If you are keeping score between the first book and the second one of the The Perfect Play series by Sara Rider, #2 definitely comes out ahead of #1, in my opinion. The writing is hands down better and so is the slowly unfolding story of this “you drive me crazy, but I can’t help but want you anyway” main couple.
Alex Martinez is pretty much perfect, at least most of the time, folks. There is a brief time or two when he gets a little wishy-washy and one big “Oh, no, he didn’t just say that!” moment, which he later regrets/apologizes for. Overall, he’s is a hardworking, caring, stand-up, hot latino physiotherapist who is all about keeping this professional women’s soccer team physically fit and patched back together after each grueling match that is one step closer to their goal; the play-offs which will take them to the big dance, the championship. In the past, he has always kept to himself and is all about the job. He’s Mr. Professional 24/7 and never blurs the line with these talented, beautiful female athletes. In fact, we don’t have to endure any OW drama, past or present, with this handsome hunk.
Only beautiful, feisty, sassy, keeps the team motivated and one of their most vital players, Jaime Chen, seems to be his achilles heel and holds his interest. She tries his patience at each and every turn as she dodges his treatment recommendations and stubbornly insists she is fine when she obviously isn’t.
Well, get in line, Alex, because Jaime tried my patience, as well. Yeah, it made for an interesting storyline, but the logical side of me wanted her to save all her running for the games and stop trying to escape Alex’s attempts to get to the root cause of her on and off again problem. For someone who was touted as such a team player, she often came across as “all about me” as she left Alex hanging in the wind more than once having to make excuses for her and then outright lying/hiding the truth, all because she just didn’t want to deal with reality. Since the other players depended on her performance, her behavior at times just didn’t seem fair to them either. Yet, knowing her sad background, I couldn’t help but keep hoping everything would work out for her.
The back and forth arguments, lingering doubts, and inner dialogue between this pair had me wondering sometimes if I was watching a tennis match. Even after they appeared to finally be close, they really didn’t consistently always come across that way. Maybe it was because on top of all this drama they left one another guessing whether their relationship was temporary and/or worth fighting for, since both were afraid to be the first one to speak up. They did share some tender moments as they got to know one another outside the field (i.e., meeting his large latino family).
What’s the passion meter on this one? Well, Alex shows a lot of restraint in the beginning. For one thing he was quite emphatic about not jeopardizing his career. Once they do score with each other, at times it became quite numerous, at the drop of a hat, and very lengthy/graphic/smexy, to the point I did find myself skipping over those scenes in search of the plot. But that’s just me, folks. I’m more about the romance than the steam in my romantic reads. At nearly 400 pages, there is plenty room for both. If it begins to occur too often though, I start to feel it’s being repetitive and starting looking for the emotional connection instead.
Again, I found this one better than book 1, but I still should confess I had issues with the rather meandering story line and indecisive, illogical behavior decisions, at times by both characters. It seemed to take quite awhile to get to the HEA, likely because of their indecisiveness and lengthy smexy scenes. It was nice to see this good guy hero find happiness with someone who did need a knight in shining armor to save her from herself.
Here’s to hoping my review has been helpful in some way in determining if this one’s for you, my fellow romance book-loving friends. It ended up better than I expected, but I wasn’t a big fan of book 1.
Book 1 - For the Win, Pages: 336, 6/6/16, (Lainey & Gabe)
Book 2 - Keeping Score, Pages: 368, 11/7/16 (Alex & Jaime)
Book 3 - Going for the Goal, Pages: 288, 2/13/17 (Jillian & Nick)
Title: Keeping Score, Series: The Perfect Play (Book 2), Author: Sara Rider, Pages: 368, Pub. Date: 11/7/16, stand-alone but part of a series, HEA, no cheating, no love triangle, no OW/OM drama, romance safe, MC are both keeping a secret, better than the first book, a determined to help type of hero, sassy/stubborn/illogical at times heroine who still suffers from losing a loved one, numerous VERY lengthy, smexy scenes with lusty language.
(This review is based on free advanced reader copy provided by NetGalley in exchange for an unbiased, fair review. No type of compensation was given to the reviewer. There is no relationship/affiliation between the reviewer and the author/publisher.)