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Corrupt Shadows Duet #2
Broken Shadows
Welcome to Hell, Little Witch
The Witch
The Order has found me, despite my best efforts. Regret gnaws at my insides as I suffer my father’s presence once more. I either destroy everything I touch, or people end up dead…sometimes both.
The irony? My key to escaping lies in embracing the powers of my coven, the same magic they want to use to destroy Lorcan.
If I’m going to get out of this, I have to trust him, so why does the thought feel as though I’ve swallowed razor blades? My feelings for him swirl inside my mind—my heart and my brain constantly battling for dominance.
But I need him, crave him even, and I’m mad at him for it. He was always the mirror reflecting the worst parts back to me through rose-tinted glass. Separately, we are monsters, but together, we are so much more than that.
The Demon
Demons cannot love, and vulnerability is not a word I entertain, but being around my little witch evokes something dark inside of me, a feeling that no matter what I do, I cannot squash. She’s everything I’ve wanted, and I cannot get her out of my mind.
Another century in the Shadow Realm without Evie is not a reality I will entertain. Except, when I see her again, she’s different, broken, and more dangerous than ever.
When an old adversary resurfaces, I’m faced with an impossible choice—go to Hell to keep her safe knowing I can’t leave after or stay with Evie, knowing my feelings could mean her downfall.
As the saying goes, no good deed goes unpunished.
Broken Shadows is the last book in the Corrupt Shadows Duet and explores dark topics that some many find triggering.
The Witch
The Order has found me, despite my best efforts. Regret gnaws at my insides as I suffer my father’s presence once more. I either destroy everything I touch, or people end up dead…sometimes both.
The irony? My key to escaping lies in embracing the powers of my coven, the same magic they want to use to destroy Lorcan.
If I’m going to get out of this, I have to trust him, so why does the thought feel as though I’ve swallowed razor blades? My feelings for him swirl inside my mind—my heart and my brain constantly battling for dominance.
But I need him, crave him even, and I’m mad at him for it. He was always the mirror reflecting the worst parts back to me through rose-tinted glass. Separately, we are monsters, but together, we are so much more than that.
The Demon
Demons cannot love, and vulnerability is not a word I entertain, but being around my little witch evokes something dark inside of me, a feeling that no matter what I do, I cannot squash. She’s everything I’ve wanted, and I cannot get her out of my mind.
Another century in the Shadow Realm without Evie is not a reality I will entertain. Except, when I see her again, she’s different, broken, and more dangerous than ever.
When an old adversary resurfaces, I’m faced with an impossible choice—go to Hell to keep her safe knowing I can’t leave after or stay with Evie, knowing my feelings could mean her downfall.
As the saying goes, no good deed goes unpunished.
Broken Shadows is the last book in the Corrupt Shadows Duet and explores dark topics that some many find triggering.
487 pages, Paperback
Published March 18, 2025
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Rebecca L. Garcia
20 books96 followersRebecca writes dark fantasy romance, usually with gothic elements and always with morally gray characters. Originally from England, she lives in Texas with her husband, and two sons. She loves anything with enemies to lovers, slow burn, and lots of angst.
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Instagram: www.instagram.com/rebeccalgarciabooks
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March 9, 2025
Once again, infinite stars to Gomez, the most important character in this series who has never done anything wrong ever.
Lorcan gets honorable mention for learning how to communicate his feelings like an adult despite being a man.
I ATE this up. The spice was spicing, the rage was raging, and the vibes were vibing. I could read books about Lorcan and Evie forever.
Lorcan gets honorable mention for learning how to communicate his feelings like an adult despite being a man.
I ATE this up. The spice was spicing, the rage was raging, and the vibes were vibing. I could read books about Lorcan and Evie forever.
March 25, 2025
I’ve been looking forward to this release for ages, but it was awfully disappointing.
Broken Shadows read like a sloppy first draft, hastily finished and rushed straight to print without passing through the hands of an editor.
there were so many typos, repeated sentences and paragraphs, numerous narrative inconsistencies, major pacing issues, irritating dialogue, and the weirdest way of spelling out sex grunts I’ve ever read.
they teed up a few spinoffs in the last few pages of this book. if those come to be, I hope they are written more thoughtfully than this was.
Broken Shadows read like a sloppy first draft, hastily finished and rushed straight to print without passing through the hands of an editor.
there were so many typos, repeated sentences and paragraphs, numerous narrative inconsistencies, major pacing issues, irritating dialogue, and the weirdest way of spelling out sex grunts I’ve ever read.
they teed up a few spinoffs in the last few pages of this book. if those come to be, I hope they are written more thoughtfully than this was.
July 18, 2025
Solid read, excessive spice…
March 18, 2025
I devoured this book, my love for Lorcan and Evie has just grown. Ezra has been added to my list of fav characters as well. The story was interesting and i loved the turns this book had taken. It felt like a great ending for these characters, especially for Evie.
I wish we had spent more time exploring hell and Lucifers palace as well as more interactions with Lucifer. I hope there is more books set in this world for Lorcan's brothers, Im so curious about Eva and Ezra's relationship and where they end up in the future. I highly recomend reading this book as it continues to suck you in just like the first book.
Honest review in return for an arc copy
I wish we had spent more time exploring hell and Lucifers palace as well as more interactions with Lucifer. I hope there is more books set in this world for Lorcan's brothers, Im so curious about Eva and Ezra's relationship and where they end up in the future. I highly recomend reading this book as it continues to suck you in just like the first book.
Honest review in return for an arc copy
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 15, 2025
“If I could tear out my heart and give it to you—if it meant I could stay here with you for an eternity, I would.”
Final rating for book two, and therefore the finale, are 3⭐️!
This one was… an experience to say the least— in many ways.
Now, I found the story and general idea interesting and enjoyable and loved the idea of it. In comparison, though, I liked book one a little bit better than the sequel.
In this book, I found the plot to be a little bit lacking in, for me, important details which would have contributed to the overall flow and logic of the storyline and the grand finale fell a little bit flat for me.
I don’t remember seeing much of this in book one, but Broken Shadows definitely would have needed a more thorough proofreading… There were certain parts where I noticed a lot of typos, doubles and sentences not making a lot of sense, which was quite unfortunate for my personal reading experience…
Nonetheless, I’m interested in reading some more of the authors’ works as I love stories about humans/witches and demons!
Final rating for book two, and therefore the finale, are 3⭐️!
