Deadly Stillwater marks the return of Michael McKenzie McRyan, known as “Mac” to his police colleagues and pals. The daughter of a famous and wealthy local attorney is kidnapped in broad daylight as she leaves her job at a café in downtown Stillwater, MN. Witnesses have very little information to give the police, and so far, there is no ransom demand. The next day, another young woman is taken; this time, it’s the daughter of the chief of police. Are the abductions connected? If so, how? After the vehicle connected to the first case is found destroyed in neighboring Wisconsin, the FBI is contacted, and Agent John Burton is the man in charge. Unlike most cases involving the Feds, Burton promises to cooperate and involve local officials as much as possible. Really?
From the onset, the reader knows both sides of the case, for the most part. There are four kidnappers; brains of the operation is a man named Smith, who spent 15 years in prison. Then there are the brawny accomplices, David and Dean, plus the beautiful Monica, who provides some crucial information, such as tipping off the guys when Shannon, the first victim, was leaving the café. What we don’t know until much later is what motivates them. However, their planning and execution are amazing, even admirable. It’s as if they know exactly what the police will do and are doing. Do you suppose…?
Having read Stelljes’ first book, The St. Paul Conspiracy, perhaps a year or two ago, I was familiar with his cop characters. Mac is a fourth-generation Irish cop with a law degree. He also has money, but police work is in his blood. The other guys on his team, Riley, Rockford, and Lich, are all rather stereotypes who do the typical guy banter while in the squad room, but they are an effective team, and Stelljes seems to have a good working knowledge of police procedure. There is a lot of dialogue in this novel, perhaps a bit too much for my taste, but for the most part, it felt realistic enough. I did feel that at this stage, book 2, there could be more development of the main characters, as they seem rather one-dimensional.
The plot, however, kept me engaged. I liked the way the bad guys were staying a jump ahead of the cops, changing clothes, changing locations, and frustrating the heck out of them. The part where tempers flared between the mayor and Mac seemed plausible, and the fact that it was a holiday made information more difficult to obtain and hence, things were more tense. The information about Shannon Hisle being a Type 1 diabetic is a good detail; it adds a greater sense of drama and urgency. I am not sure, though, whether someone with Type 1 diabetes would not have her insulin with her at all times.
The pacing is fast, and though there doesn’t seem to be a question of whether the daughters will be found or the bad guys caught, there is plenty of blood-pumping action as Mac and the guys race against the clock to solve the mysteries of the crimes. Even after they know who is responsible, they must find them and stop them. There are plenty of secrets, which I won’t give away, but all in all, it’s a pretty good story. It’s extra fun for Minnesotans who are familiar with the Twin Cities and Stillwater area. Mac McRyan has a promising future.
3 of 5 stars