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The Kidnapping of Elizabeth Bennet: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Lost in depression after Elizabeth Bennet refused his proposal, Fitzwilliam Darcy chances upon a conversation that could change everything. Elizabeth has disappeared, and all signs point towards kidnapping. Determined to save the woman he loves, Darcy convinces her father to let him assist in the search. But finding Elizabeth does not guarantee that the danger has passed – and Darcy may still be the last man on earth she could ever be prevailed upon to marry. Will Elizabeth be able to reclaim her future? And if so, is there a place for Darcy by her side?
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October 17, 2022
I have read 7 of this author's stories including this one. I have enjoyed all of them.
As this has some mysterious elements to it I don't want to spoil the story for other readers. The "who" and "why" for this crime come up fairly early and then there is a question as to who bears the greater of the blame.
Sadly Elizabeth is stolen away while walking out as usual at Longbourn. Her father hides the fact that she has disappeared from his wife and younger daughters but does go to London to consult with Mr. Gardiner. They go to a local coffeehouse to discuss the situation away from his house and ironically it is there that Darcy overhears their conversation and then realizes that it is Elizabeth of whom they talk. Later Mr. Gardiner attributes Darcy overhearing them as an act of GOD while Mr. Bennet states it is just sheer dumb luck. Darcy insists on being part of their search. Names are suggested; of course Wickham is one which comes to his mind. Mr. Bennet has received a note, which does not demand a ransom nor indicate how Elizabeth might be returned but vaguely suggests that there is a lesson to be learned.
Meanwhile Elizabeth is visited and condemned by one of the perpetrators and after he leaves the two men guarding her decide they want nothing more to do with the situation and leave. Elizabeth, having survived for a week on bread and water and in a cold room with a thin excuse for a blanket is ill and finds herself collapsing when she tries to stand up and walk out.
Without explaining I will only say here that Darcy does find her, almost unconscious, and takes her back to his London house where he can keep her safe. As Elizabeth physically recovers her fear of cold and danger threaten her mental health. She finds that it is only in Darcy's presence or even in his arms that she feels safe. She has fuzzy memories of his finding her, holding her and carrying her out of that hut...to safety.
So the story deals with Elizabeth's struggles to regain her former self while the search now centers on finding and punishing those responsible for all she went through.
I enjoyed this story. I was reassured that there was no sexual (or physical) assault by another reviewer and that was one of the worries Darcy, her father and her uncle had as they searched for her.
I recommend this story to other JAFF lovers.
As this has some mysterious elements to it I don't want to spoil the story for other readers. The "who" and "why" for this crime come up fairly early and then there is a question as to who bears the greater of the blame.
Sadly Elizabeth is stolen away while walking out as usual at Longbourn. Her father hides the fact that she has disappeared from his wife and younger daughters but does go to London to consult with Mr. Gardiner. They go to a local coffeehouse to discuss the situation away from his house and ironically it is there that Darcy overhears their conversation and then realizes that it is Elizabeth of whom they talk. Later Mr. Gardiner attributes Darcy overhearing them as an act of GOD while Mr. Bennet states it is just sheer dumb luck. Darcy insists on being part of their search. Names are suggested; of course Wickham is one which comes to his mind. Mr. Bennet has received a note, which does not demand a ransom nor indicate how Elizabeth might be returned but vaguely suggests that there is a lesson to be learned.
Meanwhile Elizabeth is visited and condemned by one of the perpetrators and after he leaves the two men guarding her decide they want nothing more to do with the situation and leave. Elizabeth, having survived for a week on bread and water and in a cold room with a thin excuse for a blanket is ill and finds herself collapsing when she tries to stand up and walk out.
Without explaining I will only say here that Darcy does find her, almost unconscious, and takes her back to his London house where he can keep her safe. As Elizabeth physically recovers her fear of cold and danger threaten her mental health. She finds that it is only in Darcy's presence or even in his arms that she feels safe. She has fuzzy memories of his finding her, holding her and carrying her out of that hut...to safety.
So the story deals with Elizabeth's struggles to regain her former self while the search now centers on finding and punishing those responsible for all she went through.
I enjoyed this story. I was reassured that there was no sexual (or physical) assault by another reviewer and that was one of the worries Darcy, her father and her uncle had as they searched for her.
I recommend this story to other JAFF lovers.