This one was… an experience to say the least— in many ways.
Now, I found the story and general idea interesting and enjoyable and loved the idea of it. In comparison, though, I liked book one a little bit better than the sequel.
In this book, I found the plot to be a little bit lacking in, for me, important details which would have contributed to the overall flow and logic of the storyline and the grand finale fell a little bit flat for me.
I don’t remember seeing much of this in book one, but Broken Shadows definitely would have needed a more thorough proofreading… There were certain parts where I noticed a lot of typos, doubles and sentences not making a lot of sense, which was quite unfortunate for my personal reading experience…
Nonetheless, I’m interested in reading some more of the authors’ works as I love stories about humans/witches and demons!
March 26, 2025
If you like very sexually explicit stories with demons, witches, trials of Hell, banter and kinky fuckery - look no further!
Broken Shadows picks up where Corrupt Shadows left. Situation is not looking good for our characters, but they eventually manage to maneuver dangerous path that awaits them. I enjoyed reunions and interactions between brothers, as well as bond between girls and main couple - Evie and Lorcan. Gomez was back! And some of Aidenism's made situations humorous. Even though it was too cheesy for me. Sorry.
I would say this tilts more towards erotica genre, not just dark romance/romance aspect. Plot is still there, but story is heavy on spice and chemistry between characters. That's not bad ofc, because some readers prefer this way rather than nice balance between plot and romance. From previous works I know that authors can definitely write some crazy spice scenes that are delicious, long and detailed (honestly, slay! tingles! gasps!), but I wish that the world-building would get the same treatment. But maybe it's because it's duology? Something about the writing confused me. I don't know how to explain.. Even though I understand that there needs to be certain situations that the characters needs to face, some of them here, imo, could have been taken out. Either the situation was just thrown at us a filler, or it was not necessary at all. Also, I predicted the ending way early, so it felt somehow unsatisfactory for me. And too quick. It did conclude on a happy note, so there's that :)
TW/CW list as long as shopping list, so please check it out!! I mean, if you read first book you should know what to expect.
Spice: 5
Story: 3
Characters: 3,75
Plot: 3
Thank you CM Hutton & Rebecca L. Garcia, for providing an eARC in exchange for an honest review! All thoughts are my own and left voluntarily.
Broken Shadows picks up where Corrupt Shadows left. Situation is not looking good for our characters, but they eventually manage to maneuver dangerous path that awaits them. I enjoyed reunions and interactions between brothers, as well as bond between girls and main couple - Evie and Lorcan. Gomez was back! And some of Aidenism's made situations humorous. Even though it was too cheesy for me. Sorry.
I would say this tilts more towards erotica genre, not just dark romance/romance aspect. Plot is still there, but story is heavy on spice and chemistry between characters. That's not bad ofc, because some readers prefer this way rather than nice balance between plot and romance. From previous works I know that authors can definitely write some crazy spice scenes that are delicious, long and detailed (honestly, slay! tingles! gasps!), but I wish that the world-building would get the same treatment. But maybe it's because it's duology? Something about the writing confused me. I don't know how to explain.. Even though I understand that there needs to be certain situations that the characters needs to face, some of them here, imo, could have been taken out. Either the situation was just thrown at us a filler, or it was not necessary at all. Also, I predicted the ending way early, so it felt somehow unsatisfactory for me. And too quick. It did conclude on a happy note, so there's that :)
TW/CW list as long as shopping list, so please check it out!! I mean, if you read first book you should know what to expect.
Spice: 5
Story: 3
Characters: 3,75
Plot: 3
Thank you CM Hutton & Rebecca L. Garcia, for providing an eARC in exchange for an honest review! All thoughts are my own and left voluntarily.
June 8, 2025
Mucha tensión. Acción. Tortura. Sangre. Magia oscura. Personajes nuevos top. Risas con algunos. Giro dramático de los acontecimientos. Mucho🌶️. Sufrimiento. Viejabrujaasquerosa. Final redondo.
Bilogía dark-gótica con demonio-bruja muy chula.
He dicho ya mucho 🌶️?
⚠️ojito los TW. Aunque es consentido todo jueguito, es muy crudo y puede no gustar a según quién.
🔞 (como poco)
Bilogía dark-gótica con demonio-bruja muy chula.
He dicho ya mucho 🌶️?
⚠️ojito los TW. Aunque es consentido todo jueguito, es muy crudo y puede no gustar a según quién.
🔞 (como poco)
March 17, 2025
This book was amazing and I was so excited to be able to read it as an ARC…I feel special beyond belief! I absolutely loved this book and highly recommend it! It was to die for!❤️
March 28, 2025
I have been patiently waiting for this story ever since I had the pleasure of reading Corrupt Shadows. The book hangover I was left to endure after finishing the first book in this duet will stay with me for a very.long.time. When I got word that this story was finally here, I could not contain my excitment. To be blessed again to read for Rebecca, I knew I was in for a ride. First off, I know many reviews mention our fuzzy friend Gomez. Mine is going to be no different in that matter. Gomez really was a star of the show.
Now, on to what really matters. With this book, Evie and Lorcan’s story essentially comes to an end. It was definitely worth the wait in my opinion. Broken Shadows opened with all the emotions Corrupt Shadows left us with. Evie finally gives into her dark magic and it magical indeed. Watching Evie get her revenge was truly heartwarming all around. Watching Lorcan’s growth in acknowledging his emotions and learning to communicate really did something to my feelings. Something about a big masculine man showing some vulnerability wormed its way deep into my psyche. It was quite refreshing. Maybe that speaks to my reality, but hey. I really enjoyed meeting Lorcans brothers and seeing the connections they have to the deadly sins. Ezra and Gideon turning out to be a couple of good guys and seeing the budding relations with Rosa and Aiden was quite enjoyable. I loved what was done with Lucifer. It was a different take from the biblical story most people have learned at some point. Two words…….Cinnamon Rolls. LOL
I was content on how this story ended, it left me feeling satisfied without any hangover questions. The story line while complete, I feel is left with enough openness for some interconnected stand alones with some of the other characters. *wink wink*
Lastly, the spice. Because we all know thats what we’re really looking for. LOL The spice is hella nice, leaving you needing a cold shower after some scenes. I would say the scene at about 29%, Primal and Somno scenes were most memorable and notable. We get to experience Lorcan in his full transition and I must say…….Good Lordt. I forget how much I love me a solid Shadow Daddy. This story did not disappoint.
