m going to check out properly.
March 20, 2017
This is a really good read. I stumbled across it over Christmas and most of the holidays were eaten up by me eagerly flicking through it. The binding relationship of Oracus and his Lavorian is beautiful to read about and the different dimensions of the book are something that really intrigued me. The twists and the plot were more than I expected too, which was a very nice surprise!
August 13, 2017
***This review and more can be found at my blog Love at First Write***
I was given a copy of this book in exchange for honest review.
For readers who love Fantasy lands, this is a book I’d recommend to you. The beginning reminded me strongly of Eragon (which I love), to the point were I was describing the first couple of chapters to my co-worker and they thought I was talking about Eragon, BUT then the book really came into its own. Unlike many fantasy lands, there are no dwarves or elves. Instead, the Oracus Trilogy has all brand-new races (and you can even see drawings at his website HERE). While the world-building is present, the new races can be a little confusing and I would definitely recommend browsing the images while starting. For those who love maps- ME, I love book maps- you can also find a map of Pharia and some more lore about the Lavorian Riders at the link mentioned above!
The book is about a Kingdom ruled by Jowra. I’m not too sure if Pharia is the continent or the Kingdom (or both?) because you are thrown into this world with the main character. You learn everything as Oracus learns it, so I guess he hasn’t thought to ask yet. It’s tough asking the world-building questions when you’re busy being thrown into being bonded with a magical creature and being trained to save the kingdom from Jowra’s evils. It was really cool learning through the characters’ instead of getting a huge inner monologue from the MC to get the reader up to date.
Ok so there’s a kingdom. Check. There’s an evil king to defeat. Check. Now explain the magical creatures Nikki! That's where it's complicated and a bit contradictory. Ok so there are Lavorians, creatures born out of Obulars (basically eggs from what I can tell) and they bond with the first being to touch them (this seems to be regardless of race with is pretty cool). They themselves seem to be any animal, but covered in metal that cannot be removed or pierced by weapons, they never stop growing, and no two are the same. I’m not quite sure how that works because there seems to be a bunch of Lavorians and they’ve existed for a long time so there’s no way there haven’t been repeats. So maybe just no two species that are the same are living at the same time? Again, the lore is a little contradictory in the first book, but I’m assuming the reader learns more in the sequels as Oracus learns more!
Being bonded comes with a bunch of cool abilities like mind links, have a cool metal partner, and gaining a rider power (no two are alike). Additionally, the Lavorian and its rider will never die of old age. They can be killed, but not by natural causes. Again this is where the lore gets fuzzy for me: should a mortal kill a rider, the mortal will then possess the rider’s power, the rider's Lavorian will lose its’ metal coating as punishment for failing its' partner, and the Lavorian now belongs to the mortal. It seems like only the evil king (Jowra) can kill other riders and still repossess the killed rider’s powers but honestly I'm not too sure. It was also fuzzy as to if he can use other rider’s powers in his vicinity his power. Or of his power is only to claim the powers of riders he has killed.
Our MC Oracus is one such rider who bonds to a lion Lavorian; discovers the world outside his small farming village; actually has a good, nontoxic relationship with people; spends months upon months training to help the rebellion; has both positive and negative experiences with others finding out who he is; and gets a taste of battle all before the end of book one.
Is the book perfect? No, I clearly have some questions about Lore, but I hope that gets clarified for me in the future. There were only three grammatical errors that I noticed, but that did not hinder my reading experience in the slightest (I'm just used to editing as I read and notice these things). The plot is interesting, and (after the first couple chapters) surprisingly unexpected- the book was hard to put down after I started getting into it! I grew fond of Oracus and Bandor, and found their relationship sweet and amusing. I was even pleasantly surprised with how this book’s ending paused the story line. Additionally, I'm happy to report that were were characters that got screen time and that got to speak that were *not* teenagers for a change. And they weren’t the crazy old people too stuck in their ways to see the necessary change trope either. They were realistic middle-aged characters- thank goodness.
I currently have a large queue of to-read books, but I am definitely adding the rest of the trilogy to my list!
I was given a copy of this book in exchange for honest review.