August 26, 2025
Very Good
4.5 stars—When I saw this book’s title, my first thought was, “oh, another kidnapping story”, and I confess I almost skipped over it. I’ve read other books by this author that I enjoyed, so I picked it up. I’m not sorry. It’s a good page turner.
The kidnapping occurs right at the beginning, and it follows that after an overheard conversation about it between Messrs. Gardiner and Bennet, an inebriated Darcy offers his assistance in finding her.
A shaken and ill Elizabeth is rescued and recovers physically, but bears the effects of post trauma. Her place of safety is only felt when Darcy is near. It’s a bit heartbreaking to see a frightened Elizabeth work through her emotions to find her former —“My courage always rises at every attempt to intimidate me.” —self.
I thought the book was very well done. I found it well developed and it held my attention throughout. I really liked this Darcy.
4.5 stars—When I saw this book’s title, my first thought was, “oh, another kidnapping story”, and I confess I almost skipped over it. I’ve read other books by this author that I enjoyed, so I picked it up. I’m not sorry. It’s a good page turner.
The kidnapping occurs right at the beginning, and it follows that after an overheard conversation about it between Messrs. Gardiner and Bennet, an inebriated Darcy offers his assistance in finding her.
A shaken and ill Elizabeth is rescued and recovers physically, but bears the effects of post trauma. Her place of safety is only felt when Darcy is near. It’s a bit heartbreaking to see a frightened Elizabeth work through her emotions to find her former —“My courage always rises at every attempt to intimidate me.” —self.
I thought the book was very well done. I found it well developed and it held my attention throughout. I really liked this Darcy.
February 4, 2021
Poor Elizabeth Bennet, being a Regency girl fan fiction authors are often putting her in peril.
This is a clever tale that finds Darcy overhearing Lizzy's plight in a coffee house and allowing him to be swoon worthy.
Trigger warning Lizzy is in some real danger and suffers some injuries and has some post traumatic stress.
And if you think about it too hard you will be very annoyed that a kidnapping victim could be ruined along with her sisters. (reason 8743 I'm glad I don't live in the Regency era)
I enjoyed this book.
This is a clever tale that finds Darcy overhearing Lizzy's plight in a coffee house and allowing him to be swoon worthy.
Trigger warning Lizzy is in some real danger and suffers some injuries and has some post traumatic stress.
And if you think about it too hard you will be very annoyed that a kidnapping victim could be ruined along with her sisters. (reason 8743 I'm glad I don't live in the Regency era)
I enjoyed this book.
November 9, 2021
Fast Paced & Sweet
Synopsis:
Welp, it was only a matter of time: Lizzy’s hoydenish habit of rambling solo in muddy countrysides has finally caught up to her. Lizzy never returned from a morning ramble and the reason becomes clear when Mr Bennet receives a cryptic note.
Mr Darcy- nursing both brandy and a broken heart- is brought into the fold when he happens to overhear Mr Bennet and Mr Gardiner in a public coffeehouse talking strategy.
Who is behind the kidnapping and what is their motive?
Leads are scarce and with not only Lizzy’s reputation, but also her life in peril,
Indeed, Lizzy is more than six inches deep in it now.
What Charmed:
♡Darcy is sigh-inducing throughout- I really liked how he was written.
♡Premiss very engaging.
♡Pacing well executed.
What Marred:
✗No prose or phrases arrested me as singular.
✗The villains: Their methods were extreme, their plan ill thought out, and for all the trouble they initially went through to conceal the crime they were later far too eager to supply their guilt than I found credible.
✗Last 20% was a longgg protracted epilogue.
The Brass Tacks:
➭ There really isn't much to dissect, critique, or gush about; it is a straightforwardly told without much in way of depth, subplots, or character growth- yet engrossing and sweet all the same.
Synopsis:
Welp, it was only a matter of time: Lizzy’s hoydenish habit of rambling solo in muddy countrysides has finally caught up to her. Lizzy never returned from a morning ramble and the reason becomes clear when Mr Bennet receives a cryptic note.
Mr Darcy- nursing both brandy and a broken heart- is brought into the fold when he happens to overhear Mr Bennet and Mr Gardiner in a public coffeehouse talking strategy.
Who is behind the kidnapping and what is their motive?
Leads are scarce and with not only Lizzy’s reputation, but also her life in peril,
Indeed, Lizzy is more than six inches deep in it now.
