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Imagine if an artist announced their intention to depict, like, Mars, but they do so by drawing extremely detailed… trees. That’s what it felt like to read PSYCHOPOMP & CIRCUMSTANCE. Loved the idea, and I think there was a good message in here that will resonate with many young people, but the execution was severely hampered by questionable writing choices, as well as some significant continuity errors that I hope will be reviewed before publication.
21-year-old Phaedra “Phee” St. Margaret struggles to conform to her mother’s expectations of what her future should look like: marrying a successful man, starting a family, and giving up any notion of financial independence by engaging in work. When news arrives regarding her estranged aunt’s death, Phee seizes upon the opportunity to do the important task of arranging her funerary affairs on her own, despite her mother’s strong disapproval, her own self-doubts about whether or not she’s up to the task, and unfamiliar and overwhelming tasks set in a house that seems to have a mind of its own and resists her every move.
Good things first. What a creative world this is, set in the American South in the post-Civil War Reconstruction era, except with gothic magic and all-Black characters. So we’ve got ballrooms hobnobbing with magical creatures, haunted houses rubbing elbows with carriage rides. The journey of self-discovery and growth that Phee undergoes will be instantly relatable to young adults, as well as those of us who remember the terrifying time of not fully trusting ourselves, yet feeling as if we want to draw away from our parents’ choices and values.
Unfortunately, the way that Royce chose to tell this story meant that its full potential wasn’t fully realized. First, it’s in the scenes and details she chooses to write about, and what she chooses to omit. For some reason, PSYCHOPOMP & CIRCUMSTANCE lingers over the most mundane scenes and conversations, while summarizing/skipping over arguably more interesting situations. So for instance, we get pages of Phee agonizing over her ability to arrange her aunt’s funeral while she’s by herself on a long carriage ride, while the actual tasks that Phee has to do for the pomp are totally skipped over. We have to read the least necessary conversations between characters (“Oh, I’m so sorry I haven’t invited you in yet! Where are my manners? Let me take your coat” etc), while, for some reason, the book does not go into any detail about the more interesting conversations that could be had (eg “She then talked her years-long friendship with Aunt Cleo”). Why does the book do this? I don’t know! It literally hammers home the most obvious information–mostly the repetitive thoughts Phee has about her own incompetence–while simply not giving the information that is more interesting and unique.
Which leads to my second problem with this book: the inconsistent and underdeveloped world-building. There are two strands here, the historical one and the fantastical one, and neither is sufficiently fleshed out. The story is set in 1868, and it is implied that the Civil War and the subsequent freeing of enslaved people happened along the same timeline as it happened in our world. So how, then, did Phee’s parents manage to live as freed Black people and amass enough money for her to grow up living in a mansion with about a dozen rooms, in a city called “New Charleston”? In one scene in Phee’s aunt’s house, Phee flicks a switch in the wall to turn on some lights, but I’m pretty sure that almost no one had electrical systems installed in their homes in the 1860s… and if this was because of a different way in which electricity was discovered and commercialized in the book’s world, it was never explained.
The fantastical elements in P&C are similarly underdeveloped. Any magical system has to have rules. This book’s problem is that it leads readers to believe that we have fully understood the boundaries of its magic system, and then introduces yet another magical element without any warning. And this doesn’t happen only once. So for the first 30% or so of the novella, we are led to believe that the only magic this world contains is the existence of some random magical creatures (each of which appears only once in the entire story). Then we have a haunted or magical house (although the reasons for its hauntedness or seeming displeasure are never explained). And then, in quick succession near the end of the book, we get: magic spells, sentient natural elements, a vaguely mysterious city, witchcraft and potions, and–finally, randomly–shapeshifters. Ummm, wut. It’s so much, and it’s never integrated in a way that was convincing to me.
And finally, we have the continuity errors. These are serious enough that I’m going to drop a private note to the publisher, so that hopefully someone (anyone, please) can check it before the book’s official publication date. Let’s just say that I wonder if this story had started as either a novel or a short story, and then was either chopped down/padded out, with the result that different parts of the story don’t line up.
So yeah. I was really looking forward to this story’s creativity, but while Phee undergoes an interesting journey of self-discovery, we see very little of the interesting and essential stops on her journey. I’d still be interested to see what Royce has for her readers next, but I’m going to need a lot more convincing before I’d feel comfortable recommending her works.