For readers who love Fantasy lands, this is a book I’d recommend to you. The beginning reminded me strongly of Eragon (which I love), to the point were I was describing the first couple of chapters to my co-worker and they thought I was talking about Eragon, BUT then the book really came into its own. Unlike many fantasy lands, there are no dwarves or elves. Instead, the Oracus Trilogy has all brand-new races (and you can even see drawings at his website HERE). While the world-building is present, the new races can be a little confusing and I would definitely recommend browsing the images while starting. For those who love maps- ME, I love book maps- you can also find a map of Pharia and some more lore about the Lavorian Riders at the link mentioned above!
The book is about a Kingdom ruled by Jowra. I’m not too sure if Pharia is the continent or the Kingdom (or both?) because you are thrown into this world with the main character. You learn everything as Oracus learns it, so I guess he hasn’t thought to ask yet. It’s tough asking the world-building questions when you’re busy being thrown into being bonded with a magical creature and being trained to save the kingdom from Jowra’s evils. It was really cool learning through the characters’ instead of getting a huge inner monologue from the MC to get the reader up to date.
Ok so there’s a kingdom. Check. There’s an evil king to defeat. Check. Now explain the magical creatures Nikki! That's where it's complicated and a bit contradictory. Ok so there are Lavorians, creatures born out of Obulars (basically eggs from what I can tell) and they bond with the first being to touch them (this seems to be regardless of race with is pretty cool). They themselves seem to be any animal, but covered in metal that cannot be removed or pierced by weapons, they never stop growing, and no two are the same. I’m not quite sure how that works because there seems to be a bunch of Lavorians and they’ve existed for a long time so there’s no way there haven’t been repeats. So maybe just no two species that are the same are living at the same time? Again, the lore is a little contradictory in the first book, but I’m assuming the reader learns more in the sequels as Oracus learns more!
Being bonded comes with a bunch of cool abilities like mind links, have a cool metal partner, and gaining a rider power (no two are alike). Additionally, the Lavorian and its rider will never die of old age. They can be killed, but not by natural causes. Again this is where the lore gets fuzzy for me: should a mortal kill a rider, the mortal will then possess the rider’s power, the rider's Lavorian will lose its’ metal coating as punishment for failing its' partner, and the Lavorian now belongs to the mortal. It seems like only the evil king (Jowra) can kill other riders and still repossess the killed rider’s powers but honestly I'm not too sure. It was also fuzzy as to if he can use other rider’s powers in his vicinity his power. Or of his power is only to claim the powers of riders he has killed.
Our MC Oracus is one such rider who bonds to a lion Lavorian; discovers the world outside his small farming village; actually has a good, nontoxic relationship with people; spends months upon months training to help the rebellion; has both positive and negative experiences with others finding out who he is; and gets a taste of battle all before the end of book one.
Is the book perfect? No, I clearly have some questions about Lore, but I hope that gets clarified for me in the future. There were only three grammatical errors that I noticed, but that did not hinder my reading experience in the slightest (I'm just used to editing as I read and notice these things). The plot is interesting, and (after the first couple chapters) surprisingly unexpected- the book was hard to put down after I started getting into it! I grew fond of Oracus and Bandor, and found their relationship sweet and amusing. I was even pleasantly surprised with how this book’s ending paused the story line. Additionally, I'm happy to report that were were characters that got screen time and that got to speak that were *not* teenagers for a change. And they weren’t the crazy old people too stuck in their ways to see the necessary change trope either. They were realistic middle-aged characters- thank goodness.
I currently have a large queue of to-read books, but I am definitely adding the rest of the trilogy to my list!
September 23, 2020
Fire Rider was an exciting tale of friendship and loyalty. After our main character's family is killed, he joins a rebellion with goals to kill the king. Along the way, he bonds with a mythical Lavorian, and befriends other riders. With an exciting plot, and loveable characters, this book held my attention the entire time.
This book switches between two primary perspectives, Catania and Oracus. We see more from Oracus, and he was definitely my favorite character. He was funny, and I really liked how he struggled with joining the rebellion, instead of making a hasty decision like so many other YA characters. His bond with his Lavorian, Bandor, was a highlight of this book, and something I want to see more of in the next book.
Along with a strong main character, we also had a small cast of supporting characters. Milvali was the most developed side character, but I wasn’t too interested in her. Her romance with Oracus played a fairly small part in the book, but I was happy with how it was written. It felt realistic in the way it came about, and was somewhat slow-burn.