What Charmed:
♡Darcy is sigh-inducing throughout- I really liked how he was written.
♡Premiss very engaging.
♡Pacing well executed.
What Marred:
✗No prose or phrases arrested me as singular.
✗The villains: Their methods were extreme, their plan ill thought out, and for all the trouble they initially went through to conceal the crime they were later far too eager to supply their guilt than I found credible.
✗Last 20% was a longgg protracted epilogue.
The Brass Tacks:
➭ There really isn't much to dissect, critique, or gush about; it is a straightforwardly told without much in way of depth, subplots, or character growth- yet engrossing and sweet all the same.
April 10, 2021
I absolutely loved this! It is an amazing balance of characters and story line and of drama and romance. The writing keeps the reader engaged and flows effortlessly from ODC's POVs.
I was hesitant to read this, as the blurb and reviews indicated it is heavy on Elizabeth's recovery following the kidnapping. It is, but not in a bad way and she has support from loving people and one who can strongly empathize with her feelings.
I also give kudos to the author for not making this an epic and thereby falling into the repetition trap. This book is concise, with nothing lacking or superfluous. Very well done!
I was hesitant to read this, as the blurb and reviews indicated it is heavy on Elizabeth's recovery following the kidnapping. It is, but not in a bad way and she has support from loving people and one who can strongly empathize with her feelings.
I also give kudos to the author for not making this an epic and thereby falling into the repetition trap. This book is concise, with nothing lacking or superfluous. Very well done!
January 17, 2021
Simple tale of kidnapping
Lizzy is kidnapped and is recovered and at the end there is a HEA. But really that’s not what the story was about, to me. It important to remember the characters haven’t been reading JAFF for years.
Lizzy is not just kidnapped. An unimaginable event has happed to her. Naive 20 year old who has been wandering her neighborhood for 15 years and nothing bad has happened to her. Now the inconceivable has occurred.
This will change her forever. It will change her family forever. The Gardiners will think about this everytime their kids want to do something.
Darcy will have a second tragedy occur to him in the last year. How can Georgiana ever think a woman can be safe again.
The list of people affected is immense. Some of there emotions are on display here. In a society that has no police and the court system is rigged, it seems to me the bad guys aren’t hunted down and “taken cared of” nearly often enough. I am sure the rich would always make others pay for putting them in danger.
Ok story, perhaps too civilized to the bad guys. Remember in P&P Wickham is just a rake and the Colonel has to be talked into not taking Wickhams life.
Lizzy is kidnapped and is recovered and at the end there is a HEA. But really that’s not what the story was about, to me. It important to remember the characters haven’t been reading JAFF for years.
Lizzy is not just kidnapped. An unimaginable event has happed to her. Naive 20 year old who has been wandering her neighborhood for 15 years and nothing bad has happened to her. Now the inconceivable has occurred.
This will change her forever. It will change her family forever. The Gardiners will think about this everytime their kids want to do something.
Darcy will have a second tragedy occur to him in the last year. How can Georgiana ever think a woman can be safe again.
The list of people affected is immense. Some of there emotions are on display here. In a society that has no police and the court system is rigged, it seems to me the bad guys aren’t hunted down and “taken cared of” nearly often enough. I am sure the rich would always make others pay for putting them in danger.
Ok story, perhaps too civilized to the bad guys. Remember in P&P Wickham is just a rake and the Colonel has to be talked into not taking Wickhams life.
September 30, 2022
Excellent
What a great story a wonderful.page turner it will not disappoint . The arc is excellent and a wonderful way for the ODC to come together this story made the feel more human to me
What a great story a wonderful.page turner it will not disappoint . The arc is excellent and a wonderful way for the ODC to come together this story made the feel more human to me
July 29, 2021
I loved this book. I loved how Darcy and Elizabeth fell in love. The story of the kidnapping was really only part of this whole story. Going into this I thought it would be solely a kidnapping and recovery but it is so much more and I liked where the Author went with it. It was an interesting take on Pride and Prejudice. It was a very enjoyable read.
February 14, 2021
A simple story of the kidnapping of Elizabeth Bennet while walking at Longbourn. Mr. Bennet reaches out to Mr. Gardiner for help. Mr. Darcy overhears that conversation and also offers his help. Will Darcy find Elizabeth ? Can he keep her safe?