I would like to note that there were some areas of the book that had extra words that were not needed and one point I had to reread because it seemed to jump a little. Over all it did not really affect the review of the book, but enough to make note.
Now, on to what really matters. With this book, Evie and Lorcan’s story essentially comes to an end. It was definitely worth the wait in my opinion. Broken Shadows opened with all the emotions Corrupt Shadows left us with. Evie finally gives into her dark magic and it magical indeed. Watching Evie get her revenge was truly heartwarming all around. Watching Lorcan’s growth in acknowledging his emotions and learning to communicate really did something to my feelings. Something about a big masculine man showing some vulnerability wormed its way deep into my psyche. It was quite refreshing. Maybe that speaks to my reality, but hey. I really enjoyed meeting Lorcans brothers and seeing the connections they have to the deadly sins. Ezra and Gideon turning out to be a couple of good guys and seeing the budding relations with Rosa and Aiden was quite enjoyable. I loved what was done with Lucifer. It was a different take from the biblical story most people have learned at some point. Two words…….Cinnamon Rolls. LOL
I was content on how this story ended, it left me feeling satisfied without any hangover questions. The story line while complete, I feel is left with enough openness for some interconnected stand alones with some of the other characters. *wink wink*
Lastly, the spice. Because we all know thats what we’re really looking for. LOL The spice is hella nice, leaving you needing a cold shower after some scenes. I would say the scene at about 29%, Primal and Somno scenes were most memorable and notable. We get to experience Lorcan in his full transition and I must say…….Good Lordt. I forget how much I love me a solid Shadow Daddy. This story did not disappoint.
I would like to note that there were some areas of the book that had extra words that were not needed and one point I had to reread because it seemed to jump a little. Over all it did not really affect the review of the book, but enough to make note.
May 21, 2025
I pushed through the first book, barely. Hoping that the second book would have better writing and less plot holes. I was wrong again. DNF’d it halfway through. The first part of the book was better, I felt like I knew what was actually happening…. And then they “went to hell” and I’m back to being confused again. I don’t even know what the plot is at this point. Not going to try to pick this one back up like I did with the first book.
April 13, 2025
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️/5
🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️/5
“𝓨𝓸𝓾𝓻 𝓶𝓸𝓻𝓽𝓪𝓵 𝓱𝓮𝓪𝓻𝓽 𝓽𝓪𝓾𝓷𝓽𝓼 𝓶𝓮 𝔀𝓲𝓽𝓱 𝓮𝓿𝓮𝓻𝔂 𝓫𝓮𝓪𝓽.”
This is a dark, paranormal romance. The content, both on and off page, will NOT be suitable for everyone. It covers heavy topics that may be triggering to some. You MUST proceed with caution; your mental health matters.
Well… hello again Daddy Lorcan 🤤
I was desperate to get my hands on this after finishing book 1 and the cliffhanger it left me dangling from. When it landed, I was beyond excited to dive back into the shadows alongside Lorcan and Evie!
This picks up right where we left off in Corrupt Shadows and weaves a tale bursting to the brim of deception, playful shadows, age old revenge and the fluffiest floof of a familiar we absolutely adore. This book also brings found family vibes which I was totally digging during the course of the read! Let’s not forget the spicy spice that left me sweating in places I shouldn’t be! A particular scene had me physically drooling 🤤 😮💨
It was amazing to be back in the fold with my favourite morally grey characters but to also meet others more intimately that we didn’t fully understand, or get to see in book 1. This is where the found family vibes came in and I absolutely loved it. I was fully there for these budding relationships and it warmed my dark soul. This book was more about character growth for me and I adored it.
This read had characters I loved, I’m talking about you Gomez 😍, the storyline was thrilling, obvs the spice was 100% spicing and the twists kept me hanging off the edge of my seat! The sexual tension between the characters was palpable and I was living for it.
I particularly enjoyed how Evie fully embraced her bada$$ self and become the ultimate shadow mummy. Her growth and acceptance were heartwarming. It also levelled up her relationship with Lorcan and made him realise a couple of home truths which I think he needed.
The concept of the story itself was amazing, but for me personally, I felt it didn’t follow the same path as book 1. It was a bit jumpy at certain points and too fast paced. I questioned whether I’d missed something a few times and had to back track. That being said, it was a great read overall and I enjoyed it.
😈 Dual POV
😈 Demons & Witches
😈 Shadow Daddy & Mummy
😈 Dominate/Possessive MMC
😈 FMC that comes into her own
😈 St@lking
😈 Mûrd3r / G0r3
😈 Religi0us Trauma
😈 D*b-C0n/N*n-C0n
😈 BD$M
😈 Found family vibes
😈 😮💨/🩸/ 🔪 Play
😈 Body Mod
Would recommend!
🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️/5
“𝓨𝓸𝓾𝓻 𝓶𝓸𝓻𝓽𝓪𝓵 𝓱𝓮𝓪𝓻𝓽 𝓽𝓪𝓾𝓷𝓽𝓼 𝓶𝓮 𝔀𝓲𝓽𝓱 𝓮𝓿𝓮𝓻𝔂 𝓫𝓮𝓪𝓽.”
This is a dark, paranormal romance. The content, both on and off page, will NOT be suitable for everyone. It covers heavy topics that may be triggering to some. You MUST proceed with caution; your mental health matters.
Well… hello again Daddy Lorcan 🤤
I was desperate to get my hands on this after finishing book 1 and the cliffhanger it left me dangling from. When it landed, I was beyond excited to dive back into the shadows alongside Lorcan and Evie!
This picks up right where we left off in Corrupt Shadows and weaves a tale bursting to the brim of deception, playful shadows, age old revenge and the fluffiest floof of a familiar we absolutely adore. This book also brings found family vibes which I was totally digging during the course of the read! Let’s not forget the spicy spice that left me sweating in places I shouldn’t be! A particular scene had me physically drooling 🤤 😮💨
It was amazing to be back in the fold with my favourite morally grey characters but to also meet others more intimately that we didn’t fully understand, or get to see in book 1. This is where the found family vibes came in and I absolutely loved it. I was fully there for these budding relationships and it warmed my dark soul. This book was more about character growth for me and I adored it.
This read had characters I loved, I’m talking about you Gomez 😍, the storyline was thrilling, obvs the spice was 100% spicing and the twists kept me hanging off the edge of my seat! The sexual tension between the characters was palpable and I was living for it.