The world building in this book does leave a bit to be desired, as it is fairly vague. It does deviate from the stereotypical fantasy world by adding new races of beings, but that just made it more confusing. While the Lavorians are interesting, the other races kind of blended together into one inconsequential blur. With that being said, they will likely play a larger part in the next book, so my confusion should be alleviated
I was immediately drawn to this book because of the beautiful cover, and I don’t regret reading it at all. I’ll be looking to read the rest of the series, because I think this world and plot has a lot to offer!
Thanks to Paul Gaskill and Netgalley for providing a free copy in exchange for an honest review
This book switches between two primary perspectives, Catania and Oracus. We see more from Oracus, and he was definitely my favorite character. He was funny, and I really liked how he struggled with joining the rebellion, instead of making a hasty decision like so many other YA characters. His bond with his Lavorian, Bandor, was a highlight of this book, and something I want to see more of in the next book.
Along with a strong main character, we also had a small cast of supporting characters. Milvali was the most developed side character, but I wasn’t too interested in her. Her romance with Oracus played a fairly small part in the book, but I was happy with how it was written. It felt realistic in the way it came about, and was somewhat slow-burn.
The world building in this book does leave a bit to be desired, as it is fairly vague. It does deviate from the stereotypical fantasy world by adding new races of beings, but that just made it more confusing. While the Lavorians are interesting, the other races kind of blended together into one inconsequential blur. With that being said, they will likely play a larger part in the next book, so my confusion should be alleviated
I was immediately drawn to this book because of the beautiful cover, and I don’t regret reading it at all. I’ll be looking to read the rest of the series, because I think this world and plot has a lot to offer!
Thanks to Paul Gaskill and Netgalley for providing a free copy in exchange for an honest review
June 3, 2020
I received this book from the author in exchange for an honest review. My thoughts are completely my own.
I absolutely loved the plot and story of Oracus! I thought the character Oracus was relatable and had realistic thoughts and feelings throughout the whole book.
My favorite character was Bandor. He was so easy to love and just looked out for Oracus in every scene. The concept of "riders" was also something I enjoyed about the book. I found it fascinating to learn about the different Lavorian's and who they were paired with. I also liked how each rider had a power of some sort as well.
There are a couple of points that I would like to make. Although the beginning and some of the middle of the story were filled with details, I felt like the ending was lacking. The ending (for me) was very abrupt and rushed. There also were a couple points in the story where something dramatic happened and then nothing came of it.
But those are my only complaints. I really did enjoy this book and recommend others to add this to their TBR list.
I absolutely loved the plot and story of Oracus! I thought the character Oracus was relatable and had realistic thoughts and feelings throughout the whole book.
My favorite character was Bandor. He was so easy to love and just looked out for Oracus in every scene. The concept of "riders" was also something I enjoyed about the book. I found it fascinating to learn about the different Lavorian's and who they were paired with. I also liked how each rider had a power of some sort as well.
There are a couple of points that I would like to make. Although the beginning and some of the middle of the story were filled with details, I felt like the ending was lacking. The ending (for me) was very abrupt and rushed. There also were a couple points in the story where something dramatic happened and then nothing came of it.
But those are my only complaints. I really did enjoy this book and recommend others to add this to their TBR list.
November 27, 2017
I absolutely loved this book and would happily recommend it to anyone who also enjoyed other companion strengthening series' like the inheritance cycle, or the How to train your dragon movies
The bond between the main character and his Lavorian is wonderful and reminds me of Eragon and Saphira's companionship, as well as the other dragon riders. I also enjoyed how everything connects together and the iron-will the main character has to show by the end.
I truly cannot wait to delve further into this series and read the other books in this series
The bond between the main character and his Lavorian is wonderful and reminds me of Eragon and Saphira's companionship, as well as the other dragon riders. I also enjoyed how everything connects together and the iron-will the main character has to show by the end.
I truly cannot wait to delve further into this series and read the other books in this series
May 3, 2020
This was gifted to me to review by the author.
I admire people who manage ti create worlds from scratch, with original names and stories.
This story is young adult oriented and it has really good flow all the way through. It is easy to read and keeps you hooked til the end. I would have liked to see the characters more in depth, though.