February 26, 2024
“Lots of things went into creating a monster, but nothing had prepared her for actually being caught by one.” –William Kely McClung, Black Fire
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: mature teen: clean of sexual content: trigger warning: due to the kidnapping and bad treatment of the victim, death of a character, insanity.
>>Angst Level: stressors: A character experiences PTSD due to an abduction.
>>Source: Borrowed from KU [2-24-24]: I volunteered to leave a review. 18 chapters + epilogue
>>Trope: Kidnapping
“Now you will know the real hell. Not the one you go to after you die. This is the one you go [to] before.” –Kwei Quartey, Last Seen in Lapaz
Elizabeth Bennet was missing. She had taken her morning walk and never returned. The hunt was on. To protect the reputation of the rest of the girls and the family name, Bennet headed for London and never told Mrs. Bennet what was happening. Darcy overheard Bennet and Gardiner talking and offered his help.
This wasn’t a long story so the action moved quickly. That caused problems due to everything and everyone having to be in the right place at the right time. I wondered at the villain being exposed so early in the story. Wow! That was a surprise. His comeuppance was even more surprising.
Several situations caused me to wonder why the author took that particular route and not another. I also saw opportunities that the author missed or chose to not utilize. But then, that is the author’s choice. All in all, it was a good story. There is a lot of angst as the reader is in the head of a victim of a crime who is trying to figure out what happened. There was no sexual assault, just the fear factor of the victim.
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: mature teen: clean of sexual content: trigger warning: due to the kidnapping and bad treatment of the victim, death of a character, insanity.
>>Angst Level: stressors: A character experiences PTSD due to an abduction.
>>Source: Borrowed from KU [2-24-24]: I volunteered to leave a review. 18 chapters + epilogue
>>Trope: Kidnapping
“Now you will know the real hell. Not the one you go to after you die. This is the one you go [to] before.” –Kwei Quartey, Last Seen in Lapaz
Elizabeth Bennet was missing. She had taken her morning walk and never returned. The hunt was on. To protect the reputation of the rest of the girls and the family name, Bennet headed for London and never told Mrs. Bennet what was happening. Darcy overheard Bennet and Gardiner talking and offered his help.
This wasn’t a long story so the action moved quickly. That caused problems due to everything and everyone having to be in the right place at the right time. I wondered at the villain being exposed so early in the story. Wow! That was a surprise. His comeuppance was even more surprising.
Several situations caused me to wonder why the author took that particular route and not another. I also saw opportunities that the author missed or chose to not utilize. But then, that is the author’s choice. All in all, it was a good story. There is a lot of angst as the reader is in the head of a victim of a crime who is trying to figure out what happened. There was no sexual assault, just the fear factor of the victim.
February 21, 2021
This was a very engaging book that I really enjoyed. It was well paced and retained my interest throughout the whole story. I was easily able to overlook a couple of plot points that either didn’t make sense to me or stretched believability a bit because I really liked the story and thought is was well written and developed. Darcy and Elizabeth got most of the attention and I loved the beautiful bond that developed between them. They were both really great in this story which is always a plus. I also loved the lack of page time given to Wickham as well as some of the sillier Bennets! Would definitely read more from this author.
January 19, 2021
Hero worship
I do enjoy a story that allows Darcy to be a hero. This is well written and quite original .
I do enjoy a story that allows Darcy to be a hero. This is well written and quite original .
June 24, 2025
Wow, this was fantastic. This was my first time reading this author and will be reading more in the future. Adding to my favorites.
Reread June 24, 2025: still a very nice story but after having read so many JAFF, it is no longer a favorite but happy to have reacquainted myself again.
Spoiler: Mr Collins is a villain!
Reread June 24, 2025: still a very nice story but after having read so many JAFF, it is no longer a favorite but happy to have reacquainted myself again.
Spoiler: Mr Collins is a villain!
May 30, 2021
The slow buildup to the HEA felt just right to me. There were no contrived delays or misunderstandings.... simply respect, shyness and propriety. Lovely and romantic, despite the over-the-top actions of the villains.
June 13, 2022
Good book
Awful villains, loved the Darcy and Elizabeth love story. I can't believe the villains could be so evil. I loved Mr bingley too I was glad for the epilogue!!!!