I particularly enjoyed how Evie fully embraced her bada$$ self and become the ultimate shadow mummy. Her growth and acceptance were heartwarming. It also levelled up her relationship with Lorcan and made him realise a couple of home truths which I think he needed.
The concept of the story itself was amazing, but for me personally, I felt it didn’t follow the same path as book 1. It was a bit jumpy at certain points and too fast paced. I questioned whether I’d missed something a few times and had to back track. That being said, it was a great read overall and I enjoyed it.
😈 Dual POV
😈 Demons & Witches
😈 Shadow Daddy & Mummy
😈 Dominate/Possessive MMC
😈 FMC that comes into her own
😈 St@lking
😈 Mûrd3r / G0r3
😈 Religi0us Trauma
😈 D*b-C0n/N*n-C0n
😈 BD$M
😈 Found family vibes
😈 😮💨/🩸/ 🔪 Play
😈 Body Mod
Would recommend!
March 26, 2025
This is book two of the Corrupt Shadows duet and believe me when I say book one ended in a brutal cliffhanger! I've been waiting on that cliff for a long time, but it was definitely worth the wait!
It picks up right where book one left off so you're immediately back in the middle of the action.
I can't say too much without giving spoilers but let's just say reunions happen and that causes a lot of funny banter and adorable bonding!
The found family aspect was also funny and very adorable and I'm happy we got way more Gomey aka Gomez aka Night Puppy aka Fluffy Fucker as Lorcan so endearingly calls him. Eventhough our shadow daddy doesn't want to admit it, he definitely cares for him and they have a beautiful brenemie relationship as Ezra nicely puts it and I'm totally here for it! 😂
After certain reunions our shadow mommy and daddy go to hell to speak to Lorcan's father, Lucifer, who has been isolated from his sons by Evie's great aunt Evangeline. Hell wouldn't be hell if it weren’t creepy with hardships and trials.
I love trials and these had me on the edge of my seat. It brought out a softer side of Lorcan but also his darkest demon side. The spice was delicious and was blazing during the trial of desire! I'm just gonna say demon spice and tail play 👀.
I also loved the unique take on Lucifer and how he is with his sons! And that ending was just perfect!
🖤Shadow Mommy
💜Shadow Daddy
🖤DemonXWitch
💜Trials
🖤Spice
💜Tail Play
🖤Primal Play
💜Somnophilia
🖤Other Realms
💜Found Family
🖤Gothic vibes
💜Fruit Bat familiar/animal sidekick
🖤Murder
💜Banter
🖤Pierced 🍆
The menu aka TW list is way longer than this so make sure to check it if you have any triggers!
It picks up right where book one left off so you're immediately back in the middle of the action.
I can't say too much without giving spoilers but let's just say reunions happen and that causes a lot of funny banter and adorable bonding!
The found family aspect was also funny and very adorable and I'm happy we got way more Gomey aka Gomez aka Night Puppy aka Fluffy Fucker as Lorcan so endearingly calls him. Eventhough our shadow daddy doesn't want to admit it, he definitely cares for him and they have a beautiful brenemie relationship as Ezra nicely puts it and I'm totally here for it! 😂
After certain reunions our shadow mommy and daddy go to hell to speak to Lorcan's father, Lucifer, who has been isolated from his sons by Evie's great aunt Evangeline. Hell wouldn't be hell if it weren’t creepy with hardships and trials.
I love trials and these had me on the edge of my seat. It brought out a softer side of Lorcan but also his darkest demon side. The spice was delicious and was blazing during the trial of desire! I'm just gonna say demon spice and tail play 👀.
I also loved the unique take on Lucifer and how he is with his sons! And that ending was just perfect!
🖤Shadow Mommy
💜Shadow Daddy
🖤DemonXWitch
💜Trials
🖤Spice
💜Tail Play
🖤Primal Play
💜Somnophilia
🖤Other Realms
💜Found Family
🖤Gothic vibes
💜Fruit Bat familiar/animal sidekick
🖤Murder
💜Banter
🖤Pierced 🍆
The menu aka TW list is way longer than this so make sure to check it if you have any triggers!
March 26, 2025
This is a great continuation of the story of Evie and Lorcan. It picks up immediately where the cliffhanger ended from book 1. I enjoyed the direction of the plot and it was fun visiting Hell and experiencing some of the punishments or "trials" souls go through in hell. It's a faster pace than the first book I felt like, and it didn't linger in any one spot too long. Because the plot moved quickly, it felt a little jumpy in spots, like how did we end up here suddenly? Or the time jumps without readily stated time jumps took place. Little things that threw me off some, but not enough to detract from my enjoyment of the story overall.
Gomez was the sweetest. Lorcan learned how to use his words. Evie got her revenge. We gained found family vibes with Ezra and Lorcan making amends, along with adding Rosa, Gideon, and Aiden to the mix. The chemistry is off the charts between Evie and Lorcan and I love that they match each other's freak energy. The scene where Evie leaves her "mark" on Lorcan? 🤌🤌🤌😈🥵 so good.
This is a satisfying ending to the duet.
Gomez was the sweetest. Lorcan learned how to use his words. Evie got her revenge. We gained found family vibes with Ezra and Lorcan making amends, along with adding Rosa, Gideon, and Aiden to the mix. The chemistry is off the charts between Evie and Lorcan and I love that they match each other's freak energy. The scene where Evie leaves her "mark" on Lorcan? 🤌🤌🤌😈🥵 so good.
This is a satisfying ending to the duet.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 21, 2025
Is it too soon to beg for a book of Aiden and Gideon and as well as one for Ezra and Rosa and one for Lucifer?
Also did we ever learn Lorcan’s true name and I missed it? Unless it was Lust and I didn’t miss it?
I forgot to add Ezra was easily my fav in this story and the only reason why I gave this 4 stars is because I felt the first book was better. But I still enjoyed this ALOT
Thank you for the arc ❤️❤️
Also did we ever learn Lorcan’s true name and I missed it? Unless it was Lust and I didn’t miss it?
I forgot to add Ezra was easily my fav in this story and the only reason why I gave this 4 stars is because I felt the first book was better. But I still enjoyed this ALOT
Thank you for the arc ❤️❤️
March 21, 2025
This duet was something else, I'd never really read anything dark until I read Corrupt Shadows and I was iffy on that one but I still wanted to know how it would all play out.
