Everything just seems to be base-level, as if Pinkwater just did what was absolutely necessary and nothing more. The names, for example, seem to just be ones that came to him on the spot (i.e. Nick, Maxine, Fuzzface, Oldface, Momface, Drooly). It may seem more charming than discrediting since it’s a children’s book, but it’s still not as good as it could be and that’s ultimately what bothers me the most about these books.
The art seems to be inconsistent. Some drawings are darker in color and more detailed than the others that are lighter and not detailed much at all. This is quite bothersome, at least from my point of view. Again, it feels like a case of Pinkwater, and Stower, in this case, just doing the bare minimum because it’s a children’s book.
The writing does feel incomplete. I keep on telling myself that it’s a book for children so of course the language isn’t super fluent, but it’s more than that. It feels like you’ve come into the conversation halfway through every time a conversation is had, even though you’ve been there the whole time.
The way these books end feels abrupt, especially this one. With it being the last in the series, the way it ended feels very out of place. Possibly it wasn’t meant to be the last, but even if I take that into account, the ending is still very abrupt and seemingly out of nowhere.
I will say that this series was cute and quick to get through (quick reads to help with that goodreads goal!), but that’s really all it has going for it.
Don’t think I’d ever recommend any of these. I don’t think I could, knowing how much parts of them bothered me.