Awful villains, loved the Darcy and Elizabeth love story. I can't believe the villains could be so evil. I loved Mr bingley too I was glad for the epilogue!!!!
August 14, 2023
Re-read this after almost exactly two years; and it is better than I remembered. The kidnapping of Elizabeth gets used so often as a plot device in P&P variations that it is so pleasant to see it done as well as this.
February 28, 2021
A Good Retelling
An enjoyable retelling of Pride & Prejudice. Mr. Collins as a bad, Mr. Darcy as a sweet and gentle hero? What more can you want?
An enjoyable retelling of Pride & Prejudice. Mr. Collins as a bad, Mr. Darcy as a sweet and gentle hero? What more can you want?
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June 21, 2021Well, I should have known I wouldn’t like a kidnapping story. But actually it’s more the modern thinking and acting that put me off.
May 21, 2024
The story was okay. I was surprised that the virtual voice wasn’t awful. Still, not my preference.
February 15, 2021
Great story and romance. Loved the romance part!!
Loss of 1 star is for a few reasons. The kidnapper(s) and reason for kidnapping was a bit far fetched and not well developed. And because its hard to believe the reasons for provided. See spoiler at the end if you want the details (but be warned it will identify the kidnapper(s)!!!) and for another reason I was annoyed enough to knock a star.
Also, Elizabeth has PTSD after the kidnapping but.... she was mostly left alone during that time and ended up sick so she wasn’t well. Not to say kidnapping is “nothing” of course.... but it wasn’t well developed to fully be realistic that she has this bad of a PTSD (it’s 100% believable that you can get PTSD post a kidnapping but the author didn’t flesh it out well). Especially if she was sick and not really “conscious” during most of it because of her illness and claims to barely recall how she got kidnapped since she went unconscious. Also, if I got $1 for every time she had to be told she was safe after she was free and with her family again...I probably would have made at least $20 :) it just got pretty annoying after a while.
Loss of 1 star is for a few reasons. The kidnapper(s) and reason for kidnapping was a bit far fetched and not well developed. And because its hard to believe the reasons for provided. See spoiler at the end if you want the details (but be warned it will identify the kidnapper(s)!!!) and for another reason I was annoyed enough to knock a star.
Also, Elizabeth has PTSD after the kidnapping but.... she was mostly left alone during that time and ended up sick so she wasn’t well. Not to say kidnapping is “nothing” of course.... but it wasn’t well developed to fully be realistic that she has this bad of a PTSD (it’s 100% believable that you can get PTSD post a kidnapping but the author didn’t flesh it out well). Especially if she was sick and not really “conscious” during most of it because of her illness and claims to barely recall how she got kidnapped since she went unconscious. Also, if I got $1 for every time she had to be told she was safe after she was free and with her family again...I probably would have made at least $20 :) it just got pretty annoying after a while.
March 8, 2021
Wonderful
An exciting story, filled with angst, but balanced with a lot of heart. After the disastrous proposal at Hunsford parsonage, and after Elizabeth has returned home to Longbourn, she is kidnapped during one of her usual outdoor rambles. She isn't missed until later in the morning, and somehow Mr Bennett senses that something is wrong, and keeps the information away from Mrs Bennett and the younger girls, inventing some excuse for Elizabeth's absence. He travels to London, meets with Mr Gardiner, and their discussion is overheard by Darcy, who then immediately involves himself.
We find out very early in the story who is responsible for the kidnapping, namely **spoiler** Mr Collins. Therefore, this isn't a whodunit, but rather a heartrending and heartwarming account of persons who most love Elizabeth, and work for her eventual recovery, most notably Mr Darcy. Darcy is the knight in shining armor in this story, and is very definitely his most swoon worthy self. Lady Catherine also figures heavily in the plot as a dastardly villain, and Darcy's handling of her is very satisfying.
The serious tone of the story is well done and not overwhelming. The kidnapping ordeal is given its psychological due in Elizabeth's mind, and her residual fears seem realistic. There is enough love and support behind Elizabeth that prevents the content from getting depressing. I like Georgiana in this version, as she is given some sense and courage, and an important role in Elizabeth's support.
I deducted a star simply for the contrived circumstances at the beginning. The situation of the meeting of Mr Bennett and Mr Gardiner, and Darcy's presence there, really stretched credulity. However, I understand the need for opportunity, and the need for establishing Darcy's agonized state following his rejection by Elizabeth. The whole scenario just didn't make sense to me.