It played out nicely because I enjoyed this one! Evie and Lorcan were clearly meant for one another, I love the way he was with her in this one. Obviously Gomez is my favorite though and will always be number 1!
Also, spice is always a good bonus. 😉
This duet deserves the reads.
It played out nicely because I enjoyed this one! Evie and Lorcan were clearly meant for one another, I love the way he was with her in this one. Obviously Gomez is my favorite though and will always be number 1!
Also, spice is always a good bonus. 😉
This duet deserves the reads.
March 20, 2025
Another epic primal scene in this second book that I really loved and better yet, we got dominant Evie!! Oof Lorcan and Evie use those shadows for so much filthy goodness I can’t handle it lol! I love them so much and I loved the whole gang being together to go through all their trials and tribulations, so good:)
May 26, 2025
I’m very stuck between 2.5 and 3 stars because I absolutely loved the first book but this one was rushed, following the story was difficult (maybe my fault for not rereading the first book) and the book is in dire need of an editor.
I do love the characters a lot and I’m probably going to give it another chance in the future!
And please give Ezra and Rosa their own book 👀👀
I do love the characters a lot and I’m probably going to give it another chance in the future!
And please give Ezra and Rosa their own book 👀👀
March 21, 2025
Waiting for the conclusion to this diet was so well worth it! Evie and Lorcan are top tier. And Gomez? He’s gotta be my favorite sidekick ever!
The writing was so descriptive, I could see everything play out in my head. Such a great read!
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🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
The writing was so descriptive, I could see everything play out in my head. Such a great read!
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
April 6, 2025
First of all I’ve been for this book for almost 18 months! Since the day I finished book 1, had I known I’d have to wait so long and that book 1 of ended in such a cliffhanger, would I have read it? Yes, yes I probably would have!
The nice thing was even though there was such a huge time gap I had no problem picking up where I had left off. There is enough back story to bring back book 1 to the forefront.
If you like demons, witches, magic, love and smut you’ll like book 1 & book 2.
Lor is a son of Lucifer and his brothers lock him away in another realm for centuries. In book 1 you get to know him a little, he’s definitely the grumpy to his witch’s sunshine.
I don’t want to give anything away but I would definitely recommend reading both books in order.
The nice thing was even though there was such a huge time gap I had no problem picking up where I had left off. There is enough back story to bring back book 1 to the forefront.
If you like demons, witches, magic, love and smut you’ll like book 1 & book 2.
Lor is a son of Lucifer and his brothers lock him away in another realm for centuries. In book 1 you get to know him a little, he’s definitely the grumpy to his witch’s sunshine.
I don’t want to give anything away but I would definitely recommend reading both books in order.
March 30, 2025
Taking place right where the first entry concluded, this book wastes no time putting you on a wild ride of emotions. I thoroughly enjoyed their adventures, but the ensemble of the “Heathen Misfits” had me in stitches; each character is wonderfully crafted, thoughtfully designed, and has their own impact on the world. All the meaningful connections that were formed amongst the main cast really sold the camaraderie, and throughout the whole book my appreciation for the character development (especially with Lorcan) compounded. They all felt as if their entire lives had been moulding them for these moments.
This is easily one of my favourite duets; the blending of witches and demons, the hellish atmospheres, contrasted by their delightful banter. I just couldn’t get enough. Dark spicy fantasy with humour, yes please!
The spice in this dark fantasy is undeniably flavourful.. Please check the TWs.
The ending was beautiful and *spoiler*
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Shadow Mommy & Daddy lived happily ever after.
This is easily one of my favourite duets; the blending of witches and demons, the hellish atmospheres, contrasted by their delightful banter. I just couldn’t get enough. Dark spicy fantasy with humour, yes please!
The spice in this dark fantasy is undeniably flavourful.. Please check the TWs.
The ending was beautiful and *spoiler*
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Shadow Mommy & Daddy lived happily ever after.
October 5, 2025
i enjoyed the ending. the spice was amazing. but the middle was so hard to get through. gomey is my fav🫶🦇
March 17, 2025
I was blessed to be able to read the ARC copy. Gomez for Life!!!! Now that the obvious has been stated, I absolutely love this duet! I'm sad to see it end, but I love the way it wrapped up! Evie and Lorcan are so chaotic and fun! The spice was extra spicy! I will always love how raw these characters are. Definitely a great read!
March 24, 2025
What an amazing read with characters that I will not forget about. I absolutely can’t get enough of Gomez, he is a show stealer lol. I’m gonna miss these characters. I love how Evie, Lorcan and even Lucifer got their revenge. An amazing duet that everyone should read.
March 22, 2025
Oh I loved this. Demons and witches with all the spice. Deadly trials. Primal and dominant, everything was so addictive. I love fuzzy fucƙ3r he is so cute! A possessive obsessive demon is always an instant YES. And now one of my favorites. I hope there is mote from the other characters!
July 3, 2025
Sigh. Repeat after me:
Trials👏🏽are👏🏽done
We👏🏽want👏🏽quests
Stop👏🏽putting👏🏽pointless👏🏽trials👏🏽in👏🏽to👏🏽hit👏🏽a👏🏽word👏🏽count
Particularly flabbergasted by the incorrect „your” featuring twice.
Trials👏🏽are👏🏽done
We👏🏽want👏🏽quests
Stop👏🏽putting👏🏽pointless👏🏽trials👏🏽in👏🏽to👏🏽hit👏🏽a👏🏽word👏🏽count
Particularly flabbergasted by the incorrect „your” featuring twice.
May 11, 2025
AND FINALLY IT'S HERE (ik it's been here for a month) AND I FINALLY READ IT!!!
I was waiting for the second book for soo long and I can't believe I finally read it.
The authors delivered what we wanted, the spice, the plot, the character development, introducing characters.
the character development of Lor was well written, him going from brooding and wanting to kill Evie to loving her and not letting her grow and trying to communicate how he feels showed how far he has come.
And my poor Evie the shit she goes through at the beginning of the second book AGH, I was really on the edge of my seat saying "LIKE WHERE TF ARE U LOR" but Evie got it. However, still, what Edward (the sperm donor that's what I prefer calling cuz he ain't a father) did he deserve what was coming to him, the only thing I wish I wanted was for him to suffer more like pure torture he deserved real agony and days of torture. Still, I get that time was not on their side
and how can I forget Gomez, I just luv him the way he protects Evie and doesn't want to let her go shows how strong their bond is.
