2.7
Extremely disjointed. Rushed. Almost an incomprehensible backstory that is never properly explained. It feels like there was a first book that explained the world, so the author didn't bother in this one.
But this IS the first book, so she made a terrible job in introducing her world, all the factions, politics, that werewolves apparently are from different dimensions, is mentioned in passing, like that's totally normal and not confusing at all. Why? How?
Even the basic premise of this story is NEVER explained satisfactory. The Alpha NEEDS to have a mate to keep his job, because why? No seriously.. Why?!
It's very important, like life or death important.. But never explained?!
There is some rambling about a pact the wolves made a long time ago with the witches, but it's never clearly explained. Especially not why he would loose his job and be exiled or killed without it?!
What the hell is happening?!
And there are apparently enormous differences between the different werewolf-factions (who each comes from a diffrent dimension) that are never really explained.
Why did they come here?
Why did they stay?
I certainly don't know, because it's never bloody explained!
Their city is carved up in different territories too, but that is never really explained too clearly either, especially not the muddled hierarchy.
There's lots of talk of building gates, some people are for it, and some are against, but it's never really explained what building a gate would mean, so I have no clue if I should cheer or abhor the decision?! I need some god damn information. Everything is just so half-formed.
And there's way too many diffrent factions and bosses, and the hierarchy is really confusing, I never understood even in the end when it was really important, who had more power, or why?! There was just too many diffrent titles that where never properly explained, just like the rest of this mess.
Also, everyone including the leaders are extremly reactive, and honestly acting like children. Everyone is so god damn sensitive, they are constantly on the verge of ripping each others throats out.
People can't live like this, they would have killed off eachother a long time ago.
And what kind of leader hears one person speak, asks no one else, makes no investigation whatsoever, and immediately sentences people basically to death over one persons story, with no opportunity whatsoever to explain themselves?! This isn't sustainable. Its very irritating when grownups act worse then children.
And the scheming from the evil guys was laughably mustache-twirling and obvious. Seriously..
But mostly I just felt really stressed while reading it. Something in the writing style was just constantly rambling, and it made me stressed beyond belief. Is seriously affected my breathing while reading it, that half incoherent style is horrible.
Despite that, I mostly liked the characters, the Alpha was grumbly and possessive, even though I wished that he would have been much stricter. I actually feel a little tricked.
The blurb made me think this would be something of a D/s tale, but there was really NONE of that. The rules played no role whatsoever. I feel cheated! I wanted the Alpha to be a hard-ass, who would punish his mate when he acted out or broke the rules.
That was teased in the blurb!
There was also two or three completly idiotic misunderstandings, that could've been avoided with one grownup conversation, but instead the bottom ran away like I child, and most infuriating of all, the Alpha ended up apologizing, even though he hadn't really done anything wrong!
Jesus, just spank the brat!
But despite all my complaints, I actually finished the story. (Even if it was touch and go) and that in itself tells me that the plot had to be at least moderately entertaining.
The sex was okay/good, a little rough, a little worshipfull, mostly described explicitly in a way I liked, but it could've been much rougher, and I prefer that the top isn't just in control, but that he uses that control to totally dominate, order around, and that he from time to time;
- primally takes the bottom almost violently. It was too short and too sweet, even if it was a little rough at times. It was teasing me with what could've been. Close but no cigar.
So to sum up, it was stressed, disjointed, at times a garbled mess, the background was severely lacking.. But I liked the main characters, the plot was reasonably satisfactory, and the sex was close to good.
This reads like a first attempt by a new author, who hasn't learned the tricks of the trade yet. I was chocked to realize this is far from their first novel. If it had been, I could've held out hope that she could've gotten better with time, but it's hard to excuse the problems away with such a seasoned author, and even harder to hold on to hope that she could get better with more practice..
I could give this author one more try, but I am very sceptical. And even if I liked the growly werewolf parts, the Alpha was way to sweet and accommodating in the end.
So I am sceptical, but I might try one more book someday when I'm in a slump. But overall I'm very disappointed.
It's like all the ingredients where there, they just aren't mixed right.