In overall, it is a good read and you should give it an opportunity!
I admire people who manage ti create worlds from scratch, with original names and stories.
This story is young adult oriented and it has really good flow all the way through. It is easy to read and keeps you hooked til the end. I would have liked to see the characters more in depth, though.
In overall, it is a good read and you should give it an opportunity!
June 2, 2020
Fire Rider was an decent book and I think it has potential to become a better book. I did think the idea of the Lavorians was really unique and the shared link/powers part was neat as well.
I did find that it seemed to drone on in areas of the book and I did skim or skip sections that weren't super relevant or were very slow paced. I did find it very predictable, a bit whiney and very angsty throughout the book.
I was sent a DM by the author, Paul Gaskill, asking me to review his book and give an honest opinion. Thank you for the opportunity.
I did find that it seemed to drone on in areas of the book and I did skim or skip sections that weren't super relevant or were very slow paced. I did find it very predictable, a bit whiney and very angsty throughout the book.
I was sent a DM by the author, Paul Gaskill, asking me to review his book and give an honest opinion. Thank you for the opportunity.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 16, 2017
I really liked this story...the beginning of a fantasy of one very ordinary young man who, as it turns out, is NOT quite so ordinary. Maybe it was the name...Oracus, that drew me first. Kinda sounded Greek insinuating strength combined with questioning wisdom. The world of Pharia quickly developed as did the main characters and there are quite a few. I was drawn into the story lickety-split. What I liked most was the fantasy...all of it. The magic, the Lavorians, the powers of the riders, the human frailties and their strengths. And, yes, the diversity of the characters. There was much that was different but there was a commonality amongst them. This is a very complex story of good and evil and lessons to be learned. Yes, this is a fantastic middle grade book; but adults will enjoy the book as well if they dare to step into Pharia..
November 2, 2017
I was given a free copy of this book in exchange for a review. The word that comes to mind for this book is potential. The basic idea for this book is original. Lavorians are metal creatures that come in the form of ordinary creatures. When they bond with a person, that person becomes a Rider and inherits a power which varies from rider to rider. Oracus has found a lion Lavorian right before his village is attacked by Jowra the evil king, also a Rider. Oracles has to flee to a city where he learns the history of the Riders, his land and eventually his own family.
There was a lot of description in the book but it seemed to be about irrelevant things. I would have rather learned more about the Lavorans - they are unique creatures, after all. I also would have liked to learn more about Oracus' relationships. He is upset about his father's death and we are left to assume they were close. Oracles has a friend who knows what is going on but we can only guess how tight he and Garrin are. The author also had a habit of jumping from different character's points of view and different times which made a few parts hard to follow. These are all things that can be fixed in the next book which I am looking forward.
There was a lot of description in the book but it seemed to be about irrelevant things. I would have rather learned more about the Lavorans - they are unique creatures, after all. I also would have liked to learn more about Oracus' relationships. He is upset about his father's death and we are left to assume they were close. Oracles has a friend who knows what is going on but we can only guess how tight he and Garrin are. The author also had a habit of jumping from different character's points of view and different times which made a few parts hard to follow. These are all things that can be fixed in the next book which I am looking forward.
June 17, 2020
I was sent a copy for review of Oracus: The Lavorian Rider by Paul Gaskell.
This is Book 1 in an epic fantasy trilogy which brings natural, supernatural and mythical worlds and creatures to life. The author introduces the myth of Riders and their animal companions, Lavorians who have body armour in place of their fur, skin or feathers. They are symbiotic pairs who enhance each other and create magical powers within the human Rider.
The plot deals with the coming of age of Oracus, a seemingly ordinary boy but one who has a great and important future ahead of him. He suddenly finds out he is one of the fabled Riders when his Lavorian companion crashes to earth in front of him. His world is turned upside down when the evil King Jowra sends his soldiers to find this creature but ends up killing Oracus’ father in the process.
Oracus is then pulled into the rebel resistance against the King to avenge his father. He is trained by Kivali, a female Rider, who shows him how to fight, to connect telepathically with Bandor, his Lion Lavorian, and how to control the powers he will develop from this magical connection. Meanwhile he is having visions of Princess Catania, who is being controlled by the King. Oracus senses a personal connection to her and decides to travel to her homeland of Tallarin to protect her.