Now coming to Ezra and Rosa, dayum their chemistry was too potent, and the way he protected her towards her brother AGHHH and went on rampage, i was like alr plus the way he calls her "sugar" UFFF. Ezra was really one of my favorite characters in this book, he really brought the charm,flirty and humor to it, literally had me giggling when he speaks or his interaction witH Rosa.
Everyone needs a Rosa in their life the way she truly shines and is there for Evie and the way she is protective towards the people she love really showed what type of person she is.
Now coming to Aiden and Gideon, I did not see that coming. I really thought Aiden would switch sides but I am glad he didn't. Plus the way Gideon growls and gets pissed when Lor scares or taunts or degrades him, I was like "Oh okay", I am rooting for them, they give me "sunshine x broody" vibes where Gideon is only soft for Aiden.
plus the interaction between lucifer and Evie was soo adorable and heart warming, what Evie's aunt did deserved far worse than what she got and her partner in crime (don't want to spoil the name) got what he deserved as for what they did to Lor.
Now the reason why I give 4/5 instead of 5/5 was due to some reason, I am not gonna say it was due to too many spicy scenes because the plot made up for it instead I would say the spicy scenes especially the Lor going full beast mode, iykyk made up for it.
There were some grammatical errors not too many but they were.
I would love more if they showed Gideon making a direct move on Aiden because we know he feels attraction towards him and vice versa plus I need to know Gideon's thoughts on it too.
Now I do want more of Ezra and Rosa, so a book abt them will be interesting, and a book on Gideon and Ezra too, because why not.
I want to see what happens after the epilogue because we didn't get much.
I was waiting for the second book for soo long and I can't believe I finally read it.
The authors delivered what we wanted, the spice, the plot, the character development, introducing characters.
the character development of Lor was well written, him going from brooding and wanting to kill Evie to loving her and not letting her grow and trying to communicate how he feels showed how far he has come.
And my poor Evie the shit she goes through at the beginning of the second book AGH, I was really on the edge of my seat saying "LIKE WHERE TF ARE U LOR" but Evie got it. However, still, what Edward (the sperm donor that's what I prefer calling cuz he ain't a father) did he deserve what was coming to him, the only thing I wish I wanted was for him to suffer more like pure torture he deserved real agony and days of torture. Still, I get that time was not on their side
and how can I forget Gomez, I just luv him the way he protects Evie and doesn't want to let her go shows how strong their bond is.
Now coming to Ezra and Rosa, dayum their chemistry was too potent, and the way he protected her towards her brother AGHHH and went on rampage, i was like alr plus the way he calls her "sugar" UFFF. Ezra was really one of my favorite characters in this book, he really brought the charm,flirty and humor to it, literally had me giggling when he speaks or his interaction witH Rosa.
Everyone needs a Rosa in their life the way she truly shines and is there for Evie and the way she is protective towards the people she love really showed what type of person she is.
Now coming to Aiden and Gideon, I did not see that coming. I really thought Aiden would switch sides but I am glad he didn't. Plus the way Gideon growls and gets pissed when Lor scares or taunts or degrades him, I was like "Oh okay", I am rooting for them, they give me "sunshine x broody" vibes where Gideon is only soft for Aiden.
plus the interaction between lucifer and Evie was soo adorable and heart warming, what Evie's aunt did deserved far worse than what she got and her partner in crime (don't want to spoil the name) got what he deserved as for what they did to Lor.
Now the reason why I give 4/5 instead of 5/5 was due to some reason, I am not gonna say it was due to too many spicy scenes because the plot made up for it instead I would say the spicy scenes especially the Lor going full beast mode, iykyk made up for it.
There were some grammatical errors not too many but they were.
I would love more if they showed Gideon making a direct move on Aiden because we know he feels attraction towards him and vice versa plus I need to know Gideon's thoughts on it too.
Now I do want more of Ezra and Rosa, so a book abt them will be interesting, and a book on Gideon and Ezra too, because why not.
I want to see what happens after the epilogue because we didn't get much.
April 3, 2025
💜First I want to thank Rebecca Garcia and C.M Hutton for the opportunity to be an ARC reader for this book.💜
I was so excited to finally dive back into this world-especially after the cliff hanger they decided to torture us with lol I don’t want to say too much and give anything away but what a perfect ending to this duet with Lorcan and Evie getting their happy ending. When we met Ezra at the end of book 1 he doesn’t seem like he’d be a favorite but omg he’s so snarky and funny. I hope sometime down the line we get a book about him and Rosa. The banter in this book is so good. I also love a good found family trope and while this one seems like an unconventional bunch, it definitely works lol Never thought I’d want a pet bat but if it was Gomey I wouldn’t think twice 🦇Fluffy F*cker always and forever 😅 And of course the spice was spicing and did not disappoint 🥵
🖤Shadow Daddy
💜Shadow Mommy
🖤Demon X Witch
💜Found Family
🖤Banter
💜Trials
🖤Primal Play
💜Stalking
🖤Dark Romance
🦇 There are some dark topics in this book so please check your trigger warnings
🦇Blurb
The Witch
The Order has found me, despite my best efforts. Regret gnaws at my insides as I suffer my father’s presence once more. I either destroy everything I touch, or people end up dead…sometimes both.
The irony? My key to escaping lies in embracing the powers of my coven, the same magic they want to use to destroy Lorcan.
If I’m going to get out of this, I have to trust him, so why does the thought feel as though I’ve swallowed razor blades? My feelings for him swirl inside my mind—my heart and my brain constantly battling for dominance.
But I need him, crave him even, and I’m mad at him for it. He was always the mirror reflecting the worst parts back to me through rose-tinted glass. Separately, we are monsters, but together, we are so much more than that.
The Demon
Demons cannot love, and vulnerability is not a word I entertain, but being around my little witch evokes something dark inside of me, a feeling that no matter what I do, I cannot squash. She’s everything I’ve wanted, and I cannot get her out of my mind.
Another century in the Shadow Realm without Evie is not a reality I will entertain. Except, when I see her again, she’s different, broken, and more dangerous than ever.
When an old adversary resurfaces, I’m faced with an impossible choice—go to Hell to keep her safe knowing I can’t leave after or stay with Evie, knowing my feelings could mean her downfall.
