I am being generous. Three stars for the plot and pacing. I kept forcing myself to keep reading. This is despite the fact that I love all the characters as well as the relationships between them, especially the marriages. The main character, Duren, is an overpowered warrior (mostly through swordsmanship), has a strong moral compass and a love of challenges, defends those at risk, and can't wait to be a dad. But ever since the first volume (which I gave 5 stars), I have found it hard to stay with the narrative. Is not enough at stake? Is Duren now so confident that I don't really think he is in danger (like in the Bond films with Roger Moore)? Maybe it is because Duren is no longer learning and changing like he did in the first volume. I will still read the next volume if there is one, but I would encourage the authors to aim higher when choosing a plot and to envision how Duren can evolve through the arc of books.