When King Jowra finds out about Oracus and his powers his army descend on Tallarin and a huge battle commences. Will Oracus survive this fight with Bandor at his side, will he ever discover his powers and learn to control them and will his new friends live to see the end of the King?
I give this book 🌟🌟🌟🌟 as I loved the depth of the backstory, mythology and character personalities that Paul went into in creating his fantasy world and delivering an epic tale while also setting the stage for the future story to enfold. The story was well paced and was a thrilling ride from start to finish. This instalment ends on a cliffhanger but not one that left me tearing my hair out, in fact it left me wanting more and excited to see where the story goes from here.
This is Book 1 in an epic fantasy trilogy which brings natural, supernatural and mythical worlds and creatures to life. The author introduces the myth of Riders and their animal companions, Lavorians who have body armour in place of their fur, skin or feathers. They are symbiotic pairs who enhance each other and create magical powers within the human Rider.
The plot deals with the coming of age of Oracus, a seemingly ordinary boy but one who has a great and important future ahead of him. He suddenly finds out he is one of the fabled Riders when his Lavorian companion crashes to earth in front of him. His world is turned upside down when the evil King Jowra sends his soldiers to find this creature but ends up killing Oracus’ father in the process.
Oracus is then pulled into the rebel resistance against the King to avenge his father. He is trained by Kivali, a female Rider, who shows him how to fight, to connect telepathically with Bandor, his Lion Lavorian, and how to control the powers he will develop from this magical connection. Meanwhile he is having visions of Princess Catania, who is being controlled by the King. Oracus senses a personal connection to her and decides to travel to her homeland of Tallarin to protect her.
When King Jowra finds out about Oracus and his powers his army descend on Tallarin and a huge battle commences. Will Oracus survive this fight with Bandor at his side, will he ever discover his powers and learn to control them and will his new friends live to see the end of the King?
I give this book 🌟🌟🌟🌟 as I loved the depth of the backstory, mythology and character personalities that Paul went into in creating his fantasy world and delivering an epic tale while also setting the stage for the future story to enfold. The story was well paced and was a thrilling ride from start to finish. This instalment ends on a cliffhanger but not one that left me tearing my hair out, in fact it left me wanting more and excited to see where the story goes from here.
June 29, 2020
3.5/5
I was offered this copy by the author in exchange for an honest review.
My three words: easy to read, intriguing secondary characters, simple style
Oracus is the story of a young farmer's son who finds out there may be more to his simple life than he had ever imagined. This fantasy story takes us on a journey with Oracus as he begins to discover who he is and his place in the world.
This was a fun read! First of all, I really enjoyed the concepts of the Lavorians. I mean, who doesn't want a giant animal that they can bond with and learn to ride and fight alongside? This concept stood out to me as the best part of the book. I also enjoyed some of the other Riders and other secondary characters, and thought the world-building was fun.
This is a YA book, but I would say it's appropriate for middle grade and above. It's a fun story with twists and turns and is written very simply. There isn't a whole lot of underlying depth, so I do think it would be really fun to re-brand as a middle grade story. I also think a book written so simply would make a good graphic novel! Some of the concepts and worlds are so cool, it would be neat to see them in this form as well.
Overall, it was a fun, easy read. I recommend it if you're looking for something quick to read and want to be jealous you don't have a Lavorian of your own!
I was offered this copy by the author in exchange for an honest review.
My three words: easy to read, intriguing secondary characters, simple style
Oracus is the story of a young farmer's son who finds out there may be more to his simple life than he had ever imagined. This fantasy story takes us on a journey with Oracus as he begins to discover who he is and his place in the world.
This was a fun read! First of all, I really enjoyed the concepts of the Lavorians. I mean, who doesn't want a giant animal that they can bond with and learn to ride and fight alongside? This concept stood out to me as the best part of the book. I also enjoyed some of the other Riders and other secondary characters, and thought the world-building was fun.
This is a YA book, but I would say it's appropriate for middle grade and above. It's a fun story with twists and turns and is written very simply. There isn't a whole lot of underlying depth, so I do think it would be really fun to re-brand as a middle grade story. I also think a book written so simply would make a good graphic novel! Some of the concepts and worlds are so cool, it would be neat to see them in this form as well.