I was so excited to finally dive back into this world-especially after the cliff hanger they decided to torture us with lol I don’t want to say too much and give anything away but what a perfect ending to this duet with Lorcan and Evie getting their happy ending. When we met Ezra at the end of book 1 he doesn’t seem like he’d be a favorite but omg he’s so snarky and funny. I hope sometime down the line we get a book about him and Rosa. The banter in this book is so good. I also love a good found family trope and while this one seems like an unconventional bunch, it definitely works lol Never thought I’d want a pet bat but if it was Gomey I wouldn’t think twice 🦇Fluffy F*cker always and forever 😅 And of course the spice was spicing and did not disappoint 🥵
🖤Shadow Daddy
💜Shadow Mommy
🖤Demon X Witch
💜Found Family
🖤Banter
💜Trials
🖤Primal Play
💜Stalking
🖤Dark Romance
🦇 There are some dark topics in this book so please check your trigger warnings
🦇Blurb
The Witch
The Order has found me, despite my best efforts. Regret gnaws at my insides as I suffer my father’s presence once more. I either destroy everything I touch, or people end up dead…sometimes both.
The irony? My key to escaping lies in embracing the powers of my coven, the same magic they want to use to destroy Lorcan.
If I’m going to get out of this, I have to trust him, so why does the thought feel as though I’ve swallowed razor blades? My feelings for him swirl inside my mind—my heart and my brain constantly battling for dominance.
But I need him, crave him even, and I’m mad at him for it. He was always the mirror reflecting the worst parts back to me through rose-tinted glass. Separately, we are monsters, but together, we are so much more than that.
The Demon
Demons cannot love, and vulnerability is not a word I entertain, but being around my little witch evokes something dark inside of me, a feeling that no matter what I do, I cannot squash. She’s everything I’ve wanted, and I cannot get her out of my mind.
Another century in the Shadow Realm without Evie is not a reality I will entertain. Except, when I see her again, she’s different, broken, and more dangerous than ever.
When an old adversary resurfaces, I’m faced with an impossible choice—go to Hell to keep her safe knowing I can’t leave after or stay with Evie, knowing my feelings could mean her downfall.
June 19, 2025
Okay so Broken Shadows was DEFINITELY more fun than book one. Like, stuff actually happened this time. There was more action, more jokes, and the plot didn’t move at a glacial pace for once.
First of all, Lorcan.
WHY is this man still the male lead?? He’s so painfully cringe. One second he’s like Oh wow the bat is so cute and literally BFFs with him, then the next he’s having an emotional breakdown because Eva is paying more attention to said bat. “He watched her gaze linger on the bat longer than it did on him.” SIR. Get a grip. You're jealous of a literal bat. Grow up.
Also, the man cannot decide if he wants to kiss Eva or write her a sad poem. The angst is so heavy it gave me secondhand embarrassment. Every time he and Eva talked, I wanted to hand them both a therapist and leave the room. They are cute at the same time though. “I could sense it too.
Sense what, exactly? He asks.
That what we had was something epic.”
EVA!? STILL SUCH A DIVA!! She’s dramatic, powerful, and definitely carrying this series on her sparkly shoulders. Like she walks into every scene like “You will listen to me because I’m right.”…and somehow she actually is. Her sass and power moves were top-tier. No notes for her. She’s the main character and knows it. The way she clowned Lorcan half the time? I lived.
She is so powerful and strong though, I admire her resilience so much. “Just because he’s dead, doesn’t mean the deep wounds he left behind are. You can’t kill a memory, but you can heal your reaction to it, with time.”
“Tears line my lashes as the word father echoes along my brainwaves. Rosa never understood why I continue to call Edward that, but only a parent can inflict the brand of pain that burrows deep in my bones.”
Aiden and Lorcan’s friendship was actually adorable tho.
“For once, Aiden is right,” I acknowledge.
Aiden’s jaw drops open comically and his eyes bulge. “I…I…wha?” he stammers.
Ezra twists toward me, then raises his tattooed hand in front of his mouth and speaks at regular volume. “Utoh, I think you broke him.”
My eyes narrow on Aiden, then every single muscle in my body tightens rapidly as he tips forward and traps me in a bear hug. “I knew you liked me,” he cries in my ear.
I release a dark growl. “Aiden. Get. Off. Me.”
“Oh, shit. Sorry. Like, for real dude,”
AND CAN WE TALK ABOUT EZRA AND ROSA??
My actual favorite part. Their chemistry? CHEF’S KISS. The way Ezra kept being all smooth and sarcastic and Rosa was like I hate you but with heart eyes?? I shipped it harder than the main couple.
Gideon was actually so cute though?? Like the wayI hated him, but he was so respectful to Rosa. “I may be your captive, Wrath, but I won't stand by and allow you to continually pester the woman. She obviously abhors your attentions.” ANDD. Is it just me or did I sense something between him and Aiden!? I ship it.
The worldbuilding still felt a little like someone dumped fantasy buzzwords into a cauldron and hoped for the best, but at least there were more fight scenes to distract from it. And the humor was genuinely better this time—some lines actually made me laugh instead of cringe.
First of all, Lorcan.
WHY is this man still the male lead?? He’s so painfully cringe. One second he’s like Oh wow the bat is so cute and literally BFFs with him, then the next he’s having an emotional breakdown because Eva is paying more attention to said bat. “He watched her gaze linger on the bat longer than it did on him.” SIR. Get a grip. You're jealous of a literal bat. Grow up.
Also, the man cannot decide if he wants to kiss Eva or write her a sad poem. The angst is so heavy it gave me secondhand embarrassment. Every time he and Eva talked, I wanted to hand them both a therapist and leave the room. They are cute at the same time though. “I could sense it too.
Sense what, exactly? He asks.
That what we had was something epic.”
EVA!? STILL SUCH A DIVA!! She’s dramatic, powerful, and definitely carrying this series on her sparkly shoulders. Like she walks into every scene like “You will listen to me because I’m right.”…and somehow she actually is. Her sass and power moves were top-tier. No notes for her. She’s the main character and knows it. The way she clowned Lorcan half the time? I lived.
She is so powerful and strong though, I admire her resilience so much. “Just because he’s dead, doesn’t mean the deep wounds he left behind are. You can’t kill a memory, but you can heal your reaction to it, with time.”
“Tears line my lashes as the word father echoes along my brainwaves. Rosa never understood why I continue to call Edward that, but only a parent can inflict the brand of pain that burrows deep in my bones.”