The book is wonderfully written, and well edited. The romance is fabulous. The story was moving and exciting. I recommend it highly.
An exciting story, filled with angst, but balanced with a lot of heart. After the disastrous proposal at Hunsford parsonage, and after Elizabeth has returned home to Longbourn, she is kidnapped during one of her usual outdoor rambles. She isn't missed until later in the morning, and somehow Mr Bennett senses that something is wrong, and keeps the information away from Mrs Bennett and the younger girls, inventing some excuse for Elizabeth's absence. He travels to London, meets with Mr Gardiner, and their discussion is overheard by Darcy, who then immediately involves himself.
We find out very early in the story who is responsible for the kidnapping, namely **spoiler** Mr Collins. Therefore, this isn't a whodunit, but rather a heartrending and heartwarming account of persons who most love Elizabeth, and work for her eventual recovery, most notably Mr Darcy. Darcy is the knight in shining armor in this story, and is very definitely his most swoon worthy self. Lady Catherine also figures heavily in the plot as a dastardly villain, and Darcy's handling of her is very satisfying.
The serious tone of the story is well done and not overwhelming. The kidnapping ordeal is given its psychological due in Elizabeth's mind, and her residual fears seem realistic. There is enough love and support behind Elizabeth that prevents the content from getting depressing. I like Georgiana in this version, as she is given some sense and courage, and an important role in Elizabeth's support.
I deducted a star simply for the contrived circumstances at the beginning. The situation of the meeting of Mr Bennett and Mr Gardiner, and Darcy's presence there, really stretched credulity. However, I understand the need for opportunity, and the need for establishing Darcy's agonized state following his rejection by Elizabeth. The whole scenario just didn't make sense to me.
The book is wonderfully written, and well edited. The romance is fabulous. The story was moving and exciting. I recommend it highly.
March 16, 2021
This Pride and Prejudice variation is part mystery and suspense, although not a true mystery novel. It's tender and romantic. It begins with Mr. Darcy, quite drunk, sitting in a cubicle in a London coffee house, drowning his self-pity in brandy from a personal flask, over Elizabeth Bennet's refusal of him at Hunsford. He overhears two gentlemen talking in the next booth, and after a few moments and several details, he realizes, after a mention of Bingley and Lizzy, that they're discussing Elizabeth Bennet, and that something has happened to her, something that could ruin all her sisters. She is missing.
Darcy interrupts their conversation, at once arousing the suspicions of Mr. Bennet and Mr. Gardiner, who had come here thinking to have a private discussion, while Mrs. Gardiner entertains callers. Lizzy has been missing for days, and her father is deeply concerned, and has done his best to keep the knowledge between himself and Jane, and now his brother-in-law. He has received notes indicating she was kidnapped. Darcy insists he be allowed to help, but first he has to gain her father's and uncle's trust. He also offers the assistance of his cousin, Colonel Fitzwilliam.
I don't want to share more of the story, but to it reveal itself in its own time. It is well worth reading, and I found it incredibly romantic, to the very last page. While the crimes might seem over the top for the particular characters who carry them out, I did not find it difficult to suspend disbelief. But you might be, as I was, a bit shocked. The residual effects of the crimes seemed natural and easy to believe. The writing is excellent. Highly recommended.
Darcy interrupts their conversation, at once arousing the suspicions of Mr. Bennet and Mr. Gardiner, who had come here thinking to have a private discussion, while Mrs. Gardiner entertains callers. Lizzy has been missing for days, and her father is deeply concerned, and has done his best to keep the knowledge between himself and Jane, and now his brother-in-law. He has received notes indicating she was kidnapped. Darcy insists he be allowed to help, but first he has to gain her father's and uncle's trust. He also offers the assistance of his cousin, Colonel Fitzwilliam.
I don't want to share more of the story, but to it reveal itself in its own time. It is well worth reading, and I found it incredibly romantic, to the very last page. While the crimes might seem over the top for the particular characters who carry them out, I did not find it difficult to suspend disbelief. But you might be, as I was, a bit shocked. The residual effects of the crimes seemed natural and easy to believe. The writing is excellent. Highly recommended.