Overall, it was a fun, easy read. I recommend it if you're looking for something quick to read and want to be jealous you don't have a Lavorian of your own!
June 30, 2020
We follow the story of Oracus who has entire world turned upside down at the beginning of this story. Oracus lives in a small village secluded from the rest of the world and does not know anything of the outside...but all that is about to change.
Paul Gaskill has created a world in which creatures called Lavorians exist. A human can become bonded wih a Lavorian and become a Rider. I really enjoyed learning about the Lavorian and Rider's bond and power. I spent half my time wondering what type of Lavorian I would want!
This first installment builds up the world in which Oracus finds himself, delves into its history and politics and begins building towards a war. There are plot twists galore and we discover the world much at the same time that Oracus does.
If you like quest-based, war-driven fantasy then this book will be right up your street. It reminds me of classic fantasy tales.
One last thought: Oracus is actually written not as this big macho male character and rather someone who actually has feelings and fear, which I think is sometimes overlooked in a lot of fantasy out there. It was rather refreshing.
***I received a free ecopy of this book for an honest review***
Paul Gaskill has created a world in which creatures called Lavorians exist. A human can become bonded wih a Lavorian and become a Rider. I really enjoyed learning about the Lavorian and Rider's bond and power. I spent half my time wondering what type of Lavorian I would want!
This first installment builds up the world in which Oracus finds himself, delves into its history and politics and begins building towards a war. There are plot twists galore and we discover the world much at the same time that Oracus does.
If you like quest-based, war-driven fantasy then this book will be right up your street. It reminds me of classic fantasy tales.
One last thought: Oracus is actually written not as this big macho male character and rather someone who actually has feelings and fear, which I think is sometimes overlooked in a lot of fantasy out there. It was rather refreshing.
***I received a free ecopy of this book for an honest review***
May 28, 2020
I received this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
*3.5 stars*
This book takes us on a wild journey trough a land ruled by a man full of hatred and a lust for power. We get to follow a young boy called Oracus as his whole life turns upside down and he is thrown into a war that he knew nothing about - but maybe he’s their only hope?
The book is beautifully written and I could always see everything playing out in front of me, but unfortunately it was also very predictable. But then again, maybe that’s just because I have read like a million fantasy books?? Sometimes the story also felt a bit rushed, but over all it was an amazing ride to read this book.
It gives me a lot of Eragon vibes, but with a different twist of it and so many other things to the story! The world was thoughtfully created and the characters were all intriguing to read about. I would definitely recommend this to fans of Eragon or fantasy all together, and I hope I get the chance to read the next books soon!
*3.5 stars*
This book takes us on a wild journey trough a land ruled by a man full of hatred and a lust for power. We get to follow a young boy called Oracus as his whole life turns upside down and he is thrown into a war that he knew nothing about - but maybe he’s their only hope?
The book is beautifully written and I could always see everything playing out in front of me, but unfortunately it was also very predictable. But then again, maybe that’s just because I have read like a million fantasy books?? Sometimes the story also felt a bit rushed, but over all it was an amazing ride to read this book.
It gives me a lot of Eragon vibes, but with a different twist of it and so many other things to the story! The world was thoughtfully created and the characters were all intriguing to read about. I would definitely recommend this to fans of Eragon or fantasy all together, and I hope I get the chance to read the next books soon!
May 9, 2020
I thought this was a great YA fantasy novel full of adventure. It was a thrilling ride to read and it definitely took me by surprise. The language and the way this book is written can be described as somewhat captivating. I am in complete love with this new universe.
The characters were definitely a unique bunch. They were portrayed realistically with their strength and weaknesses. The underlying morals and themes are well thought out and intertwine perfectly with the plot. I couldn't give this book 5 stars because I wasn't much of a fan of Oracus. (that may just be me) There were times in the book where I couldn't relate to him at all.
All in all, this is definitely a series you should check out if you're a fantasy lover. I would like to say a quick thank you to the author for gifting me with a review copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
The characters were definitely a unique bunch. They were portrayed realistically with their strength and weaknesses. The underlying morals and themes are well thought out and intertwine perfectly with the plot. I couldn't give this book 5 stars because I wasn't much of a fan of Oracus. (that may just be me) There were times in the book where I couldn't relate to him at all.