Aiden and Lorcan’s friendship was actually adorable tho.
“For once, Aiden is right,” I acknowledge.
Aiden’s jaw drops open comically and his eyes bulge. “I…I…wha?” he stammers.
Ezra twists toward me, then raises his tattooed hand in front of his mouth and speaks at regular volume. “Utoh, I think you broke him.”
My eyes narrow on Aiden, then every single muscle in my body tightens rapidly as he tips forward and traps me in a bear hug. “I knew you liked me,” he cries in my ear.
I release a dark growl. “Aiden. Get. Off. Me.”
“Oh, shit. Sorry. Like, for real dude,”
AND CAN WE TALK ABOUT EZRA AND ROSA??
My actual favorite part. Their chemistry? CHEF’S KISS. The way Ezra kept being all smooth and sarcastic and Rosa was like I hate you but with heart eyes?? I shipped it harder than the main couple.
Gideon was actually so cute though?? Like the wayI hated him, but he was so respectful to Rosa. “I may be your captive, Wrath, but I won't stand by and allow you to continually pester the woman. She obviously abhors your attentions.” ANDD. Is it just me or did I sense something between him and Aiden!? I ship it.
The worldbuilding still felt a little like someone dumped fantasy buzzwords into a cauldron and hoped for the best, but at least there were more fight scenes to distract from it. And the humor was genuinely better this time—some lines actually made me laugh instead of cringe.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 19, 2025
The way I have been chomping at the bit to get back to Lorcan and Evie, I was so excited to read the conclusion to their story!
In Broken Shadows, we pick right back up at the ending of Corrupt Shadows with Evie having been found and much to her dismay she must trust Lorcan to help her, Gomez, Rosa and Aiden. She is so torn on her feelings towards Lorcan, he lied and manipulated her but his darkness calls to hers.
Lorcan will do whatever he must to get Evie back in his arms even if it means working with his annoying brother Ezra who caused the problem in the first place. He might have started his obsession with his Little Witch out of needing to use her to free him but Evie quickly grew under his skin and he can’t imagine not being near her.
Evie is put through the wringer at the beginning of this book and endures so much while she is captured. (Please read the CWs/TWs before reading) But she is also so fierce even when doubt and fear of loneliness creep in and Lorcan is there with her every step of the way.
The way that Lorcan cares for Evie in this book will have you swooning while he still has his rough edges, he had turned into a bit of a burnt cinnamon roll for her. He even cares for her familiar Gomez, even though he will never admit it 🤭 But he will not let Evie face her demons alone, he wants to be the only Demon she fears.
The playful banter is fantastic between Evie, Lorcan, Rosa, Aiden and Ezra. The way that Ezra tries to sweet talk Rosa and Aiden who Lorcan just loves to torment for his pleasure.
They all must work together to stop Evangeline and that includes journeying to Hell while facing trials and facing their fears. But don’t worry we still get the spicy spice we loved from Corrupt Shadows 😏
Spice: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
In Broken Shadows, we pick right back up at the ending of Corrupt Shadows with Evie having been found and much to her dismay she must trust Lorcan to help her, Gomez, Rosa and Aiden. She is so torn on her feelings towards Lorcan, he lied and manipulated her but his darkness calls to hers.
Lorcan will do whatever he must to get Evie back in his arms even if it means working with his annoying brother Ezra who caused the problem in the first place. He might have started his obsession with his Little Witch out of needing to use her to free him but Evie quickly grew under his skin and he can’t imagine not being near her.
Evie is put through the wringer at the beginning of this book and endures so much while she is captured. (Please read the CWs/TWs before reading) But she is also so fierce even when doubt and fear of loneliness creep in and Lorcan is there with her every step of the way.
The way that Lorcan cares for Evie in this book will have you swooning while he still has his rough edges, he had turned into a bit of a burnt cinnamon roll for her. He even cares for her familiar Gomez, even though he will never admit it 🤭 But he will not let Evie face her demons alone, he wants to be the only Demon she fears.
The playful banter is fantastic between Evie, Lorcan, Rosa, Aiden and Ezra. The way that Ezra tries to sweet talk Rosa and Aiden who Lorcan just loves to torment for his pleasure.
They all must work together to stop Evangeline and that includes journeying to Hell while facing trials and facing their fears. But don’t worry we still get the spicy spice we loved from Corrupt Shadows 😏
Spice: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
April 26, 2025
here we go....book 2
altho I am in love with the entire concept nd this second installment held my attention better, I felt like a teacher grading a highschool english paper during the whole thing. F btw, if you wanted to know the final grade.
I read a lot of indie authors which usually comes with independent "editors" that do a mostly ok job editing the books, so I usually just disregard errors but this one?! My god. There were so many grammatical/spelling errors that I was questioning my eyeballs at one point. Just being slapped in the face willy nilly with the same sentence twice in a row, repeated words nd phrases within sentences, a multitude of spelling errors. *face palm* I hope to God the authors didn't pay these editors cause they need their money back asap.
that aside, I thoroughly enjoyed this second part. we're outta the shadow realm nd have enlisted a buncha misfits to journey to hell to confront Lucifer himself. Lorry's brothers are adorably lovable with great banter nd brotherly love nd Aiden is everyone's favourite dumb dumb. I loved it enuf that, despite it's atrocious editing, I wanted to stay emerged in this world a little longer. worth the read all around.
altho I am in love with the entire concept nd this second installment held my attention better, I felt like a teacher grading a highschool english paper during the whole thing. F btw, if you wanted to know the final grade.
I read a lot of indie authors which usually comes with independent "editors" that do a mostly ok job editing the books, so I usually just disregard errors but this one?! My god. There were so many grammatical/spelling errors that I was questioning my eyeballs at one point. Just being slapped in the face willy nilly with the same sentence twice in a row, repeated words nd phrases within sentences, a multitude of spelling errors. *face palm* I hope to God the authors didn't pay these editors cause they need their money back asap.
that aside, I thoroughly enjoyed this second part. we're outta the shadow realm nd have enlisted a buncha misfits to journey to hell to confront Lucifer himself. Lorry's brothers are adorably lovable with great banter nd brotherly love nd Aiden is everyone's favourite dumb dumb. I loved it enuf that, despite it's atrocious editing, I wanted to stay emerged in this world a little longer. worth the read all around.
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