March 4, 2021
Darcy and Elizabeth are sweet together
I liked Darcy and Elizabeth's interactions in this story. I always like to read stories with Darcy's POV, although Elizabeth's voice is still present. Darcy is considerate and protective of Elizabeth, the best part is Elizabeth doesn't over think it or object to Darcy's ministrations. Another plus for this story is what was left out, so if your looking for a storyline with pages of Mrs. Bennett's nonsense, Lydia's childish ways, Wickham's schemes, and an over the top Caroline, this isn't it (YAY!) I really should up it to four stars for that alone.
This really is a sweet story, the only thing I questioned and didn't understand was the interview process to search for Elizabeth. It appears that if a man wanted to assist in the search for Elizabeth they were asked if they were willing to marry her if they were the one to recover her. Was that the norm? A man couldn't do a good deed and help search for a lady just out of the kindness of their heart without being pressured to marry her? Just curious.
I liked Darcy and Elizabeth's interactions in this story. I always like to read stories with Darcy's POV, although Elizabeth's voice is still present. Darcy is considerate and protective of Elizabeth, the best part is Elizabeth doesn't over think it or object to Darcy's ministrations. Another plus for this story is what was left out, so if your looking for a storyline with pages of Mrs. Bennett's nonsense, Lydia's childish ways, Wickham's schemes, and an over the top Caroline, this isn't it (YAY!) I really should up it to four stars for that alone.
This really is a sweet story, the only thing I questioned and didn't understand was the interview process to search for Elizabeth. It appears that if a man wanted to assist in the search for Elizabeth they were asked if they were willing to marry her if they were the one to recover her. Was that the norm? A man couldn't do a good deed and help search for a lady just out of the kindness of their heart without being pressured to marry her? Just curious.
March 17, 2021
This was an awesome read that JAFF fans will love! From the first few sentences of the book, you are engaged! I love P&P books that give us more than a glimpse of what Darcy is thinking and feeling. I also feel that lots of angst keeps the book more interesting. I had both from this book and loved it!
Elizabeth has been kidnapped, as Darcy learns by overhearing a conversation between Mr. Bennet and Mr. Gardiner. He immediately insinuates himself into their concerns by telling the two gentlemen that he is in love with Elizabeth. There are unexpected twists as you follow Darcy in his search for Elizabeth before it is to late. The writing is well done, although there are a few errors. Another interesting bit is the limited time spent on three of the characters who usually have much larger roles in most retellings, Mrs. Bennet, Caroline Bingley, and George Wickham.
A lovely happy ending.
Elizabeth has been kidnapped, as Darcy learns by overhearing a conversation between Mr. Bennet and Mr. Gardiner. He immediately insinuates himself into their concerns by telling the two gentlemen that he is in love with Elizabeth. There are unexpected twists as you follow Darcy in his search for Elizabeth before it is to late. The writing is well done, although there are a few errors. Another interesting bit is the limited time spent on three of the characters who usually have much larger roles in most retellings, Mrs. Bennet, Caroline Bingley, and George Wickham.
A lovely happy ending.
July 15, 2021
A kidnapping of a gentlewoman
Elizabeth is missing from Longbourne and Darcy learns of this while drinking at a coffeehouse in London. Mr Bennet has arrived looking for her since she's not in Hertfordshire.
Eventually she is found by Darcy almost dead in an old abandoned hut on Rosings property. It's so out of the way in an overgrown section of the estate that few knew about it. Darcy had discovered it as a child trying to escape from his dragon of an aunt.
There's not much " action " in this story in fact it mainly is made of people discussions. Charles is Jane's betrothed but his family isn't around. Mrs Bennet and the other girls are rarely in the story, with Charlotte involved more.
It drags a bit more than I liked and the resolution of the main Kidnappers isn't satisfying. One dies of an accident and the other gets sent to the dower house instead of Bedlam.
Elizabeth is missing from Longbourne and Darcy learns of this while drinking at a coffeehouse in London. Mr Bennet has arrived looking for her since she's not in Hertfordshire.
Eventually she is found by Darcy almost dead in an old abandoned hut on Rosings property. It's so out of the way in an overgrown section of the estate that few knew about it. Darcy had discovered it as a child trying to escape from his dragon of an aunt.
There's not much " action " in this story in fact it mainly is made of people discussions. Charles is Jane's betrothed but his family isn't around. Mrs Bennet and the other girls are rarely in the story, with Charlotte involved more.