All in all, this is definitely a series you should check out if you're a fantasy lover. I would like to say a quick thank you to the author for gifting me with a review copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
May 15, 2020
Oracus is a young man living in a small isolated village, with no knowledge of the outside world. One day, in the forest, he witnesses a rock fall out of the sky and it hatches a small baby lion with metal fur. This creature is a Lavorian - magical beings with the ability to bond with their Riders - and Oracus has been chosen by it. The King’s soldiers then invade the village with no idea of the village’s existence. Pulled into a new world of Pharia, Oracus is embroiled into politics and adventures to find a way to save the world from the tyrannical King.
I highly enjoyed this adventurous book and learning about the special connection between a Lavorian and its Rider. Oracus is learning about the secrets of the kingdom, and I liked how his character developed into the strong warrior that Pharia needs. The writing was descriptive but not overdone and the plot was well-paced. This is a coming-of-age story that I really liked - If you want an awesome YA fantasy, pick this one up!
Thank you @paulgaskillauthor for the copy!
I highly enjoyed this adventurous book and learning about the special connection between a Lavorian and its Rider. Oracus is learning about the secrets of the kingdom, and I liked how his character developed into the strong warrior that Pharia needs. The writing was descriptive but not overdone and the plot was well-paced. This is a coming-of-age story that I really liked - If you want an awesome YA fantasy, pick this one up!
Thank you @paulgaskillauthor for the copy!
June 7, 2020
*I was send a copy by the author for a review, but these thoughts and opinions are my own.
Oracus is the main character in this book and he lives in a small village, unaware of the outside world.
He is very curious and tries to know more about the world outside the village, but the stories that are told are known as 'crazy' stories. Or he is told that he shouldn't ask.
One day he finds a Lavorian in the forest and his world turns upside down as the king discovers his village and kills his father. Oracus joins the rebellion and, with his lavorian by his side, tries to exact his vengeance.
I thought this story was interesting from the start as Oracus is totally ignorant to the outside world.
The story is fast paced and there is a lot of action, especially towards the end. I really enjoyed the story and I thought it was a great introduction into the series.
I'm curious to see where this will go!
Oracus is the main character in this book and he lives in a small village, unaware of the outside world.
He is very curious and tries to know more about the world outside the village, but the stories that are told are known as 'crazy' stories. Or he is told that he shouldn't ask.
One day he finds a Lavorian in the forest and his world turns upside down as the king discovers his village and kills his father. Oracus joins the rebellion and, with his lavorian by his side, tries to exact his vengeance.
I thought this story was interesting from the start as Oracus is totally ignorant to the outside world.
The story is fast paced and there is a lot of action, especially towards the end. I really enjoyed the story and I thought it was a great introduction into the series.
I'm curious to see where this will go!
February 25, 2018
I really enjoyed this book even though it was outside of my usual reading genres. The main character Oracus is likeable with human frailty and weaknesses that resonate throughout the book. The fictional fantasy world of Pharia is interesting and the story evolves while introducing other sub-characters and sub-plots into the main events. There are a few twists and turns along the way that add to the intrigue.
All in all a very well written and interesting book that captures the imagination and as the first book in a trilogy I am sure the story develops into a most interesting saga. I will be reading the rest of the series.
All in all a very well written and interesting book that captures the imagination and as the first book in a trilogy I am sure the story develops into a most interesting saga. I will be reading the rest of the series.
May 12, 2020
Unfortunately this wasn't the book for me.
The author is very clearly talented in his writing ability, however, in this book the pacing felt completely off.
There were sections of the story that felt rushed and severely underdeveloped, leaving me as a reader feeling the characters and scenarios were very superficial with no depth.
I couldn't finish the book purely because I felt no attachment to any of the characters or the strife they endured.
Did not finish.
The author is very clearly talented in his writing ability, however, in this book the pacing felt completely off.
There were sections of the story that felt rushed and severely underdeveloped, leaving me as a reader feeling the characters and scenarios were very superficial with no depth.
I couldn't finish the book purely because I felt no attachment to any of the characters or the strife they endured.
Did not finish.
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