After losing his wife and daughter to cancer Marco Dontolli never thought he would find love again that was until Lea Carmichael walked into his life. Lea wasn’t looking for love heck she figured it would never find her but then Marco Dontolli walked into her office she was positive Marco was what fate had sent to her But Marco is keeping a secret from Lea a secret which could ruin the relationship he wants with her and cause her to walk out of his life forever. Can Marco reveal this secret and keep the woman he is coming to love or will all be lost when the truth is known.
Previous Reviews for EA Hunt: I love how she brings the characters together I can't wait to read another book from this author. ----
Valerie Edouard
I have read this author before and will continue to. Good good read. ----
EA Hunt is a celebrated contemporary Amazon author known for romance novels, often featuring Black/ African American main characters in genres such as motorcycle club and paranormal romance. EA as multiple published books, including the "The Four" series and Black Crows MC - Georgia Chapter. EA is often featured in literary circles, nominated for "Female Author of the Year," and has appeared on platforms like Every Night Date Night and HerStoy Circle
I have read several books by this author and overall they have been good reads. The one main problem that I have at times is that there are a number of grammatical issues (wrong tense used or misspellings). These grammatical errors have not stopped me from being able to fo0llow along in the story line; however, as an author I would think that you would want your readers to always be able to understand clearly what your characters are feeling or saying without having to second guess anything. Now back to my thoughts on the story. I really felt for the hero (Marco) because he had a number of losses that would have left anyone devastated. It did pull at my heart string that Marco was able to fulfill his wife’s and his wishes of more children even after she was gone. I wasn’t expecting something to happening to his new babies, because it wasn’t even mentioned in the book description (I am definitely not giving away this part of the plot), but after reading it I was not surprised at who was involved. I liked the heroine (Lea); however, I wished there had been a little more back history on her. When we meet her comes into the lives of Marco’s twin boys but not into the life of Marco (again no spoilers here). You see her as a strong and times unbelievable woman, because of what she takes on with these twin boys that see knows nothing about. When Lea and the Marco finally meet there relationship is taken from zero to sixty in a matter of a few pages, which leaves me not completely feeling their true chemistry, but because of the situation you really want to pull for them. As I have stated above I have read several books from this author and I enjoy her plots and that is why I keep going back for more. I believe that her books would be even better if she fixed the grammatical errors and give us a little more chemistry/relationship between her hero and heroine.
I would have never given an author a poor rating but the missing words, grammar errors, and words misused do it. The plot of the story was on point but just get passed the mistakes. Marco loses his wife and daughter and never thought he would find love. Then Lea walked in to his life but a secret could end it. I gave this book 3 stars.
This author writes some very good stories; however, a proofreader is needed. This story is easily a four/five star story, points were deducted for poor grammar, wrong word used, and missing words.