It drags a bit more than I liked and the resolution of the main Kidnappers isn't satisfying. One dies of an accident and the other gets sent to the dower house instead of Bedlam.
May 24, 2021
3.25 stars
Imma keep this short and sweet. Because that's what this was, short and sweet.
Characterization wasn't phenomenal but it was solid for the most part. Pacing was fair, but I could've done with an increase in length just for a little more interaction between Elizabeth and the Matlock's and Georgiana while at Darcy House. The plot wasn't the most diverting in it's execution, but that's not necessarily something to detract from the overall quality.
I don't think this was most the memorable JAFF novel I've read, but it was entertaining me while I read and breezed through it.
So yeah, if you're into it, I can't see why you shouldn't pick it up.
Imma keep this short and sweet. Because that's what this was, short and sweet.
Characterization wasn't phenomenal but it was solid for the most part. Pacing was fair, but I could've done with an increase in length just for a little more interaction between Elizabeth and the Matlock's and Georgiana while at Darcy House. The plot wasn't the most diverting in it's execution, but that's not necessarily something to detract from the overall quality.
I don't think this was most the memorable JAFF novel I've read, but it was entertaining me while I read and breezed through it.
So yeah, if you're into it, I can't see why you shouldn't pick it up.
February 1, 2024
There was no instant change in Miss Elizabeth's feelings towards Mr Darcy. The growth was gradual and inexorable as she saw who he was and what he meant to her. He saved her life and grew to be the one upon whom she came to depend.
He had loved her before, but he especially wanted her to be and feel safe. He only understood that he was integral to such a future when she said so herself!
Also, the lack of clues given after the abduction had them chasing a red herring at first. Nice to know the Fitzwilliam cousins aren't omniscient! They did examine the evidence when there was some. Excellent detective work!
He had loved her before, but he especially wanted her to be and feel safe. He only understood that he was integral to such a future when she said so herself!
Also, the lack of clues given after the abduction had them chasing a red herring at first. Nice to know the Fitzwilliam cousins aren't omniscient! They did examine the evidence when there was some. Excellent detective work!
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August 17, 2025
Darcy to the rescue
Post Huntsford, Darcy is wallowing in his own self-pity when he overhears a conversation that will change his life. Elizabeth has been kidnapped, and the mystery is why and by who and how to get Elizabeth back. This story has Elizabeth and Darcy both going through emotions that could cripple some. I was glad that it touched on after effects and fears that Elizabeth has to process after her rescue and that she's not fully healed right away. Overall, it's a good story.
Post Huntsford, Darcy is wallowing in his own self-pity when he overhears a conversation that will change his life. Elizabeth has been kidnapped, and the mystery is why and by who and how to get Elizabeth back. This story has Elizabeth and Darcy both going through emotions that could cripple some. I was glad that it touched on after effects and fears that Elizabeth has to process after her rescue and that she's not fully healed right away. Overall, it's a good story.
February 14, 2021
You are safe...
Ms Kay delivers again. An angsty tale needless to say, given the title, yet with psychological coherence and development. Not the best version of Mr Collins, a hint of gothic villain, but hey. The language is largely harmonious to the British reader, but, you do know don't you that we call it autumn not fall? As would have Jane Austen. But a minor quibble. Very enjoyable, recommend.
Ms Kay delivers again. An angsty tale needless to say, given the title, yet with psychological coherence and development. Not the best version of Mr Collins, a hint of gothic villain, but hey. The language is largely harmonious to the British reader, but, you do know don't you that we call it autumn not fall? As would have Jane Austen. But a minor quibble. Very enjoyable, recommend.
March 15, 2021
Excellent writing, emotional connection, and story
I give very few 5 star reviews, but this book gets it. The pacing was great, the emotional connection between ODC was wonderful, the story was new. While there were certainly a few far fetched elements, they did not detract from the story. There was no drama due to easily resolved miscommunication, and the author didn't add needless pages of words just to increase her page count.
It was lovely!
I give very few 5 star reviews, but this book gets it. The pacing was great, the emotional connection between ODC was wonderful, the story was new. While there were certainly a few far fetched elements, they did not detract from the story. There was no drama due to easily resolved miscommunication, and the author didn't add needless pages of words just to increase her page count.
It was lovely!
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